【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
) E3 D/ C& n5 S: o& v  Exxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

! Y7 `1 E- Y4 x3 O# W$ j6 ?一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
' B; M5 B  _6 m- }" f/ J# ]- F: {vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱

4 [. ^( b- a; n4 _( i: i. _" R7 rThe moonlight is shining brightly,
皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 N" ]! h$ y9 ]( }! z0 e) Y* Y  T夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂

( W9 a6 S. e7 m2 m. _2 X+ {When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( w2 ?1 J- k# j; v( X) k1 Q凝视明月 我心欢畅
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 \* J( f$ M2 ?! j/ k0 u/ t月光闪烁 在我眼中
, B9 G9 }: s  k) a8 EThe sky is happy down to its soul
一片丹心 照耀夜空

8 i- Y. S2 d; K; sWith the moon kissing it every night
3 o0 r2 S2 z* C; ]% B看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
Seeing the sky content with its love
  e% C$ j0 v* x% P% N夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
) i" t( l  e% K0 S# s5 YIt fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
" c5 f0 G: @% |1 r我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
. s# {/ O8 R3 EYou needn’t fear anything
6 J# ?  C3 t; m怕这怕那 又是何苦
; G) o+ R3 {' q3 hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. G1 D5 X" N# V4 r' d9 a我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
  H; t/ U& B+ @8 V1 AEvery other word you utter is love
口口声声 说你爱我
9 C/ q% A1 J; N+ ?. k* M+ XI really want to know just how much you love me
! I3 i/ H9 z; N& x9 i" r真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
  S) o9 W5 S) e  E; eI love you I love you with all my heart
  i- k2 ^+ A! ^4 c6 e% F爱你爱你 全心全意
+ s" m% d& q  I  S: SNothing can compare to my love
9 U3 L1 x1 U, I8 j世间万物  皆不能比
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) x' k& \' P+ i5 R7 V" r* t6 iCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# B: m2 o, ^! b9 Y4 @% }/ {整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
. X) N3 r: S; T& Y- B8 ]1 SI want so much to see inside your heart
我真想看透你的心
0 A+ `5 H* X2 j/ rI invite you to rip it out
你尽管把它掏去
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
9 T+ q7 O/ f+ Z8 v" N& b1 LI’m still filled with fear
* K  E- R( U* z$ H: q7 A2 q可我依然满心忧虑
% _& t; I2 _0 H3 g4 ^" XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
& a" b8 j0 @0 |: {; T3 I/ t$ ]I regret not dying
真恨不能 以死明志
0 \# m2 [( a. G! RI only have one tongue
我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
! n% N; Y+ u/ o( N/ ~. U; `! XIt’s nothing close to 100,000
也恨不得  多如千万
With such a tongue as yours,
你这张嘴 真真厉害
) ?- K' |9 R( @6 y2 P& h0 \+ WYour speech can’t even keep up with it
能说会道 无以伦比
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! B, e. @& s( C4 P! l# J1 f# F, ]% ]若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
Rambling on about a thousand words of love
- }7 J4 u  |: s" N: [& H. M5 Q6 E6 Y! _向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲
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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
3 ?$ a- i: J$ a  y8 f* l/ |+ Z" g从未向你吐露衷情
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
& P% f+ k& d9 G- ]  C+ [$ s爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
- g" p& r9 i  z. u5 N3 j5 d+ PFrom the first moment we met,
) [9 P$ u1 |. o- p. t; c6 M( n对你一见倾心
: G' E5 w3 J3 p, aI already loved you with all my heart
从此别无他意
. a4 T, _1 A, e5 F" vWe meet and talk everyday,
+ T8 h( g9 n" H1 m* M你我每天见面寒暄
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
奈何从未谈及内心
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
9 p, S% l& w3 f" t  K. G  e* WI would probably know how you feel
或能知你心意
! E, y) ?; X9 x/ z6 @* ?) k/ kLove… just the word love
8 A# g$ ]. d$ O+ v: F9 O爱呀，爱就一个字
7 U2 e/ i# z9 W) c2 MWhy is it so difficult to express?
0 Z& K9 K" ?6 a' n. C为何如此难言？
7 b' ~- L. q: ^. ^I want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
But I never did
却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
9 A$ F: c8 j2 W( a" yIf today isn’t too late,
& Q2 ~9 P' U4 e! O  H假如还不太迟
% }" V; u, P1 n6 ?) A& N, ~$ v3 aI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你?
Entrust my love within your heart
- Z% ]/ \. k' g6 \0 ~  E从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去
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Love… just the word love
+ D2 ]( _; J+ t6 N" i5 X爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
为何如何难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
But I never did
5 ?7 c' \6 U$ G) l却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 n4 {- l6 A" c( r1 m- X只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
( p0 a. n* Z- K  b假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 v* M! H  z2 u" w, c今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
9 T& \. r7 w( r1 n9 dI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
7 c1 p1 j% d  I; |; dCan I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
; v( l- o8 W' I8 T4 l0 \' U, Q从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去
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Can I entrust it to you?
5 B$ }- _5 c* A- B可否将它托付于你？
7 o0 R" g7 ]: g! O) A& n6 QEntrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
; c1 B7 T3 e* r; q刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
1 U: _3 h* O3 ^& A' r6 P2 Evichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

: O: _( }/ i# j! j3 J不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。