【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
. r+ d+ M% |% v' |7 pThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# e0 G, D" f# g0 ^2 r) V: pMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( o8 N  w1 p+ LThe sky is happy down to its soul
" M/ _! y- g" U" y0 M- N! EWith the moon kissing it every night
* l: j0 n) w8 [8 q5 E' K2 j0 X& hSeeing the sky content with its love
% |* E8 v+ ~* n8 ]5 j, `: ]It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 Q8 @: G+ G2 N: z  v4 ~# A- ~Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  S, a! u! U+ B1 ]: y: K7 oI love you I love you with all my heart
0 E' e" f  f& LNothing can compare to my love
  t$ Y5 p# C1 E/ ]4 K; ^Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# X% k2 b" Z2 h/ e) ZI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
0 s; c2 E1 S- B* ?Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" _3 A8 T6 Q, j$ P! cI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 ^$ G. N$ i; U( U& b0 L: ^Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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  ]( Z$ _% y. x' i2 G$ L1 n! u4 N7 T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 V  q& {5 d/ k: B; {- {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' x/ }/ c; Y; h9 u3 w<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 J& h" C. Q" K) ]- T6 N( {5 h1 y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( U" ^- l) x" M6 L) r) X6 O. n<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. d) d  O; C( R( N7 Y6 V<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! e4 i' }8 O, x: W<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 V+ n3 J2 g  J) q% s<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; K5 f( }# K! M+ X; d<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ F& ~' x# _6 D9 r<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- V+ H) l) |+ L6 }0 E<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' Q: R. ^  F8 E! ~<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- h* V6 u, w7 m  n7 ^/ }<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) R0 D5 c+ q' r2 \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 \. |3 G9 E+ o& N& \- r  ?<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ w' w7 X' D8 }2 {6 r. ~% D+ V<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. `1 ~( L, R- \4 G# O2 d" r$ [: Z7 N<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" S& g2 R1 X" Q; o% R- x* h% b) z# I<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% b9 l6 K. O" R6 a2 B<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ M( a3 F6 R( d( C<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) u7 J8 ^/ x) R# H$ i, V" p<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 p" {0 r& p) z<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 v. G* @( b: d, `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# V0 H* Y9 J$ s3 {/ B<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 c- v! J( r& Q) q+ a( s, `<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, Q# W; e+ r& s; Z0 Y: ]<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& t9 \7 U. C* y8 q: f<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ ~/ b& h' U& c5 B9 V. |<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  p2 H6 ^7 H( z0 |( F<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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% a' P8 F6 f- r9 r, A, X0 g我请你剖开它

$ A  q' }: ^3 ^8 d- ~# `% ? 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>