【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
% I) e7 C+ i& i3 t$ f4 MThe moonlight is shining brightly,
; J8 d9 E4 t5 f( _$ iMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 A4 }# E+ a3 D. d4 [6 v- _With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ L  c1 `* W" c  B8 K7 g! `I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
; d% h3 c1 T& _' t, X9 WNothing can compare to my love
# s1 K4 F0 b& l0 q  y4 M5 h, ^4 ECan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 }! b. N2 u, K7 R, S+ v! QI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" X/ B$ A/ n( @) V! }I’m still filled with fear
4 X! e# J, K1 G& I6 |# e8 mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, ?# E5 c$ D. n+ J1 S% II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 ^6 O9 H* T$ D8 u0 E+ c7 P& PWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' c6 S, _) u9 i* m1 g. _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 R* J6 X$ Y) B8 [<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 P8 ~6 r+ r9 ^  \& l0 ?<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 R  b! \& k- Z( [) R<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- t# o1 j; Q, K: Z2 m8 {<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. ?" V4 y5 y, m1 I5 A& ?<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ c7 M, J* `6 E/ V* z! m4 O9 l; C. k$ N<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: \* S% @# A" N8 B5 {* U5 ^<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* _; u7 v7 ^2 x6 x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ z) k! N$ V' K) Z+ Y4 O<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* y2 B# U2 [7 f  r% g2 i  n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 l! @' n7 w! |, b4 ^, D2 ^; I9 z# Y" M<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 [: ?, _3 w9 r* q5 }9 f3 v) ]<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  ~8 J+ l0 }  A8 e4 v<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% Y( K5 \7 r) u; q0 k3 }7 D<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# R' h3 Q+ _! ]! e' q4 u0 p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& Y; _$ S$ h8 \0 g<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 Y! u9 C3 _9 F" ]  ^" ]. D<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, n# A1 Q7 i* F7 j0 O+ |* R; D<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. ]8 O  j4 w6 F0 U( i7 R+ d<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; X2 w7 s, b- T0 w5 j4 _5 g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% ^2 r4 j) |% o  i/ a<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) \, S; G! _  {9 l: f<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. J% T/ f" ^4 V+ C, h<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* }* {0 F& B! \& z( m<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 s# ~, e) e# c1 T$ N" q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" z1 N% B' w: M( B* l  M<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>