【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
) p0 J7 t7 G' c+ U. d( a1 U4 SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. u8 N9 g. m3 PWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
( @* W% T: E2 d) IMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
% `( A. d* e2 wNothing can compare to my love
- ^5 h* f- |0 u* X4 C9 U! ]  s. pCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 I. B; p/ f4 I4 g% bI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
+ j: [- ], X, r0 rI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: x* q9 _  ?& k6 i# o; sWith such a tongue as yours,
, ^/ l& |: ^( Q7 K6 |3 `9 BYour speech can’t even keep up with it
9 m3 J6 g7 Y  b) X2 Q% n, @If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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3 p; N: H) S9 N; y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 H9 F$ E& L: n  }: E' P9 P& Q! K9 b<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ A- \% }0 V* @0 ^) y# c) c' `( V<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ C6 l( v4 g9 k+ D& u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ N' o/ L* A' w; k' p6 T3 z- q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& r# f! M" T4 j. |0 O$ X<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 t4 M* X* m0 T" B9 }; ?; t<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' ]" e! C0 M' [& {<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& D$ P  n1 a# n1 i$ l<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& i& N' K, r6 e- _  S& I<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ n8 Q5 B& h* E3 ^<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% T; ]" g" z: a# O' w<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 D; ?( q# q9 m: z) s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ X' b% ?- m  U2 D<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! Z! k8 k7 E( R: U+ [<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# U! O  E% I5 E<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 L( i- Y% N9 H5 ~  F<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) D  Q9 E2 J$ Q; g* I5 _4 E, w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" X7 w" y& `" p( x( v8 j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 N3 X1 b* U2 ?" e# c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 m' q1 F7 |- m$ x0 c& X5 E2 o<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' z. a$ y+ c* k2 h$ W<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 L" {0 m! C% g<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- \# G+ o# m  |4 L% n, R; n! I<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& g' J9 N. s8 U. X6 S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 ^8 V; g" o4 P% Z8 q: \8 K<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& `+ m9 m0 l! Y- c<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. p7 x% t+ J5 T- H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 S4 {$ n+ P' v3 _1 O6 I, O- V2 v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( |3 L  G& B; }' n0 K' v3 r<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>