【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 W- f9 N6 \4 L* \" Q* b' y! c: \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; {: p$ R: R5 I- y0 G* x' e. A5 p3 RThe sky is happy down to its soul
5 @( A1 R9 k& |& e# FWith the moon kissing it every night
2 [8 ]2 p( b' }Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 B/ D- `3 W5 J7 V( [4 eI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
9 |' m8 b8 ^# D0 z7 T& bI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 p5 s4 I0 }7 _5 j4 f# B% Q' {# A3 c: RI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* q/ S. I  [" O. H/ B1 a) V" Z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. @. a7 b8 W5 {6 {" p; a6 N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! Q' T  a0 a- c$ t& [<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ A& |0 |* |1 o, Z: E5 T: e<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 S9 G% ~5 u: E9 g+ ^<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 n* B& |! j" Z8 f$ }<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 p! u( j- J4 R" [' P<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ b/ E% D- u" F<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; p* ~: [: t& ?" Y$ a. T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" O* v6 _  |3 A<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ R- G. ?* ^6 e# Q2 V# e<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. Q6 M' @: G5 E9 ^; ?) [3 b<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! D# t9 w; G( u( o' {) ^2 u; ?/ R<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 L: F6 q3 G/ u+ R( l# t' t7 U/ e<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ s- m' P$ ~+ B8 [. Z5 Q1 O<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 S3 |4 u9 l7 X5 v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. g8 J" e" ^5 ]5 T1 e; G2 g<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% Q9 |% L& }3 ?$ T2 R# t5 _9 S1 g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 S. _' y1 ?7 ]8 _5 R; S' u7 W<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 c# [1 G5 d" F# N# s; Q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- l  d% M7 h& m* |+ M4 {* H/ z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ r' o, X7 |, R1 M/ v<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% _- T+ U" D5 I  U7 @$ J. F  e<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 i, Y& h2 `" Q7 B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% W4 M- I6 h, b# e) K4 B/ W) a/ o<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! T$ b5 l6 {; K. G. l<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ v% ^5 t3 O! p1 N1 P& G<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 N! c1 Q" @" v- C; a: Z( e3 ^<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, d6 x+ z$ b0 A" ^6 u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ G% M0 D1 G1 e! a* D<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! ?2 k; u' ?  t, F1 \/ X9 B<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>