【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 W+ _0 p2 G* C  v( ~* UWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! k$ \& V3 y& @/ _7 _$ KThe sky is happy down to its soul
, [# d5 {3 g5 F5 Q7 K8 Y- bWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, k% }+ s+ ~, [My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 @: b( ?1 Z( c) e  ]. }0 SI love you I love you with all my heart
$ f# u3 r% @) l: U( |, ONothing can compare to my love
5 U# O3 Z& M/ _( a0 Z' O# gCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 d5 y" O, u* R% HI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 [! k  G+ Y' j% j% KI’m still filled with fear
. R4 ?- V# |' d) sYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( O2 Z/ O( U" d( xI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: G5 i9 K+ P- H( q. h( L4 |With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& n* D) }* x" E<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. b0 i0 t0 y4 a- V<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, H& s* ~9 G  B1 B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  n1 b+ Y+ a" n; W+ K- E" d<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% r8 V  o# q" L. W4 F# j" a<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! w+ h/ W+ G8 k& O<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( V* E& H+ y1 p# k2 s8 d<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 C2 ?& j6 U$ ~<P>你无需担心</P>
1 v9 m- D" |# q$ d6 B) P<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 t) z' v* O; L* C9 \/ p2 }<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' A# I' _5 B$ E+ S7 U) ?' h% Z. o<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# M  }7 [3 [0 b6 _6 O<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' A4 m1 {6 x8 d! ^4 f<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' `' Z/ g+ g2 o8 o# x<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; J3 W0 S7 W. R+ O& M# p. w<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 X0 g# E9 |, t; e/ w2 o<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 @/ Y! D( o- |9 y: _<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" N% w1 B; J5 I<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ N3 D( g% D' H- ^7 Y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 D7 H  w+ S# y+ R4 K) j! z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" {/ |# x4 b' k0 g8 I<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# p, X/ U' \2 j, I( V6 O5 N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: l& ?+ |( t- x% [<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 E! e) E% [7 s" @- C( g; e. |<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# y9 M6 K  P5 L0 @3 Y$ ^<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) V! d+ L' `. j2 S, [. R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( L+ e5 l1 m( x4 m2 x; S7 E<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 T1 ~  K6 [2 I4 G7 n7 G! ?<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) i2 L5 R" \6 {! `<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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" p: J2 @+ W% W% m7 f) y6 e我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>