【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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' H- G. i  {5 K' C" H; @" q4 O歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
) t; W. B; h7 ?; A5 {Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; h* ?3 ~0 H* {0 S" g1 m9 pThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: }( R5 h/ j( D9 _The sky is happy down to its soul
' D: K2 M6 Z# m  g( Z6 nWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 A0 f. p+ {$ E" Y- p+ g1 \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 z2 V$ u. z. h) q6 eEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! q, J' p- l8 `8 o9 K' _3 vNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 I2 a$ s/ u" w" e7 L7 \The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, z8 G2 ]2 Q0 Q- O( b* C. GI want so much to see inside your heart
: G. {$ k4 V& @6 }1 X& v, dI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- Y  P" q, ?0 R0 p  v4 D% F2 bI regret not dying
) t( M! E- r$ d) e( q! a5 Z) f/ DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 d5 k- B; j- F3 z% u+ J0 `, aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  }/ U" I) k9 W: |7 {4 s; _2 h1 n( KRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( c% U: g' k0 I; |* Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ @6 W, \4 C* {4 M8 ?* b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: [+ k2 Q' j' Y8 p<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 ^8 c: Z9 H; o; X6 n0 c7 G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 A1 k# Y) A  r5 a  a1 |<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ G) T! ?5 m! `# X+ x<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" Y3 L' q8 ]1 u) q. c7 F4 Y0 ?$ D* m<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ @* l: F" H/ O1 X" b<P>你无需担心</P>
# Q" Q' i! X8 _<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- B/ s% z0 D4 V1 M<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 l( j2 |) a4 J, o8 R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; C7 u+ y2 z3 a2 y0 D, H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 P( V5 I  V1 @" Q6 ?, `  W: s2 B<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- o, V4 E" Q: @- v6 e0 D/ Q* h<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# X6 y! `+ t  d+ x: F5 e<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& t8 ^) L! l+ `7 v0 `5 [<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, k* I( m' y8 I1 o* w4 J5 T% J<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 c3 k4 [$ s6 k/ l8 U6 n<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 \; `+ `' a$ _* `# @8 d( h<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& Z( a* R: D9 K6 f" }0 c2 v<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 ^6 P( a1 M" I5 a3 z* N<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  E' {, Y8 W; M+ t<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- ^' a# e3 W. u5 d* M<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

  F: |" q$ j" S2 x) H- D我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: g9 D; _6 Q7 x* U- B( ]* c* V<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>