【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
2 r2 @5 C/ D- \. c" [& Q% W. f6 pThe moonlight is shining brightly,
( l2 C& w" ^7 ^# ?1 @) u! zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 ~& {8 g5 |: K* [6 D# V  [  k) [When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 F: ]7 c; ^. n9 p" UThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; \. @  ?3 z% YWith the moon kissing it every night
. ]5 j) s' f; _Seeing the sky content with its love
2 g) Y6 ^% g& x/ W* J# t& B$ UIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ J/ {- D/ G% B# a9 jYou needn’t fear anything
- z1 H  ]- I1 J5 fMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ B; |4 o0 q6 z1 S6 e) L1 uI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 z( \9 P2 I2 q3 s6 `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* G6 G- @0 P2 G5 g7 @( wThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 U! N( N" s9 L8 OI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  L( J8 _5 d: A  gI regret not dying
, U, N$ I3 z' z; y1 R0 H% [I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  D5 @# J9 G( m9 gWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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( {- R- N; Q+ ?6 c" V+ X& R<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 B" l, Z% \9 R! v' L. w+ K6 ]! d<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& P/ c$ O+ Z9 T# O% J9 Q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! P% r+ g. ?! C% V$ V+ F5 h3 M$ z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- W( F' T- k6 z2 B0 l4 a<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. r& q. x' Z$ o/ l! ~+ b<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, T% e5 k: ~# A  M) i<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& e, ~. w/ n$ {5 B3 N: L<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 _0 z; k# Q9 Y0 A4 l<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ w& r( d: `+ @3 |2 q) l# z<P>你无需担心</P>
) n( I) \7 u) g<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. F" `& R2 P9 j& j5 U<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% p1 G9 e! r  B5 M8 z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. C8 x- ^- ^( D6 P' e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& b* b  E' Z6 a<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% q! P/ g  ~  \0 w! z: y" ?3 D<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. ?  G6 K$ a; T: z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ X0 m; [, A% R<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 t* b9 I+ @. w4 M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# A, H# J! ]6 v- f: P! r<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, w  x3 A* B/ b% o$ J9 ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& ~! `" f: v1 j/ v9 \& b9 y# Q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; g: u" r- @% I; N<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 C, g- S4 e0 l7 M* d" V" v<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. Y5 n, C5 M3 V6 a<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 r/ ]; e5 J0 \) [- A. v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 _3 D+ n, C6 N$ t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>