【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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' c' g5 r1 E+ ^( ^4 x/ v歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ [* x3 P; m: z$ y! |0 VWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; x0 V6 L5 O# h3 ?; K1 hThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ d& L$ ]  Q, [' {+ E4 qThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 G, ~+ {" u) f9 a2 F6 xIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: i; I4 x! I9 @/ h6 oYou needn’t fear anything
; u- B7 Q& \. y' M( U$ nMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
, M' F" N7 v# F) g  z# d( l- tI really want to know just how much you love me
: F5 j% N% u% o8 OI love you I love you with all my heart
5 S" {4 a+ {9 U0 M" N; N, U& WNothing can compare to my love
  N: r0 |7 {/ ]; ]5 y4 K) UCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, Q5 |6 U8 o) B7 }Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 s( |$ i$ I! GYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ u3 I: \9 h* _3 g' `5 Q* B; u<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ O( h. V  h* Z/ {! X8 }<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ D, J5 c+ u% D2 c<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' H' P) f% C+ T* S; D<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ v/ `- F9 B5 F: c1 L- @9 r# e  f<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; L# L4 s! z+ k- |* r) x" X( u- p<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ \6 L- s% |( s( S4 ^; I) N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* u9 I9 x! }8 r3 r' n. A8 A<P>你无需担心</P>
5 d) k* O/ X; E& f6 O, ], C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: i5 d7 D6 F, D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; j/ O, b% W7 l* d- k<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 U- v4 e8 u& P<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 x1 L) g; y% c' C* Q$ \+ H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* ?. a8 x7 g8 ^9 q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ S# r* h( V4 w& f! h1 a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; e/ u" w: X* a) {+ {# Z# X- z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ V6 w; ?# t) g1 n. ]6 R<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 Q  m2 g0 F( d5 b- C0 ~% L<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- _% j' b# P0 K) u: b<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ k2 ~8 r% o) w1 z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 r8 e7 T& a: l<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 ~+ s' R8 F+ f, C5 _- C2 G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 j. Q5 f' c# K( A% V; z- L<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 F: I5 ?2 I, z( `; O# L1 {& N<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 ^. g( t9 `, W& Q; }4 t- `5 |% i<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! o/ O$ U/ [1 Y7 t, j% v<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) o  R/ I/ b) `1 ^- c  t& i<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% `( D# ?/ \) ]<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 _: I" Z! J2 i" Z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( q6 E" ^# w, {4 x<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 j- U  u3 P1 Z" O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

* d* p+ Y9 D0 G0 J1 ^7 `. { 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>