【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
0 V0 Z6 D# E' W& O3 U2 k0 rMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 x5 m. g" n- C7 n. T' D2 S* O3 P& JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
  l$ C9 u3 D2 x9 \" e2 UWith the moon kissing it every night
( j& ^  h) F  |5 HSeeing the sky content with its love
! q+ ~  s7 _: }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ `$ D+ ?7 v: q+ s' d6 JYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
3 x$ a8 m: N3 _  n/ j) e1 gI really want to know just how much you love me
& M( G' ^* y- A; ~* I+ `, `I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* H' e* |& N6 ^0 S; c' `4 b0 zThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" n0 B8 z3 B) D7 \3 a' z$ fI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; z, t, b( X  N; ?; KYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 U7 v# R# m5 M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ k6 \9 L/ J* N# L* n/ g/ \<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 }2 L# `6 J$ n: ^9 c<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 x; m1 N, U2 W8 ?. \<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' G7 H: S( f: i0 S3 L( C. t  _<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- @. o7 D; m5 M5 d0 ~( j<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- x5 h: p4 F, ^% L' z2 X<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 i7 q, E6 M; Y9 Q4 i" @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 o" M3 ?! c/ A3 G% n5 Y+ \- y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, N8 O, I" Q9 I<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 v" P8 }" I/ l<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 N" i* N" u( a  k. y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ W; ?6 E* t- a# P7 l3 V<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- {; c) M4 H8 U! m& z8 K<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' [, U) e% t; t( D* n; w<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 a- `* s6 O" m. {" n6 q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, _% l6 E1 b( ]7 y$ M2 u<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 H+ w7 n2 G3 j( J( I7 D% G3 Q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* A$ b4 u3 G! k  }' i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 N% I3 l4 g# s' f8 t<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ s5 ^; l7 x  F# {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% r1 t* w6 e0 s3 p0 W7 r<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# J% i! \9 X8 s8 Y4 ]8 w( v) E5 G<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. b& b8 J9 H) p6 a1 Y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 Z; ~2 T/ K; L3 l<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  I8 R3 F! C6 n5 d<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" `  ^: |0 W; m) N- g<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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! M8 X! E! I# I* k4 C+ Z4 f8 K. B 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>