【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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; k$ `. R8 u" u! C* ^& x歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. m% W, r2 W: R% f$ W6 U+ s0 ]3 oThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
9 {, _7 }  H" `3 I# C' t) xSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 u, h9 F" R) {. kYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( \7 {8 {# i! x" H, o" W1 PI really want to know just how much you love me
3 b# k" l) U9 i: g  gI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 r" Y. @: O2 `3 n5 s7 {Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: p( a* d; w$ Y$ q& ]1 VThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! J  Z( K: ~! ?3 T1 F& NI regret not dying
; {" ^+ R. @6 a- x4 J$ xI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 v& g# s- N% s4 F. X, [If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* b" o# [8 T& ~* c5 ~8 {# G<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ C, W! |- p  P  c- J# |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 c9 j9 y9 w8 w2 M) w( U8 i9 o<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; q9 c2 i4 n0 N  B2 T<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 w/ |. G- T- `' B1 Z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 S% w( W$ f* d<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 x' d4 S* L! f9 x5 t: }0 O<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 C% j, W/ A0 j! V0 I& ?8 I- U<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 s, O- i* o$ S<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 z& n4 X' o4 ^& {: ^6 f0 `) j/ t+ @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& W6 `* w/ k2 {! Y* z1 \. R4 l<P>你无需担心</P>
2 h$ s4 H) s7 b* j<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) ?# w5 k! `3 ]# l<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' i0 q0 I9 G  F, a+ W<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 B- P( Q1 c5 R0 z7 o<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* I9 r2 Y, y$ H( r<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& X/ s! q- m3 a; m, m8 c<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: i& D8 D% u: G$ C<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  t2 U5 g0 c# g<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 G2 X6 _8 j) l% |* `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" b, D' V% a; s. O& u' a! u- F<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' f# _4 H, H1 R<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 y$ b) {5 ?9 W<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ G: A' U  Q& S. d% }<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! o+ w! E2 ]. K7 q4 a; c<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" }: H' @; ^1 U5 _<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" T% y& t$ ?1 C9 q- |: A<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" s! M5 M# Q8 B7 a+ \2 M5 D& t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& D! i/ ]! F1 x7 U6 Y6 q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. ?& V2 q& v3 }* z8 }<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>