【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
- w) x2 x8 ^+ G# `$ I8 XThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 t7 U# j( J8 R5 A  h1 zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 q/ z4 R, y; ]3 ^% LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
- l! F# H. \% {/ `4 y7 X4 B5 Y5 [Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& `% C2 f  O" e* z+ VEvery other word you utter is love
' [) ]3 l0 n3 I6 Q9 n2 rI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
8 q$ @5 u- U7 T: p; v* zNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 X1 O0 E0 F( lThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* W& N! P0 q2 O/ OI’m still filled with fear
1 o0 L; g9 ~* w, K& v7 E, eYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 [5 h* F  g& |0 ?! j8 p1 p; cI regret not dying
0 X3 V% f3 n9 t* J6 X' U+ cI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 h/ M- |, ^, g$ u( I5 ^$ DRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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7 H8 [5 S3 [. i! G9 m; L( z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, V$ i& Q4 u1 P$ U  d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# ]' s% A9 F* k1 u) u<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  E5 q7 N* X1 ]% |8 \<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: e; E9 a4 F9 U6 y. ~& ~<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' c- n4 G" \  y& x# H( Q. }<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ E! o8 T6 b; p<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. ]: G- k( |, y/ x! }' ~<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! @( a- _, n$ `! |! A& d' C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# j; m. G1 u! e5 X/ q" D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ ^5 ?( e0 r9 x. x$ y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 E" g0 E  x, L* w$ P& ]<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 G7 X2 _. s7 ~) w& g# R" v+ {; ?" ?<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% @( N; X9 }1 f/ y/ E<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. Z7 E& U2 R! B" T" g8 l<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% N- Q& B1 l) g2 h) l# J" w/ q* O<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ q) {& c, D3 f# j1 X# c( M<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 E* H2 Y0 _& y1 R. Y) t$ y2 |<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 q- m- x/ s9 Z8 r, k. z7 w<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" C) G2 \8 X: \! T( Z. C<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. E2 c* ?( B2 z" d  I<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 i; ?# ~  R; l/ |<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ [5 P  J5 M# D* x; ]) {7 l<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; B! ~1 r- K  g' N' \8 }, q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% k7 f! c/ h7 q- D, D<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 {. H/ y1 x8 I0 N% Y: e/ L. n<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>