【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( q( A' r" c" u, ]# ^% W$ A歌词我附在后面。
7 R8 P: P0 D( e6 T4 ]! [: bThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
- D+ `# J$ X8 C7 n8 b& RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ P/ E) a0 f0 i; w- D' {: }" lThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. h. ^5 S. P3 i5 u! T$ k7 xThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
: a  N# {0 n& Z, k. E' H8 [Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" ]1 e8 t) [) zEvery other word you utter is love
" n1 S7 g) I2 }! `4 R# SI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" P. ~3 j! ~" t- C3 ZNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 X+ O0 r. |; k) m" {/ ~3 p3 fI want so much to see inside your heart
- p; m7 {7 C! [" ~I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 S; t- u- k/ X9 I0 ^& q# `0 UI’m still filled with fear
! e9 l8 ^. x6 u. t% d- |8 qYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& F5 X' q% ^& z/ ^If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* z' s6 I2 g- e7 |7 x<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) V, T3 d# B7 ]9 B. D/ F2 |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 q* v8 b4 H4 q/ p6 H" j4 s<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, n- U+ d0 n) a+ A<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ h$ D. }& t+ l<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  P7 F2 ]8 b0 q' s9 {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- f6 y# G6 D% v! i4 g0 k" {1 i; s2 q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% x* D9 g& G0 A. M& M<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" C( H+ c3 W% {3 ^0 y- |<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! {1 Y5 _/ J/ x; ~; W<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# I  ~5 {, o- `) A2 g, j3 k1 J% j  H<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 J  m3 |: z# }& ?+ y9 A<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, M# C. ]$ X0 g7 w( G8 c<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 b1 }  y1 Z# {9 ?4 X% `; s2 S  t<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. @, O# _7 u  b% B: b8 \3 }<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; C) a6 {! X! t$ M<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, h' _1 g* o- w3 Z. o<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" O3 M. z! N' P* n2 \. y  v8 h<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' h( y6 i% _! `' K) ]+ \( u" ]4 F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! H+ G( D# h( M1 J- Q9 w<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 G6 u+ f3 @( Y( `/ _: w' r, p<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# G- W! _6 K8 B- \1 U' o' k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# U( W) V* }$ k" h<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ X. h5 Y5 p6 J. ^2 \<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 R! F1 I5 O  E! N; Y  s<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; d, E6 P" b5 j<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: s% ^. V$ _8 l4 ]. n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

& ^; A1 \6 h- W, H8 e( A% E4 B我请你剖开它

3 Q% L5 I: s# S( j( ~4 X 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 m7 L  H$ }& L' q5 r0 F<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>