【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
; y+ c' x7 x5 C9 }' n4 VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
" ]; |+ h) r( v/ HMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# ^: k/ r; i, B3 j( \  mThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
! o! ?/ B1 r* rSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
: j9 U+ X9 J/ D; \8 E3 |5 ^8 OI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- U0 ~  L& n! U( y& w# ICan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 s( N0 W) W& |3 y: f, p  C4 hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 s$ y9 q) m( D, g6 ]I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# Y; y- }, J0 I( j- B: n. EWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. c( Y' T; R0 L0 R; p7 iIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ I$ A+ s5 B: g6 l/ U) N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# Y5 O' f4 y7 }: p<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 p, X( c* N& y! I6 r% Q1 u5 t3 W<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, O9 O! \  u5 C% j2 n( b<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 f9 l3 ^7 Z: k' U/ F<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 S7 W# k* k( M+ H<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 }; z, ]% @( ?<P>你无需担心</P>
" w- g7 N5 i* ]) ]: C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% p) M* U/ m6 P9 Z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 y$ b. r& Z' `5 y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. Z8 N4 A8 f3 c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( G( q7 x& Z  o! Y6 f" |& ~<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! E( X9 R( ^% f+ ?/ G: U: k* D; O<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, T# p, E3 S% x: S8 G& s9 t% T1 y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' {7 a3 u! l( X6 E% p<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 s1 Q6 c+ V* p: K: ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 Z) K) A2 w' Y6 _4 X: e$ [( k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# P; Y, H; m) Q* z( {& |<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* s% M- u, l, q/ I- ?( |8 W<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" ^. p. G. M) o4 O! C% u$ C; {<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 \( Z5 ]! [1 A8 J<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* i% ?5 o8 ^; I/ A<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# n9 i3 e( t. z0 u9 U' J1 z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! d$ Z/ R3 k9 c9 n+ ^8 L( V<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 S" h3 m$ H" Z) A1 F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 v( X2 A8 ~* ~9 ]0 |( h2 v1 E, t<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) ^, x0 x' d4 y4 \2 P3 s( `<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>