【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- `+ i$ Y  Q4 H0 g  x6 {) lThe sky is happy down to its soul
- Q. R* l3 P  H9 _2 K+ V1 }3 vWith the moon kissing it every night
0 R" B- w( d5 RSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
6 ~9 z. h+ E. W$ U8 SI really want to know just how much you love me
2 U: b/ v/ h1 b+ c5 m2 }: fI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* _) p6 V6 w+ `. BThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
, v9 C! Z$ H% uI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* n5 d- U0 ^) w+ T% y- X- j. EI’m still filled with fear
7 n+ ~/ ]  |9 g! BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ z1 r5 C' G! N$ N% f  A, k' L: E6 NI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
  p3 q- ^# o6 J' t- N: v; f* Z4 V! pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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) M  k  s! s# Q$ a  p9 w" e<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 b' T4 i; M0 v" H<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( S% H6 A# e$ G0 Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, O) J! N% {7 D' s# K2 j  N( H/ ~<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. ~2 S% w7 U6 Q) r: r/ U7 w5 |<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ l  |5 i3 {% `5 V4 v- B( U. ^<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' Z) n6 b7 L5 w/ A( z9 C# c) M- {<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) S2 L7 |! [1 Z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. c: K' H) @' t) a5 v: \0 i<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ ]; A8 G, \$ |<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. [5 \0 v8 r+ p7 N/ u<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 F5 Y! B- o) w' g- m<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) s5 ]& a) |- h$ X<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; `4 G' I$ \5 X6 Z* e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 W/ W9 t+ j" N<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  i+ u( h( P7 Q9 d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. R& O" E- r" v3 B& F5 {4 j<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 n; g$ f8 ^* F* d3 B<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 P1 `" a) z0 D% s0 [8 F<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  G- A  r& }# I2 M/ }7 A<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- r2 n3 R, r& l* C1 G/ f<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. P9 @# H* @) c* v& E" \4 p<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 Q, W9 s; L# {3 ?1 z. C. e<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; Y- a/ H* I- s; f  c- I<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! }& @& F3 q' H2 }6 ?: K1 |9 {<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 @" T1 R( i% {$ O; e# K1 r<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 q6 f3 }7 d8 {' F  u6 L8 P<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>