【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
; `! R1 @. R4 z; HMaking the sky glitter like gold,
3 I7 u2 ?% O6 b8 o6 _# nWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  L0 T& v; W7 E' j; {The sky is happy down to its soul
) x( a( ^. k2 p7 U( i  ~With the moon kissing it every night
# ]3 y0 [. d# A( Y  A* R2 eSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
0 U/ P6 o7 c3 \9 @I love you I love you with all my heart
9 e* A# ]' _+ t- M9 A; BNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
: G/ A/ X* [. D7 _% i0 d3 x  QI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ L; w7 M( E' s& d9 }I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 ^1 Z' d' l' V) ]! pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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9 U/ M- t- r$ L; C' q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' u1 b! h6 `! r; I% ]' B  |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% O8 K# q# [. r3 \1 {5 j$ _<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 `. _2 t1 s' y4 P$ e4 E, p<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 N8 _. y. \  a6 {8 z3 S<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% R) v) t1 W% b$ r' T8 [8 ~* Z  y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# k5 W9 d0 |: h) ^8 w<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  F1 c  O: }7 r/ C& k<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# g9 F8 g+ i, f0 P$ `<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 x' z! n/ r5 W  n+ }: p8 i<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 m/ }% ^3 Q( w0 N+ ?" p<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% w* {! L5 I5 R<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( ?+ {' w6 ?% g3 h# A<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ ^8 M3 n$ A# m5 x5 A- O<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 ]: a9 y$ B+ O5 C; t" U( m$ y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& }! y/ B+ ^: I' O+ x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" f; R7 m' e" w0 n" L<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ w* C4 i' V+ \- S<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 Z. I0 t' U5 N  }  ~* d<P>I regret not dying</P>
" N# w7 H' F  }% r' q' e7 @<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. b2 W- z6 z0 ]' u0 _<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* |5 m% t% I8 v: D. G$ v1 h<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, i' t4 T  P( U8 x; S<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) E6 R$ {! J' F1 a; Q$ y1 `<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 `/ A/ m- a8 d<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 s! R5 Z# Z2 {6 a  i8 L<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>