【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 X, `' }1 ~/ g  b; b7 ?: kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
0 ?; ?# I) N; L) K4 q1 A( U7 |Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ ~( n$ d5 ^; u( d$ B3 s/ lWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. P1 H+ u0 p, N& @2 aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 Z/ ?' n* C0 w! E# a3 CThe sky is happy down to its soul
6 V- Q! `6 G) j- X* K  RWith the moon kissing it every night
" u& H' t" Y9 `4 F- zSeeing the sky content with its love
- i; f3 G- I5 N" a! qIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ n5 `8 M, P' A8 v: kYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 b3 u3 d: I! T1 f0 [Every other word you utter is love
" Q% F- H0 z: j/ g0 m6 DI really want to know just how much you love me
7 G$ s- }# `7 sI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
' d( n/ z9 p# k6 ^, FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 M% T3 Z% `7 C/ @) e. `9 k7 _4 WThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ Y9 b' i, T6 i8 r* `I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 n6 K5 U" P8 M. {% G" s" ?0 T: l: vYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ G. ?: v6 t$ p6 ]1 y" II regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) Q! x9 B3 g$ a5 y' ~) j) LWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! _8 n0 _* i4 F3 y3 P( RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* n+ B% l' x1 W8 u2 N6 Q5 @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( e" o( ^8 p- w5 D2 D<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 U6 ^! F, }: r( J3 ^<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 B1 v( d! E# C  |* r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' W0 r  F6 [) b& T<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ e' ~* Q$ ~% w8 f1 `8 ]* V' s<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( T5 W+ Q+ z7 K% h$ h1 i<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 _. a& O8 g* I" [- y, h<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; q* U9 D6 ?: o: y1 ]# ^8 z( }<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 O( {, u0 v- O0 |3 ]<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 L- @* G$ l: e6 D, q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) O& X0 o" n5 |+ F2 U( O<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) X5 z) E& r( v( T/ w' r<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ n, e6 r0 X) w* M! n( {/ {) a8 R<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, a2 Q$ _+ V! i1 V, m( Q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 C% {7 {: d% ^' ^7 w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 r# k$ B3 b6 n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: W0 [0 r: g) `2 g<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, i  H' G/ x) ?4 c8 T<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 |# {1 W& q. R! F! S6 U: G<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% B' I$ B6 g9 H- \8 x<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- z4 Q0 y# ^( f+ R+ T<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ h2 v) K5 b, M- I8 |<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ d, p9 q0 S! f. K<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) J" S% Q4 R+ t- s1 i/ i' B$ a<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 `5 s6 R, q2 e- |% w' P  O0 J. k+ x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 D: f4 L5 Y# R6 R* f1 h: r<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 a, b" q  L6 K. _. A<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& |& @4 f* ^  l5 E7 H6 T<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) n2 U6 }) W9 J9 B<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  h8 A& O* D. j/ E8 D5 ~9 e7 {  ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; C7 Z( N) w, Q7 ]0 ^! A% s  D, C' w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ z3 f- H- T4 G! d0 `$ j( F<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% D4 z3 [$ b9 T0 Q+ b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

6 G: @; M4 j/ n! `, N+ x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) S* I1 w# E9 @* X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>