【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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& e2 f/ L8 z, O9 u0 J7 h歌词我附在后面。
2 O/ C* Q1 x9 y, kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* V! n7 p  y3 H5 ?, GWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; ]1 f, Y' Z) @# W5 q& xMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% L4 H' t! F6 J& M4 d: M) U8 P. uEvery other word you utter is love
8 t7 b4 `! ^+ A9 G/ n2 k9 DI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 o) l* S$ O- V% e" M" H3 uCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% i& ^! I% i* a. g" oI want so much to see inside your heart
$ z& [% J6 q: E3 ^- TI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. Z: N6 a" R3 G1 w5 I& E) {0 ~Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 Q7 \4 N7 z& k2 ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
8 x0 Y, g8 Z/ u  z$ \0 XYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. G! p* S/ Z- Y  X. \0 u8 n0 D6 O# }8 o, _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) |3 ^5 S& \7 f<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 A' c- v0 x* G) e0 u. S- t<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' _  R* Z+ N# t; G% K/ M+ f<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" f. X/ D: N) N$ M# R<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 k, s( z$ A3 P<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ R9 H$ [2 B! \4 s' l# v<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" l. r- E% _. P: [- b<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 g) I9 }2 I7 X9 ]8 D" e1 C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* Z2 a  Y1 O, y$ [9 z0 R<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ X' Q+ V. A) M! }$ c# R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 s% K" }- Y& p; m9 K- G; }<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- ^9 b3 U) ^; L( \2 f8 u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 w' u4 p3 M3 Z# D<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 E1 F9 ~: v# O) K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) W# D: ~' s# V$ t( l& h( g% L<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( o) ^/ n; j3 u* ?  C" F<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ x5 E3 J$ ~3 p. x3 ^/ F<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 t1 @' C" T! f3 D: T2 C) h& n" h<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' c- A6 e% u0 P) k<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* {  {/ |5 G& l. c3 ~7 Q, l. d# f7 P<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 }0 X  O0 ?- N7 ~. w) o<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; h8 i1 ~  S1 ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 T. t3 E: z8 E7 j4 Z; Q' W<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  W. z) X# ]$ H# L$ t8 f3 f<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) S+ `6 j% B, I3 s* ^, _<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 c7 o7 a3 _: [0 S9 ?: E0 V7 a<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 }4 v+ v0 f2 C6 e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- Z) E* t7 j$ O- g9 e% A. \<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# H5 D/ O# w  K; U! I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

: o: V5 R9 }$ r) C4 }9 z我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ `* e2 X5 e: b" e' }<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>