【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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2 D; K3 c% _1 k, Z# \9 O! M1 Q8 K歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) ~6 l( Y! T  WThe sky is happy down to its soul
& N+ z# f) [7 {+ X: OWith the moon kissing it every night
0 g! ~. G. p' e+ i8 xSeeing the sky content with its love
4 ]+ q" s* `6 q% q; r! ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 ^2 v( w; q3 Q: t  |% _You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
* e) r+ Y, o  e% U, v5 _6 I/ LNothing can compare to my love
6 e% o) s  r' u. x: F5 VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) R  U, H+ `* T6 j! r* F  II regret not dying
" p: V2 o8 c! z+ L- J1 p: Z& qI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 y& F9 D0 p/ t5 R5 n% z; YWith such a tongue as yours,
4 P+ Q3 I) ?' I( XYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 M( j6 E; H0 h5 fRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' G) e- `: S( `3 [<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 _0 t# v8 ~" Z- A<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) l9 l7 B/ c, I* t( A& _6 P1 R<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 @4 w. P* G0 U7 d% I: y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. O( B! \9 a9 i- G<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& {, g' p2 J' Z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 `; q" V; ^3 D  N. b4 Z. b<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% z% t/ A( w  C9 o8 M% }<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ ~  z8 J/ d0 L, U- f, Z5 x3 a<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 U$ K- @  Z3 U# s<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 M4 S3 I% A+ J8 i. E4 T) f<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) H2 P) \- Z- u! V* k) K( u" K! i<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# u6 T; o" h$ C: H! L<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 U0 t+ J# L, W: k8 S. o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 j! d% c# X% N% b: V: [: K<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 V( V) {0 u+ {4 r8 V+ H8 l<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 k" P. |  F. J8 \+ E<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# o) l: f- W8 u" S<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 \: ?2 \) N0 h  |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% h( b% }, ~2 ^! r0 h<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# k$ T% C4 Y5 K  p9 B8 R6 c' d+ u<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; q& b' Q5 t; r; y& Y. I. a4 r<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 n& ^, o$ u# ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 K' C8 E+ {5 n<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! y7 T! u, p/ y/ E8 C$ H& j<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ x% `. T7 u% C& X: s: E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. U8 u# g) o( H4 Y/ K+ C& q( w<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) o) t3 g- W& l# p<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- I& M. v( c$ N9 [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' ~& Q- t4 n. |8 X<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>