【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 t; X# c5 I5 ?1 _When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 h) Z# P2 z. K) Y7 A% Z4 |/ QThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% ~0 `3 b* D& aWith the moon kissing it every night
/ n, B6 s, m0 O- H3 n8 FSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
4 Z2 y2 \/ i6 B# z5 gI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
% ^( Z: `% `1 `  k; cNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# R1 E0 r. U2 RI’m still filled with fear
2 m; J. y" r* K! A; B# d4 n9 L: yYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. Y' m& X9 _  n8 gI regret not dying
, R2 G$ |8 S+ I+ QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; R! N$ ?" ~$ Y: M! ?With such a tongue as yours,
" W6 o* R% q4 A1 S0 r, n* qYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 |/ f# S- Q$ U; T1 XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

' O9 m  G& n1 N% X! Y! S! d<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 c, D4 L. p; u+ m6 ]" ^' M<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 h$ q3 u( Z; K  R, F  G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 V% j. o. o. \, j  f5 B! [<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 w  ^' i$ h8 a& v; P<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. C8 N% F% f. f# r& [<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ ?; I  ]! v+ \& R: i4 I+ Y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# g4 m% S9 E4 Q  M' E<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  b$ i7 r) e" B# H" d, j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 d$ |$ X. O$ H  \6 ?5 X& x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 m5 x: v, q$ M2 ]9 W( v<P>你无需担心</P>
3 o# O7 C! ]/ U' X) C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ w# @, [" \1 t1 \<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) }5 l) g( _* D. x" k6 V( B9 e2 u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) b2 f+ T/ j. {) y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 P9 a' @3 l# o" s$ w7 Q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( g7 K9 V0 @% S; p<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 |( p' l4 V- D$ o<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 T, C7 w0 w8 s" Q* S2 K<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: Y7 X- T; C1 Q- q- P8 e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ m/ {1 v) Z: Z5 J<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: D9 Z. p# s" i7 [<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 X1 X4 K; Z" u0 |. H% m4 F" b<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! L5 M- K4 r7 E, j<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# x3 ^9 l0 G( T4 E2 `6 h<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 d( _# r5 n+ Y9 m6 n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' {/ w- p% Y/ [: {- t<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! Q! C/ q4 u. E8 F1 g<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 d; A+ Q, B, h) R4 s/ {* ?<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

" q; x) g: ^  }我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>