【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 C! ^7 ?4 b6 R" {8 EWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# r6 m1 g- |# {8 _$ {/ o$ ]% PWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
0 M( W3 N# L* z. eI really want to know just how much you love me
4 ~; r; |! J* ]! v3 x# o0 F5 dI love you I love you with all my heart
4 E4 f8 t1 O6 VNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 }  g5 R9 G- x, V- m* HI want so much to see inside your heart
/ g5 i# e0 M" sI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: p2 r0 A4 R' T; B# GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% q5 ~& I: \4 K, d: v( A! E% tRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! F' D$ W, a! r2 G9 E. i6 G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# d& P3 ?+ H: z$ K* J5 D) C<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  W. Q7 x" U0 |& m- k<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 @9 w# [  W  q  `! W<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: H' v% c6 T% c& T9 x4 V<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: b7 B, m+ a: J$ g. c0 z; A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ m( |; T$ x; C& W" l3 g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ h* v- g/ e6 w) V( e3 w; v<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( w, S8 B* D6 ~<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  L# B6 {! I1 [  T$ \<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! V! B! S6 P9 S- K% M<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( T3 _) Q6 U; x/ O5 y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 F  i( `* c  ]. k+ W  C# [! J<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' p1 K' C' g8 R5 ^8 O( l<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 n+ }$ A" S: {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! `  `$ J5 g1 U1 C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: t  \; |, \( {4 T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: Z& _' a  B- d4 p, ^+ X1 K5 F  E" u<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, B+ N3 V: v9 `<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( x& A5 n- p- |/ ?<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; G/ P( ^$ S& _- `' [7 Q6 \6 p<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: X  n. I1 a9 x<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ \' X8 l( R: e& i4 P# V. L<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 y/ ^' Z1 G- _<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

  G9 b! s: G3 Z; g0 z我请你剖开它

, g$ L7 G0 X8 K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>