【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
9 x$ i$ N& ~+ hThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 T+ p- I7 \* nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 f" \: _: ~9 \1 B% ?  `The sky is happy down to its soul
; h9 Z9 L& I4 aWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' C+ v3 y/ A7 m* ]$ m- h: ?1 W( ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& M) X+ f  W' ?7 }7 o+ GYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
0 O1 s# U. J& W! k3 _7 I; kI really want to know just how much you love me
8 j7 I: Z* [1 G6 s. n9 o0 C" }I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
; ~1 Y! H1 f0 DCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 e4 B7 \  @( [$ M5 [/ I! uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
* s) d' C" F! |9 ~! E3 zI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% b& h+ p8 C/ R& W! Q5 U* BI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, O( G- A# y/ w  ?$ N( m" HWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" Y4 {- @* b4 X/ |4 [! cRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, }6 o: a& s" h" l. h3 A# u<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* D9 V; Z; o0 t6 u; i$ t& r- Z' D# K<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' [7 d: v  F' I<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 p1 g; Y$ _, `7 U9 |" A<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 d9 G; I- A6 z% V( _: h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: N6 [/ h% t% I& ^' N" ~% E2 T<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 o8 y5 z5 x: t0 y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& v( H5 O& d7 m' J7 ~6 ~6 O<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ r' A& S+ b2 u( Y6 Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 ]! a4 g) O8 J1 k$ b<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' Z8 M9 F  n0 _+ v<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; B9 x, C- S% D/ ~. C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- f- F+ g: W6 M& C  A- G( ?  y. r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ X1 @# K9 m/ i1 T2 e7 J<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 q, e$ G& ]+ ^, Z0 z+ G, q8 x<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& e+ p, e) s+ N4 ]<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 ?! \/ L3 F+ q9 y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 m$ t4 s5 U. Z5 I+ k2 c& S) d. J<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 k2 p# d3 B0 `5 H8 a: p<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; X, x: n$ Q# Z! G<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  o' V5 p! ~5 B7 m/ u6 s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& t8 u9 Z0 v& U! i# J# H' D/ L<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ ?( H: h. H! u- g: _; U" V<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 y# ]5 [& Q$ H3 ^/ C. a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! G) O( l2 N9 x- Z' o" F9 R3 s6 A<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  O+ x: P4 S# c<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ l  E1 y. U) O, a/ P6 p1 v3 F<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- u- z3 S+ W  }<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% ~$ z3 }" w6 Z$ T& m<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 O/ B+ i$ R) l1 A! Z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ b1 Y3 A/ V8 x' I, d) y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 ]; `6 U: H. ]7 i9 s<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>