【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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/ [8 v, j5 l- B& o9 j- g8 N歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 C% p; v. G9 j7 V# t9 r' L) B$ G( yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" g' h; U' d3 l8 r4 y) e/ z; m9 iThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% M2 {. c9 Z* P* K/ BWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) _# j0 P" w0 Y) R  BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 L0 r  Z; ~8 H1 _6 C  I- jEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
: D- \' A$ t  AI love you I love you with all my heart
* U: I7 H) I) Q- t. m+ R3 `) {- sNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 s+ c( c9 T* c1 P- CThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ E: q# c  p+ VI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 q3 U& c6 i6 o% U$ P+ ?) O* r, {) h3 b, cYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 A' X3 y0 g. E! n, DWith such a tongue as yours,
- l+ k% ?5 V7 ~; ZYour speech can’t even keep up with it
$ i" p0 A# v  ~  h6 R+ a; lIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ y- g: e% L0 @Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 e1 T* q+ ?+ t8 _: d4 W<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 s# t* p. Z/ ~$ y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 `/ @. ~9 U& w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; J/ D& X8 m& d4 S$ s5 I! Y; T<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ {- y6 v( n6 f! [<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- a6 p! P) L; t% F% f5 |+ b+ ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% G4 _, e) W. q, u6 Y( F! T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 `) J8 k" R1 h8 N2 E( Z( x<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- X- G  ~. Y6 |( `- S5 P8 H<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 P& y' P6 K/ _1 Y( T8 g% ?1 ~<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; }0 v- Y) y0 [' H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 T7 S" g, {1 {$ L<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. k- x/ H/ |8 @' S& k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 b! g7 B, U7 u5 C+ S, [% l9 u<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ \, p6 w3 [* \% t3 ?! e<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ h4 Q! i+ h' t4 r+ Y- ?<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 O+ g! U6 H# p# {& u0 Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) N0 c( |+ K' F" a5 ]* M<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% o, X& o& \3 B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 C7 {* v* n# D7 x7 [% M% ^1 w6 K6 y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 X; `' }, ?4 ?6 h- W6 x<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, T6 T" V$ G: }+ P7 `<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' d/ u! M) U/ _" B* }<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 E! g2 D$ W: \  f% [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- s% A9 Y% ?/ N% f* ~<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 a3 [& e. x, r( t( c0 x; Q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 u! {. ^/ ]4 g2 Z2 L5 _$ H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# V, P; l9 ?7 Y0 J<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ O$ v! O; T6 Q) ^# i<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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$ \2 Y$ H8 E" w* w0 T' K* k; l我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, N( H- q$ X7 y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>