【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ x/ Q* M) ?, WMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; x7 }9 b) W( D8 hWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 g& w( i, p" L# l9 UWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 d  Z8 K, |8 p0 G) R+ EIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
3 B0 k( P2 |6 D- N, VI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 @, H- E' p- S; r' l, E1 ONothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
$ I& Y& d( _$ GI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 ?- t9 O- a6 |" PI’m still filled with fear
( x. j  a6 X0 i2 kYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
8 v8 J7 X/ F( q  U/ ZI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& N# i- ], q% ?+ V/ g2 vWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' K+ f4 a, E$ w6 \% z$ qIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
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' }3 o$ ^+ i0 k  x. L, W<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) [. Q, U% D; a$ \5 v3 V( `: F<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 x% q9 k6 L. [8 w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  l6 O: ?; g0 G  a: S& K7 M: a<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ d2 M. P* ^$ a! H5 ~$ X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ }' |5 N# V9 {- D; u8 P7 P<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 C/ _( z! h$ x: j0 T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# b! X2 E" b/ Q/ W3 P" _1 j<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' g4 {& G7 z8 f" N' h<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 g# U% x9 ~" ?4 `: t- M) g, I1 W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# N& F3 C3 \) t9 H+ m<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) I$ L$ x$ g$ }8 h6 H<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 g* K1 S9 D- z" W8 `/ z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- Y1 y  q0 j# ~' F3 l% `* R<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 }/ k( f* c  l/ n2 |3 T7 S% R: {<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 D" P; }1 S7 e+ S& j<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( w( y2 H1 e" ]+ x2 K( w( ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! J0 l/ I, L7 k2 g' V<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) H9 u; u' G9 d( _, u  R<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ d; @! N- f* l4 ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; S% y( \4 B, e5 G$ u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ M) K/ d8 k" F. b* r3 I+ D<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>