【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
  t: @1 k$ z9 V+ E" _! aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ q, G- ~, \0 y5 Q) z' `The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
0 L- _* y+ v( ]3 B2 A$ aSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 r- C/ V  y0 L+ B# pYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  P( [- v/ T6 t4 C5 a  YEvery other word you utter is love
* O, B: O( Q# B8 KI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
9 f' l+ n- p$ P* `; nI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; E' k1 `6 h! s" b; l5 e5 ?Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 w9 U1 Y7 R& r6 w" H  _I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 B$ a+ Z( [8 [$ Q+ a9 URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. `% h/ m0 F* k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 w: k6 o6 Q) I$ F2 E1 t6 s1 @: H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 X" b" F4 s0 b6 d) `# J' Q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- Y; V( \0 g! r5 P8 v) o<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) k# P7 r+ u7 J  ]* l9 |+ B- _' L1 t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* l' P% ~: w# L<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' \+ U, N$ R& |2 B$ n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' z* q$ \( K  o6 D8 a5 D6 }<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) N. d4 q; Y/ K: z2 P) p/ E' H<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: e  _! r2 h  E( Q% U; K' _<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 `+ y" H% {; w  F' J+ H2 [<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ h" {! `; z/ N( g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. R$ J$ |' D' d+ P<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# R8 `! P" b( g# Y6 [8 s6 |' J( J<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' T8 {5 {3 f( u# e, T! C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 \3 ~7 Q- z& N; ^4 |<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- T4 R- |) r. ?5 J2 |7 a) @- _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( z: k9 ]3 V' `( L' u<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* |/ G" Y& ]& k- [7 ]! x  ~<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 x* P+ g  h% s& B$ _0 W<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 _; m# y* J7 `1 ?# X, [  Z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 n) V6 _* V) g6 a6 p* M& w8 `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. N& k1 s, O6 i: l: Y4 t<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# b; P' L1 R: G0 M& Q% b/ r2 J( a: |<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" L+ V$ H% G: P& Y6 n( L<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

4 T" _" B. P8 J( |, i+ t" |我请你剖开它

% I+ r" J5 R9 g7 U9 m 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>