【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
& M$ a% E# Y# Y& _6 w! ^/ r4 DThe moonlight is shining brightly,
8 o) V) r+ a! XMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( X; X: m% w+ R2 _" eWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 R: _" F0 i+ G" M: |, w" ]" wThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: h5 J3 j3 s, w" w$ U% T8 gThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 n2 C7 e. n2 j$ n6 @4 F  b5 e7 `, wWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& z$ `0 ?, {" l0 TIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% E! M; o1 D& U' B. E  k  gI really want to know just how much you love me
1 ~6 E- h: d4 A  i5 R7 [- v: EI love you I love you with all my heart
& `0 s5 Q! ^+ o9 bNothing can compare to my love
3 q, c$ O- m& @) ^Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 [+ @, P, a2 zThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ L( C* c! n$ g7 {/ F# z  a2 DI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) ^0 t) }! M) O( X8 m1 M0 lYour speech can’t even keep up with it
1 |0 t% W0 p2 fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 _8 _4 d& B/ r: w+ ]" N6 gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

( z4 P5 G% t6 K' n<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, b) ~- S* i. X% B$ c<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 C* I6 P, }2 |: x) y) J! @<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: k3 R+ q3 o- ?<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 c3 J. x( m) G9 ?' W4 h<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; b1 \8 [1 D" [: c<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. \! E+ @5 {5 m; c( ]( ?<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, Y/ x/ @9 I0 H& z$ |<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" X, j3 M$ w, y1 Y! I1 A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ o  _" O- s! M* i. i; ^" }<P>你无需担心</P>
; X/ C  T0 I- n4 [: W* R<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 z! w& N0 N  B( D/ F( a7 x& N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; g, O* A' S: [8 e" N- F# \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& Z5 S  Z. b4 ^) n  [* a<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# ^, s7 a3 X& [0 Y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ x! |3 M# n; b0 p# {/ X" c<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* m' J) e+ U" U+ ]8 u* Z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) m. b/ O9 I# P0 ^0 j6 m$ o2 Q4 S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 p3 R2 M! }( G& y& ?* T/ [<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 N/ N" Q2 E1 q  B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 c/ e( G  x3 w* _: t$ g, J4 N* _<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) n; Q( Q! i" v$ `8 ~<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 r8 `% u! w& n2 H5 c5 N<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: e: i' U9 Q$ C' i<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: C. ]( D4 L! A1 \<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 f4 Q: q5 @: z5 E: {<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) k/ `! c  _# T9 Q, C; e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ ^4 @# n3 ~8 W7 ]: W" m$ x<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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& G8 [* _; Z1 j% [: G我请你剖开它

* ^) @- V5 F! }: V4 L: {: O- v1 I 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>