【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 C6 v5 c# B6 ]Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% n& B2 n$ w4 y/ M) O# ?The sky is happy down to its soul
% Q  K3 E& n+ jWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( s. l5 @1 G, NI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, ~9 v( u& ]7 e9 Y" wThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
3 l8 P* {1 P4 |( ]I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: h( F0 z8 R! A5 j0 ^$ F" A6 VYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 I+ T- D, O; b# {) P: X* QWith such a tongue as yours,
3 [3 `4 Y. `8 L6 S$ aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 j0 R7 G8 m" {6 Q6 g: URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 M1 H  b5 ~9 u! j. r4 H, o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 z, Z9 `, Y. _, c: X. a( S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 M7 D8 R/ o+ K, R  ]9 _2 E<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( c* z3 q  y  _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 i/ g% o5 L8 T5 ]$ r% M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  S6 e- G/ Y4 h4 H" w- j7 M8 R<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 l# h* L" z* q+ W1 V<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; |- Z' B  N) l; Q- D) r: ]<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: X( a/ E. {  ]9 n7 t  y" g/ a<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 W( p5 F4 j" i<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& n8 p4 c( l( Z! k8 K<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# O) s4 n/ h) K9 q7 E4 S) }+ ~4 m<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! y; G9 }6 n9 s0 b& K" ~<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- U  @' q3 u( Q2 x! f& X) E<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& Q5 \/ m! F6 K0 A<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 [( \2 J1 k. X# L4 N( S9 [7 m<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 A. m- P( ^7 ^( u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. _+ p/ N- o' I8 ]<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: U% Y( g# h+ [' a* _<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) K3 x6 L) O' k  e% e* T' v; @" v% \6 S<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" T( t8 U4 B' @8 P7 T- V- [<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( q- m) V) Q# w% `! B4 k, [9 D0 b<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 L) i9 A! ^1 Q" o, q0 @4 N9 @( `& [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 q0 t- a( `2 [& c+ S6 ^<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 X# P3 L2 m; A! I<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. O; `. r7 B9 |! n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>