【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, s3 s, ~: }: p. C, eMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. w7 i/ @. s; U- C# f- ^! DThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
! z& ]8 B5 J2 z6 }9 _* ^( d! L+ fSeeing the sky content with its love
! K0 a; P" H1 X2 k$ Y$ @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 Q% M- p: Z6 X  T% L) U) _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
4 j: m) X2 v+ L+ E+ V3 Y6 K8 G. [I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  k  R5 t. s! i9 A* h/ E% Q, f+ QI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
8 g( X+ {. c1 d- O: p/ c" _6 U. aI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
0 p& B9 z/ t; \3 K, f) bYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 S5 r+ R) n$ ~1 s% w3 PRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 ^8 ]' J6 I, I! s( d<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, ?9 H, w. F" l7 Q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 M! Z- k# j4 y! [6 b7 d1 k3 v<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' D3 s7 Z; M2 i, J) F8 P<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. T: j, q% b. }" l" f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  L# t0 P6 ~1 g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" q+ O# Q% ~6 a( @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 i8 [7 \9 z6 i- L3 e<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( \& E! d/ U/ E2 I. ^9 [<P>你无需担心</P>
! \7 \- w8 I; J: ~+ k# B<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* m% [( i  ]) S$ [! o<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 ^0 u1 t+ x/ u1 s5 ]: B- z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; M, A, k7 b. J. u! i<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 J$ h% o. r9 R2 W7 O7 F<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% H* L8 @4 R# ~3 s6 C1 j% Z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  u/ V& {! Q6 x& R. s<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 U0 h" v  Q4 Y8 k* _- ]<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 F; D8 d2 h& r<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ X. c5 |3 g9 o3 e& b- w3 P<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- ?; q% c$ g7 w. d. e3 A<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 u' v! p) i* Q/ w9 F: d0 w, z9 _' o( g<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ b! J+ H9 ]( n0 x- f<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 k* L% s- I; N5 b% b# G/ V<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& J) `. S) j2 Z6 M7 t<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: p( M5 h8 K6 {9 z* H+ F" U<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 h! Y/ X4 }- ]7 y& W, w/ J% n<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( D- o% n5 M* ]( s% m2 @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: Q) C2 Q4 \% v9 S2 a2 n<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 ]5 L2 e3 A* g0 r; _  V<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>