【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
& M# S( B# u/ |4 O( t. G5 xMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( U+ h9 T8 f( o( RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' D9 z8 |) m/ s9 c' Q' GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
( m& |5 B/ ~- b  c7 U) B0 Q. FSeeing the sky content with its love
7 c; U3 z8 L; {It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 I- Y6 i3 E, N' m9 y" HYou needn’t fear anything
* W* K8 I7 b6 X4 @$ S  u" }6 @, cMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 f" |1 t, T8 t1 ]. `Every other word you utter is love
! J' x6 {9 T9 D3 F/ fI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- C) B* T1 M7 t) B+ V- R, VNothing can compare to my love
- R9 U4 ~. O6 s2 o6 s2 i1 g% q. nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: x! e. J+ F. QI want so much to see inside your heart
' P4 ?9 U4 o2 R+ @: Y) kI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
# [% z9 }/ ^/ ?) B( N2 b: ^I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( u7 s2 S2 Z$ M2 ZYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' x3 V/ r! K2 V7 e% e$ k( J! v# F' b<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ O% i% G) Q# n( w* y$ i5 H% D<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" R( Z: E9 l3 r& w3 x<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# J6 |0 C& f# g+ p7 h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 t0 ~# V* _; ]' Q9 U# k9 d( ^<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. {( \) A; j$ ^/ r  P/ \, A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% A% R3 _: G$ H$ S/ ?- a1 ?<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 p$ p" [$ C! F. U* g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, Z, t! n2 }* D  I$ p5 o" g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 N. ?. G8 ^, b$ c; j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" F1 G: `/ \. y! S* o7 ^<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ ~  @/ P# a) \$ g<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 \  x2 d& C2 C5 k<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 I, Q% x# k0 q- t6 D4 Z; J<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% U' m$ P# F  l1 _( K& j<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. u7 U, l/ p5 S# A3 @<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ ~4 F! s1 f4 W% ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 J, I. T8 B; R) m/ C) F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) U( S9 `  O4 @) o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ F( t$ p6 ?. I0 I4 [; p<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 s: E4 }6 e/ u6 K4 |+ w<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* @. J. q; {% W" r3 e2 a<P>I regret not dying</P>
' ^! e) y  H6 H6 a; Z5 T4 X<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ _/ e( E1 U/ X- S<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 k2 N+ B8 s4 I# B$ [/ G3 y8 t<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 m1 k( f" z5 b/ a5 U& T" T<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 `* ^2 a4 `1 M  B' E1 D/ {; w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 k7 }0 n1 I# R* [. f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( P' S) G7 V4 q/ [  m) v/ K/ W9 ]<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& F7 b8 |" p7 h<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>