【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
" N6 v. ~8 q4 Y! F" UThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 Y5 V5 A% p4 L* |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# K; C; C" H1 G' f* b1 w' w$ sThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ L& Y. I1 o% e0 MWith the moon kissing it every night
+ t+ ?# p1 `" K0 q( SSeeing the sky content with its love
; C# F; u, T8 |- p3 s; wIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* @6 ^5 p! S  F, \: HYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% w. w, I7 {3 Z, x7 P5 j( gI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 {% P+ l4 F1 v$ y( F: lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; E% l' w$ Q2 E* K# EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 F" x1 R6 U- i  ~( KI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& w) T* n2 Z2 I  o3 K; Z* \I regret not dying
3 b: O: {! |6 @/ R9 M/ r( f! XI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
- v7 N# D0 z4 H0 e) F. _# Z  m5 oYour speech can’t even keep up with it
4 f) N/ ^5 g; h# E' [4 Q4 `0 ^. KIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. q# t. t7 F$ K, x$ g- L2 f# yRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  d1 |* L, T/ B. \2 z7 Y' a<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( e. k9 ~4 d, c" g+ z5 ]6 e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  T2 |; I0 w! ]" B" i% M<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 x' \# r/ N& k8 G<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ ]- T0 N& P# Q8 z, z. b<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* Q  k0 ~- R- b! u( w<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' u& Q4 E. z6 U5 ?( W9 q7 W, q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ ]/ k# U) U2 Y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" c1 o) B  f% P0 e" J4 O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 h. W$ g9 B* S6 V7 d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" d. C9 Y4 }4 K- \3 H* j- |; A<P>你无需担心</P>
8 `8 i3 q" m( y% O<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# p" L+ v+ G* ?( G<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. E9 ]: M& x/ ?: t% ?+ X+ d<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# a5 r% I  X6 G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ T0 b. w: R: M* W. e* |<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 w; f" `& l2 |" B( v4 e. M. t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; j+ L8 I' i0 d- F5 j: d7 I1 X<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' u2 m  N7 e8 c; e2 m<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 G& b4 l5 c* P5 A<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) u- z" m$ t3 K8 W9 Y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 T9 Z  W4 x5 Q" X1 u; J+ E# [<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ @1 S" B/ V. T4 e: o<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& P  j$ ^" W. J8 |. _7 y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 R8 F& X4 {4 J7 g: ]/ j, `" R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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, |& f9 K4 c2 _, o1 @: c* @: F, t我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ z, H! k# k$ j! c<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>