【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 F" ^. z9 v$ n  _- g" Y: i: z" [
1 h  K8 t0 U" [  T# J歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
& A4 O7 n% t0 P, N, r* `# mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 q+ Y0 Q, k  S; N8 b2 xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- x3 h1 z9 s: @The sky is happy down to its soul
5 n. l9 r; ]4 kWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; j) V6 L( n* O  gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
) n) R. q) W6 a  b- M" |Nothing can compare to my love
) ^+ O- E* @: K% u" _! T- a4 qCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& l$ l7 n5 c; `; `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
+ x% |7 d( k7 g5 MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% Q* n$ B% X" ~# `+ W- KI regret not dying
$ D0 }) f$ a1 g2 }& M' H; ?* jI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 y, b; `) S2 B0 C8 M, u5 @  L6 `Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 t) ]: u+ D0 i- A+ sRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 S, p# {( w: b5 x5 M9 x4 l
) E# L) x6 r3 ], k; ^) @9 B' X<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' i+ P: D! a) a9 K4 p( t; |. P4 Q( e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" H9 |3 b" G* l; c1 ]6 {/ h. R<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: z3 ]# L, C  h<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! B" R$ Q4 z$ l, L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 Q+ V4 U: Y9 q& h+ z% Q+ m/ q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% [" D) }% m( D<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 }! @1 q; j( ~) k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ a5 s) d" F% P' g) [1 K- o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( ]8 t8 p1 U1 I, n<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ z, Z) ?; C3 K8 Z' n4 F% G. ^: E5 f<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 v# x3 I0 E1 E( _/ m<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' D/ `& Y3 i+ p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 b$ [0 Q: t0 y& Y% T% g: V<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* {. h5 s0 m  y3 w+ R1 p2 i; _<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 `& r! F1 o- s% i% A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ j( Y( {- S) L$ P+ g& N+ N% f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" c$ k0 D' {% `<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 Z! z/ U2 O1 [: |! s6 [4 m8 r<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* S& D" }8 }5 X' C+ b. d3 B<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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: f) g) R) a* ?( i4 @) ]我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>