【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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, i! j) p6 R- r1 @歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 c1 k: A# [# VWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( k( |: ^; q) X' a3 i# aThe sky is happy down to its soul
: O1 I6 m( c2 S2 QWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& M& A( a, b! O1 oYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 d2 S. N! v! M' H- ZEvery other word you utter is love
2 g7 j" Y0 k1 [2 S* @$ tI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
  r1 c0 R5 \# g: I$ ]7 H9 i! ]Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% V5 h% h' @% o! l7 h9 ^I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 e/ F) D2 y& q( y. F! \I’m still filled with fear
) t- l2 D- e4 F* N. G) gYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) T9 a% r) {1 L+ L% ]% tI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* C; e9 A, ~3 O6 q3 R. \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# V0 U6 }) {- H; cRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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! ?' Z  T: m5 C* V/ ^& ~<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, E+ |5 u; i# {8 [<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. ~8 K+ A; G  v" i& S' ~<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# i3 k3 d/ j$ W<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ [! y9 U! [/ O, I: a7 L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 S; ]9 B$ a8 e<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 _' s) }6 C$ S" E9 `- B9 L<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  z0 c/ M8 T4 A% P& X, q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! H) g* o; g+ a0 [0 r" B9 c& p<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 ~; I, f, a. t7 N<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' c+ R* d7 z3 J( J" x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 e/ k  K$ |; Y) r" }<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" ?) k# L/ j. |1 O# z5 w! H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ u5 ?) \# k9 Z% q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ c: I0 O( w: s. z7 g6 u% n+ D9 V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 S9 \6 L6 |; H4 a) O+ o7 ^7 m2 g1 U9 K<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- G. P' W) [/ Z/ b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- L1 {& C1 k% ]  [& a( r& ^) P<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* C; N( G; P! Q8 R<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  E" F0 d, [8 R, h! i<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; D1 @, c6 l: }, }! Z& O4 x3 s2 a6 b<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 Q  V4 v5 P8 N+ D& e$ M<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ Y6 E3 t5 Q4 ~4 l5 G) _<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ G) Y& Z* ~5 S7 |% W<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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8 c* Q- N+ T; Y. e) e; r7 w 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ Q  x! y, E, z! D<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>