【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! e" F- P8 W0 d0 p$ U/ XWith the moon kissing it every night
# i  m5 ^! s$ ?" [& i- `( ?, OSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) Z2 x8 B* ^# a( l6 @You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
$ r% @8 N  G$ `8 M, i) \6 I3 t8 @I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( p* Y9 J: z1 SCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, W; a0 q- Z: A% E( X" \5 xI want so much to see inside your heart
4 ~( x* ~4 N$ U& b: b; _2 [I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) D/ i1 s: ^6 A; TI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 U; A* J) ?8 J" M6 ]# P* I, ~I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" h- `' w4 f( {' y( g: ?With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 @+ ^/ B4 y: W1 b; v6 Z1 a/ q# iRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ [# i3 F5 c- Y1 \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 [, F! g1 L5 D<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% r( K/ c/ N6 R6 s9 C<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( n) x5 j" u$ u1 n. S, n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( F& P. i" @( M( F<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" K  f) v# x, |4 ^<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. J* B: M) h4 P. _7 s<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: G# y7 c# t* z/ ~/ W0 Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( a8 G, M2 {8 `<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  ]6 p  Y9 D: U) b9 {<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, e) ?; t7 O' ~( l1 `# E' x<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 |0 @7 ]2 A' b, D$ G% b7 C<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' A0 }6 }8 U0 c% ]6 @3 _" i2 m<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% a5 Z" E# H( X) ]) \) K<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  X$ ?/ O' J5 f8 h! p: w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 C. h9 W+ S# L8 D+ I6 |<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 [* Y! k6 _: s# i8 [<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* L& \6 }, S4 Z1 K" t$ m<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  c* `3 N7 C& b& W! N/ F<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
  ?4 Q% ~* \2 m7 I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 S% G6 L! [* S0 S# e0 c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 L5 y, [3 Q- c, _<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: ~* g- x4 d+ H# Y( ?<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 I" Z7 V: P1 Q) w+ f9 U<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 E1 [8 u) d; u# ?0 m<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

( x4 J% i" b, L5 a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>