【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
' j5 W. _" [" N" O, jThe moonlight is shining brightly,
; E; }9 L# c0 d- S2 ZMaking the sky glitter like gold,
# I( a) N1 f8 e+ U2 {3 m% wWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: J: o2 ~1 T- Q$ o+ @With the moon kissing it every night
6 T& Q  {6 ^  ^6 H3 MSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. R5 ], G" s; G2 eYou needn’t fear anything
3 M+ ~2 I; U& vMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
0 o- d2 I: N- nI really want to know just how much you love me
* {1 G5 u( d, x8 d3 p9 f3 ~I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
& O- Z, P0 H1 V& G% L' pCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 |, {' s  x6 f7 x7 t% W* rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  n/ O) r+ \% H! UI’m still filled with fear
# T! ]5 a; |5 z, VYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, m% [: {& Q4 X9 E+ dYour speech can’t even keep up with it
* _; q" W. b! kIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. p. G: T$ |* x: A2 N0 L& ORambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; b' B' ?) v4 \  B6 P<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! `  _% [2 V$ o  P/ j8 w1 k<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 ?5 V' U8 {; F' t5 E9 R" S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' I- O# r9 J6 ?4 ]<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 R, q, h* d2 k' N+ w<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( g8 ?" X+ t# q" A<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# S& Y1 O; R" S# r0 C" R8 e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% d# [7 m, @7 E0 t<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: ]' I/ q, T1 ]% C/ s" s<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 W& F! x8 x" ~( X. {' t<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* x- Z9 n& P* M8 R% _<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 F8 @- p5 W+ |<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! [" L0 M" K7 u$ m& R<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  p. s, S! o9 L' F$ ~+ i<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 ~7 Z, ?; z! P" @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" Y/ O8 U$ e: h" A: S<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 N9 X* n: {4 J9 q2 l4 K<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( N# g( P  Z9 l" u<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: h% l- F$ s% t0 S( \6 C& T& h<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 b0 Z+ f1 @' N0 Q$ C<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 N: u" E6 ~7 Q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 b1 D0 w: `( q$ t  g. n: l<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) f1 b  r" w5 F( o* |) l  u+ x<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 v$ ~* h7 I9 ]4 m$ O1 z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) ?6 |9 F) \! D, m$ t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& s" [" o6 u, \$ M0 [! J<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ M& D$ S' j- C<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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& d# R$ d, O* E5 }; ?我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>