【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
; t/ N# T: ^1 `# uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 W0 J' m1 {" M# ~3 y& t7 ~# {; AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* n6 C$ W2 |7 b+ e# s- W( H5 x8 JWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 q4 H: ]3 J1 X# s+ OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, D! x0 Y) I" j8 Q2 @2 LI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 h: b) G1 ~, KCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. E+ l7 I6 T) h0 D7 x3 ^. g0 KI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" F* T8 y& N( G( yI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 Y; w) q- z# m, H$ z& Q+ SRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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0 S) l' `3 R2 E& R9 U/ z. Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- S$ u8 N4 o3 ^; {# R  a1 Y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: Y/ V, o) e# g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 N' k; F& h% W$ i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ _  f  X! D) A& g: v0 [7 ^& e* d% R& i<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 N/ x0 L3 M- F5 e; E) s; [- \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* g0 a  \9 S! _$ q) o<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 f% j2 {) g8 R8 C8 H1 p+ h* z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. [& g/ X; \' ?<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% s0 a$ E: R' H+ d' V) ~2 V<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 c4 \/ i1 z& K- E8 B8 E3 G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% W& X; y- U, X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 Y' q% R1 Z" z9 m" }. \<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  B8 V# W  y: \' \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# }& z) g; U" G<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( V# B! |7 g+ Y2 p3 S* f0 E: k<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- R9 j1 ^% H/ a8 S. R, b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 s4 j' o+ b* i$ K! P0 X* p<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 i" c* j) y$ Y0 [; W7 r<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- I" {1 Q8 c7 s& M( n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ U( {3 ]7 G& n<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 t& i4 w) v8 d- z) N3 A0 {) {% q/ @" w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 T. q/ `4 Y# Q" y+ f<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( e5 i6 N: @: w8 Y& F# b0 X! ~# u<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( Y. f0 m# m1 U<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 d" u. W8 W" L1 Z1 B  _<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 t2 Q1 `9 R2 x! X5 s3 q9 h7 Y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! y2 }0 h6 C6 i9 A$ L9 Z% O8 _8 ?( I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 |+ {$ Q) q& S<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# f4 \2 s4 i8 U. n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 Z# P/ {4 F% m9 D6 B我请你剖开它
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) t2 t: r2 l' P! v! E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' [" G# y2 a! ~' `5 h<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>