【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
* f6 Y$ Q% O* V+ \" qThe moonlight is shining brightly,
' v) p; e9 a8 T- F9 G" fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! X7 `1 a) u" cWith the moon kissing it every night
6 B% O0 c7 d0 m/ x+ R7 u+ Q: DSeeing the sky content with its love
* J* A  K& ?0 e: YIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* C7 f4 M7 O# V7 a" H. c! ^You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& R" c9 d+ C9 I( O$ |2 k$ GEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
! W  [7 A5 z5 X9 }; `* X# r2 ]I love you I love you with all my heart
  B5 E8 J% M* U: L7 JNothing can compare to my love
4 |' |: b  J1 d9 ]! @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 b) C# a7 [; r0 mI’m still filled with fear
& g, g0 d# a/ D7 p/ zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 w  z' O/ M  j* a. c" ]* eI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 K" u( V! F5 c5 D/ IWith such a tongue as yours,
; J. g$ Y; R5 M- _) ZYour speech can’t even keep up with it
0 L. }  E* M, W7 d5 wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" W4 b% o& Q! VRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ F, A4 e. B5 t# g; {3 i: F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 P3 Z0 K+ t0 a( I; {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 L8 {- z, `4 @3 s! l/ A<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* f6 d- @7 ?/ ?! r8 i# `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) u9 _! Z& v# x6 K9 I<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" O$ y! U) a" }6 {; D<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* n9 B3 O2 n- K- j4 d& s<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 ^* m' ]( H) i2 {: ~<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: q% \8 W) n( l6 e" x# ~  A6 O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 l0 y. @8 v6 o+ v( |9 f4 T, P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 `$ ]3 |$ B1 N, E, g3 Y- x6 u<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 u0 W" ~! W6 N8 w' H: U: S% Q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 l% ?, K- |! R6 a; K<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 g, M* S& h) Q' g, y4 `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( U8 d* ]$ v$ n" ~<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; v0 d) J8 }7 g. x, b4 E<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 a% a& h5 e5 f3 h, Y/ l<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 e, o9 X% x- M& w6 A% o<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: P1 J  X! z4 ~- ?7 E7 h% ?  M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' @$ W: P! {; m+ i7 O! S2 N<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, X8 l0 v3 i$ ~) I7 Q3 l7 N6 @<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 q9 @% |% f4 z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( B% Y5 B+ K7 [- L, j2 L3 }<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  l8 L8 I; }+ }' v<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 n# D3 T. R; m5 B2 S) l$ B<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- p) q9 X, h  Z# Z7 b. S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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' \1 @7 _8 N5 W( s, S) a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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