【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 H6 x  ^7 i4 K; T! e6 f歌词我附在后面。
& f) p  b! U( ?$ a: f8 @The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 ~, f7 E2 _8 @) H9 M9 j" ?# T+ M: GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 x9 |; A5 V; q# J8 |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 M+ X' i5 A5 e- KWith the moon kissing it every night
" j7 \% ^9 o; k0 O1 H) K/ _* _Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; F  H9 b6 s" A% x2 uYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 I) r/ Q2 W5 X" `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# K8 \0 w/ A. n9 K" VThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; M3 S7 K7 l1 f" wI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ w; ^0 ?4 H5 E0 [6 n% @' WI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, n) N5 `/ Z% e4 s$ WI regret not dying
5 @( }. ~8 ~: j0 I! s/ dI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
6 b! c6 z+ [: nYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ L# t; ]6 ^9 E; j" a& G1 CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: @/ x. B! N+ O# A% h# B1 S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 _- }: K$ G' M% T# V<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" U6 e* a; F8 H: d" u0 ?7 o/ B: [<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ h* l- v& w8 v. t% ~$ |& d<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 G4 b& f" e. l5 n6 c" O<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" B+ P9 S0 }5 l<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; D4 x# Y" E( ~3 d<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" A) t# z, |: e8 l2 E7 A<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 }+ X, r* p8 b$ K1 R<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- L; t* v% v8 z( g3 o/ C! J( f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' s, T& N0 Y3 t, E: t. X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' B& f* z8 e4 A6 a: \# [<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& F: `0 S: f; ?6 X- Z9 ^5 ]  j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 z2 e- |* \3 c. ?8 i* Y+ q+ |<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* k$ v# t6 D5 a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 f  Y5 n# R6 H2 ~1 r9 N<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 m9 D; T' ?6 t! P  w. M- w( B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 o. h% x+ n/ V) c$ u& w( e6 ^<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ H" U1 U/ I2 z. Z0 _<P>I regret not dying</P>
: q3 @! n% z5 D" d5 O* O6 g<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( M; X0 E# {0 ]0 r  p/ ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 l3 M; u" n3 K! V<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 B5 Y; g) `0 T$ x1 y8 l2 B<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* H! f( S; }0 W; ?; g; U* R6 [1 y% M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 N" Y" Z! i: i! G. _) {- n<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 E5 c9 c$ T/ G" N( F3 W$ l<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! U& f7 |( w7 V# y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 j3 \: v' C7 T3 B3 R7 C<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# e3 M1 \; h6 _6 L  Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' ?8 r( T- b4 Z/ ^4 I我请你剖开它

3 f! D7 t# N  K5 S: J7 U5 c5 K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; N1 T# L& ~* t+ D<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>