【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# D0 [1 Z8 I- q# W歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. _8 \! {" ^$ E# ?- _& A3 lThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 x0 z- R- A& ~1 @Seeing the sky content with its love
  a7 B) ?5 w* a7 h- h0 l+ g; jIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 g4 `# S* w8 Z5 C7 ?You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 s" M5 f  m% z9 ?Every other word you utter is love
1 l+ F- k! W- N; D2 O6 kI really want to know just how much you love me
5 U. }- M, t) C6 _I love you I love you with all my heart
" @, N$ e; s( `+ I5 p6 yNothing can compare to my love
1 I5 b  d/ X$ K8 W" t) r7 VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: s1 B( x6 t7 H2 g- v" qThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 @6 }1 m7 C$ C5 BI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 _7 @1 s2 ]0 d' m. E0 h, T- ^With such a tongue as yours,
- P; a! ]; w; n) l9 mYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 h5 c0 u4 m$ {5 h" eRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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# I: b4 \$ f5 K7 f# @" A, q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 A, g/ E% y4 B. D% Z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 a6 `( e' A3 e0 I9 i<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 Y) ?  }; i$ w, @<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ m, |4 d7 s, Z8 C' _4 q1 c<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: ^- R2 D, G, I: r) h& _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# N4 X& L* S# Q- e0 U8 j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& f4 S7 o$ `  Z/ f$ X<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 Y! I( h% C9 r8 C5 c! X0 Z3 p<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( a6 A+ G: L+ D/ l<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; W2 y; p  r# z4 Z% V<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ p7 u- A, a/ \: E# P1 E- {<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* a. r# @6 s+ C! N; i<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' U  W+ @6 E7 h. m<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# k& f& A2 N5 r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( P5 g. M5 b) m7 C<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ _5 [0 C8 H2 b<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 H+ t; n5 d+ ]4 N* U<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* E% n- G) c/ }" _2 a& G: S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 |3 f- Q' T8 s& F<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) p- X9 Y' P5 ~# ^<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. I7 G' R. f" P! A; h7 E: h<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( Z  P3 G1 U$ l<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 Z  o! [# X3 B8 d: P<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' s* E4 p' r% E& \<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. G/ [/ s' _' @" i! b: F<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 t. S1 [: Y$ q3 @( e! s<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 h2 f0 Y1 D% B1 h( v" ~<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. G, T& r1 |( N# V1 j8 w1 F" V8 d<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 D) F, D0 W) B  O! b5 T<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) H" R' I/ w* E) F) a$ G& ~, B; V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 `6 L$ Q" S1 ?<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& U9 t7 Y: _. S4 L$ Q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>