【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 J2 }, {: `- ~5 ]$ }歌词我附在后面。
  n  ?" m& J. W! X! ?: tThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 W) S$ N" A6 z$ Z; }  fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' l6 t( I/ j% S% y* z$ ?The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 Q2 C9 z5 J9 p) \9 z5 A7 e; p- JIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& E9 G. p- L- y9 }  Y; }0 `3 x6 GMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ ?4 ~; p/ l6 `5 J) m' r! x5 ^Every other word you utter is love
+ i( M  N& q3 G3 s! {I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 G- |3 ], S/ A% F7 T! nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 _0 G+ {7 n6 D" X6 l; }' U" qI’m still filled with fear
$ f; n0 H0 c* g2 v' dYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
& x* p6 {% ]2 X& @2 fI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, ^2 C" c5 N8 u5 }+ y0 R# {7 \With such a tongue as yours,
* e# o" c. [" q! j0 T0 c8 y; aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ c8 @: r2 V& S% A- M8 F<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; E. m: ^3 L2 c0 i<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; X% ?2 U+ y% _) x- n2 E% [  p<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; _% O5 B1 H; V: {. v& y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ A) K6 S. @& n" l% N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& c% E, K% o& g/ k$ ?<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ B9 t- |. N- T9 a+ P! o<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 y; D* Y, g0 J4 P, e1 u<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. V+ T# r. N( R! F- I<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 B0 Z+ H. r1 }; l# w: i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 y  a" ]; |5 U0 m4 ?0 z/ K' q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 X6 N# z2 a9 \5 k) G7 |# {! V, @<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' o! [# }: G$ [" S2 B7 A<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 I- F) I7 O. g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 O& N7 D% x3 ?0 q$ Y+ Y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 p) p1 |+ D$ ^2 H6 L4 J; B: l<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: `" z3 i, N/ s% C) |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' O, W( I  I2 W! @<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' V& U: z$ }/ O1 u/ T. Y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( O( ^2 o' z4 `' T* g<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ A5 H  J: [& V, S1 o<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, D" \  B4 @+ l" f9 Z9 Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ i6 M! c/ w: K- T<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

6 h& G1 }! t4 G. M+ f我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& Z8 A; {6 Y) O% @% P7 f" z7 J" Q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>