【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 x1 u; Y. d5 H. o! G) nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) S; }. [  i: U8 G& hThe sky is happy down to its soul
  j$ a. y! G. ?, K7 \* UWith the moon kissing it every night
3 V) K+ W) d7 `" o) A  E. dSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 w; E7 l: |$ A* {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 z/ X. k# H# @3 v5 @7 z+ qEvery other word you utter is love
! V; ?) x8 N* O- AI really want to know just how much you love me
# D4 D; a  d3 ~8 h2 O# YI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. F: y. a: F  I# v- d2 `- jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! z/ ~; \9 a! _. V/ KI want so much to see inside your heart
1 m# Z! J! p: j; o$ k8 j$ ]I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  o( p0 h+ f1 G. W; gI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 B& x  ]) v$ q# E% o! b; qI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 r6 m0 A: O1 cYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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5 v4 a' O- J! \* G+ z1 u0 K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' l# Z: i& i" p: C0 S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 k. ^5 p4 b; @# f$ ]: w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  F4 U+ S5 O0 H% D6 I$ I<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: \9 {3 q' H  B9 ^7 t<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 h- n: G+ c9 a' I$ \<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 [/ R9 Q! W6 {0 M+ S6 y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: l* }2 w  h" W) X<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) k$ _6 H' D1 \- m<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% c  }0 j* O5 g. K" r<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 x2 l$ O) F* X8 u' `6 j<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: E! z3 @% c" K5 A; c% O<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ \: Q* J2 c/ ?" d<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, m: U( V! A* S' W5 Y" r& j<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 e# t& j+ J% o' P<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- T; N: ~$ e' h- I2 m<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' T/ k1 x9 C4 P<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 E8 }2 q, i6 @0 z# |  _# c<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" x/ }) M. B# o+ z; \<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 E$ }& c( I; F' v8 z1 U7 d<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 D8 h7 l. t, Q0 g' G<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ S" t6 x. `% r. H4 ]( }9 D<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" d( G( D1 V, E0 R<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& k) p! {) c( x& X6 e8 ?<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ p& A( F7 {5 T! }0 Y, x<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 a+ {. m/ k9 C% x) Q! c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  S- }' [) \: }9 m0 P" m! l* ?<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* {2 ^' S( n4 F4 ?% j' G<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ n+ W$ b/ @3 `, ~5 \<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" y$ j. B# N2 n) _/ L$ u: G# `9 f0 u# c<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>