【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; [/ _3 ~) C) O: yThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ ?7 w, W" E; |  ]With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 r" L; a! V4 H2 H/ KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
7 b, Q/ x% V+ rNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, [/ X, _/ C+ n: N9 x, SThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  U, f' W- @) N3 X3 SI want so much to see inside your heart
5 j' W( r* ^1 ]8 `! YI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- {" S5 G, I  e: I5 c/ r6 jYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: v0 R. S4 g" E2 u5 jI regret not dying
% x; o+ R; w' k+ O: M# n* h  |' Y- RI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' T$ {$ G/ i1 ?2 r6 }5 ^& xWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! y0 z% s$ D6 N  q$ P& N5 T& a: ^If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. w: D  u' k1 G& U$ p<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( O, k' ]$ n5 _; q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' g- S5 Q0 @& [# }$ E<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 Y( a* k% s  S, j% O6 E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- i- p0 o9 F9 g% C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# z8 Q, O2 D# ~* C1 C<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" M1 ?5 S& Q: ^6 Q( T) E  g<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 ~" e4 z$ R6 R" P9 y* V2 C<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 \$ ^& P9 H4 J6 S<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 B+ u, o! U/ k. c/ n  U; K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 }0 k0 T7 K; q, A. W6 Y; W2 z" S<P>你无需担心</P>
. D7 _3 k1 Q5 C  Y2 I+ Q4 S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" \. v0 Z& i+ i8 F) V<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ Z; n. G* p* h2 c<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. L0 p0 e; t9 q4 @" t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  V' @2 w8 w4 S" s7 ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- ^5 [  F+ G& d! }' O<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! @5 C- n( K  e  t1 Y. y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) X) Q) R! }" J4 Q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, P# e% k$ h: ]) `' U- {( x<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 n( @% h# c+ k<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 U8 |" ?: Z- u<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 r& B. X4 h% v, ^" V<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 n( G6 \3 A' s* }1 o<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- x8 ^5 q: c, g4 L1 ?) G) g" M<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, _) c* A& `; Z' b7 S/ [. w  p<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 ?( Q& r5 t( \, F2 y# S<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 P  k7 M6 }8 F" ~* N* q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ A- B7 [6 K! @) |<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 ^5 t1 [. l6 N- _# ^3 P/ a4 l; j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. ~; H$ t1 W, A# K( @  G. r1 y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 Z5 Y% ?. Z& f, {<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

$ i4 E/ h. ?$ w6 v9 A- L我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>