【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# t+ }! L" i. I歌词我附在后面。
/ y, L% f9 F# C1 e) a  aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
. V( Q$ K; n" A& JWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' g- _2 r; K/ O( b; ^The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( H. D+ ?, V% _/ h- C0 f) hThe sky is happy down to its soul
0 {: ]3 _3 U7 F, u. \# D4 @0 HWith the moon kissing it every night
# ~- f# B" R  l. bSeeing the sky content with its love
  H! U' p) q( fIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 G1 D9 o5 e" d7 RYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
7 S' l8 F8 a5 J$ `, Z, i- lI really want to know just how much you love me
" A$ W. E$ d' n9 rI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( T" S9 \# V6 m! z% OThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
! H7 J, `. E- f4 D$ B6 EI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 c6 J" e9 a; G- _8 JI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. w8 i) _' O: c; W; z2 {I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. ]4 r8 F9 }' w+ n4 AIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- j2 B/ s" }; ~1 ^  u<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& W: |1 {/ ?) A, j% ^( g$ a% F<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, x: w  y0 l1 @. W6 g7 {0 z" y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ t, M) C3 O' b4 R; K6 e' s<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 F0 q3 U9 S+ P1 Q. Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. u+ g6 m. F1 N5 [: j<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 A" L6 e& d5 }5 d! W$ s0 n8 u<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- C' l$ e, }" G, I0 K% I<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 o& _) v" O0 t6 V! }<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 X0 \5 k/ F/ Y9 x# O* v) m<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ ^( i8 x+ p' }3 J" O<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  ?8 s* @" [0 w' g& p<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 v, x; N# ^/ X/ e<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ E0 X$ O6 E* P9 Z2 [; D<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ H" L% l3 m5 g6 D2 U( Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 Y' {0 N5 i0 }$ Z, r<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 X, N# N' N, @9 q( F' r. s2 o<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 b: e& F# A5 \. N& N<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, `; F( T# T' `) n<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, }. }' w# e4 M2 M<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 S+ u* @6 E, K$ c& ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% A- a* P  E% \$ n5 C<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; ^/ g) K) c9 J+ R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# [6 C, {# `& M2 q$ ?4 D  I7 H<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 `4 v1 Y* y! ^& B0 R<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 ], d8 o; F: ^- S4 q' b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

& q+ A* R5 Q* o; H( N* b我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, ^- b) }9 [: D1 `<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>