【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
+ T' K: G8 a& \: r2 a: n4 GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 k; J9 G& f6 R* a- I4 ]When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: B# m  @4 G8 G. qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 S, V4 s( O) o5 CThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 W' k# F7 R, s- z7 ]+ b* ^! Q! \With the moon kissing it every night
2 s: N. z6 i- B$ i- M" ISeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: u3 z3 Z; s1 T0 tYou needn’t fear anything
0 \! e5 W2 c$ H. M0 I0 DMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
# [" T7 @6 G8 a. M* t& R: |I really want to know just how much you love me
% ]4 z3 c6 v. k: NI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& ?8 K! M6 O2 _% _The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
) h0 A3 U) ~$ p) ]/ |I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% C7 C0 i- Y5 \I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 C5 j% ]% m" n4 ]3 E- ~I regret not dying
; i* i- e- ?2 A* J, uI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 V  d! \2 r( V3 H9 PWith such a tongue as yours,
* q) B7 V: }1 a2 }. b* Q3 Q' Y) b" kYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

( ?1 ]* |' f  C/ [- r/ R
<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! N7 R, X8 V, Q- i  B; _<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( B& _; N( n+ E+ P; P; Z! ?<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- v' L/ i% Q) I( C4 g<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 B2 t! z) V7 l; b2 B<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ K; _/ M' u& G$ D/ `( h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 |! g( ^2 R1 `<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! W9 r' J2 X) M: F3 t: c) a) F, ]6 h<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  O" S! j/ k; s8 L* W" h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ E+ a& p& r5 J8 `<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! F2 ~/ Y1 U  p& X<P>你无需担心</P>
! L6 Q/ D5 L# k! _. u, m<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; V" K* a( |3 N2 W<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 K1 x1 ~7 l" v. |( B7 m: y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& U# J3 `4 x- g- g/ h: x<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* o# G4 X' |5 K) h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 u0 z  {3 u: |" M% B! ~0 k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! l: w5 B: T0 A3 R- v4 S<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 N9 l6 p+ H) V+ M  L! n* l<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! `! E6 ^: v: |  N; v<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 e6 n; a! V4 X% X# T<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 L7 V! B, X4 }, Y<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" C# T7 p- h% i5 j6 A4 Q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ r5 Q, m' O: i2 W. P8 N; i<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; u2 ^' E9 B7 s2 z/ g$ L+ ~0 Z% Z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 `- {( X& z0 T2 q& O* F1 b<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>