【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
0 a+ }; @, T+ Z  s# T* AThe moonlight is shining brightly,
$ w+ D# ]7 a( `, j2 j5 qMaking the sky glitter like gold,
$ p. [; R, z$ C0 d' jWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ i% O$ _8 A! V2 r5 MThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
1 G. [3 |5 a0 c3 X4 ASeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* T9 Y, W( {  w$ c% `+ C0 [My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 `3 w/ u1 k* \7 B. O/ {4 o9 ]Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 m/ L  i# Q! h4 c6 l8 o. X5 NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 t: {6 B1 s7 S: dThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
* M! i9 O2 r- `  kYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, P, i% L: _- w9 T! N& b* ?I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: i- p% u# ~" L. z5 h' CWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. a  R* }; k: Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ J( E% N7 ?5 P, x1 V$ J5 z6 s! x; i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 M4 [/ V' X6 n7 j( e& a<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 E$ J3 t. I: k$ @. f<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 w, W1 {1 p/ j0 q1 G1 i0 ]" _<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 h/ r5 O! ]" P# J/ r' c<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( g- A  d4 X) Z9 a1 x1 O# \- M<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% n5 F7 M* G7 F7 P! r2 U9 z. o( ^0 D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; F0 v4 t' d1 y8 X7 |6 G<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- _! V* D4 v0 E3 A8 l+ K<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ ]0 N' O8 ^2 ^' d7 B& w  V# r; b<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 v2 o/ [& Z1 h6 P+ c) M% |) K! u0 Z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' o$ a4 o3 H" R4 \' D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( z9 o+ r: Q, y; Q5 u; G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ D" A! V' Z4 R2 a9 V+ \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ c& k2 h" v$ b3 S( U<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- k' M2 {8 ^5 }) {% z2 a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# m. p5 _# |; S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! Z% n: t% f+ Y: _0 L<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# _- [" b* v# t9 p<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 k5 I# g9 e( S. z0 Z& N/ g<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& ?" \$ }+ K# ~( ^<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! U# m$ j( l' _+ k$ p" `<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 W: u5 M% P4 A7 L$ I<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 l' f! y' ?: q/ ]0 b. z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 t2 s5 ^( o2 X3 |9 b<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 y# \' F! |3 Y' j# z7 N- a<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, H& M- e' @( P1 B/ f<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 O0 K2 ^& z9 q. U<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

! Y) t8 A5 U6 U 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; ^: R( [! l& b<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>