【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
/ S$ Q, o: |4 |* _) hThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
* n; N$ Z8 C9 c* C2 \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' w) G0 R$ m. ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
) ]4 X; B6 [, b, u' q) vWith the moon kissing it every night
, {& ^6 o! L' @# ~, G9 c% PSeeing the sky content with its love
9 e% a5 a: |2 EIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' R: t. u1 T: N8 MYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 f$ B$ a0 i: R0 S8 K; oEvery other word you utter is love
0 x7 P5 ^, f( v+ Z  H3 u+ @I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; B7 ^0 H: L; Y- T: B, aThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ ?  H$ S. _* P7 K! r) BI want so much to see inside your heart
' E# B5 R5 \9 h7 {' W  I/ tI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( z! H  u+ q2 ]) [( |( II’m still filled with fear
5 ^6 y7 r5 P& k! ~2 t! zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ c% V/ t4 ~* w; e$ `8 H6 o; |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ l7 ?6 K7 V' I6 S<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 ^. a/ |4 [6 y" a$ ]  Y% I8 r<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* t9 y, I: c% f  g$ t<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 D; P: n; C0 v& ?<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 A' ^* }: u" Y' Q% p7 |<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- s8 |. s2 C$ J5 S  i: Z: D0 k<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
8 d* x9 {% ?. y. p" Y9 X5 V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 U) p- |# F  B' H<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 N0 y" b- y: u0 E/ H! O# U<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 C0 m8 Z# d6 n+ h' y9 R1 N5 H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 c8 e4 I/ U+ `* E- B7 t9 X<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; n: C% t$ Q1 B$ i4 ^<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 }4 N" F7 y$ H$ ]% a<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" M5 u4 A5 F# l# q. r<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 p3 R, W) ^8 J5 i/ e+ b3 e- M<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ E- H8 v; w- }" u, W4 h<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; g3 B2 E; w9 P% J<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 H: A' z: S: c1 ~& N<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 I6 w' Y7 m3 L<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ R- U7 o# _/ u( ^7 R* z0 M2 r$ Y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' O; G; d" K1 r7 h<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 F4 _4 f; P6 L- q9 {+ e# a  Y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  z  b: {. f7 A<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>