【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& l3 ]( C! f2 n/ h$ e1 AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 W* F2 F5 |  F' c8 N; OWith the moon kissing it every night
' m  V8 Z+ \- k, t2 OSeeing the sky content with its love
1 F1 }* |9 D; S7 G% x' SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 ^. _# V+ L( y& }: }1 `0 EYou needn’t fear anything
! O! ~% k# Z( SMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ X9 Z5 b! e9 R" J2 v/ l* p% oEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 L2 ?; k' Y& y5 q: ^2 H1 sI love you I love you with all my heart
  e# j; ~  X# Q1 a) yNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( D7 R. T4 O6 u" p( hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; U  v( s. D: |$ |6 `I want so much to see inside your heart
$ F! T) I, p- R. cI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 C% q* k  i; Y; ~' h2 pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: ~$ E( @7 y; q7 |, y) M" rI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" ^8 p1 z1 V% c) L4 x! eWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! {2 H% P  t& T* i6 R! ?& @& \/ F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 ]; y6 s5 I; {+ P* D, o3 p% }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- K' Y0 R3 y: E+ b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# F, R7 l; i/ x% b! H4 X+ M<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" `4 T) t5 Q( r- Q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; `; i# {1 f5 ~<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 j" Z# _. b' q# X! A% \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& U+ D/ Q6 q* G<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 S! k& Q1 u& Q5 A' w3 a, `<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 A* q" H" K4 c<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, \  b( G6 A2 T<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. L( q$ e; [# B, ?<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# y- F, Z8 E6 L. Q6 a0 P0 h; i<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  Y0 t) R7 F0 _0 T7 n* B<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 j; W! u0 H0 P; t  }% H4 f. T<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, @  \5 r1 K. v) k4 p<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: x: I: b5 N) M! n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. A4 L5 E, f  ?6 \; n% T0 r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 u2 r% l/ Y) r5 d& U3 R1 m+ |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 J, K0 v1 t/ F0 v: V/ y  s* v<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" o$ s, k+ S& `<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 T, f. U. M4 H: _+ N+ c$ R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* O2 w1 Q. \& i: \7 A<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

- Q" \# Z- ^: s* y. Z$ M0 r( o5 d 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) w9 {$ g9 _$ P/ Z/ F8 f: x: q& D<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>