【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
. X4 s3 f3 T/ TMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" R. M! T$ ]. |( X; @" b% \9 U- zThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 L' S1 |( S. ~2 W* Y9 G+ z  ^1 S; ZWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ F0 ]! T# z7 Z4 r9 O$ f3 `, TMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ @. f, _" X: |" N1 R' B* uEvery other word you utter is love
$ x4 A+ |" g& U/ r5 {: y; RI really want to know just how much you love me
: _& j- Q! a8 g6 d0 b, TI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) Y8 C; {* k: hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  q  W  W8 q, c9 [( p  dThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 j5 Z: E( W/ g& PI want so much to see inside your heart
5 i. W# h' ?, zI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 ~* @: d3 w/ o; w( w6 kI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- v: I8 G4 w. d! K' jIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' {+ ?4 K* C) X6 v  X3 JRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 m: z3 g( f1 a& o, C5 r" y9 C, G% o<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 o- D, n$ A- T# B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( R! U2 U7 R( P1 T# |( G7 i. J, I<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: ^5 o1 t  B+ O5 u: o' ?3 l<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- R0 h  o: s; U$ i! d! C<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 d- I' D# f3 i  J, e% c  }<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# Y5 g1 v- d& I- x<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 M: @$ p* r. T5 R1 Q# o. \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 p/ S$ U# @& G& S0 T+ R9 I<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 ^* E" c6 x' j, X1 ^7 Y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 _& J9 b8 h7 S+ Z9 A$ ]# R<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- u- Z1 E$ l. a) A% @) ~3 B% z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 a0 T" ^; T( ~) K1 I  x<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  S1 X0 j: x% p<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 X, B% k9 ^, Y! n<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 n3 i/ M$ V4 U6 K8 g7 N) a<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ ]# \2 M7 H) i<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 p( K- G4 i! p$ }* F  I3 }<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 y+ y3 P" J& v) P& E8 V, U<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  q. D4 M2 {; i) d5 q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; o% W* k+ L' Y0 ~8 c1 w1 _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
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7 h" D# T. X8 a% \( I4 t<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) G; V+ m$ S3 g9 W5 P7 N" {2 v<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& R9 a9 K& D3 Z% p<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  C8 @% A+ U  F<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% D' b5 ]) \6 e1 v& ^5 Z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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. `8 Q" H3 k, P  u. r1 }- o% g我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>