【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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; a6 }0 _( [, _歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
  Q, W7 B# u# N6 c, MMaking the sky glitter like gold,
. W/ \7 J, S5 `5 ^) x# y5 {When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 R, h! e! }& k; Q& q. M! d( HWith the moon kissing it every night
8 i& O  N; f$ M: [0 H, Z0 a5 A+ KSeeing the sky content with its love
% s- z% p6 I* z/ \% h4 XIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 l# i  @4 Y* u% {, UEvery other word you utter is love
! D$ p( F9 e7 }4 o$ k# kI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- f4 k0 \6 J) Y  E% ~$ dNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 ?8 S4 B* C9 DThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 o8 b! n  }5 L: a. }) G/ T3 @9 u) g& }I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; ]2 @8 k2 a# t7 L1 mI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 g2 B  q2 Q2 `With such a tongue as yours,
8 ~. ?( T, A  q: m/ ?% b7 N8 OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
* w8 w0 V0 _; Z/ ]9 fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 V4 R4 S2 D4 Z) }) C) ARambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. c! p/ X2 N# A; C<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 F: v8 R8 N# L3 F$ v<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 `$ S+ d2 {. n7 q, \$ U7 P<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 Q7 v# w6 p1 l- M5 V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 p& Q9 Q3 I9 s/ j- u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 H2 Z* g5 Y, e) N0 R  x( A# T# S<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ l, h: l. g: x0 C* r<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ k+ x3 N9 F: I+ c9 A<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
5 h" O& U8 j" `<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 c9 M9 l1 w" u8 [6 S: [2 _<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 N! p2 s+ Z! P% _, w: o) K<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& i8 v0 J  N# G# q- }5 _/ N( S<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# u9 x* N7 h7 Q6 A  D5 [; [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- Q3 U# w4 l! V3 O<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, _7 l6 |2 e, T4 w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. x8 n6 t" C) b% {) g' S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 E% G9 a) r& @3 Q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 U* H: g$ d2 l<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; D' T* \3 F" Y8 Z5 [: D: u<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* d# j' x5 ^# {/ b$ \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: l( i' [( Z; ]  t0 e/ H8 l( s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- _3 Q  I3 X% A8 g* w0 W0 j6 f<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! Y: S9 W2 }) f& [4 E! F0 P3 `8 ]5 |<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. g7 Y1 ?+ b4 {) x<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 O6 E/ \4 F5 n8 l; D<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 a. E, Y: k' S5 W7 ?: s<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% f% `: Z% _4 \! f<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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- B, I6 C) _& b$ M 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>