【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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% W8 b/ ~# i( m* T: h0 K6 W歌词我附在后面。
1 k/ u. T, O7 K) X, K& eThe moonlight is shining brightly,
! a$ p) `3 e8 O6 K9 ?4 u4 {( ~$ qMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# v4 `' U1 T: r( a" I: m' x) Y( FThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
3 W- ?% x/ f4 S  kSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( T; L2 t9 v1 s& d/ ?$ W  XI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
  P/ M7 d# V( s7 S2 nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
" A. [. u7 }( |Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. t7 y4 C  u3 |0 T( P( JI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* D) Y& F$ H/ M$ ]With such a tongue as yours,
7 Y  n0 e* B7 r$ O4 o5 s  H4 M1 O/ D- UYour speech can’t even keep up with it
  h+ h8 \/ n- HIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# |2 b  M" {' Y& t+ S# rRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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; R- G! `+ m2 ?7 ^) g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) A4 S1 I2 [5 J1 Y; ^9 ]# q" U- a<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& g3 ~; g- z6 N+ C' |<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% P5 D) A) o" z# T7 |& t0 a<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' R, o8 A$ m6 O) C& u<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* q# E' {7 X7 {<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. u5 W3 I  f* ~) b) f5 u3 U# j<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, o1 N1 J2 s" n. }5 @0 O: q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 U  u: B# e4 G5 ]+ i+ k( O<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& H+ }3 }; I% A4 d! z2 _9 y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 d; r! h) C2 e1 D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; @3 x7 f+ U% {<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. ?8 \' g9 {6 n, s# j' }<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% _' F) H1 D( V  L9 v: U+ l- c<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! s5 p8 Y3 K7 U" ^6 Y7 p1 @4 S! v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: p/ j8 K( n1 C<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ U; Z/ G6 f. \<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 y' H' Q9 m8 V" _) L. `<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 B9 P7 u$ V* A8 q5 Q1 P) G<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; [7 w2 H7 ?3 i<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' v+ b, G& ^9 C. O1 P/ @, m5 T<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, ~+ i( ]. u* H8 T$ ~<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 h6 `8 |" C9 h( {4 H/ l) J<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  p' e- _& l" m- `# o! X& o<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# S. h# _$ ~3 D5 B+ I) W<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

, C4 C4 A/ a* j2 q) i4 d5 \我请你剖开它
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+ d& o& t1 [8 A! ]9 ? 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 K: d: D, \7 G: B, O+ M( n<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>