【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
" b3 F- S! P2 m) hThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* v, `0 l- W: ]" WMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 D! o/ `( a( i( ?The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" K4 g: m$ G4 g0 l7 i+ d  Q- oSeeing the sky content with its love
% z3 h" S8 a& U) T3 M( r  f. Z3 RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; Q" Z( i, p+ [9 \$ AYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 k* E1 o) k( h' LEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( d' a* E; O# z1 m+ x' T3 Q" o* U$ TNothing can compare to my love
& x  R- E3 h% _Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 g" {: x. V5 m( OI want so much to see inside your heart
8 Q5 u2 ]5 A9 ]I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
" Y! v0 z/ J. C8 O. n% U2 oYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: _3 t' Z; ?# x0 WI regret not dying
! `  F8 t  H& {2 b8 M7 C2 ]$ kI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. B: n3 G$ h& x, h' w7 q1 gWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 _- D% B. V3 d# F' t& p5 @2 PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, z5 t4 @2 \9 \3 ^Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 ?" C) N2 Q8 t<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ H/ Z# |1 L3 c) ~  K<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 i- T6 A! P+ D. L3 a/ j! e% c/ f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  G" Q; d# ~1 A. t<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% W" S& v! n( q- |( ?4 @; J<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 e* W: l8 h% T, ]1 u' K; b% S7 l/ H<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 F# u9 r8 b% d7 C6 `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ }% J- ^( z, H% m# G; w* O<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. w2 j% b7 @& o<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( y6 ]0 R* O! L3 ^8 ~1 Z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  ^, ]8 \+ `, U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 c  v' N0 C" d! c$ S<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 O1 r" h% t. n" O<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, B7 j% H1 a4 J. j<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  j- e  R$ Q9 v. t: D2 J. i. s+ k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" A# K& _3 \# E1 ?<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 V5 F8 O0 n$ r( I, x: Y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& F1 W& [2 p, O0 T" }" {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 D" Q% v) i- H/ O: A8 G$ Z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 W6 Z2 s# b8 O% L. X: x<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! U3 f8 H/ p. o, M<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# h" {/ A! Z# s. c/ ]& u0 E<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 {! [- j: O& F; P<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

, ?' V7 @* ?' y3 T" X& \ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>