【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
. Y$ U3 i# j' G# mThe moonlight is shining brightly,
7 {. N+ F7 y% sMaking the sky glitter like gold,
% i/ ^6 |3 M% ?! _" w* o+ {When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ P1 ^  n" J" t9 f3 x6 P. ^The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 a$ _- e- I" Z0 j! V/ q# vWith the moon kissing it every night
: C! L+ _% P* Q! f; {: n. qSeeing the sky content with its love
6 t2 h) n: R* m/ [1 uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 p- l  o7 F3 U; ^! c$ P7 dYou needn’t fear anything
  D  I6 b5 j: b" ^5 w, C  \3 FMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; n) r3 A8 ~: f9 X, ]6 |3 ]0 qI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
/ J+ G- d& \. n  e- d- p' i" CNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# z% {4 r1 M# ]8 m/ JThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& u1 v( {2 Z& F8 f9 ]3 i3 d9 uI want so much to see inside your heart
& d' k, l$ o, G/ A$ |' JI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
5 g/ j5 ^9 g# ?4 r& zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. U4 ~5 d% {3 l5 Y2 @8 @# kI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ E# }. r  d6 k# S+ h+ M% \. A7 gWith such a tongue as yours,
8 v- n4 A' Q4 e2 R* iYour speech can’t even keep up with it
, I9 |. U( q: k3 J  R" `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' _8 _! b% d  NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! y' B* K% e; B8 }. N<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' j/ t& U2 J/ t  j/ C! t% t<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 N+ d; o8 w! D! O3 h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% W# R& r. t2 a& G/ N1 O* x! R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 j  v, m% L! I' j& i<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 D. X3 C3 o, m" k<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 o/ I$ F4 U5 V: g, J- R& v- u<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 s; F& ^& ^  S% r$ R<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# M0 a/ E; B6 p- ^# _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# V9 q, w3 N5 H: ^7 Z  \<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# c: M, q# I# O  o& G<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ J) H2 o, H  ~- J$ p9 w. s! i<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! t- `$ T0 [& _( X6 q8 B. S& X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 \2 V3 u( j5 s6 E) e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( {/ `% O" M' i7 ~5 N<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 W; i% B0 I( u  [<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) M. v3 \. A1 n6 P* }9 I<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ Z1 u# M: z5 C. b3 p3 t9 `<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, q- J3 Y* R" X% n; C$ a" u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* a9 P6 G1 \8 e) H4 z. z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' R% y" s3 F0 d0 x* G; z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" @1 D* |2 l& `5 Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; `( l* s& M5 R0 d5 _% v% \<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 r. ?* W: W0 o& q9 a/ F. N, A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; [5 ]. t, F3 Z- s. s" E<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 d6 @7 B- a$ m# D<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 \' \7 A0 S7 v8 q) \<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ s3 N% e  `* N( y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" Z+ v* i' y4 ]! |; Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, d% _- C! g( y! e0 h<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' Y! [) ]- H# `2 F) h<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& k& {# I* n2 Y0 y& O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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! X% h- K7 H) C, j2 b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 A% ~4 m, ], z' B<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>