【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
8 P* S+ d3 G, ~1 D( B" }The moonlight is shining brightly,
, D" d/ ]" h* J. w0 ~Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 z* b, }/ _( ^7 C: DThe sky is happy down to its soul
5 v* X9 e) A- @0 mWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; C1 V2 I0 E( u7 ~( j, P6 g; WMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
! W+ R8 z9 f4 iI love you I love you with all my heart
9 l9 R- |8 s/ m2 YNothing can compare to my love
4 Z0 G7 z; y9 ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& T1 t6 x' p& ]0 W: \, VI want so much to see inside your heart
4 q: p! L7 ^% e' WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 r( [. [: ^- x2 @8 `' [' ~. w2 P7 KI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ `- A+ I+ c# Y1 \I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# ^+ E  h5 n0 K6 m" E, RWith such a tongue as yours,
: a* c( ^9 @  ]) F6 ^, EYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 C; p, L! Y+ o1 b- q1 K% m1 c<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 p5 Z# O. p+ U4 \' H<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- Y* |& `3 V8 A3 j; W  |4 C1 e2 M<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 P% Y) m# d6 a! g5 i& u# ^3 V# O1 @<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 s+ k& O# l1 I1 r  q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 q% h6 a6 B  K$ _<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. j! B# T" r. k1 T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* ?5 d4 J3 }8 I$ ?# h* @. i( ^3 V<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 a/ U! f: v! g2 D! y; y, d2 s1 m<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, b% D/ H" p8 y6 y: j<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- {1 e" o' S6 i8 [: R8 a<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 o4 ]$ m! C( C' v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ E, B! v7 G" D0 K' M# c0 O1 X: ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 T4 C# b  m& q7 J& X3 L<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" K7 O( ^  F6 o. ~<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 W4 Q: A/ I' |* S0 [, z, k<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 v4 ~" R1 n- X0 }% ?- l: |<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- b2 d( f) U* Q# B<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" }8 B4 d& T7 D6 u<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% n$ m0 k% o# G- o' Q2 b6 i<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 ~* Y0 P; a, N5 v: I<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' _  Q9 _1 b' |6 E; k  J<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# `6 `; ]2 a2 x/ U9 y! Q7 @3 H7 M+ x<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) h) g0 L0 c2 b# G8 X+ T<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 q! k! I* W) R' Y( n; @1 }<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ j$ M# U5 n5 I) s  O- e<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. L# K% x% N" c# ~! X) k( J5 ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 h* u. W9 E1 i! ?<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 N' c  X$ c2 |' M3 ^<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" L; H9 Y& N  h: e1 _( v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 q" R$ G& J- k: R<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>