【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 ?6 N3 L! N; v3 J2 E% ^歌词我附在后面。
  O( O4 S+ A5 R/ I+ UThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 \" Q! j! E3 ^6 _; |7 DWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: K$ d6 d, s$ H$ N( x7 v  ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& ~% e5 L$ ?, h1 d2 _The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- k4 p1 f0 U5 \. S$ ^" fYou needn’t fear anything
$ j: }3 E6 O$ V5 [" T; uMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
3 d5 Z7 k6 h/ `: }* `& MI really want to know just how much you love me
; B2 F1 S+ e5 w7 U( |; }8 I$ p. v: G3 oI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
1 ]2 j- P. L. ^' `, k: f( M: Z8 gCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ U: ]! E: b6 h" l. U$ F9 A  t* |I want so much to see inside your heart
( i  }. a7 a! d% |I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, ^2 h' N8 X7 d* a' @/ ?Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
; j( @$ L8 T, g$ TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
& t6 Z% ^5 u7 D2 `$ \# h: O2 I# gIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ z( Q, Y- U3 ^0 B4 v6 P: q) c& g$ t2 J* T$ yRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& a5 O, {+ P: S0 }; A<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. R4 w; Z# v) A! b" A<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 J# H; u7 D) D2 C# P% @<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# Y* n0 W) N+ `; Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ m- }2 S6 K6 N+ R; N& g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 m, M# G4 D& b9 X% J: ]* P<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' S1 J. l. J1 x  g0 N<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& e2 A2 K7 |# C<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; h' y6 W/ S  W6 h<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* B2 Q  \( O" ?* i: H  U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 M$ R0 c( ?0 e! ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 s. V- M& |' o; C<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& Q- a9 T% F0 }: Y5 D$ `6 c<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 i- l0 A, T& y9 {% {<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ b& ]2 {) \7 H1 l+ `<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( M/ h6 ?3 j6 K( g7 \2 A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. W9 u. M$ D9 @+ s5 s: @3 Q) U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. ]9 O+ G9 N; ~/ W<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 y; [+ j/ E5 k8 C+ K6 i<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 W# m9 j1 j6 p<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 Z5 v$ G+ ~5 v# o4 }. h) L2 ?<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. y5 v# K# O9 t<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& l5 U. G1 @# G- b- q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, N& ~+ [) v( \1 ]4 _  K<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, s3 N. U( y: h* Z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

% m, W( B( a4 j* C 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>