【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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) z* v9 H/ T! b9 X歌词我附在后面。
! W9 ?  `  [) iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
0 C, x# m: ~; n5 y  vMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 |& I$ p( }+ b* s+ |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* X8 c$ m0 x8 X: ZThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ M! |# t7 v3 Y5 G! o* v2 l& aSeeing the sky content with its love
+ _) e# ]4 R/ ?) _It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 S% i, B$ J7 Z. j! C' q4 k  CYou needn’t fear anything
! d2 s6 k# u' \+ t! [( c" ZMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
4 {/ ^/ i# c# e' z$ ~I love you I love you with all my heart
  O- z. v$ c5 K. `/ w& mNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. h2 \, i' ~) b3 q  m( X/ B5 a& kI want so much to see inside your heart
8 N+ ~/ J; g0 x7 z2 XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 h: d+ E* x1 e, y8 O* ]5 ZI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; q- ], @9 z0 y/ N, ?With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% @& b5 x1 K7 ^8 D0 c<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' Y, N, k- X7 ~: ^/ y3 `  B( Q0 k<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ Z) V* ?- H7 B6 G5 D<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* q1 A5 Z& n$ k# J( [( p<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 m" l# ]4 x8 `, T7 A* N; w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; L2 x+ e) S( S0 B9 I/ |<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 n+ J7 u( w7 D% |9 ?( E<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, O0 @  R- W4 z) }0 ^# Z<P>你无需担心</P>
; K" A- Q& k+ f<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 R1 c( W4 ]6 w<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! Z/ R. R6 e" _# H/ Y0 d<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& j% {0 V7 }# d, m8 ~& l2 ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 W3 b0 O. E* g) Z& X<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. I5 E( M  _( X' m<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, X- }$ R9 G8 b- Z8 _<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" E, ]+ H5 X: ]<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& y. c# B- D! v# l+ }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' S. S+ y! M1 ~' Z; t  e<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! v( N* d, ]6 G<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( N) d2 k+ J2 R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 E* S5 n# n( P0 L( t, N5 `<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ s* \1 K3 {( {9 G0 [' y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 _1 C' B" G- C5 v, h4 M" G<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>