【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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& U+ |3 x! G2 D9 ~0 v歌词我附在后面。
# t3 {0 ]7 L5 v+ r( m$ z9 `7 z! L% VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! c( x' }" Y2 s8 s# m9 @% xThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 R, @- Z. ~" K9 G  p, @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 w, M  D7 b; a& }You needn’t fear anything
1 X/ n; W0 L/ l4 v' H% }% t9 r! M6 |9 {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
  s" A9 g* ]2 vI really want to know just how much you love me
% Y' Z3 |- C" Q: z9 tI love you I love you with all my heart
2 |  u4 t6 g! |9 }( V6 m: xNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 r# o3 b" I( l# AI want so much to see inside your heart
2 N' H) Z0 {5 I6 f7 y! `I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 p6 j# a8 A7 D# }5 R- kYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' t  F& z0 Z# m<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 b: g# V) f, B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 @  o% U5 ]7 U4 W7 \<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 X$ {1 q5 M0 J1 B) T<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( p2 R% e- v& V1 S: s; Y7 e4 c' ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 a+ ^) L, `5 A4 R: }: q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ u  A$ `: d/ y$ b) q/ u* z5 y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* I. m5 I" q' c<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  H5 |' k2 A: p" z# g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 u* B; x4 e2 P' h- W1 X0 b4 j' e<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. c' v  g+ }6 T/ w6 `* S<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 v6 O2 v- R  a<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. n( r! _8 M4 H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 O$ T3 u+ F- g7 l1 D<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* {* E5 K/ f4 p% B<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 k3 {$ ?/ k5 G! q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 _# d5 l3 }; H1 E( K: ^' i<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 ~4 ^' W# Z& W  {7 x/ P<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" }5 n/ `* ?, Z. V% u% B5 {* Q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ W6 V* k: f1 F+ N1 N& F<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; \1 K' v( W% E/ o( W<P>I regret not dying</P>
  T- V8 q- ~( @) I0 S/ f5 e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' t7 s. H% K! Q' n$ I% L; I, Z6 m! J<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ f) q  ?2 j' }7 k# _" c  B1 c<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ V5 G( v7 \6 \/ G9 a' @$ O<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 q' x- V; `/ _! m9 ?" g<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 |8 d% E4 A, f2 I) X/ p<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. x/ h( c8 s; ?8 I<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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+ q- i6 A) F2 q我请你剖开它

+ |+ I2 U: w% ~; J6 [1 j) o 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) g$ N& \. ^; t1 c<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>