【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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% p' h2 q% n$ j" ^( N" w歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 M9 l# h* n' I, yWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: n% K  @, s( n5 k3 ^) AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! B0 e1 m* z& k/ \7 VIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 w* O5 n$ e4 K' BYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
1 m, `0 y: D7 U4 m+ Q* gI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, o& l& ~  U* ^8 Z' M6 \Nothing can compare to my love
" h  b+ S' x  t& R$ @* ]" D& K- w, aCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 T/ _5 J6 Z, U+ v8 s: {& PI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
  n) o4 J+ x, K2 XYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 a2 ~: [1 b) l- `<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) g! z7 p: j% ^$ D: r! y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 Y" `. _# v7 ]' `7 |9 B& K0 W4 h<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ c1 \1 _# v& ?: p3 Q/ Q; x<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ u( @4 G- q8 s# E1 c' C0 d<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 r- O; k3 y6 w  u2 V; i) A<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; B! }+ |% j6 _5 R; n<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' v: G! ?+ x8 y! j3 x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ d; h6 V% m* I% d% m- L- t: m<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" y  T! \$ X5 `( w& J<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 ?; U$ [7 i# z8 G& O& _<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ u( _" h% R2 z% i+ G<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% I8 L$ I1 r' X<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" ^4 d* k5 d* B$ {<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 f) a% e1 b+ e9 N; D" s. ~' A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) G2 |0 G, v, A' @<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# F. T1 T3 z7 I: C% a$ L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ @2 m. }4 S; R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 R  g. R/ d& U<P>I regret not dying</P>
  L: h3 K: Q: c* F# }<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 e- [% _6 D0 @/ ?$ I<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 K0 F8 `* q+ S8 D6 C$ m0 m' p0 ^" \/ X3 K<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 b" ~" q0 r' A* y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. s/ z% ]# L4 J9 o: R' Z/ z/ K<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* L9 k( l1 k9 J1 Q" n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- g7 v4 R1 ~2 y* J<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 e1 l$ ~" b9 O+ t; W- T<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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# O/ _, A( S4 k我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% y' O% Z1 E; v<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>