【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ f& R7 @( Z0 u6 sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ K8 j+ k1 `1 s# a$ [; X. W0 S4 [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, R, {- A4 \+ y' [$ U; WThe sky is happy down to its soul
" f, {9 s  B, J7 S0 U: e# ?  iWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 G! p$ v. n7 r9 t6 lYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; Q" M! L! f9 I. Q  [, v( j; I3 `I love you I love you with all my heart
4 c" j/ m9 D. H! ~5 ?+ N# gNothing can compare to my love
4 m. S: a9 m6 v9 X* z2 wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) M& w+ W1 \6 R! ^2 A  ?, @I want so much to see inside your heart
) N3 r: }: `$ B: D; mI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 m: N- @' F! W0 U1 k/ s) }I’m still filled with fear
$ Z- S- P) ?: G+ U! h4 @8 TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) D0 l: e& A: [7 W$ }5 C<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; ]" P7 A* r3 k<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" g9 i( M. w8 E' g. Y8 P<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" P# G7 b7 ~6 r  e1 D7 y0 r<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! q6 n0 P+ y5 |$ V; o* k4 Q4 ~, Z+ _) I<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 s6 W$ ?* T" f+ Q% v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) c9 ^" q1 H  R, L; b<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 _- h, h2 @2 N- T<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ f& o5 }. c3 v6 F! Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' i- [' Q2 A5 H<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# H1 \" B: N$ Q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' M% K0 ]0 u" z/ p0 u: Y* S<P>你无需担心</P>
. G' h6 y  w* N( C+ T8 f<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 f. A- d6 Q- v! k6 N3 y+ B<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 x, J4 I7 l/ i3 u<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 t7 \3 A/ Q/ q- r+ @<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) I% A, k( F, p' @' Z, A6 k<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% x( v( a  f# w: n  B6 V6 x<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ r9 {8 |' U- O' k1 m) i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( t4 Z* i3 ~. L- a4 R<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& T' }5 F2 e7 B) g  E<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. w. d% R7 b( E5 n) w6 m/ e<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( c- L8 ^; r% J# W; D4 k. Q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, z: v! d. n! X& p7 r  h: t8 C) }<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# v, y6 M, @+ a8 o<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" M. U& Q6 R; V% ^5 J; J' c/ r<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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( ?3 O. L8 Q' Y  w: v 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 c. ^+ @) p4 g& y" [7 E4 f9 u6 G* l<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>