【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
# J5 T; {1 i9 v' q& [When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  W) z) f0 h$ F; o2 k; iThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. D! [+ i* }0 y, M) J/ a: W0 PWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" ]9 e$ V, ^& E: N. s& eEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ z+ _$ W9 u, `/ H$ d0 RI love you I love you with all my heart
' {4 X1 b' W& Y7 Y* XNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! X8 u  W" p: H, ]; D: t$ aThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! w3 b% n& O# p2 ]. g  O3 qI want so much to see inside your heart
* A9 I! g' p, q8 a2 y/ zI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' p! w* t" M) Q- r$ N8 _! zI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, e9 x4 w. @' Q7 nI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 ]1 U1 {/ V. z" a/ U: B( wWith such a tongue as yours,
% ]! v3 W# J3 H( nYour speech can’t even keep up with it
( m( F7 w- V1 U8 q: PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) P1 G3 [" q5 _( Y- I<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 ^# Q! D: _) U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& F" s' v6 g4 ^( [<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 J! a5 Q; ~3 p$ |9 W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 `6 n% H) V1 J$ Q$ O0 b& |<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% l2 H2 a  j' m9 v2 b<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 A% i: m: ^8 P. K$ B4 j9 y1 n6 v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ ^7 c3 j; v5 ]<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 P; c+ u1 y: {) Q: K<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. V. d3 P5 ]% p<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( G7 r. P  M+ B8 p( w: g+ Q<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' j' ~( w% a' q$ M- T<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* T6 M7 w& R) q& U<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' p. k3 f7 y, U3 q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ h& V) ~& w/ _$ R2 k( Q. @9 t<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 H: c1 ], `4 \5 G& ~' b. u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  i6 @' A: A( E. Y- o7 z3 u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ R& \& h' L* [. L7 b<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 E- k/ Y0 x$ u. i1 H( b7 F( p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  f* X- F% a1 n<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
% j; k# b% n( K6 B. t<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% I% r# {2 w" p2 s/ u<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( ~- ?* R) Y& W) D. Z& T# n7 `! z% Q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! [$ g1 p' b2 W3 z3 k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& L, B3 `# @2 A+ W<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 e7 T6 {9 J, v/ T& |& V3 l* R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& F* }9 U3 w% x8 Y3 P5 j3 |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* w" c) |8 `( U( n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% c. M4 Q) Y0 L4 o' T" V( l6 n4 c<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 }9 _! a  L# @/ U<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

( s6 ]) }4 ], i- y& B5 I  D) S我请你剖开它

! B, X  U0 A1 V+ K/ | 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 y" K/ J0 x  @# Z' a2 G) {+ c<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>