【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ F* T/ O- S9 \( E7 c: W' _# i歌词我附在后面。
8 _( o6 f% a3 q# FThe moonlight is shining brightly,
  ^; H6 T" H4 g9 k* MMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 _: I5 u* Y- y' q$ Q7 T1 TThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
( K5 ~9 f: x# }Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  U# G; n) f8 z6 }5 Q: JYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: [* [) F7 V8 Q6 GI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ L- `! V- ^# g2 I! p/ G# UThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# H/ Y2 B/ h( m. w+ \; rI want so much to see inside your heart
! I% @: E  C6 q/ A) R! e- q1 n, @I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 r0 p: o5 z2 V9 q+ y: x3 Z$ aI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, I( v& ]- u/ l+ W5 `3 ?  rWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 e- Z" l6 {  o. k: i) X2 CIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 P+ |# y% U6 N2 o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. P# Z0 p! P3 V+ [% Q+ G' y. f<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! `" r5 M- `. J. L, f<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 Q/ I# ]' A9 b7 ]6 k* @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 B7 P$ Q  X1 D<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' }, X3 R% O# q; h; q" |<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 O' H  o' p6 g. w8 H3 A& a<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 Z; r3 |# d' U- X; Z: z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 u3 f/ j$ |& \) P' n<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 |" T' _- W6 U- X2 s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 E* d- s) P# X& W+ T7 J<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 \( R* E$ @" K' o/ P/ H5 u' r  t<P>你无需担心</P>
9 C- Q8 L& [* f5 ?" D+ ~<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ Q) q  T, ?2 v<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( V2 S* @3 p9 V/ ^9 z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' [# m% k; f, }  g$ f! ?, X6 F5 e<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ \7 a: m/ {  L8 q& y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. h& r; t  m1 Y* ?/ a. o<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ A% [# |! j5 D<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' ]7 `- g* b. `& Z8 u8 p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! r' _$ r  t* F, v& M5 Q/ \* y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: L( ?- @% K, S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* L9 l: N) k, }<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- T5 B2 p3 F0 H7 p<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& x2 h# C  S5 X9 T: ^<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 f& w* [' {! @* [; b<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ k1 o9 i% O' p  F3 m<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( O5 M- }# J! N2 Q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 p. @' V  v* r  l. k<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% d+ ~, S! k% ?. s1 W$ S+ b<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, B% ~4 Q, e' J) P1 F0 [<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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. _* D  T1 A# B0 F6 W% J7 K我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ W$ A5 A' O8 x3 @6 b( k* A2 J<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>