【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
! G9 v! D- o4 Q: r0 M0 g8 J4 p2 LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ \6 [8 R" z' n- @, O; gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 G; X  Q# ]5 ?$ ~3 @0 L) B0 qThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ K. ~3 }- `3 C: zWith the moon kissing it every night
; n! R* i2 f+ K+ |Seeing the sky content with its love
* K0 w9 d3 h5 y3 ^; o& ]$ LIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' ^! S6 S( b4 w; IYou needn’t fear anything
! d' B5 g* L' W0 oMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, Y# ~* \$ l3 X* V% ?Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 \" n( L5 s" m) YI want so much to see inside your heart
% ?8 e1 c  _$ t7 r5 {I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* E. P0 Y* r# W$ tI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% I, d0 L5 ~9 _( Q; a; }  a6 \I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: i' B% E3 M5 M& s" Z9 @With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 F' E: P# b3 l( F9 L# }. M, y2 Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* b1 C5 \8 f- x4 a2 W<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 D  l+ o; |4 C0 x: H" e<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! R6 }% t& \, A<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 d4 B8 P6 N! l) n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ Z: Z+ L% D$ G# U( p2 J7 N# C<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 Q3 r+ ^. k1 l5 L# O3 S<P>你无需担心</P>
# d/ C% C6 t6 d2 u, n, k6 m& o<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 |. n) A& K1 `$ U+ K<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( l; K9 ]! Q9 n, O: e9 @3 ?  e<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 I  H1 w# |) G7 l' B" C4 C<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  H" A& ], @& i0 L! K<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 h0 X. n  Z! t& z4 v9 k<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 P- }/ C# n( \+ Y6 W<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 U  s6 Y6 E7 m2 ?$ d<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. E* X  r' P+ M' P<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 P( ?0 d& r% k& o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 y- A1 F3 R8 Q9 h. Y1 E" q% e# |<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" }6 u: b3 b, o<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 u: r1 ~$ R* t5 I+ C<P>I regret not dying</P>
  z# o1 W: \8 Q$ s7 Y6 J+ q' Y, y/ L<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- {  M+ t; U4 v$ S( u0 x<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" X5 y/ u# T+ ?' G<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, B2 B5 n; ?- b) C<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* k. I  w( l, f& k+ v7 G4 F<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 {: i5 C$ J$ ]  h/ Z" R* U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( T. _, Q4 I- I' k" T' B; E<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>