【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
. `# k  o6 U8 A9 V0 ^" RThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, w$ c( y# L4 e* L2 p# E: w5 ]When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 v) [4 F; T' ]) |) W5 pThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ X. |- H7 g- p, H1 vIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. X* W8 _7 T9 a8 S+ u, M- m, f* OYou needn’t fear anything
+ ]) j) i, X& l8 ~% r, S, ^My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" \( a4 P* T# V  V! UEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! H- i2 j( i0 W1 x) ^/ L& eNothing can compare to my love
& I$ l9 p- _; h: X/ R; M% L9 n* ^Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: O) q8 t& D- A# o- JI want so much to see inside your heart
0 U& c4 r. F2 a4 a, L4 i4 PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 u* T( V3 u' A$ N$ k1 D' zI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 c5 t) h' L% I7 Y1 e8 DI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 N1 n3 i0 O& c/ N8 i! N: ]With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# O- W% H: H- ~, _. @( fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! q7 [/ B1 T+ RRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

$ b3 Q# V' I7 r& U8 M7 Q. a<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ w6 b6 a, c5 A$ N8 K4 F  {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% }1 Y4 F5 S. |<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 O% n1 W& p1 H: r  a* ~<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" B1 z& M( d6 z8 V- y4 Q& R1 w! J<P>你无需担心</P>
2 v8 V4 k. O) A& l<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% M# }$ l& ]* T3 z6 `5 d7 d: W<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( p. ^. n6 J* d<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 [: g/ h1 f8 \2 L<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; C- S& z5 [9 o8 y: K0 X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 U" S! ~$ G6 {5 m+ v<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ j4 ?) D3 M2 E  Z( _<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) F- ?2 D  {* z; z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 C6 ~" N6 G& y  ~4 `5 ]2 G<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 d  ^' T' Y& h$ A- }<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 |/ o3 }! j+ R5 n+ ~# v<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% Q0 [5 W3 {  t1 p8 N- F/ X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  l6 T4 @* z- i1 |; x& D' i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 k) K6 |# B; ~* `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>