【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
) x# G8 A# V( c% j2 W+ K7 {The moonlight is shining brightly,
* L7 R5 M2 h3 _6 Y% G) T3 SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
! s/ b! ^2 x# d$ |When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 b% Z" d0 N) \* S% mThe sky is happy down to its soul
6 a) ^3 P9 n' ]5 W4 f8 h9 iWith the moon kissing it every night
  U7 q+ _: ]4 f( s' @; ?Seeing the sky content with its love
* Y9 W0 T2 b3 y  D6 x! X" s' `7 c, z1 xIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 \4 D( S% P0 m' X+ r* xYou needn’t fear anything
0 T/ D2 m4 p2 |7 Z" T8 RMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  I4 b, [! u; t8 w% BEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
7 y' w5 j3 q/ {I love you I love you with all my heart
# m, C1 E, n1 q; P& L7 W/ S6 M. H. l. jNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 H* n! U+ I1 g) e  OThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ s( \" ~+ N& k1 v. r  n+ ^: e% ?I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ o& v- g4 I- U4 b# EI’m still filled with fear
- e+ h1 J$ p2 M; x# f( B7 @% JYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ y% @$ x& a0 \0 u! nRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

% Q3 w5 x. J3 h' G. ^/ p2 V' B1 g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& ^$ {8 @. E' q  [<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 F6 o# u9 F2 H+ M( C+ K1 X<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" q$ `8 r5 O) B5 c% N<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ l, L8 y. T( f+ ]) g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. i1 L& }9 N2 X5 L) U<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) E: T* p. |2 K; _9 k<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 G* g) d- b8 n; q5 a- Q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, h4 J, c/ |+ d% E" ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! H; K) s* `2 _* y+ x/ U$ u<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. o# H3 o# L1 W: r0 D4 e<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 V2 M' M. L6 W2 p  X<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 j7 l. ?$ |, O" F. X# W<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 ]* Y* ?# M; x: I8 }  g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, t# P' V5 N' z' v5 P<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# q& H# }; d& }5 N<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- O/ L8 _' Z' b/ o" ]1 k* B  ~<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 T4 E+ K. S! g* a. V' M: B# a<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: w8 \7 W2 N: F<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. {7 ]; }- Y  @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& L  r* p+ d6 k' h$ S! M* h<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* Z3 o& T: N& j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; y2 L; \2 \- A% l, K<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- @- D; _$ E* f8 Y0 Q! C4 A1 [<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
* V  @, U* w) b) e3 _8 ?) b<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' J8 Z7 R1 F$ K% o) B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 C( T5 L" V  {3 l3 M* `! \% e) {+ l<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" A5 d4 {6 L- U" Q$ w7 Q) r<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ l# t& R; I9 Y# F& @  k<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 \( D+ R, C# i! j8 K<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>