【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
+ n$ r, @' F5 d" IThe moonlight is shining brightly,
  N- t% V! k' C: L* u3 w/ Q, BMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" `) e8 ?( e9 H& V8 H( `' J, a' S2 uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, n- i% o4 ?5 p" f. ^4 v3 IThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( V$ b6 N7 {/ {/ H3 c8 CWith the moon kissing it every night
. w( N# T  `% P1 F! ^8 hSeeing the sky content with its love
3 X6 p6 k1 g* a8 {% d7 X* t. E4 Z6 {It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" U. n" o: N7 sYou needn’t fear anything
1 J% a* n+ v6 `5 j3 i2 FMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- n) G1 }0 {' \5 @0 `. QEvery other word you utter is love
$ }6 n8 C3 X! U3 a& B$ U/ |I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# ~% i4 B, Z$ r3 N5 g9 }Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; i/ d# A3 `- U$ \% u' aThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! |" V1 k) U- G; x. w8 j9 F" G9 UI want so much to see inside your heart
$ t6 p1 M  }2 Q5 z/ m; Z% ^) {5 c# K4 KI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; w" i! F$ A6 p- y5 ]I’m still filled with fear
# c/ \( U( y5 P$ N5 T3 FYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ X# o6 p, n8 N1 K7 c; }Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ T5 W3 c' z  P- ^' K" gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ r3 K2 ]3 X6 b/ ~( a, K+ Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; p& |  K: ~( H6 Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 B; H( E) _6 X  z& O9 y5 V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 |! C$ W0 `# V; ~5 w' _<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) s  O' [, m- W* h% d: p5 {* c<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! j" c: c- \1 [, L( n  G<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; M: h4 t% e  x+ g# h4 W<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 G. L6 D! f' M+ H0 @7 H6 x1 Z7 ]' `<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 O6 o" V# V/ `# ?6 i<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& o; ]7 e7 E9 P6 q/ {& |. I<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 p, j1 Z0 X# {: }  G, I<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% [, k; H, u  X6 [3 ~9 ?<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% d8 O# q! n$ J1 B) u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. l, J  M. Q8 p* f  I<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 B; V/ z6 x' l9 N7 G6 r+ E<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ b' A' ?& O% j5 l<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' O" [; b' e" W  v: ?8 M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! c/ B9 {4 e7 h7 D& g( r<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: ~- v8 M; H. Z! @' ]<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- F) _) `3 Q5 b4 C3 I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ ^/ T# Z% G' `+ {<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 N- S( E% `. N( P<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! ^3 v" Z/ w, Z4 ?: E% v$ G" o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; L" W) ]4 Y, I6 v- J<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 N7 L5 \2 T6 U3 t  Z$ L# A1 ?<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ x- Y& l7 ?( {# c  U% [& F<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& W9 N9 v- J% X0 m<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& C  T+ J" j0 _' ?<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% f1 ]& f9 @1 i- k5 H<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; X- o( P; }2 O- |' p3 X<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 H; Z+ B% u* b' f* B5 i- v<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 p0 Y2 E  d: W# E( C8 i4 W<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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5 r- X* J6 N( r9 c2 Y7 c我请你剖开它
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: ]0 C4 t; N% s0 U7 Q8 `; `, O 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>