【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
+ h$ B; C2 ^! x; X1 GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 P4 N$ W& f4 c5 ^When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 o- u, i( P2 p: m+ p$ U* |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! E" I& w% U0 g) `( I- hThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# A: u. d+ Q) a" xIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ s# }# h7 R9 p; y; u3 FYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- J' @7 `2 c1 E" OI love you I love you with all my heart
8 @* E+ _! E: H8 Y6 SNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- a$ X9 T  s9 d7 tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 t1 R" w. I3 d+ d' q3 R9 GI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) k. {, |) m$ |( O& _" a8 XI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ u& C. Y: W1 pI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. c0 w9 w# M/ o( }2 yWith such a tongue as yours,
, d( O# B$ \" m0 ]9 E( h. NYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ G* D; _! H$ z9 @6 }" q$ M, W6 D* t  CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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7 A8 r9 a0 t0 Q( K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) g" m1 F; s) ^+ d5 U<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ Q9 Q: K. ]' o<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 @* E- T/ d! ]( {( S7 D* a<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 R, v5 B4 H! p* L0 G3 g" ~<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 ^! B0 X& }8 f7 S9 Y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# E2 E6 U# f) ]  t6 y* e, S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 U  e% i7 @4 K, J, ~<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 H8 E$ r7 v9 q  m6 a<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% Q4 r+ n4 [" n8 F! L; c" _<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 p% W  c# x5 S( X; y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& S( r% B  {/ `1 [! U  C9 t, S( ]% k! V<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 x1 L' [# B! r<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, g0 K. [* d5 T' R* d* _' ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 Z. B  H# W6 M9 j; U( A  Q/ C8 E5 W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 c/ {; t# t+ Y6 R6 M<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# F2 j' Z/ Q$ v/ L- q5 U<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 G  }9 @- @  u<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 B( i* h/ \  a5 i6 j% u# M: e) }2 M& W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" y/ p  ?5 q0 _, [1 U% [' f% F- j<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" T5 Y6 l- a- @. @+ q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. `% i8 G! {4 Z+ ?<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 R% h* O% \* \6 I8 v<P>I regret not dying</P>
) U4 s( O' x: q" D# g1 I+ H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ a( k& ^) }. ~* _$ S! t" |<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 J+ _' S( R# i& G+ ?1 t& i" b" {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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