【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: S6 C% C; a: E" y8 D2 w/ SWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 O" j- Z' Y( w! i5 t% KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 V+ R0 e0 g, R$ p/ w) a+ IWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" h# @3 k2 W; p' r1 d# pYou needn’t fear anything
& ]9 I# O5 l6 Z( I8 e  _; EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: }* g! Y- N, P+ AEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
6 E; v+ |" q. l# T, }Nothing can compare to my love
2 `* o! j" \% u& f6 D1 |9 X! Y1 mCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 r! j, d) \' {, @The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
, E3 e" {7 g- ~7 L- PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) O! [# Q) y1 s& m2 J! AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; Z% V; X( U/ ?; ^I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  ~5 s" P. Y3 w& zWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' L* L6 `- I8 J0 YRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' e, Y# I' X3 B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 H" k. h% r% ?) u<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' M3 x4 o8 z$ N# L5 F<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 G: z5 n& K' S, ^+ B6 s<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 @( @3 ~7 {, j$ [5 a! Z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: L- K3 Q2 @  l' o$ \<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 a% k. v: }- T; D& [<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  F# t. \, h, g% Z& y) R' k<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
: c0 Y# ]- ?8 @* F* w* _<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! {3 A+ K! `' P# l: H9 l- y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& V8 Y/ J) w% R, `0 k<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" Q) y/ m0 B. F2 w6 o<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# L6 Z+ L. ^! c7 G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# k, t; a! U: s& w4 ^, P<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 E! c+ d$ P- {& ]% A5 U0 [7 q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 B! Y0 M7 ?$ W: Y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ L+ b  W  Z# u: p<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% f+ Z% r' v, `8 B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
: \9 I  P7 r. r5 b! k: U- f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! S) h) s3 H* X1 V: k5 V7 w6 ]; b<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& L/ I' G+ |7 h2 V5 F3 p% ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! U0 m+ A5 V' Q5 a2 E<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ ^, C: W( z8 |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 o- T3 F  R. Z0 A- m  H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 X3 K# [6 @' z; ]# G# X<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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$ X0 ^, e- V5 l 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 @6 ?7 S) a4 R+ O) ?<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>