【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' N) ~" u" K: ~9 ^, G& M# QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) k/ C! o- Y& Q' [! H$ \! @When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 N( R6 d. G0 i0 OWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, i3 r4 ?7 m8 r/ B1 oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 K' z; S* p5 V( NEvery other word you utter is love
. O& J& V7 o  T7 N: j8 l3 I- \7 nI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
4 x/ Y: g- x" `/ P8 j- j( LI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
4 u8 S' e4 u+ w& pI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 Z$ _1 j7 [# o6 RIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; V" Y2 d) O, r6 U5 l4 r<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! o& a2 g9 X% k2 S( J% z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( j  j& O( v# q0 @  y6 X<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" w) q% t+ m/ Y  e# [0 x' n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" h$ |7 \- g9 {<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& d; q" F+ D% G/ p. w) o<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 y9 q: F& N5 S3 {/ `<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! I: G' H) W9 \: Y. G, ]<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 W, z; O2 a, K7 Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# R2 c- \9 f. {2 `1 q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ E& @. G8 n0 ~' N+ Z<P>你无需担心</P>
1 z, v1 t" m9 P5 v  R! l( B<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 K9 y  g) c5 d<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% S1 o: w: `9 Y# X* x<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 a' B  f: O( T% W, S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& x+ C: T* D$ _3 v* Y* Y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) {8 {  H/ R+ W& v" T5 b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% l, b6 B. t# Y5 x! a2 [<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 l  k+ q2 L$ A! O; i<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 g* i+ }  p% n+ w6 s! O7 e# c<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! N, ~9 m2 a- N0 {- |4 j<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! w+ ?% Y- J5 _5 J<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 F+ d' D  v6 ?! E1 f<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' R. ?# Y# V1 j# f3 l$ o<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ ?3 w' Y0 Z4 O' v' a<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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9 D0 L4 `, y" _+ x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>