【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ H+ I4 h9 S: e% @The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, x  h1 t( Z1 h, Q  PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 Z7 W. O! \" }' S" G1 h  ]  OYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 W& h- y  Q3 |Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 \8 C$ N! `% `+ G5 ?/ o/ h" FNothing can compare to my love
* b1 t) `. i6 R' I1 oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; Y; F: X# V# J* H; r9 \The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# V; o" J* t2 e+ lI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 p4 C% q! L* O3 D" e& YI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( S* @! w$ X. t" H: XI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 n! l7 m" r6 k3 g, x5 Z8 ZWith such a tongue as yours,
9 y9 {4 o2 ]: A5 B8 `Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, [! u" W. U& A9 c- P% c% q% Y% f1 XIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% e- u- K* q8 u: |$ r; B<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 h$ D1 M' }; x) x' Q; V6 y) g<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* N2 \% t4 g( Q# h9 h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& y! V& u6 l7 e% f& v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' V$ N, U, n% @; b; Q) w+ a, D% c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# Y) P* }' |. Q1 d<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- ]5 k7 }4 S* u9 g. W$ D, s<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; S8 H+ k. C* ~1 a<P>你无需担心</P>
. [  L" y% b! I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 e: [+ G9 E' x1 J- g/ H+ e9 A+ x<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& H. I( Y& O$ {' k3 D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; g! U5 {6 k' Q# ^- s! z) }$ ?9 G7 q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 L" ?* E. m( f: p0 B<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& {4 s0 {0 f9 d& w' m% h<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% i  U! V6 S. c+ K/ E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; L6 H, K* w! d% G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 V0 F+ S9 W' H$ `6 J: p<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 p0 t$ [+ z  H- Y- N+ z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' B  [6 j3 ?6 \5 q# k, I<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) W3 K2 n" X% H6 R<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 G- D- z) m. o7 a6 S3 |- f<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, ?! F4 M( ]0 v" [9 a<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 o/ P) `% F' y! A7 u9 r6 L1 M<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 C! S2 B: `# w$ R: ?5 v( u% {<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. m: u1 m9 ~% i6 F<P>I regret not dying</P>
) |6 G; F  K' R+ U' H' |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 m2 `( I7 t& ~/ |" f4 @; G4 z0 v3 F<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. J; |2 Z+ ]$ R& y0 n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, c  P7 J0 o3 b/ V; r3 P! M. X3 @- Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  _3 ]! D, f( n9 z: B: g, z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 ^2 R+ C7 m" Q% }& Y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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/ v3 G- O: N" h, c6 j! n 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>