【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 w4 r) \3 f' N- g; R) X. o. B歌词我附在后面。
3 a* O$ z9 ^' k0 i, ]; |* hThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ e" L, M- J; {6 s! RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- A: y! a; c. MThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 B" U/ Z' \) y) o0 XThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
2 {: W0 W; u+ L$ g: LSeeing the sky content with its love
; \$ Z% J: ~  s  H: }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: X  G* \& j! ~. s* @! oYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
1 d3 i6 |! K! u8 sI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 T" ]# Q2 K! v# V, W. G2 k8 YI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 l. k, i1 d3 L1 l- Y$ dYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ Y2 W7 @" K! A5 o4 |8 sI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( x9 |! ?- X# M- I' o$ o<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 R9 ~9 D. T. F! ?3 `<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: O1 C" j( O$ e( G- i' a<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- J7 i, b# H/ Y& H& ?' ^<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" j: T& w. b' \<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ E5 F' p8 l' P- D/ h/ s5 L" b" M/ i<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 m; s( j0 E8 l% W<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 V( A8 @: ]! N1 b. s<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  A! M1 A1 |, _* ]3 ~) s<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
  b: ^4 h# D$ d' d. n<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 b5 o4 o: b. p9 o' J5 W9 A5 v<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 O# ~1 I/ X/ P  c<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ v5 q: a% J! M: C. x& G7 K<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( L0 B1 {1 t6 v% R3 J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# t" X, g) d, g  H0 l<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- w* ?/ ^# p" A: V" ~: Y/ [6 i<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ N0 B2 a" _$ c* j<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 ~, I/ b0 _  R1 Q: f<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ R6 [) {. o' ]+ r% t* Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ G2 h* t% O: w5 u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 G' V( x, `# }( p4 m& F( m<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 D# C* X9 e, w, e7 n<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 [3 e+ _6 r2 l5 \$ M<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 i0 g/ |! Q: f* ], b$ e<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ n* R! F# z  D: L/ q<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: L* b* I5 r; _, m) _<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* y8 C0 d1 U: g+ b  ?3 S* [/ g<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 ~% j. {& n' J4 m1 Q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ q/ n0 u0 l: w8 J<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! e: n! @1 O# b+ B* D<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

: U+ R. \7 p8 h我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# `/ E0 N( x8 r1 Q6 v7 {<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>