【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ t" s5 n) z1 \" P. a) j; E8 aMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! i) b0 ~  J! G: f$ QThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 w  S2 j; q4 OWith the moon kissing it every night
  m5 }  C* q' {$ M# m: N6 kSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ k3 X( i* b4 QYou needn’t fear anything
5 t# ^5 S5 T& R) y; C8 W# ?. `My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  B. }& w( L* |Every other word you utter is love
) v) X! e& b+ `* |) D' AI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# w" g* P- Z; ]Nothing can compare to my love
( w, k% P0 }$ F1 S0 Z# X8 xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' @" o) _+ ^: @5 tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* Q3 Z$ f% \8 _$ r1 N4 f2 Q# GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% J/ ^! q6 i+ \' k6 }. |With such a tongue as yours,
1 w9 G% @4 \/ MYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ t4 E* E5 ~; n7 Y0 ~% X2 X. W. @8 oRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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- y. H3 B# G& |' ^! B2 a% h<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 q" f6 b. u3 |. X5 x% W- v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! _0 B. u; |7 K- G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ m# Q- e0 p- i( t/ C$ m3 E5 x0 B<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: |5 r, `6 ^9 w8 f7 S$ e  K& b' R/ z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 ]2 h) z0 y: J; j, y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 X* _0 g6 r' P7 D<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 G, g) [# f) n! ~8 c6 f. o! _8 x9 ^<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: |) H' f/ w, a1 P8 `$ Y6 Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 ^' x: F6 F5 P$ u# r<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 C; Z- x$ E3 V5 z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; r% r5 M* B: V5 z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. R- ]  n$ l! t- D+ c$ i<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, k' [6 [8 z  @/ {, q% u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 r) m0 Q4 N( h9 S( _$ I<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' T( |! r3 H0 Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ M6 ~1 s) H$ u- p0 r8 h6 w2 }<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% N1 G. Y( y; H, |4 v) j<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 `+ _) x0 W" V( |/ t0 V<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 u4 D7 @/ |( v5 Y: C: F<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& v8 ]1 i- e0 h0 M& C9 ?* Z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( W7 n/ `6 D, R( f, b4 O( K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& U. L' ]- F: t3 o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ }3 R- v( p2 Q/ E" M6 v" u3 z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 G5 ^& D* W% c<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. v4 ~9 W: a: ?* t6 _& K& k<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 t- w' [; |  f( q" v: ?' f9 ~9 D2 }1 ^<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) c. R% d* `) i4 ]) ]6 u# e* S6 u<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* f6 k4 M0 s) m) {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! j: X8 j4 {/ G% ~# Z7 u# t+ d8 R1 D<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( ?1 S1 I/ n- b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; Y( l8 i: i6 }8 m<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( c- r7 O$ _* S7 ~2 h6 h: K<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>