【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 g/ ?7 e1 v; `  V, w歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, e) E, u2 b& |Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 q6 ?1 ^( ~1 S0 Q5 R  f/ p- R4 R  {When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, X0 `  j8 F0 MThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 Q0 H. t3 U; ?6 r0 a8 J% ^The sky is happy down to its soul
4 C. J" p! c* F6 d1 b% QWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& K( r7 R" p5 a* `5 _' t0 Y: N  HIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 `" Q. |& l8 t4 C- H1 S. jMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 |4 M- Z6 _4 C6 ?' RI love you I love you with all my heart
1 K0 j8 o. H7 i# u, C' g/ T$ |Nothing can compare to my love
4 }3 D# R9 e% i& P8 S" \Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" O& r, t8 y2 I1 E. eThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- g3 I/ U0 ~( L0 T4 T7 z9 B) JI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: Z4 \: M9 t1 _: q  }I regret not dying
! B2 Q1 z  B1 [- g9 }3 YI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ ]/ ~" Q( X5 R7 j. O$ W' uIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* I* i: F8 F9 d/ |) CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 e$ B. q' |- ^, z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( [6 B0 I3 g8 s<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ j; m' B( _5 V6 t/ J) c# x6 u4 k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) L- l; M8 w+ ?7 s3 D  C- B<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 ]7 x- N$ r/ M( [4 L<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ U" j0 a6 Y2 t: }: o* T) f<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ e1 ^2 C8 w" a2 F<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ ?7 ?# O% n) b7 u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! h7 ~( u# S: w4 t. R( v6 X<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ R+ P! v% X' u- g<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# B3 i5 n/ x, _1 A. E( P/ j<P>你无需担心</P>
7 q- f5 i' M  \. t<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 f' t+ e4 }( W( |  t9 }8 L& C/ H<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ {% N2 {1 }5 a& j<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) k. n; X( d8 T  P- h<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 g* k% w4 W! p3 z& n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 b  [/ `' h+ ^4 e( J1 P<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  I+ N5 _- y- y, J<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- R2 E1 K! ^8 b% N- n* p! {2 N0 N( Z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  j" [1 R! p  ?9 l8 Z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# o5 N6 W. s3 T- i<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' D+ U: \% U+ m6 i1 e& w<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. \) v* W5 F" L2 M) P! r3 ]<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& ^+ I4 a" V$ Q, p<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 m( j! r' Q9 q, R4 ^5 r& e<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ d/ V% Y+ v! x& ]5 Q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- X  K/ e. Y; Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% ~' m- h1 \" D& v0 Y<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 k9 [( J$ E$ Q) T$ [2 r4 j<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 E  C! r; F7 i# }& A) k<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 d1 O2 s; U! _6 J3 L; i<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 C. g5 p+ h/ B. Y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 p9 s+ n- n9 R9 T4 S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" I: z9 w8 ^. c( P7 q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, R, q; o/ ]/ v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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1 g" ]+ p1 z4 K  x" I我请你剖开它

2 E6 d! V8 u2 O7 I 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# O+ O$ D( B* ^7 `* A<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>