【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  e6 L! h2 K1 T4 hThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& o5 N) l4 g1 Y/ x0 `2 |The sky is happy down to its soul
% F- c. b$ n0 t+ H' v$ s4 cWith the moon kissing it every night
" c  r1 P( ^3 T# |% }- M( ~Seeing the sky content with its love
1 h4 d1 P) e( ~9 b5 }+ {It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: z9 h. z  @2 X( e9 T; bYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 L5 z9 t# z* j8 [0 oEvery other word you utter is love
1 P& S) p8 [3 a. BI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( a2 A0 `' K+ }0 }1 p& i' C# BNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) A% s3 [5 g3 K5 j( D, |# FI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' Q, q! X% ^: P. u8 ]$ WI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! P* X/ N$ j" c9 c6 R3 e$ {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 w7 x/ @" g! x% @: Q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( j; c' O# F! h* S) H<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% t* A+ `' `; Q  Z  a* r<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" U3 M3 P. Y6 T/ ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' H: [" G$ U; O  Z, B7 S. j<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" `; {# Z9 x4 Z$ ?4 {' I3 L<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  a! S+ _- g7 d. V<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ T/ c" P8 s) z. m) @! u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 I" p; ?, i" C, D* R7 Q0 W4 E<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% s1 J8 j2 O! c7 X, ~<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ f. A9 Y* \4 f2 h0 n7 ]<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; H! _7 ^9 @9 e* Q" m( f- j<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# T, R/ b3 |5 V4 R: T: Y) ?: S8 i<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! e' Q+ I: D) A! g<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 j8 c+ t& ]% y& U4 P<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, c: k0 C4 c- O6 S  u* z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, v/ h  r3 Q* E<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( z2 E. s' g4 ^9 ~! _% N" c" }4 u) J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- \) c: [/ Y& X) `5 B<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% P. ^/ P" E4 [& D3 k<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 U! M0 @5 K3 b' n/ }<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 V* s3 q# }& C, i! l9 l, K: F<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 F- S5 y  l& }! p6 _4 o<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) L6 ]! J/ V' ?7 s) \6 f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ W+ y8 }6 |- D4 }4 t. I<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 c" a2 H, \2 @0 k* K1 D) d2 H5 y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 m+ f; k: J  R0 w6 N  I$ a, L<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# H8 X4 ^! Q: A& Q( y  ~<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 m$ `9 u' C+ T1 L% |: Q4 G' d<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) Z1 B, F/ I4 W  K5 U2 L9 q( V<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* |% Y6 @% V! h6 U3 D<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* n9 y3 C/ q& D& [" L' e<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' O6 m4 }+ L7 p( T+ X; \0 D! W3 D<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

+ C1 t( y+ R' B- a' b我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>