【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
0 R3 L& d6 f# D" GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- O) z$ c3 h# G3 o& m: eWith the moon kissing it every night
/ m: H& V& `" E6 ASeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  O7 v; ?7 f) W! _4 S6 C. t* fYou needn’t fear anything
( m0 ~3 P4 T6 d8 D- ~9 N- gMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" U. d8 L+ S( P/ G! ?1 Q  Q. x$ u& jEvery other word you utter is love
/ K2 p3 D8 y2 D, H8 o! DI really want to know just how much you love me
- H  Q3 T6 v% N5 [( VI love you I love you with all my heart
. m, r( O% n, uNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
; N, I. k1 F: E9 g+ j2 g: V3 oI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; r: p& a4 Q. v: S& L: KI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 |$ ?5 x9 [4 G: qRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 R+ N3 z2 n& ]! h<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 l5 Z% x! |! e  B9 k* W<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! l6 `7 y1 e. b, t2 o; S% B+ ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: T2 I2 x# [' J, o, f6 d8 l<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, n/ y$ O0 L1 t, Y, B- f) [6 ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 M" g1 I( D% @' S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, v5 W9 ?1 S0 |. S& {0 G<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 R! f7 p& u6 z7 `9 D; r$ q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; n' T$ R$ m! d<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 k8 A. W9 U. [, ?# o6 H" l<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- {  v/ `: j$ s. c<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 b% u+ L8 q6 I5 j& ^, }2 j<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) a6 }, @8 Y+ N3 y+ Z3 U8 x& L<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 |' h, @2 \; }<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# e0 ^3 V. ^* ]0 c8 A/ f! {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; \. S3 k6 O' K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: X5 ~! }2 J9 V3 }" F# q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  W" y( v& E6 y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- o% Z  i$ d" ^* J& j: G/ y/ N- U" |9 T<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ Y' c6 u- j' M& l. A* H2 e) ^0 h4 G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 k6 r3 N8 W$ Q/ G( \3 g" o<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ X" |9 ~& ~9 `2 B" }8 j<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ V# V2 ], n% N; D1 j/ Q3 F& }<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 ?( {% i3 j7 a( Q; q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 u8 A) \9 L& B$ M<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# r3 B7 J, C( p( ]0 b$ r2 e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ U6 H$ ~* P# m9 e<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, Y) D, e9 z, \2 @<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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& e. `5 Z. `- M6 B, U我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' A. L9 A. f0 i4 I9 U, G; |<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>