【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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4 q0 O: o; c$ Z6 e歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ n4 W5 W9 F& p5 H; S4 E7 qMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; T) J8 m+ X9 }! |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" g; V( H# O4 \( R& }/ wThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. b- [- ~& q$ o1 c6 W, N1 z  ?) d  RSeeing the sky content with its love
; \' ]. w$ c) C) {+ n; MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ u2 w& p" C4 E4 hYou needn’t fear anything
5 T8 n% I$ {! L4 Q& MMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) C) ]1 L1 W  E2 r: o$ wEvery other word you utter is love
1 @1 ~* D: a: s& u6 NI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 N0 d  B5 }/ [# lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& B6 u. D8 @  i1 v/ }, OI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ e; f( x( Y$ @; Y1 D; n+ u  ?" wI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
: e- Q+ b" i; g1 \6 ^1 J& NYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: t, r& G, t8 z2 b. T( I5 P<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 b/ b1 b; E$ D: ^: r<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ v% I, j% M) u<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: f# v" h+ `5 R<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- r) h/ ]' B1 E4 p! b' Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ ]0 U0 q1 z% v1 f7 Y8 Z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% t4 ^/ f& W! R  U<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 G* r) X3 {2 R! {<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ }/ `5 F& ]* F$ P1 k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ x; t, e+ _' P* b- w<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 |8 J8 Y$ ~: j" _- C! n<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# e$ \. K( @! ^; I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 ]* T) l6 f  }* z- r. K; b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. E% _0 |& T5 J" O7 ^<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ T2 [. _+ W* b! s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# Z2 ?: F  G' z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& X6 @9 [4 f  F$ i<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 v& q3 j. H- y( ]8 I<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! {: u, ]- K5 m+ T<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- i6 O8 r; ~- m2 n* q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) R) ^$ X5 \4 \2 A7 e( h& u# {<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  S7 Z1 r0 G$ h- R3 e% h# W<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 x  U1 P1 Z' _- L/ X1 m2 G" U<P>I regret not dying</P>
  |' e# r. O. |# h<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' T1 ^  e7 l% @& e<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! J3 P& B- _- I3 A- u<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ R/ i7 q9 o+ d2 c" h! N/ M<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! A4 u1 H) W, ~7 [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' r* c! c- Q. ~+ _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 v8 ^) u9 |% R6 q4 k8 P<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

! A0 R+ Y( V( c2 E$ Z7 |* X3 K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>