【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 u9 o2 V. G8 m* v  LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: O, S( Y  l2 e5 |8 V3 a0 Y$ SThe sky is happy down to its soul
; q) Z$ R! g4 Z" KWith the moon kissing it every night
4 \5 F6 I: o0 HSeeing the sky content with its love
' C/ u  t$ U& S3 g' e0 ]1 ]It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; P/ H, g8 H$ T; k. N/ ~# ?I really want to know just how much you love me
4 e5 f6 k* A" t- N1 G/ kI love you I love you with all my heart
  \1 F- K6 B* \Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% ^( j5 B( b. n; N/ uI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  G( }' N5 I5 ]) I; S  ^7 r/ z- VI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, _/ O$ p  B, f* hI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# c( [  N% [6 ~9 Q; Q" WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

+ w: z6 ~" I  \4 H  J' U<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( k7 X. J+ G* k- C6 j<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: [! G! }) i# k0 s<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 x& m4 Y+ R7 G1 j& G1 C<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% M4 `6 b- P! k- J, e- z! E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) y& h8 g- ?2 K4 g( B<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) i9 ^! b0 h( `8 a4 {% N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 Z- Z: o5 K# K3 h. b<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 T4 n- o5 }1 u+ e0 G! }1 ^5 s7 \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; V& ?5 s+ ~; `- Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: F( Z3 W1 l) G# x. r<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) K# `$ {5 e1 Z0 ]8 R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 x, U' |- T) T1 n; \6 w/ T8 W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 K6 f5 h- H$ M7 h6 z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ p* g6 i7 Q. a. ~$ ]<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  a: W0 w0 L' U( j" b<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 `+ p* \: K; F+ l' S  S* M, h: C! `<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 {% y/ y! X3 t2 g! y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 p8 w$ `! F9 w/ a4 I' |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* a$ L& G( t3 y0 T. s" e5 d5 N' W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 t! j6 X2 y% G$ q5 H) n  f: o<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 f0 i+ U9 A/ h+ R  ?<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# H9 o- _  s- [<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! r6 V6 _; |* n% g. U  r<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# c* d7 Z/ M+ b( h* j+ J<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ O9 W& m: |3 C% Z/ t<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( X4 F7 Z& r9 a% W" D- D# f<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>