【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ m! n  W( z. V) ~8 a% gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ Z5 D/ C9 q4 g. |With the moon kissing it every night
& ?" T. ]3 n: [" C# r: t5 bSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: q+ c/ L2 V, x2 _8 FYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# _! W$ t* ~% j" {# ]Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ V7 ~  |5 g+ QThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% @4 f' D5 h% w2 \I want so much to see inside your heart
+ y' H# `! @6 S6 ~7 o4 Q: _5 E" JI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ Z, C% t/ r$ Y% E# a& o, T6 |I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% M# \2 p: ~; p6 |Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* u+ r% i/ j( D. _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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3 C" }  a) H" f& P! Z2 o' q/ o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- R; Z* u+ V& Y; a2 g: F<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 o3 A6 h1 b0 X3 W8 y3 s<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 n2 u' ~! r6 n* n: o<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' M1 _7 x; a6 K/ G3 j0 w7 N<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( L% |) r" c" t! W. b" ?5 k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% R/ D6 h% ]2 _* e  v<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 n+ b' `. c; T2 r9 q  R4 q<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" v; q0 O; w; a+ ~<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 H! j; G( H" T$ a( I: x6 T, x<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 I' Y- i' u( P7 [! v; K<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ p' x; Q5 d- I: c& c<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& l. i: k# r5 g<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" A- ?  _* P: E- D<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% W% W" y6 H. v/ M9 s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 k$ e5 C) F8 ^+ p5 L: n<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, ~! w* ]4 D8 B4 M+ `1 y& `<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 U! n2 B( R& K: G4 n7 W' s! a% i<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 Q, v8 j) S9 I2 A* l5 B0 t<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 |' F. t2 `" ~$ ~1 G<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& I8 ~  `9 X0 o  i0 b<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ O; B4 }1 s! V( }. {<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! a$ M0 h: x" {! }9 C( G<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 |2 f4 l; [, h, {' R$ l<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& ]' l7 S0 Y5 X- S7 J  n9 e<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( V, F* t1 Z" Y- F<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>