【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 l- j6 i& ?5 L! b! K- UThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 \0 e4 f' c* N( W, h: b1 tThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 s& w- E) S( y5 c: m% n3 e# kYou needn’t fear anything
5 M: Y6 K- @  `1 o3 W# ?0 f* fMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% [- H1 B* T* J9 X$ l9 }Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& k0 U; Y1 ~3 W* z/ G( uNothing can compare to my love
3 T1 ?) B+ ]2 rCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ p( I/ }6 W( E& F+ Y1 s* [& i! ?I want so much to see inside your heart
* M% \, z9 H4 e% wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 M+ o" M5 f) ^5 z/ l. RI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# x: \9 T, D0 FI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ M- j4 a! Q8 e8 X# a. d  F- D* h$ K<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  \+ V. Q) A, B! b0 q) b6 ^% V$ A5 n<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- {1 M" P6 q0 p7 I* Z- F, ~<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 E  d; [' [2 Y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  C7 \) E" o1 t& f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 x: h" s) a& R( q0 W4 p  p3 H<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 y+ ^+ ?- G8 n- ^! n4 z. r<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ j: Y/ Z! |; P8 H<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( l7 Y5 k: K/ q+ K<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 O+ t, K& n$ q% `' c& F  G. G<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 M# P- z7 Y* N% m# Z# ]" |<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 ^2 ?' _/ r; W<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 ]# W2 F4 }2 H0 h4 L  R) C: z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' O0 l! `/ B' w0 `<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ o' {: b3 u5 L' p<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% ^! P  `& I% D7 }! E' @! e7 Z<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; f% M; R, W* S. O<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" a/ p$ i- k- {: @! L/ |% f% x<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' Q$ L0 k- I' n4 c. s# U<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 ]8 I& X1 g. v8 q2 Q# i<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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