【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# M. X5 Z2 m& W8 `3 D/ n歌词我附在后面。
+ b# Z; z/ c9 b5 E& g8 [$ V- tThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
8 E& p1 O- I! n( U8 [When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& D- H; H$ f; Q" H2 J  U+ PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
& h$ X- ~" M$ o; x* z1 J: |/ nSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) G7 z/ J( x1 G! Z$ ^Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 h% ^# M9 h8 ~2 n! F1 CI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 h: U. o; E- ]7 ]' Z3 mThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ j4 y( U- |/ iI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( X' U) U' ^& F, Z, \. II’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" r  }# j2 {7 e  KI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; F% `7 V, }$ N" P( q: hIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, ^: D7 O3 ?- \; B) ~& ]Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ l  y/ k) W$ j3 y3 m1 l" Y9 O<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! X) I; e9 L: F! `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& m% R6 j1 Y% @7 c# R8 x. ?<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 q& ]7 c$ K3 R/ [4 H9 p: h, ^<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, i: V% G/ S. U- H<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. e+ C$ h% I! g7 M1 H7 i8 _% ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# F0 X0 L& x4 a. Z5 [' p<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ v* v. G0 G) k% }# J+ D3 }% b<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; N5 a$ T- g- y4 H<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 @$ f- Y0 d' N5 L<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 V' G) ?/ a7 s<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 l# ~& P5 o2 c' t( ~0 {<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 N4 Z* W( L; d& W* N2 n4 T7 O<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 w7 Y+ h* v& a% `<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) @: g- J4 e& t% A( K, d4 ?# a<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 J* K0 e# ?' E( K$ Z3 A1 M+ R<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 l. K' ^/ H* H# A: G' ]<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 {( E* W- ~: h; Q9 U, b<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 z% ?( B/ B7 j<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- [! r+ y2 L2 K0 `  h1 o3 d<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ |% h* D  ?* _+ K* _  U2 \* P<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 u$ R  I4 T* U1 W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ i! `  V! f8 q+ I7 m$ t% }* G  m  D) E. V<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 A2 B- \9 `6 P* N5 d5 T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 `3 z+ m4 e3 [" i' U3 K+ D<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ W9 o+ V. h9 q" y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. n6 @, c, m4 t$ ^" j  W<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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2 r  U8 W0 |% @; \/ m' r我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& |1 ]/ R$ {0 x: E<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>