【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' `) e: l. T0 {0 `) wWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, {! B1 i7 ]  j. ^! H" M" d8 xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! C$ i2 t! }6 C1 H0 i5 a) xThe sky is happy down to its soul
5 p6 g9 s! Y  ^With the moon kissing it every night
5 M; a. k  I, X' a& o: oSeeing the sky content with its love
, A# p7 ]7 h- M1 pIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# Q7 r$ X1 Y7 V6 d/ N( C0 \My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 J1 w( n* m& Z- j8 Y/ OEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
% v' }, g  s* {" S* l3 PNothing can compare to my love
$ g: P. U8 }" W; Z0 d6 j6 o/ bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: ]  z. ~  B7 ?4 D) D' b% `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 r7 p! \: ?. e7 Z# {* Q: XI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 A0 d& t  o" n" [( BI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
4 ]+ F' x' |- ]: j- j' G3 x& c7 WI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( x: j' `9 `- eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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( B0 s5 T, j+ @: u* I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 u3 {/ \2 m; F0 h<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, U& V: g- [: {8 [% P<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! _& o, {' n5 y  h8 Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. {$ o5 M1 k3 ]- T) O% d<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' y2 W3 ^$ \) M: d4 ~6 ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 h. b7 d, P# H) w+ w& k4 d/ j( U" \<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 J8 @2 g7 ^5 U0 r, Y0 n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; V- e* L; c* ?3 O1 r% l<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& l7 ]; ~2 M. j% X+ ]& X% F<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' O+ E- `7 q# d2 `/ q2 g. ?' p1 i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ T- I: T) a6 A. \! H* o: a: S$ O<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 R% _# I% T. `5 m<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  [& S# Y) F) A; u3 q6 T) S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& P* U* v' k5 E, Y9 [  ^<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 ]8 G/ b- Z" v3 I6 n; s<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" Z, ~$ Q% T7 B  a- R( {. C<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' \; f2 q: G8 ~4 U; a5 ^1 X; x: V' ]4 w<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  b* ?) u' l0 p1 d% P<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, H7 K0 Z5 L1 [<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 Q) Y; ~! i! G<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 K( i" d* P" {* k) ?. \<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 Y4 n+ M& [! Y6 l/ Y5 k! A<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  E  S" C% s  v3 M: R  q/ ^- Z4 E<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

% R, J* N: i+ }+ m' V我请你剖开它
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3 E0 ^1 ?, s! \/ g2 b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* ?! D7 S) C& l* w6 o<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>