【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 y  g: c3 f! C( G0 A. z/ o/ z7 ~歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" ^+ [, n4 M% N; [3 XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 J) w9 z" ?& L0 D2 E9 K5 G. TIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* y) i5 N  }8 o0 ~You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
6 A6 g0 o1 Z) U$ [- C5 YI really want to know just how much you love me
1 g- }- L- T7 B5 dI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 z( O' d+ w3 o4 ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
0 P0 y" D2 A7 E  N7 ]: `. }8 ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 d' B( \/ e* o! M7 T! OI regret not dying
4 p1 V) ^( V1 S& xI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 }3 p1 _; m8 w8 _Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ K: b$ p' n2 Q* w% E3 r6 h7 X1 Y$ t- qRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" \9 J3 i" b& F# ?- s<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 y9 u7 {9 F3 ?4 g8 i<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; F4 N* X/ L. i6 a- H; Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 ]' ?, I4 [  S0 l0 k2 b<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 o# Z; [+ a/ E- |5 D$ W. s+ x8 O2 }<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 j" y: N* W' d; r3 O1 F<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" L- X3 _0 q3 A9 F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
5 j/ f2 S* u3 ^<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. E& S) N) O* p( w, g+ V<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 g5 L: r# y# K6 f<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" }% W; D1 e7 S9 x# w<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 T6 G; T8 o3 Y7 A+ Z- w<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* f3 _! B/ _! ~( b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  \% D1 q+ J, U4 K: F+ P4 ^7 k<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* ]8 J0 p$ k( Z2 W9 F# d<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ s5 A5 w1 k8 L# r2 O6 S7 s<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 X9 R0 l, S" A) |+ r2 A<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 w% D5 M3 S: \. U  ~* `<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. {, @- s" @: n# S" @. |) e. Z* Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 f$ T/ a* w; u" A9 B: }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 b# t* ^# M9 E- @& t( @1 u<P>I regret not dying</P>
, C- T+ P; Q, A+ ^% H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 T% t8 ^7 w7 `- S- n; N! I4 r6 s<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# A$ o: B) b( P- e9 R# Z4 S<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 `# Z8 V- j, r" l2 {/ t<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ B! g" f* e$ e: m0 R; j( C/ N1 W, {<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 {! {  Z  K+ R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, P# M0 h- l& m$ K# C7 V1 Y' w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* i0 Z3 R( G' s) N<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 ~5 T6 v. ^3 ?) c2 S* v$ Y, y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# S2 g/ \# G: {; p! E<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>