【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
6 J$ i# Q/ \) _2 ^- K* qThe moonlight is shining brightly,
" V2 k$ M! x) a5 B& _Making the sky glitter like gold,
! n9 z: h$ n9 t( hWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, X4 D, o) U& ], U) d- h: AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  E1 K5 z: \. t. x  jThe sky is happy down to its soul
: e- S5 R( m; J$ ~4 O& ~# }, NWith the moon kissing it every night
' v: J  R( O" z9 I. KSeeing the sky content with its love
$ }7 k! ?  ]& e% B% b+ {  mIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 z- y: c; X3 k: B, @5 PYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 W  I6 u$ r- B4 m( KI love you I love you with all my heart
. D( ]* M' f- v, B1 _( aNothing can compare to my love
0 O* V& t0 a% f- y- V: S0 CCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 u3 _8 J- i8 l' b- pI want so much to see inside your heart
3 I% c- K# q/ v0 G9 m; fI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) ^$ _) O! X6 X, Q* zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 J, ~, k1 k: Y- _I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 i/ ]# `" O! z; L6 [With such a tongue as yours,
$ Q# |  f: Y3 rYour speech can’t even keep up with it
9 M6 V% _% Z# u. J( JIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; J+ g! L: E) Q+ S8 f0 i1 |<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( W- y% W6 u2 C  x<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! F" O; ^1 V; C" f- y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% l: R- a# c  {% l( x4 W<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 l# j/ }1 M  G! S) P% x5 Y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ T7 _2 t8 v% r# k<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, O" z% X0 x  P& Y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% c; ]# _+ f/ }, K  \4 C<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 @/ z: J+ v; T- i  r( \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( _, u0 T6 h/ u. V( O9 P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' c8 ?5 o3 N0 B; T1 E" I; `5 W<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! ^# b3 I# Y( a8 U, U<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) L+ [; i% J5 t4 S; X& P<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 {8 G" T; K+ t2 X<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 d  P4 C2 l! p) H2 y4 @<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: O) k$ i) `+ O) u0 Z6 c<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! Y$ K# k7 h4 Z/ R" B<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 J& _8 W  t  C; n8 ~: V' ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 I6 V, t6 p& K7 C3 d<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* N  c2 }7 y8 q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; d' k: M2 f- W* o! E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- h: O6 q& n% T: I<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 l. ^& y. t* x<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 j5 X% x6 {% Y, R# q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" o* z. M2 {. h4 |9 R  I8 Y: P<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

/ u+ m' u& G% n, `! Y& x# t* \我请你剖开它
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; B. f4 ?/ C0 V' F/ o% g4 a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 ~, f! k, a; s: w+ j* A, K3 p<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>