【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
, u% ]; J9 t" QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' y: |$ P% q* `8 |. D8 JWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
. p. h0 z9 n# X3 _I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' H# h( @9 }! _% \& D5 I4 w6 ?I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ }; J+ V5 v% S$ aI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ r; C/ ^! C% rYour speech can’t even keep up with it
3 y. R; c' A% G% B# uIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 r7 W8 w9 b! G4 Y5 E/ ZRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" v' J9 F) K* ~/ u; k<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* f$ L" y$ T6 X2 i! V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 Z' O$ L7 C7 b- G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: }1 v" H2 w; c* A8 r<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ g1 F$ N0 c( M8 }& s<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 L' c, ?' S# e; F# r& F; }<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ L) H* Q7 v7 K( @5 @) l<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# d. Y2 F6 ~5 e7 q' {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, F7 A; g8 S+ J3 D$ X, E<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; P; V$ K4 W7 b. K. g5 ~<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& H* T  h$ f+ \$ W/ ~4 |<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 l( o' E# N* \7 @  t$ _# p<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- d* C* \6 b  Q& |3 g0 {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* ^" U4 m3 S0 c- U4 P! j, B<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 |2 W- b/ ~: ~  g6 ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 t/ b& Z9 W, w$ `# p0 I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' M9 X* O2 J. O, M, P2 L! I9 M4 `<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 [  x: _' K5 Y, s+ A; M; I<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" j+ ?8 ?0 ?( u" {' N4 m$ Q6 i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. `% q) M$ @- b( u  K<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ \# l# ^) f: k0 I' O' S3 I- G<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 I6 P! H* N. H, n4 e( e. r<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# y/ A/ k5 ?& i9 K4 |: _% ^6 s<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 ]; f/ V( e7 X  O7 b  t: Y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ ]& y2 t' Q6 d; {  r<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ J; ^  _2 \) G. J% {$ C3 O; ]0 j<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ o+ k( \- Q  ?& v6 O# U<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# t4 B0 G% e) g+ H( F0 ]<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! x& z7 a! h  V0 b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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. w# z( S- C5 q5 F2 {9 i  M  a) R) j我请你剖开它
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$ X7 l( |, k6 g0 ?2 g; \  t1 ^5 U 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>