【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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3 Q% J3 F( |9 E% A& `歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 H8 s" Y; Y: W: |8 ]Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 z8 q+ B4 b, [8 qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ t) D5 Y, g! t5 J  Z. iWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) C. H  m. }+ G# z' j' Y# n1 [You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. S4 X" y/ K' i# aEvery other word you utter is love
: [$ F. K% n" k- }/ _I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 d+ M* x: q# z& m  X+ WNothing can compare to my love
, M+ l% B2 E% |! JCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 F( A0 Q8 B+ d% @7 y$ ]The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' ^! Z, p; K: ~" U" y2 bI want so much to see inside your heart
6 D! N5 \1 R7 ~* MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 Y: N. h* I3 Y& z: rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ h; {/ p3 s9 L5 zWith such a tongue as yours,
& D7 {0 `- j( Y0 [; X& g- ^Your speech can’t even keep up with it
8 I+ ?; R0 W% g0 m- LIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

' g9 {) t+ y! I' b$ o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ r  q4 N$ O) s5 }7 p% G& o<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 t# N+ U4 U- L  x& h% g/ O<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  l+ H" P' R1 @" l<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 m5 e+ n. X' B<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- j8 V" }$ I; p( ~. a<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 ~) x! u/ X! Q" a. B5 a<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- w4 Y" |9 y1 I, a% ]<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! i: B4 j$ Z/ E<P>你无需担心</P>
) j, {& P6 L, e$ E3 W* u3 e<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( s  \" E* S" _8 g5 W* Z, j- V$ F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ v6 t  {+ k1 w<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) _" s8 L4 h; O# B3 s& G! j  J. k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 ?0 ]4 \7 S- V* I& {! w9 v3 B+ o! d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) o# a( F  O& _9 `2 e! G<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 k3 }4 ?2 v1 H& u' i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! ~1 v6 g, H1 m* ]9 U/ r# q4 T<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 d8 t% l1 [$ ]% R* n  p5 }<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  l0 I9 j, T+ R) R<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* N" L4 v( d8 r* r0 Y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 n" J0 q' a! M3 ]7 X  c<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 g+ F' O  s6 Y+ |  P6 g<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ i/ x  _, F2 Z- i$ X3 O<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 y+ F! [) A2 a0 X: q4 e1 N4 H<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 k" ^  A* }: r: M6 _+ `<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 N) u! a# V* J9 x9 \9 ~<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; C7 L% \# u) A! {4 W6 b" X7 J" _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 E8 C, c- p- l3 \8 @: h<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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4 B, f2 B: [7 `$ b2 J& }, K% l1 A8 N- e( p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ e$ J/ O8 f  E! u<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>