【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 Z! o3 g' B" Y1 v' l& I+ G& z! ^2 {Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 l4 A# ?+ d1 }+ zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: L& I9 v4 [6 h5 E, gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 m: o9 P0 p2 x; }2 q+ |Seeing the sky content with its love
, ~  c8 O1 @" `It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 g" F7 ]* i. J, O* UYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 Q7 J, [! Y7 Y8 W" ^Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 k. }- M$ b: f. d  q: mThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 ]) g6 X% _7 v8 eI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
3 v4 z* U, I. M) W0 A0 ?I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; {4 H) x% H$ d6 n! L( q8 s$ F<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 l) V' b/ b, G/ z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. \; E0 |# K4 r4 d3 ]<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* F$ R% O: ?. G( Z$ p+ @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ W0 T) t7 s+ N0 |<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 ?3 a' h* Z; H<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 g( D4 W( j) ^4 w. [2 ?- ~<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! t/ ^0 U) Q) t( E<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) _  o6 d9 H* X<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- f6 R0 d4 `2 L% A2 Q<P>你无需担心</P>
: O' @5 j4 F0 B6 f! y4 y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' l5 M; y) U$ X" w7 P, O+ `<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- @4 f$ d  t! H; J) H+ f9 i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) d, ?/ d7 S* m8 \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; c  ]! x0 I) c<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: j7 V' W  C, s7 j: `, a6 g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) x& }1 j# l9 N6 ]<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 Q9 q6 O- K4 n# T/ |7 x<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 o5 u* A( Z! }1 s- z8 R. ^<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 P  ]  ?3 A9 G0 C4 t<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ ~4 x) A$ r% [<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ K/ C! M$ B1 t. c9 q6 v- }, L+ v<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: y. C) I* k9 X3 ]<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 ?; h7 z) k/ \, W* o<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ S$ J$ ]$ t$ h# e<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ i% k" z) r# |, ^0 n6 i<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 J" `' x/ ]' _& R<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* j# q+ K7 F6 Q" _) o) |: k<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! e. K: S1 V! s# S! J6 L$ k<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ U! n) ~/ Q- u0 s% W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 k+ ^* j1 k# R0 d/ N/ m<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>