【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 u/ ]- \+ m. x1 O# g) ^1 K歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 K* C- _/ p8 Z9 oThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 b" p6 J; i3 e& f% U3 zWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( \% S+ }- P# i# Q5 A* L# H: qIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% C* b3 C1 I& H! a! eYou needn’t fear anything
) x& A$ O6 N* m9 F! X) c' h2 rMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. \* w! r/ |' H( c% j) p8 X' W' OI really want to know just how much you love me
1 N5 s# \  P9 M1 mI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 ^5 T- V# {( X9 A: Z8 b. JI want so much to see inside your heart
: e( G, a; ^3 ?. [" n! h& HI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: g# k$ m+ \" g1 y& k7 [I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( ^' \! x$ N+ w/ x" OWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ q4 t, ~4 {' }) IRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  V; d+ ~5 G: b: |+ o$ l! @<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 B- d0 V" R: W<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* f3 y& W! D5 r: ?. |- Q* O% R<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" r6 \: q3 _% Q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" s9 p8 Y9 l' n8 r, M<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, z; D2 E' K5 M7 p* q. s1 i! G<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. `: T: O; ]4 p3 A- j) ?<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 `5 a" ]& b: f; i<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ ~" _+ c7 v3 J5 T6 N0 l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 X) ^4 K3 x) M1 M1 ~" {% S<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 }, i( r) N& V9 t+ o, Z) d$ ?<P>你无需担心</P>
: D. g4 ^0 g- x. o! p3 e<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 n% E+ }( u  P: T8 Y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 o: v" p) @" X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 b' }$ R3 l! b9 x) S<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; t  U6 O' U1 n' v<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( ~6 `' D8 @$ ]0 ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ f" q3 Y( X7 X5 T" }* |5 ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- R% b3 w* r8 o, M  s, b. Q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 ]8 V% q0 W: y8 t* R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" Q9 q+ v3 _& F# P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 Z5 B6 J+ O$ Z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 r  W) B6 G- r<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% _7 c7 @, g  r' f% X8 P<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 ?+ }/ X* P9 D, d9 ]<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 k; U6 l  a( R+ q* Z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" J3 v; ]1 }5 J/ M<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ q7 n: e0 e8 Q8 g0 [<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& a- M7 i6 {0 P4 P1 S9 C3 d<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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- X0 d0 ]; U5 J我请你剖开它
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" b0 `1 ]9 ]1 y2 s/ e 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>