【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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& o& Q: g, F" ~歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
. l) S$ K* r/ I3 ^% LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 A* F! B6 s2 @- ~8 t. S, d7 [( A2 lThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" X5 q9 @1 T9 K  e" kSeeing the sky content with its love
9 v% w( s% z! l% }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
9 G' r6 H' s$ h: K1 z3 YMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
& z- T1 O7 v; [- ^) QI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% C) J, C5 J- {+ @( T: \7 rCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& W/ d* ~" _% Z& Z. RThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* e, C, l/ @$ w  r/ r4 U/ K) r/ L- UI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: ~: n4 t+ I; ^) F/ _0 {* `Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
& \# n$ n* S/ ~2 mI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 e! {+ x' s, Y( E& x7 N( a: y9 }5 KWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% {, {5 Y* H" n9 x! _<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 P/ c$ N' e  c<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: x! Z$ j( ^" j$ a& {<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! Q, g! \6 a( p1 O2 p% \/ N<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 V* D0 {+ Z( n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; k! B( K: _; `3 O7 o7 U, r<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 w" y6 o# Y! C% o; Q/ `; Z: ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  z$ e& G- Q9 v7 n6 e6 |% p7 \<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; }9 Q6 D7 w, D) G% k, d<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ J( r, k) c0 Z. I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: {/ R1 u6 \" q2 N4 Y. B3 S<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 e+ _% L. b* q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ T! p6 D3 B/ X9 G<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  c8 M1 o2 C9 H: g% V  |( p, e' ?# n<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' ]) I! S; }1 o<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 |, _  O: v2 U9 X# Y9 i8 O<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 J' m3 Y3 h* s' l<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# Q. h% ]- @, }( [<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 Z) p: m9 S* D' C4 ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 b8 U7 D' y& r# d+ W# ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" a# Y. k' ~- n: v3 R, R. N<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# z9 o8 s- I5 J# B4 J7 n' a7 E$ v<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" O% p! j* B& E; _+ k, `<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' D7 ]+ _- Y( T<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ r) x) ?: s7 `' V<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* l. w8 z. q2 [: `, b0 r<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>