【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
" }! l: a; \6 k$ [) L1 J! j; I( OThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
! @1 d( T- F' x1 C7 f+ sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 a& Q5 m7 W. d8 Y5 L" n: hThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! O7 L# W7 d4 {+ t* GThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* ~8 N$ a8 R% dYou needn’t fear anything
! M/ C/ n* ~* b6 q, VMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; u2 w: [; L. W1 \4 ~1 w4 SEvery other word you utter is love
! l9 V! R" Y( L4 i- L9 o  ]: v8 D# \I really want to know just how much you love me
+ y( c+ ?& b* V2 }: gI love you I love you with all my heart
5 s1 m2 ]& W0 X8 jNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# G# Z& C" Z! S2 L! iThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
7 P0 ^. X' e0 B6 G* jI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. S( p8 ]8 l7 q: w* MI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
. W( ~7 A% s7 B1 M3 g' [Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! Z3 S7 T' `7 V; E/ ?- XIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- {6 f* z, g* j# `' g) [' `% B<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" V5 ]5 q8 m3 h  s! N<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( a9 D% w& U; o- v  P+ D<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ O% r2 y2 ~6 D% C% K<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: e  Y& G* a. `* p: w% V( n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; u0 U5 A$ j2 Z4 m; i<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# V2 J- W& }; o<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* V0 \8 N0 B9 A<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
" P5 {1 G+ s9 o7 I0 C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: L: G2 Y( Z/ U: f! ?/ g' B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. w" E) _. h! M* p1 s$ b<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- D% q' M8 X6 p) ]+ c<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: U- }( u) O' x9 x<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% d% q- `" `/ g# X7 j+ O/ K<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. ]; W- u' h3 a4 p/ V<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ X! E- B! U, Z  }<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# A% w- @3 Q* I/ W! Y3 {<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* V0 g/ \8 \: O4 J1 A$ J$ @7 P1 Q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 `7 p5 H9 W8 k: W  y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) d7 v( Y& ^& L( I! q, ~( o* \<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 B9 ?% O7 G# \# i<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. I7 }$ n4 O$ z$ z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* N) f+ i8 ~  q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 l7 V; f/ }" G/ C2 j- b3 W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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7 J& ~, Y# O9 b+ |我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 }  k+ D% u9 D2 @3 y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>