【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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' V9 K. z8 J7 F5 h歌词我附在后面。
! h. L' H+ F7 `. G) \! kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
: `% Q# P: y# D8 e, Y* `Making the sky glitter like gold,
# X: N. q  d$ y& l8 m  b8 m8 I' |4 v3 QWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. A: g. K7 J: O: F. O9 uThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
+ n! x& p9 I. X8 }5 R; l1 G" tWith the moon kissing it every night
+ b1 F8 {% b; Y" {/ f2 I* t' @Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) ~& j0 h" P( _( B: o! j- ^My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# N* G; c* c+ q. d) _) U4 c: s( \Every other word you utter is love
4 _7 W7 W6 ^. g1 e' V* bI really want to know just how much you love me
; j$ F  n# O5 P1 m# H$ T/ xI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) U* H2 J) K& {The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 S# g" ~$ H4 X. gI’m still filled with fear
8 l) x3 \1 N- PYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ ?1 Q3 R/ T- a1 k+ }I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ I" l1 A3 {7 \. j9 h) ~# ^With such a tongue as yours,
; x7 S# a  w& x' X' k0 KYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. O8 e! a( t1 o+ f" }. _% }& _<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 j4 q/ e1 ?( _( o# J3 o<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- ^) L; p( j0 r8 Y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! [- n4 _  M. @$ j7 V2 ]( [/ F<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 I1 @7 O/ L7 E- z0 o<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 c% {8 m! J4 c3 d2 ^; f<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) ?" y$ o1 z- t+ z! L<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 q% n. m) [: h- l* D0 g, A<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ @* l. [4 E3 ~, \  ]<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& a; @! R% j5 F( Q, @, V8 j5 n9 S7 `( P<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# W9 Z( o, ^3 b$ s<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) r. R* }6 W% |<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& l% [8 ?- N, K0 S<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( G' }5 O( Q  o! P<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' u5 |& a; C- U<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 d0 ^5 E3 x( p! k/ o: Q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 i6 r" z7 T1 `  J1 D+ V<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 S8 h& K5 b( n7 D4 q% R( P1 ~<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- L/ S$ p8 j) u& {7 a; `6 E. c<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 i( Q( i. `3 h2 {<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& z! }* ?  @- `) g4 o- V2 [<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* M. i* C. L0 L% r& f7 F9 c2 W<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 ^3 j( b3 F( ?4 _1 ?8 u/ r/ H2 Z<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) C7 h- ?; Q5 s$ H<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* E/ i& x5 |, p- M, `<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 _+ B2 x: S  T  P9 s% ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 Z; `2 G: r- e* r- F  u1 Q: Y4 @<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 |& ?. |1 z  [9 A& L3 D* Q: Z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 ]8 O% c! B& @$ T4 }+ j4 m! _<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 ?8 v5 v5 ?- T7 c8 _2 I4 d9 c<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

' r/ N  |1 v$ e5 z+ O* c我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; r) s% i2 p; \7 X. H, l<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>