【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 ^+ M8 x- W7 D; FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 @' E6 Q; Z: B2 a7 j; IWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* R& k2 D/ k- A/ n5 a! SMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 A2 t& [! B7 VI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
7 h' _, c% j# w5 h- }. |I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& \3 |; L2 s& ?' M( S" S9 MI regret not dying
+ [: L2 Q4 o, V+ ]+ yI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
: I2 _9 Z2 t4 G, R  n% b" \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) ~0 y# w% d5 K+ Y! i. }/ z: n) k! GRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

& l  ]1 d& \# q1 z. g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 C3 p" u- T: m' F3 i9 s6 U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  C: C# ~! W' V& R. K: g+ l' A) N" e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% A1 ~! X* }8 x) R4 y# V  A- t<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 `, L* M" @- b$ N- K<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 C3 R" \/ a" [" _! c1 T  j<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 x/ u# G4 G# A0 s  y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 h( ~, T% U& Q. L. y  f<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& v0 ^. d- ^, ]+ e<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 K; K1 k, c, E+ m<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 N6 T; ]) p8 h: v# C' @6 F7 r<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ O9 M/ L# @" C! d, F<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ I8 [% l( Q% s* o<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 A8 J- X) z7 t. A( _<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* Q( d) V. X2 T! S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* s  q2 I/ p9 G3 B% {<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 }( @0 O# Y% A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, {5 r5 S6 w. S- H" T<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 r7 @' k6 v9 q; |1 }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! K! h) I- m* G! k$ H" s+ V<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 O, {7 C$ D9 i) e2 {; K8 S9 g9 ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' g6 R/ r; G5 H/ Y1 @: q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. C$ G1 z1 p! t, ], m0 t- Z3 x<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 i3 Z, u" M- Q& i) @9 B: ?<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: u! R1 P  I3 \. j6 C<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ B9 v. i/ m* z" M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: e  Z5 v* w0 d2 H: s<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ J' `4 y# ^( _, ?  V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" R" @4 O* Y) K7 U8 H7 f) r<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

8 n% @9 G  T/ [我请你剖开它

, z0 Q/ ?/ ^5 x- p  w 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>