【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
3 a  B, C% s. ~+ e0 UThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 t5 b; X* x7 rWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) x# U) L, J' Q; iYou needn’t fear anything
" s* E' U. A4 \5 T! ~My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' ]2 e% M* n( V# g3 \Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
: L' R1 K& ]9 ^6 a1 `3 dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ T; ?  J. }" V! XI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- v  I! [0 G5 b7 y, @; i' x3 rI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% s2 w* r0 @6 Z* q/ F* oRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ N: P/ D- q! p8 T2 ?6 ^  \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ I8 u+ s1 O* Z  m* t7 L+ A, M" m6 K<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' ~+ l% _; U" o- d" }<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 ?1 E8 d  |0 I, {<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! s6 N0 S+ P9 E2 ~0 M<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 r# u5 i  r* P1 i<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, p/ O1 i7 H& K% g+ Z: ]+ n) c<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 s* s" e. G) M  I$ v<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& b5 F7 c0 }' u" [7 h' a<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ r  o0 a$ d; ]  h<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 u1 E; x4 N% f3 e; M+ U2 A9 Y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# x  @' q4 f" m& W; d$ C<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ x4 |# X2 X7 Q7 b6 E6 O<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 p% H7 v  h* k- P$ Z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 V9 @; U% {5 u<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; w3 U; P/ F. @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) q6 a8 e! h( j4 F9 ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, j  O7 c/ Q* n5 [3 t9 t/ `- Q/ L. }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 A. S- x6 R4 `$ ~( n+ ]<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 n* c: Y8 ]* E( n; S3 ^; v/ h2 u<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: H6 r* o+ B, e& G, f( i<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& W9 K  D# \7 R8 T. u<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% j6 K) \2 ?* i. P<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! I  }/ h4 N/ P9 Y& g<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- d- ?# |) C5 [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" D# m6 h- H  S& z) y: \& B<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 e4 r8 R! D% q0 U# b' p, H0 L7 d' r<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' V5 j& \5 ^8 E: t4 a<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# l1 }& d+ a/ y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>