【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# b3 C; B7 t7 j3 CMaking the sky glitter like gold,
5 e8 ~9 L5 E, b( H) e( ~' AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! _1 q" u0 b5 B" BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 D( t2 u  y$ x9 }6 C3 ~, M3 lThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* R8 v1 k6 D3 `Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* l  |# N7 V% \0 M2 C0 r. cThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% b8 ~8 y9 i& d9 \9 C6 SI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. h  J0 f/ l; e/ M) dYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) [9 y) F1 @/ SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% P1 X7 f6 d) l4 a: G( I, k6 [With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! y& d7 @$ A- k" O4 |# gIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! a, |8 O. d! z" z+ S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& y( u& X6 q! t& J* {$ J6 d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 v+ R- a; L: |; I+ V<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ n6 J9 `, w. [& M$ k3 S<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 z$ M- z6 i. R+ H' \1 Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% D+ a# i! u4 E# p; Q2 G- F( u, B3 y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! B) Q  y# R5 K: P. b5 W<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 R! s! w' [' }7 F<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ S" W. w! x% X% O7 d<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( S4 Q1 s/ X1 a, b, M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 ^# @/ b( ]2 A$ ]<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: a$ w+ J1 K3 q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 F2 L, J* [1 [: o<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  W& C" V0 }! H2 g) O$ G<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% p6 C  w+ E& |3 b<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# @$ G! ?5 L  U- F0 [/ @0 r4 G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! [$ A* }" E. `/ B- b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 Z9 |# g9 X$ O0 g* g0 O& v# U' C<P>I regret not dying</P>
" G# U; s4 w* p! f: ^# h+ N<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 C! L2 j# p6 b0 h$ O& \0 a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# a4 j" S: U# Y1 i<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ c7 v2 x. E* q' i$ K+ M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 C3 {7 z+ D3 j' ]7 J5 Q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ `' |7 R3 R4 U/ @* b9 \+ S<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: D7 @2 w4 r1 F! ~7 U<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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4 ~8 a5 P6 N( F2 C" W 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>