【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ ?, _0 C$ k  B. @歌词我附在后面。
$ @& z! m1 K9 A: J) j5 lThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# m* q! U/ B- X& I8 fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 Y' ^- i9 [' I/ T! {# {, E) F8 KWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 T) e+ ?6 D" {The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" S4 g2 e* B" w( o0 w! j! w: ZSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
# m5 A- m9 w- |% F0 A) \I really want to know just how much you love me
* t+ P0 I( b( |/ n8 _I love you I love you with all my heart
5 Q! e3 y3 Y) ~8 j# n% INothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. i4 ?& m* @- u8 |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( B- G  P! j" |( v; fI want so much to see inside your heart
' R6 z4 N0 T( k& ^) }# ]I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- u: h. I8 |0 J0 BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 h6 c7 k; z1 C6 K$ e+ @) c/ V: sI regret not dying
) ?+ z' ^! l0 A" F% YI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 Y9 Q& k/ ^5 K2 b# P. o& x0 tWith such a tongue as yours,
' K8 m; J) e/ f2 AYour speech can’t even keep up with it
# x. I# z2 e7 _4 a/ p; vIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

4 ~9 R' p6 \$ q( n. |- P5 }6 U5 \3 a<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& T& K" P' x% r' Z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, o% }# s( @9 S) }6 j& ^" R! Q8 C<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! b" F7 Z! S6 H+ D0 W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ ~6 h( V9 T& e" r3 \# q- W<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ t: p5 z! K+ }( ?9 B) ~# I3 u# L<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ \1 }/ p' R9 b; p<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% r3 E1 m6 r  u7 s$ M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 _9 \" w+ Y3 Y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ f% R3 q) t: y4 K# V5 ~3 A<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ c( U6 O" l* P6 g$ A0 _<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 ]0 S% U; ~2 ~, Y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% Y- L8 ^' Y, W( A: g<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, c: ~5 A, m7 h7 ?( i; N2 b<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. j: N& x, w' Z7 F# |/ _8 ~, D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 d* b7 p' W3 R; Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 Q7 z2 n( s; I2 _0 p<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 g! X0 A/ E) Z0 f# y& x<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% o9 I* x, v+ C5 Q+ E5 C" s3 V- a<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 Y' j% ~4 H) V5 ^* K: D( Z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 P( r" W( V1 q- y6 T1 n<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  L7 A4 B2 ]8 B9 C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; z( j& Y' k+ ~& P% a: @; ~) d<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% l7 z5 v3 z% u* i/ F$ X  R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- Y" D, D8 X; K- j% Z( s" T. @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: c5 H5 U' X: i: ^" K8 ?2 q) n$ m<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 L. o1 ?5 R* k! l2 K0 z# ^<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 p, _+ }' b' ~6 y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) t7 S8 T* C* W4 m6 j; l- f; D<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' d6 h! |$ e& K5 R 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>