【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
! ~& q- {5 w' n! U2 p1 O8 F# G, G. zThe moonlight is shining brightly,
( p2 d7 W: I7 H) a# F6 ]Making the sky glitter like gold,
- Z  a5 Q3 d9 _$ Q/ EWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 p/ l4 v" ^& pThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
3 r& T: l3 p* RSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 Q* s8 n0 O( I3 L0 n; a0 \My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( s% ^3 B1 p1 T1 d  OEvery other word you utter is love
* Y, H3 |/ G# [! W2 ?I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ y3 ]6 G; ^: U0 S1 aNothing can compare to my love
  x+ e1 Q. L) K$ S) wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 t+ L; d, j1 K: V4 S2 C3 z5 |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 p8 E; }0 M( X+ S! O0 l/ B# XI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 ^3 D1 p# k( \I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; A9 C; L0 V- j; I9 C/ GI regret not dying
, I  p+ r% C; u! iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 m+ a  \$ L, X+ R0 d) R) Z' NWith such a tongue as yours,
$ ?$ i7 I- K1 J9 D: Q- R5 q; TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
0 t7 T' _) ?" y0 M( P, e- mIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( u3 X4 N, r: j( N- zRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 K$ O# T0 A+ a. [3 W$ k% t; T) Z4 n, G<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, D% J& I  P1 W9 s6 Y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 }4 P5 X2 V: y. v+ f1 q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# V$ c% R5 b$ @  n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; F5 {" o6 V) c( b% N<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% j2 i6 c4 n3 C5 ^<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 d. f- g" v' l; I) J+ t% _9 m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 _$ E- X* m0 o6 ~$ c+ t) a+ |  }8 W<P>你无需担心</P>
- S1 ]& q! {2 G! a) ^7 l% S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 K/ ?8 _" D7 p<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 Y7 T+ n! F% `. R* p# H$ z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. {* y- \7 l* i: F2 B2 L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 p, A: H8 m5 B3 V<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  p6 j' g5 R) r" ^' |<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# h5 C/ L# E9 ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) S8 W6 l4 C- e<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. {5 F; }/ M7 f4 U5 P: U<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" Q1 ]$ ?2 Y0 g# v3 l<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 N3 j3 |3 I' L, M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" g7 H! r' [! s<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 w  x; y' \; Q7 k; g3 e<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) U% A3 n+ O4 ^<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 ?$ H  d0 P1 o8 f; V$ U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& R% O- N. X7 r7 \<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% i8 [3 T3 }/ g<P>I regret not dying</P>
- I- U% ?+ N/ H; f7 V<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; i# M6 a; r% d5 L& A+ f% f<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. ~% L5 c* }. o4 C% b/ f$ j<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 \6 \: A) N- M  S/ R# [( t<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

! B8 I# w5 i+ y+ n我请你剖开它

6 T1 t9 d+ V: b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# Y7 E: M, s4 A, W6 p; ~$ o<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>