【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
0 f& b0 Y; n+ i' x: c0 ^The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
9 F% ?0 M3 K& B3 HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 Y/ s  X* u! R/ D4 jThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
0 {5 U5 S  @# E' a4 b( zSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( Z, w' y( P, X8 n% B" VEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
: l7 x, V& u1 Z  }; ~- BNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 L9 `: d& P4 i7 Z0 O" GI regret not dying
# x8 b1 m0 g3 Z# s- s0 Z0 T9 ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& E8 M1 h7 m( v" M* r2 ?With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& x0 u: g6 S, N$ [- YIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* e* w' r- M+ M; M. A' }. BRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

' I# ^* c$ k$ w<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) I8 U9 h( _: d' Q, {<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: n1 q- \1 o* `<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 _* w6 K  S2 o, c" u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" |5 l) ^2 x; @& c<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 r, m( |& v: R4 l$ e0 D<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; V# Y; f" f+ I7 }0 S5 D- e3 z6 p<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ j- M" n# l$ l/ Z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 `# W3 ]  c/ O/ \<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 n. w& c: i) h; s5 R" v- r6 P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ B" O1 @* [) v  |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 J) g, W2 q* H. h) D# `2 G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! k% N' ?* V, I" M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ ^7 l. B* h; K: F% h- m. m<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* y7 e8 @; c/ U" R: y' ?! H' h# ?<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 ?; \7 W3 n% q! L# b: D<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 H5 t, r$ L- s! v<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  `3 J& m, E& D7 I<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 ]. g4 |2 ?  i9 W/ A0 a7 U* V9 b<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. P  o! @3 K* c0 S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. k: [# N1 o0 f( v7 X. n<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) s/ f' `& n6 d/ S/ ?- W5 V<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 @4 V, e: }2 P# F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 q$ y$ e! e! L* c<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

: @% A5 S: d$ v2 T& B我请你剖开它

, h+ j) x/ x  X 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ Y, s2 A+ H3 l4 Y6 I<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>