【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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  H5 e. b  O2 ~& L3 \% D% T7 E  f歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ [8 P" B7 j# |+ s- z7 _% ~Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! K! p( A" C% W6 H8 jThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ ^0 }4 F3 O6 A- a: U% b9 wThe sky is happy down to its soul
6 o3 w* [0 |2 ?5 b; N& YWith the moon kissing it every night
0 g& h" X3 _; i/ |  n+ sSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' N$ l' F, J2 m$ Z; f/ x+ o( XMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( L" O9 }. G) }3 r3 E; FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. _3 D9 g0 n7 }% xI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 _4 K0 j! A# j$ yWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: x, C, f& {: w1 [) t5 m" a. x+ YRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 {; S0 M& v+ k! Y0 P<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ W5 ?: t- \$ L0 U4 h2 j) `9 M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% f1 e. O5 V1 g3 k7 Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  h) ~! L/ b, c3 i5 ?. Z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! A, ^* {4 }- ]' a' b: D9 a3 G' {<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 G- W  y6 }8 Q8 g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; z1 E8 y8 J1 Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
8 f; y1 S1 Q0 r9 y- J" h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. V. [/ w- ^( m" L* D% {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 T2 L2 C  Z- |' v6 T<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) O/ J% v- u( `) U0 X' W/ h<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 N% i" U4 ?7 e4 c. p, X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 L$ [/ q/ S, J* N2 O<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  l! s) h* F4 E& Q: n8 y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' R2 u$ y# V! ?7 P2 X& f1 v1 E$ r<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ k% y7 T/ i& o& \) B7 a<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ {0 R; x6 _9 O9 }- ]6 i- E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 @' |* s5 r- R4 }, y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  k# p- Z0 C( ~+ F1 `/ e<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( v# I1 Y/ Z1 R' n7 |<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 T6 U" c0 R4 m9 p' l+ I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 _* C6 A' n3 Y+ Z% N  K7 N2 G* H<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 |) }2 D& y3 {5 w# j9 o6 m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' C! G- f0 _: W<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ F1 e& ?; ^, j! ?<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 j% h: z+ l% O! [: g) g- ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ H- p) z, }0 M9 M/ N* f# I. H. |6 m. ]<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" P2 [& u! U) e2 @<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; t! ^. L  ~7 t. d2 O- K8 d1 E<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

6 Q1 \% r+ y) Q, c 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# c4 \+ [& Z! F& S4 B9 ~% @<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>