【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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' l  }- E- s! r3 g/ @# {/ S歌词我附在后面。
$ C( D2 [! |- e% WThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ l1 S2 }4 L0 x4 JWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ H" x8 N5 [% ]7 O) N/ LWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. @: R; U5 k8 e2 e# eEvery other word you utter is love
( G. e8 I4 v% X( k. YI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# }! ?) X6 A5 N2 Q+ gThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
5 L: g. u# I& o6 O1 dYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& Y) d  H3 t& o0 R/ O5 iI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- t& f' x% n' g8 p  e5 W; W4 VWith such a tongue as yours,
/ V* O& p2 u9 `* G  xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( G, P0 T% [% U: u3 c8 `Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 t) B; d- T5 c2 m" D' w<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! y4 p  w- w/ d4 {<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' g0 q' o" \* g4 A% k- {<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- |; a. V' \! _1 j7 F<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 h; V$ d3 R' Q6 x<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# r/ I3 A+ B2 i; m" N1 N; G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 H* i+ z% h( d+ l& r4 @- \5 u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 s5 \& b# C9 @9 l0 s4 c<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  |. n# D3 p+ v% a<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" N- n$ _( d5 i3 P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 U( [8 u* p9 @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 O3 I* N$ E% ], D- ^: o<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 N/ d( G& T: `: u; Y3 `4 p<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) C( T: v/ P% [& r/ F4 ^. {  T( t( v<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 T2 j/ U3 r% z- `6 Z1 m2 u$ p<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ [+ d. T! `: J9 ~5 _4 ^<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 Q' w% R! e. g4 w% s) C<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) r$ j, l* N  Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: R7 F) b! s8 N5 Z5 m9 A<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  V( Z$ E5 @/ s* h. l0 N<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% ?: o# R  Y8 r<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 _0 F" V8 t$ b! X' O8 g<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, l0 A- B7 K3 O/ ~+ [2 O8 F# R$ @<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# y6 |5 n) M) F5 X9 J% u7 ]+ z5 v; I<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  }' v$ O3 n9 ^( x, E<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. M% t! m7 S8 A6 g" X! J4 f<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! Y0 k/ e. U3 b0 R<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ s6 N: o* x" _& r: v5 b<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 Y- M8 V" E  W* a) M( D: t<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  ]- [# Q. s/ a0 x# U& f<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( Q6 {5 D: g4 X6 V  K<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# g0 W- Q# U8 |( E<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 T% j5 H" b& l0 u: {<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
- F, U& H+ t# X7 h<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

4 ^" y" X" r& |7 H我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>