【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
: Q4 c2 Y- X* G% ^) ~. ?. @Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 {& j9 K  t! i# t7 ~When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 u3 i1 K9 e+ P+ U, f- M7 aThe sky is happy down to its soul
" a3 ~) d/ [) g* S/ @; SWith the moon kissing it every night
( I8 p. P9 V9 ~' d6 f, @Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) `3 n! l1 q1 F& @2 ^$ x, ~+ C- ZYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* T5 u* ?) J; E) ^: DEvery other word you utter is love
4 m* a7 k% L# r. B. f' w3 x. K9 YI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 }0 I# C- L  Z% UCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 X) R: X: e9 h; X, R. S7 T9 {The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( L) O# b3 ]& I' f  C  y5 YI’m still filled with fear
& [% @0 O( X3 R0 z+ y1 r+ xYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! Y2 N5 e1 U" Q$ z& H1 Y* V1 r& XI regret not dying
6 O# q: C4 Y; g  [I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ X/ w6 B& [7 H5 k* R) n' T% YWith such a tongue as yours,
# r1 P$ h  `% t8 B3 dYour speech can’t even keep up with it
: X$ Q  ]9 z8 F; BIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( z& ]0 ^+ G) g  g5 h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' |6 z: B, q( j8 N2 g1 I. r% P% ^<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, d5 Y, J- b. v# K$ g<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! E4 Y$ _! N# G+ U+ n; c7 s* F<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 R; j- O, X5 O, ^7 [. @; J2 G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 G3 z7 T$ \: c1 ?<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 n8 R2 N- L# l<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 W$ }6 k- R- c$ u8 c* v<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ ]# t7 I% X& g  @# k- ~  F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 ?8 a$ h. n3 e+ o5 y5 V; q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! a( p1 K" v" L& c<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' ~" B" K1 J  G4 U: C* g<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 r" `& e* |" F, D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ @  ^2 s$ `) I- g3 n<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" o& W* a& H( @<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) J1 r5 M7 |9 C& ^; L! W<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  K7 O9 ~9 [- V) Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ l; A; m! L; M6 g- l* Q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" H+ r8 |5 A/ K% I<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% q7 l0 @' @6 _<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 I8 Z3 @$ V; o<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# e- ?7 S/ c2 m$ N! p<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 p) I* e& M9 p7 w. ?1 F<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. O  {  Y( Z0 ]6 H<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% J& R0 b: r, }8 c; Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 j5 v( O1 U. w) c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ i2 _1 m+ a; `$ O- E" T; H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 ]" h. O" H5 [) j+ \8 ]! V<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>