【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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3 M% a$ e2 l5 ?7 ^' |; n( X歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
+ ^9 ]# Y- p6 A# |, I9 a" UMaking the sky glitter like gold,
8 ~- N$ B5 b( }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ d6 f$ u6 u. C: g4 BThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 ^. }. f0 P6 j4 b/ e7 M5 |' ]Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' h) y  G) ?5 JYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; G: z, S& P& d- ]: HI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
  X- h6 \  G5 ^/ X$ Z" a" LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 [1 ]; t5 E4 kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# o5 e5 N# G- o) G$ UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ T& F$ a" w1 ?& B( n! `I’m still filled with fear
* C+ J, W! n. E+ b+ QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% u" p3 [- O; r" ]* WI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* e$ A. @0 S7 W% ~9 Q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, Q/ e0 T; m0 |' ]* U# {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 r* K7 G! S7 \" j; i$ V3 e<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( X4 k) x$ k! I5 s<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 j3 m- ]8 i5 W' y: R% w% n! |, K+ r<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( M2 g9 r2 W  `8 X. s5 q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 I& \4 G! }  d0 h, [+ C) m  B' X<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 ~; g0 g& @" K# y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 N! T8 A& h) _% }  X<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 g8 d" E, M# S! ^+ O3 S<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' \3 O7 p9 _7 d/ ^<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 [6 s. x  z. P7 ^  S- H- Z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 A1 ?: y2 @, q) m<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  D. c) x( w! u6 d( o, T6 c0 l<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 T; |+ k4 G* x<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# V1 [5 Z" j6 z$ b, t( s<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) ^' ?& y2 m8 l$ i$ {<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, m+ u9 s  X, |" w<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 P6 c: Q! U/ V8 I7 c- b# Y( K<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ y0 v) K" y4 K8 |<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 i5 D% R. j; b. _3 @, O7 J9 n<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' K$ g1 ~: c/ E<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( y2 L4 ~) O# _5 g: m' W<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 I! ?% ]& h! j<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' v" ?3 C$ {9 r( U; `* ~! c: K9 _9 _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; Y9 r1 {; o0 ^  q, _<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

! _1 A9 C' a. P% O我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- h0 E5 s0 a4 W7 a$ }9 c& X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>