【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
  n( ?! I: t4 q5 ZThe moonlight is shining brightly,
" d# @5 V( v" a: B! e7 FMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 Y2 H& T3 L9 |. iWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
# M9 b4 U: {1 k3 B! V6 fI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 }( C8 [! M  o* X1 P0 g! A- tNothing can compare to my love
5 ^" }* E, J6 s, J! vCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 m0 k0 ^1 |! J; J, |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
+ l) |$ v7 }% z: e2 tI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. H3 c* v( T2 }7 @2 d5 V1 aI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# e/ w1 W0 |* q% G! @: QWith such a tongue as yours,
7 ^: n2 n1 C7 X) k' IYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 G" _! Z( }2 |3 R! }, [<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 A" U) i+ N5 @<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" N' k( `8 [. b2 q$ k. N<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' A4 Y' b( S* u5 l& |" g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 t9 l, b& j6 f  ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 ^* s  W% f+ y3 F. T5 `) |<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 _5 z2 B# Z' [$ m& V) E# [) }<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% K! w+ _) n- k4 r( |( u" J" f<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. m9 y, S3 v0 ]& l<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# @; f4 K: z4 K# W, N% M<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 e% q  D' B3 h1 M7 ?/ r+ y6 t/ q) V% i<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 Y# Z6 m  U  E$ d8 C* [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 z: l6 l- \4 Y5 A+ ]& c) F" d2 J<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 ?7 L6 C% G& v1 A1 `. J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ \' Y, f6 Y3 j& O+ g# A, U<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 J, H8 @$ A9 a  d) V& O<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) o% s# k2 U4 X7 ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* ~  C% k( d8 @3 q6 P<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 J- Q( j& u5 B1 R<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, z9 z- m& V! i& @; @* S1 e<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. Y6 ~3 f4 E+ ?# s* B. T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 ^# a: @7 [4 y! u) a( P2 t<P>I regret not dying</P>
' D+ g$ v, L. K# |! Y% Q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' |% r: i& x4 |  T/ J+ T( H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! \! l: ?# l7 D/ C; W<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 o# Y; H, ~& `* m" J! k7 c) V* K' A1 e<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 D- g: k; E  u5 ]% ]<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. h: F0 H( g, E! e4 g, h<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, I; T7 P5 E4 c- q; b8 N* _, |<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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0 F3 h# ^1 o9 H% J( U+ \我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>