【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 ?6 |# v4 e8 {/ ~歌词我附在后面。
4 E: ]+ @5 l# YThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' q: ?, s, n8 W8 W4 jThe sky is happy down to its soul
; W* B' C6 Z& n' `3 N+ _  o- RWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 j# k. q  o2 S! X/ [You needn’t fear anything
6 m9 r0 r$ H, t+ vMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% i2 L9 G: j0 w8 aEvery other word you utter is love
& Y; T+ y* V3 `  Z$ j) FI really want to know just how much you love me
: C4 p  P& V0 i3 A+ K6 ]I love you I love you with all my heart
6 L) ^" H6 w& V$ T0 fNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 {* K! L! L6 v' ~6 v5 ]. d6 kI want so much to see inside your heart
0 B( |* \+ t9 P( W: k7 p- c4 |I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 @2 [& P- e: W+ L6 ?* i( j) U: d! JI’m still filled with fear
6 z9 X1 ?% _/ R4 x) V" yYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( T( H: k  G2 t3 a6 ~) WYour speech can’t even keep up with it
- ~! i  t0 ]$ P7 T2 ZIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; j2 a3 }( w/ i8 p8 `/ @0 C" e9 vRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( E+ g$ t6 I4 t<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. n% l+ |4 a, q& b9 ], C<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% z$ w  k5 ^' J3 V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  j5 m! X/ [7 w- P: G8 U<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  {% i0 [' D& M0 x% }" F<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" t4 H2 Q7 K# C<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 m' p1 A2 A2 ]8 y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) F% u5 F2 |" e7 B) }$ K# z6 @  r; s<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! Q$ F: J7 o& ~) c<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* `/ H1 o% A2 N7 B5 [' [6 x<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- A6 k9 X  [- ~: E/ r<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 L9 z; b9 ~" v! X7 [6 `0 {<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" ]$ g7 d/ T; d3 P3 ]3 b<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# }* B* F0 K) \# C1 ^4 [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 N; L9 _  C1 e7 r# _<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ C. u/ F" \; _2 P. f6 \; x$ S<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 r+ S5 C2 K7 E<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: _) m6 T( r0 w- i) a<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, c4 H& w! @+ ?7 ]- B  Q1 m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) d3 ~% W' m! Z! h  O4 a<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 ~3 k0 t& H9 @8 N2 |<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& h  o* q3 Z3 f& K: u' u6 R; ]* r) U<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" b' c/ i6 ~; K# a: l/ d<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  K1 [+ Z: F/ _) k+ I; |. W5 X<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( ]/ U9 u5 s9 Y  Z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 l6 G9 J, P5 U& ?4 O6 ~- b<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 e3 X2 w( X0 [( V7 k4 K: r! y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( s4 ]  s# W# r8 C- X+ K<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ X$ ~0 o. f" ^<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! D9 ^3 c$ r+ M' @$ u9 U4 S<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 V6 ]9 K5 C9 v- d<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>