【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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% S. b% W! O6 i- ^. x歌词我附在后面。
2 D) ?6 [" [: f' N; W& KThe moonlight is shining brightly,
7 Z; N, M$ c8 g9 u  {/ C" W1 aMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 j! u# G! k4 KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. P( w. i5 }. D" A( bWith the moon kissing it every night
: s' b4 \2 U( mSeeing the sky content with its love
% X2 S3 g7 L  VIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 ]1 S% b/ W+ j" ?4 b4 uYou needn’t fear anything
1 o+ I4 G/ i+ _! j- QMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( c6 n2 L: V3 M# j# DI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; S% f2 {% ]! i/ HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ n; E) J! N3 [  S- ~5 rI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 P! P' n$ J& RI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# Y( U! `# N* _) ?) V) G" ]With such a tongue as yours,
" @# h5 W$ r$ A- A: bYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) `& x" q# R' [0 w" tRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 m, E! t4 j; ?5 R  _: L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; K+ P# T6 n* F, L7 |<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& P$ Y2 |5 d% z, |" k# ^4 S" _<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 Y6 g: M- N% U* s<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 L& O5 \! j1 d. O; ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. l1 f' c0 j0 h4 u0 Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! q7 S- k; j# A! h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 ?: J. f- D6 H<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 H' W& s- H% h  {<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% S( u, U, E8 d" [<P>你无需担心</P>
8 H( e  q' y# x/ Z6 X0 |<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- T+ l5 C7 j" A9 I% p  J1 L1 w2 T5 n<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! r& s; z5 B' c- v" l$ c8 m<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, M' M- y: r( h4 Y; g8 b<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 y6 v. ^) U# f7 r% ]9 O1 S9 R' ^<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) Z  w4 x& i$ G4 D<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 g; N/ H, T8 i. G  X, M8 _* n% H<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, N; Q9 z& t! Z' E/ J& w: Q' _<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  K3 @/ h, O  g" _$ L4 z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& h  `* a, l# a+ d2 M  j<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 i5 O# v. Q: }9 l4 ^. F# e1 U# Z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 F9 N9 X; M/ A* I<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  W  x4 t4 I7 _# H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>