【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 v. T9 M+ s" w/ ]  \& Q; b# b5 z% L歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% Q- W; a$ R3 p! l7 s1 s- C% V3 V6 `When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ V$ K* U, J6 W, v- y. O0 t, d6 VThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! j3 ^( U& p- m% gWith the moon kissing it every night
8 Y4 R. t$ T6 r+ v9 x1 ASeeing the sky content with its love
# C% q8 t8 s$ d& E2 ]* \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 i! e1 P  a) y: dEvery other word you utter is love
) V" }" k* X0 xI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! M+ [/ E! Y$ r& A1 b9 E4 mNothing can compare to my love
& u) a* O- Y9 w7 gCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ ~3 ]4 j' Z0 {6 E+ vThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( w! e+ e- |3 pI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 w4 B7 d9 [! c: H' O& tI’m still filled with fear
2 @& J! J$ S3 l4 SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ ^) h+ B+ U# t( S2 Y3 pI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; U, O/ o) q3 M! D( r% qRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& e* w' ?& a; x- D7 d8 Q2 r( v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; G: R9 Q# b6 h  S- p/ [<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 T5 b; x  C1 [; S# c4 o1 i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% V: v# K$ ]+ H5 q: I6 r<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 ~* W% b" q) f( W: i! d4 P<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 d0 C  P+ l3 g. i9 f<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 I0 {6 m0 z9 M* e<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# I& J% e4 R0 h/ s6 R4 Z% u<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# v2 E: g+ P9 o6 v+ L3 X1 y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  z: V1 _/ Q, r6 r- U6 ]7 ?1 O<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' C* g" L$ M) U: U/ W, x. {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% |6 V0 G: {) b: x; C; z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 w' Z% m# U. y8 ^* P) e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' c3 r2 P2 P* Z! _% H<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ g0 K: m2 C$ c' a<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ L/ @' X- j; q* f9 d( ?5 i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! B& _( B5 d: K$ |% D) g<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 W- i! X- A) l) k% `/ O<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' _  {+ V2 \. \" X7 O) B: k* R<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) W8 N2 Y$ k4 N4 Z7 I  G<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 F" J# g) `; c5 }* C, t. P$ ~* B, J<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" u) W1 L+ S0 ~<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# U$ a1 R, @* p  R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 A# ?8 z& W: v/ `<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* `0 t3 X. e5 n) R6 t2 k  e; P+ b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 N9 r: Z7 ~# Q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 f5 k: L7 h# W. D+ D0 K/ h- Z, ?/ J<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' D( B7 y8 Y! ^+ Z2 _9 l! b我请你剖开它

' B/ I/ F4 C' z- ?+ T- N4 k 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. u5 T& ~  R, A" }9 h" q' w- q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>