【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 e, ~5 ^) W' I/ J3 ^歌词我附在后面。
* A' L& [4 Y0 e$ M4 |) ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
% l& Z3 L& T' |/ H. JMaking the sky glitter like gold,
+ J, D7 S% P/ i0 zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( L& s) x# v) {6 u$ wThe sky is happy down to its soul
( ]% `, i# V/ f" aWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% `. z* M8 `6 q! M$ iI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% ]" f7 \  d4 e3 p2 @  BThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 K- u2 R& ~0 j; x* Y% PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! D! y6 e- X  b# A. Y$ N! T4 SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  K0 }  R* W) b% L3 GI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 q4 l) l1 X6 m  X& z; BWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ x* s+ J: e! X, b9 Q" S0 H& ~If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ \+ C; z6 v$ m% U2 FRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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! ~/ k; F4 u% n<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 r# G/ b# V! m' i<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* y/ O0 ?- M3 h3 ]  j' s/ v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  x& o3 q$ c( {, A6 W<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 X( \' I) W" r. n2 i# J1 F0 S<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; A: y4 k$ B! ^! Q; n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' v# _. x) `; }  i" T+ Z  ]6 Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ O% P/ C5 y# K, `<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ U: w7 J2 A- _" I* }<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 O8 C7 d* u: L2 A  Y+ X; w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- ^3 X& @" g5 Q& u( C<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! l4 e3 u6 q' L# F( V<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) ]6 {$ }% X- s' |<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 u9 B, X" k+ D+ {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 V# n; V; _5 T- @! \1 c/ V0 F) m<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 q5 z4 l5 p4 Y2 {% I<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 n; W1 z! [" o7 r<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" `7 j/ D/ z& C- G# D<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" ^3 I2 G. C9 W" C, t- o) H<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 {$ b6 G+ x3 \% @7 t, |<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- @' u7 T$ R. b: @; F# E$ a<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 ^! R: w- `, o" \5 e+ u<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, e- c- l# O; m: r<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 o$ y& A/ z" \" ^4 c<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, T/ P/ L7 @$ T9 L: ]8 I& a<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; S5 {1 c+ A9 \, z  O) P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. L3 N1 H! k" t<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 N: j' |; K7 C' Z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 h$ l5 z2 U* [; k* r% K* h7 e<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- J4 y, Z$ e' c+ d: {<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( t/ B/ k; W8 O9 v<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 |! i  s+ Y3 q9 t3 Q2 k<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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7 p! K1 F3 U' `* P* Z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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