【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' V# ^. B( S7 L- h$ S. KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 z$ J- Q: j. sWith the moon kissing it every night
9 `1 Z+ P) L; z9 y$ ~Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 C$ p8 L. r! |4 f! i) U) gYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( A, F6 H) D7 d1 i0 C2 cNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ O, ?! |& p: X* j8 h; K! `* O* W0 yThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" P: a4 Y7 ?( {& YI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; R/ q& B. ?; z8 G' sI regret not dying
: Y1 W" v' Z( m0 A2 U& ~! HI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% ~* J: c1 P8 H9 t) X. u/ m& JWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) U* W& Z0 L: A8 |0 K<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ m1 U" e; [: c- t5 V0 k; O<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% ]. d2 y( s7 U5 K, Z) j" I: d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- Y% U; F+ q% I  l0 Z* v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# r# ]) e* s& z  b* |5 }! b<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 E8 ~0 _+ }) {/ P" s<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% e6 Q3 t. L& c/ C' x6 b& I, U<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! {  l+ l3 M" S% K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 b5 f5 b8 `: ~7 B' W$ A7 H& ]<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 q. n" j8 D& c: w/ V" c<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; @+ g0 N* b! K7 q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- g) c- h- O  L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 B6 ]% J5 h4 I( t( y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- F/ T/ l4 q  _7 J<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% H% A/ q1 ~# H8 M3 m1 r0 G<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 |6 B, ~$ G% u- H  T<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ f* q& B5 o. B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 K* `$ j/ }8 X! L4 |9 w<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, Y( ]( L0 k; f2 N+ L, s( N1 g<P>I regret not dying</P>
, u' U( s! K/ S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& P/ r- m/ N- J7 T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" n+ v, `# l$ T: J3 q. S+ W<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 L: f- X$ _5 `) q" H' c8 ^6 |1 |  @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 i/ o; C( Q  ^* V" v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! ^! Y9 G8 z$ ^) V<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 `! h- N3 H+ P: z7 E2 s! b, z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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/ J4 }9 U: M" i: ~4 P 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>