【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! Y5 g; r, c& F1 B8 c# D7 MThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; |4 ~7 T% L* r1 PThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 ^; b" h  o0 s  W3 }With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 A1 `3 a' c+ e& AYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
4 `8 V- ]  n3 S, `" Y9 S( A- yI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% t8 f! i# \& c+ V  V2 g8 KI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 @- v7 Q2 s. a" r# R( i& II regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# A, t3 M% B  [* n# kRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; V2 i* |; M. N' ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 T3 k- S: C9 E9 u! I& r2 V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 G4 k) b7 a1 a+ c+ k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) ?7 z* ^$ b5 M6 C5 O0 ~( v<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 \# P% Y& L# _0 s: z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, l, j! \  k  \! R- P2 |! T: x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ K0 K, }4 J" d. r; A2 z6 w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; C' x5 c6 @7 m1 K1 i8 `! ~- M, Y- i<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; p0 e9 o0 q( ~3 `1 ]: ?9 n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. a- O: X( A9 I<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 ~: l# S, Y7 e3 D  U<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 t: A5 [/ t% ~# ^<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 B, V# [8 }) i. i9 f<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 W1 ]  V5 b4 o0 b8 s. A! q: a" r" k<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( S, s: _2 y& L6 m  W% [* ^<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& I" X0 C  X- P0 @* w9 L<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 m0 }4 f3 h2 R# q% @7 P/ p# t3 |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 F! H1 P8 ]) s0 u2 r8 g3 e<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- G+ r9 X6 a/ m/ F+ E7 r' t8 o<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 b+ I; S% X1 I5 V7 J; d! C4 _<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& u( f: J2 F. y" h) ^$ b1 J4 x, n2 p<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# k: Q5 Q/ w9 y) R4 }<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" u7 r1 U2 S. N7 X<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% @5 C1 U) Q8 {5 Z+ h+ ^; e<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 V5 ^8 k& @5 S2 ~9 w1 t* h<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 N$ \- K6 }- F& V% N5 o6 _6 |1 u<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: g) G% g1 ?& G& `$ W1 D<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 t# k4 k6 c9 s# V4 H/ M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* _$ Y/ V! Q/ ]4 d: v<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: o+ A' C: J7 W* F" R$ l<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 K) b, M5 e6 W<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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, }5 r  g2 {8 }6 ]. b我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 T6 B9 _  Z- e! B<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>