【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
/ P2 R. M; Z! o; I3 LThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; O; h( d4 K8 l) b. o' }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ C6 Z* s, ~' M/ t  XThe sky is happy down to its soul
4 \8 v1 w& u! e5 j. r# u) [4 dWith the moon kissing it every night
* ^8 D4 Q+ f8 f- h& q" ySeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" W7 V4 o3 n! PYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
+ L* r4 ^$ k( P3 f3 ?I love you I love you with all my heart
% f) k* O" m( _' V+ Z2 ]1 gNothing can compare to my love
: |8 {5 U1 z2 o! i+ f2 s$ r* zCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 o7 R) F8 s1 U& zI’m still filled with fear
/ O# y4 ]( i) t2 I5 n( R/ E9 j$ Z$ JYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
8 d; k; u6 \# z/ m' F$ V) u! t. e! t, qIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ o4 h" u9 o* `! v2 e# g' uRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; e9 l/ c$ F: I, I0 y. o) h' l7 F8 `<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) ^7 p/ w8 ^, W  W( i<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ Y0 f( t, c. ^( B# I6 E8 ~<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 S- H. R- B: ?# z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; B2 n7 \5 {. I5 c  M<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) L# X7 p% k3 y4 c<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ ]: q8 p/ d' Z( U* k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ Y5 Y7 Q; s) a# D) t. A" R- G' ?7 |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( B/ O8 X7 b7 z: k( W; D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. I  R4 a% L# r" B5 Q: J<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 x3 M6 r% |5 s  p  b. N) O2 E  y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ B: ^( z' L. o% F2 d<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ c; ]4 e, I+ q2 f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 Z0 f( z; R& c4 V; ?- R3 t+ m<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! U6 u7 g0 U3 [! a<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ b; b! c4 v7 e, l<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) L# p; G' n; S- u; C- V<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 i1 D- ?7 k: j/ ^4 o: u" @<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ R4 }! i2 U: y; i, [<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% u$ b# h; l" T! l/ P5 {4 ]<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- U0 p" S8 w4 E<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 y( w* Z7 G* |/ \' {<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" G" X/ d+ N/ w  X$ c# H<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 s" t0 f+ V& X0 n* {: n: G8 u<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' c8 @2 O( A, B' ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 j5 R& k2 N# g2 g7 a' Q1 B% J& J<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 t7 W: ^- f0 _' B+ ^* x<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
4 k4 b" e1 e$ O1 a; r& G
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ U8 @& H- O# b<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>