【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
$ n  X$ I0 O2 r6 j7 }  G+ LThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
- j% }- }: l1 o. o6 d: vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ r& J0 ]. o4 M  t) @3 p2 eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# C$ c' J( [1 w# VSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 \' y- r6 D0 m& F' oYou needn’t fear anything
, |3 C, Z/ F! z7 y4 UMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
8 U& [: J0 w1 c+ mI love you I love you with all my heart
8 c7 r  a% V$ fNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% u1 g1 }. G$ J. z2 W5 r5 NThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ l& p- j- ^  N7 DI want so much to see inside your heart
5 J! o% f' P8 R4 m6 k+ GI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 K2 d. B/ a+ T: pI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( \: T* {9 @7 P2 V3 a+ P6 `With such a tongue as yours,
* o6 J' N4 B; l2 bYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 K. a; ]3 w+ q, w) S" h" E1 ~Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. Q' R) m: Y6 Z: C9 {2 F# L& G<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) e# `# A) ~' W2 T' A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# a% F5 r9 j! s' Q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ O" S3 X5 v- Q6 W<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 X# l; ~& S9 I9 c9 l9 n<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" L. Y3 \4 [7 I/ q. y" t4 |" f1 B<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- f: z  V' v6 R1 C3 z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ _+ ]9 J; o5 l<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 `6 Y: n, \7 E7 X8 A: n<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: K; t/ b$ t1 n5 ~+ G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 y  G3 ^/ B6 z, T/ Z+ x' d# H<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& u' b) g6 b0 F: `<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 C' o5 H% O1 @# I/ r" u<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 T# m% D% a# c$ K1 c! r1 ~' `<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  z) q# D! |. J# B( L# I<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 f; E+ m6 _* S! X<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; l; n2 D: [' g3 K/ S1 S- ^- T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 Q5 U3 [) v8 i9 m- T9 q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& W- ^" C- X* p* b  j; W! @' @1 ~, Q5 p<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: n( p2 }$ _' Q, q5 _% v<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 T; e: u0 @" Z! q# v4 w<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# [4 Y+ J4 G3 Z$ K' i<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. I. F: S8 Q2 ?. V: y' D$ S<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 [( G* {5 {; _. `0 \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 ]- K5 z6 b7 ~) A, R<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
% n, Q8 E9 w& Q. `1 p6 l* P, |! G
- f: B' S- S; ~+ ~0 Z9 D 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>