【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 T. d2 q. D/ a1 a8 G7 w- XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 s1 p! O* [' f! o7 t) S/ GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ O/ _% a+ q" rThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
8 `0 n% U% u0 F  S! zSeeing the sky content with its love
* ?5 r1 S4 ^3 |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" G+ ]/ I* h) @. S: h( B: V5 G# YYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ J3 @6 f  Q7 ?I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
. w' ^4 c( W. O- Z; `, \Nothing can compare to my love
6 V$ V3 E1 f8 P6 e8 e6 E% ?* NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ U! O1 ]4 F/ ~2 P; K, Y! MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: U3 ]4 t0 X6 p; E; i( hYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
$ n' i( J5 d* j8 }& _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, ~$ E% T- `8 MYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 s+ S; u7 j5 D, }( fRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ g* o% ]4 T) o" u$ s4 O$ @' e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( @" @8 G8 t- s<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 N$ Q9 ]: l3 \( ]7 Q2 b<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 b0 ]  v5 ~5 m/ [<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ s0 G# F2 y" B  L* D- C+ x/ o<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& z; ?& x8 R  C4 w! C8 x7 |; O<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! _, F- r( p0 Y* T5 b( L1 h<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 F. \7 N) p3 g( G<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& ~& _0 x' \( ]* f  {5 u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, {3 P, }2 h% Z' g3 U) w8 y9 c  q<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- j: y- ^4 S4 B) B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* i0 g8 C6 I. \0 l' n$ L) z6 Y8 F<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 }9 g9 X/ p! `5 U: S5 f  t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 l- C" h$ _2 R<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 _; u- h5 H% Q  v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 ?4 |5 x( T9 {0 T4 P' g' e<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 B( d% p/ b6 ?- K- H2 w( y+ D7 W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) m3 O/ ?$ ?$ F/ e# S6 \<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  R' ]4 w+ t$ r9 e<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# C6 P8 h1 o+ p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 L: T7 u& |8 O3 D0 {* @' N<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& u; l/ E1 ]% Y/ X% J  `, t: |<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# u* E9 z3 y1 b<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 h" G9 D2 ]- Y: }* N<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: g% ]  j1 T' W9 e1 R9 n! `( M<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, ^7 t  j; t: K0 \<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 r0 B& A" ~# M& G<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, k8 O6 h) {* i$ K5 J! Y( d<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 n& u" _0 b9 l! ~) E<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 U+ p; o) Q) g" V9 E* _' G& W5 ^<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

7 D9 t- p' c; H1 p# _3 b我请你剖开它
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; Y) Z8 k3 H0 \* E4 d 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>