【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" B% }7 a- y; ]/ O7 T8 TThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ V$ j0 P& _. Y7 EThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; J  {) |0 q' m# q: OIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 R" q5 ?3 Y, A7 o/ `! HYou needn’t fear anything
, U3 q( x2 C; C! \% dMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ t1 s+ d4 g9 x8 _* k+ k# b2 T7 KEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) O1 |( ^$ I: h$ s" v( s, fThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
: O+ J0 K5 O, T! s3 j7 a3 K9 @( EI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; P7 _) J% p) E: _* r. v8 i; t/ iI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' n# E' P* W) I% @& f' @5 x( ~I regret not dying
  o. F6 t1 T: P* D+ D7 xI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 T' m- a; Z7 n; u: a( JWith such a tongue as yours,
0 z' r. Y7 f3 S  C3 U% KYour speech can’t even keep up with it
. ^6 z6 Q; u1 a/ ]1 DIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& J+ v$ [% Z5 P7 w/ wRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 {% u) Y9 |0 F9 p<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ z: ]) s4 Z$ }/ p5 E: d" r3 w<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& T' S- t8 X: ?* j% o! t6 b; F<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 _& v* @7 g$ T4 |. S% B<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, F# }: w. \1 z# ^5 I, J<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% U. X! l6 V0 D1 `/ k' ^<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 F2 y; u* l2 u; r3 H( f5 O<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 ^' h0 A* u+ w0 T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 k) A  v! T9 _<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ g: C/ M4 f, ~7 S/ i7 r<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 c1 _; H  i  r. ]% z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- E% X+ p9 A- Y1 X: @0 o8 Y0 _  G7 Z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 Y# K- H) _2 ]: J3 L9 G9 u<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, {0 @, Z& Q4 z& F<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 ]# y( D  ^* ^! ~5 n<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; x# \# I' e. g* A( `: }<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! Z" |; q3 v8 i3 _- M5 Y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: ^9 u7 N9 R9 [5 k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  }& |# k: V% H2 p5 c8 G<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 G  c4 n# p% J' T: b9 }0 j; B' F4 ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 Z3 t4 o- x* ]9 f2 p, V* d7 T<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 J9 ~- c% v, ]" v4 v<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  s# s" Y4 E' \<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 r1 J% m+ _: D9 Q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  `- d6 m% B% B5 V<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: p0 q9 n4 I5 }6 S% B; z! z; K<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ j& P8 E& Z# Q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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: x  ?, {" W! u7 S3 W+ g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>