【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
; e( m# Z  \& ~1 R+ J* a! LThe moonlight is shining brightly,
1 S, y+ a4 O- H5 f8 N3 ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 S' E0 V/ T  e7 k3 d" gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" F+ }6 v& A; \( w; YSeeing the sky content with its love
8 `2 j4 M% C% I# OIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, z: h5 q$ z- v1 oI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 e  x% M3 D& z3 c9 OCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( b5 S& P5 c- _) S$ e3 w0 k* ZThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 V/ c) B5 Y( O* ~6 B2 ]1 oI want so much to see inside your heart
' ^% Q8 W2 g3 R: j0 C7 e; C* @. WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 K2 W9 J3 w8 {6 v! P) XI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% t: }# e# m* b  XI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ j. ]1 f9 Q) Z8 EIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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2 p( S- T  [9 M9 F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% |0 D7 o, Q+ ?7 M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  D) T1 ]. o: Q" U6 N<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! w7 u& z3 t8 d  L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* H, t- W8 k% P6 g7 P1 t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 r5 X! ~+ j) n" ]" n. m<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( |1 \+ m1 b: C/ r9 h  S<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  o- m9 t- A2 J% C<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ l) Z8 l& ~: R' n7 }+ H+ i6 S<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ M! U; g8 {8 U  C5 t9 f( @<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 q) d% m9 |2 B( d: w<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# h+ b. x4 c6 Z: F3 o! `<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 _7 C: T4 ?/ Q( S<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! b2 e5 T' N/ z* x; O' \<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 |; c. E3 ~5 ]$ N4 n<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 J: ^$ }$ r  V- L6 ~* e<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; \# V. b/ ]1 G( E' I  ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 d+ A/ {) f3 C<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 h; e6 X! b  l1 E& q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# b+ V- M; X) w- i) ^0 Z' O- P+ e1 M<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 f. }9 u7 s) m/ {<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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" H/ Y/ C* T+ O: T0 y* y2 t  X 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>