【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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' u5 c0 e8 [5 l; a! W歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 ]" U# [5 n5 g) F9 [2 tThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 c! X4 M' @# n8 k' l' MYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
! A% A. i) w' z0 i# G8 r, @% RI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 e" K+ x$ f$ |0 x, ]Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( _* X; m0 D2 X6 {The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' r( F; h! Y% zI want so much to see inside your heart
' S9 W5 K$ e- g2 N8 m, |) dI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ Z6 a7 P; g' A/ @: q) i1 v% XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
( o3 f, Y6 m7 ]1 a% a2 WI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) z% a% I( m( i+ w6 MYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' D' o9 B. t+ D4 K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; Z5 G1 ]; K5 q$ z0 \; U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 o. G/ [5 y5 Y7 z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 A- `$ C  G/ M5 s2 V: w<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- ]# f1 ]( Y8 t0 d( o" l4 x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. m+ N6 J( i# m0 Q* E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. T4 V, V1 \% b& X# S<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 y' _2 V& ^$ n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ K$ h  S5 ?8 j: B<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# r& S. L  R8 M7 A! g) X<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( {; j4 _) F  R: c. V. ^<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; ~4 l2 Y- k! @/ X8 W; I4 U, f<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ M5 ?; M1 k5 C- `/ t9 x3 Q. v1 j<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, m# w! g: N( [" h& G- @! o<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) \" \8 G5 d8 S$ N: [/ g! N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- [% F& Q* M# Q5 g' e$ m<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. `$ c4 n# c  t: d7 U<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ |! `9 z4 c6 m7 s& n7 n<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" j) R! l$ n8 f$ ^, g( \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ C7 K7 _6 l6 e<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 K  g+ D3 e, C) ^5 R  L" A6 a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% t! ^" p/ M4 J& f8 B* r! a1 l<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# ?1 l. o6 C# x+ H0 G* i8 g<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ N0 z1 N6 \/ ~, S8 P* Z% I<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 k; H/ m  v5 @: \2 @; L: |<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 ?3 |& f) v7 u6 \' Z6 g<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) K1 ^8 e' h& K8 g; Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 R: y; I8 W1 P4 p<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 v( T* d" Z  }4 G  X<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

* K( I& B* Q2 S( J  _ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>