【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
: r' l4 n) ^! T, P& ]7 lThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! N) u( U" y& y: YThe sky is happy down to its soul
, g1 j* K1 m3 }( R+ `( }0 QWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) s( f/ m! {2 w* `You needn’t fear anything
4 l8 O# K1 N; ?5 mMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" U! M+ `! S, {9 t+ A5 gEvery other word you utter is love
% e- u0 a- O4 Y0 g5 F$ PI really want to know just how much you love me
3 W& p( A/ F# O* o- Z$ p9 `1 mI love you I love you with all my heart
, l' q8 s4 g# g: Q; [Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 h% t9 ^5 P$ F" N! ]I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 ^+ e% R, H' I. q  O: o/ Q$ oI’m still filled with fear
6 J! G3 U- n' y0 k7 R( q9 |Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( E+ j& o' g! W  j* v% dRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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7 `, P9 X9 \4 ?* m. y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% @( Y" p  e2 ?, x2 l3 C; V- |) R<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 o8 k* K2 t  E. }+ |; M, C; e<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 u' x, Y$ t% S( q# F4 q  r( \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( L: f8 ?5 _7 s! v<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" w3 r4 X% O5 i( s: }<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 l6 C. |% G" v% D7 A- g9 y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 W% v( n  ]$ X& l, A3 Q, [<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) F  @3 R% F$ S, I! {# g) r# x% r0 n<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 W; l& i4 A7 |1 f8 v1 s<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 A2 T! n  w& g, g4 w& W# b<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  }+ X# e% |$ Z) F<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* X/ S& a0 q# p7 w3 V, Q" k- }/ z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) o( G- `& I( E4 T- z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  H- n& m6 R9 w. G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% I  |5 ?& z8 F) S8 w; \<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 G6 U# F  h+ V; b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" L0 d3 s" \; ?4 J; |; Y" w) }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ N6 {1 a; \& H  [4 y4 M<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; }. G# d* E# D' g<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 E8 c# j3 d! d) Q& g+ w<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 i- B' G1 ~% r8 Y9 f6 }0 ~<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 g7 v: s* {9 A9 j( t' p5 G8 @$ d% P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( @4 F% y, |. J& e<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* {! ?3 T; ^- G; I! a$ }8 R<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- X' l5 ~; e! v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; i. e/ j8 n/ n1 `6 ~<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& _/ g  {( z$ `+ b# d* w2 }<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ i1 ]2 m8 q9 s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>