【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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9 W+ @" B2 D# y+ A/ ?" C5 }歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  m9 n. Z% h; \. aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 j# N- o$ P8 ]The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# \5 U+ W9 `" _' q; f, PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" b0 ?$ g0 `8 eEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 Z: L" l+ m  X3 r% K2 n9 aI love you I love you with all my heart
) [5 v  }6 F; p; u8 V  kNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 j2 ?- y9 M9 `. B: K+ ]The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ N+ d1 M# q; T% F! ^  I+ fI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! _" a- n) U4 c! g" SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
- U& _- H1 `( EI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" r0 Z5 _  R8 l8 r, y, rIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& J- f) R( o4 r- Y. E' G  B<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 y6 X9 l- h! S<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% |$ ?5 v+ Z: O4 b9 G8 f, `, I" m<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 W1 s# K0 s, W4 v8 X) Y3 Y% {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  k& I: B7 T' w<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  G* N4 i6 f2 r8 p9 I0 u<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ ^4 a7 R. f6 z6 m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# d3 M4 P7 k# t6 [" T0 f<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 {4 @* g1 N& n" U/ X6 M& E<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ E- E- M) L  ?. `- `! _<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 d# h& m, X% P* d& U2 q<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 ]: e4 X: X: h; A% q) |' f<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) p) R1 n1 `7 q7 T/ I% n3 b5 F<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 \7 ^: i1 q& H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 h% f2 }3 p; T3 x" J3 q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 h2 K5 }+ p) Z3 F9 ^3 |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 K; {' S- p0 v) L# d; i- C3 j<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( Y# C+ k) S) f* c' @/ Z" ~<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: U6 l! Q, H5 c" S4 e6 [! G+ J<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! z" v+ Q1 t$ F5 Y& K9 U. \4 h' k. ]<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 Y3 \6 ~5 t( u1 Y7 |* i9 e# D<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  r5 ~/ O% U6 T: r2 A' T<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" C; n: Y& j  H# t; e$ o<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& u) g4 |! c, |% V* b& `& T5 F<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; v% E, |% q8 ^3 Y2 l<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 o  C  r3 F) l" y' @<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! o: p! Q) V; V, ^# {% _& ?<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ F7 n7 u- X' [* Y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. w6 v  N! R1 n2 H<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- M+ Z% K7 n  A7 L0 \& T* x<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 t7 v! B% g! ~0 s) |2 q+ i+ M<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! F5 S# i- p! T7 P. n0 B<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 }5 K; R% V1 h1 V  E& h<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 q8 f. m; h+ r; t; K5 W$ k<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 R) y' b& U; `' w; J8 U7 u<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

, q% _$ Y! T% M) v* V# Q$ M我请你剖开它

5 G: L5 K# J& n- e+ j, S" R 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>