【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
/ f  |' z0 S8 n" q: h$ l/ rThe moonlight is shining brightly,
4 K& \$ ^8 I/ {5 i1 P8 f% yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 s9 \: l3 F. d' E* r( j  d! hWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 ^( }. _$ l' U" J0 MWith the moon kissing it every night
/ e  ^8 O9 L/ p. V' ]0 d- tSeeing the sky content with its love
1 ]  }# N  K( v. X  E+ lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ s$ T& ]9 B5 J# w8 {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" G& P7 ?$ K+ }% ~5 {The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ p/ V7 I: \" ?9 lI regret not dying
$ n. Y7 y, q" l5 t# {) YI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ }, Y4 U) Q7 U2 G" nWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ Y" D8 c3 U7 S& W/ zRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 h, w5 g5 Y0 t; l' b" M& H" o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; E  {# F1 J9 g7 E& B<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 \& v8 s1 w$ K* X* |+ q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" Z/ w- q0 ]6 \5 E5 a<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 S9 F2 V0 ~3 k2 |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% }* b6 B% }- ?  }* [+ T+ d& C<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% J: A( e, T  V8 v! ?<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 Z/ j3 K' [- c. V$ C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 I& H/ `3 S8 \2 \& N6 w<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 I' U% S, j; t<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) s/ P4 ]- E6 ?# B  G<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 n/ b6 N8 I+ {* Q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* y* `2 z1 G% ?( u/ o1 I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) c0 p: m7 R% `6 B; S<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- S6 {9 D+ L# N" x& q" l1 _<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: H( c8 b3 G/ A% h5 s) v4 I, g<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 [' p. ^. T) w<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' F9 F$ y0 W. `8 S: K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 p9 o9 x) A  V0 b5 t) v<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! T: U$ ~4 S9 _1 k7 T( x<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 R  h, c# f6 g7 E<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 e. Y2 @% N/ I% E+ z0 Z. X# b9 t, y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: I  ?. ~' k( p<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 B, v( s" z0 m; b( p% v2 e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* p& i, Z0 n$ R" f, M3 O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 i* ^5 R- e7 j) Y( z" v. S, e) D<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>