【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
) ~* z, V  c/ F; W' K! kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
7 n% R/ c# Y+ ]- _Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 z' |. G: J0 [  p8 hWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 T5 v' R1 O9 G4 X  z7 y- wThe sky is happy down to its soul
4 r; |) ~7 O: hWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% L% I! e6 k  gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
+ B. A5 c% [+ ]( KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% S& Z" d- d, Q. p% R; }; HI really want to know just how much you love me
$ _- Z+ i* v* I# a/ r9 eI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 }% W1 c6 [+ B( RI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 ]7 e% o! @  t! ?# ?2 Y$ vI regret not dying
# m  E" S/ O; a+ {- Y( [6 OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ z6 s+ T, s, ZWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ c- f+ H* _- v( b5 KIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( U: j" T% z; L2 s( I<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 \- a/ d/ Z' n6 U+ Y, g4 k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ E% {% Q/ y# r6 ?3 J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( T* i1 z9 o3 [$ A3 E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) @, J2 g, o, d1 l: y/ Z# Y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 F/ y% @  }9 ]* A; G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" \9 {! C0 i* C+ I# F! Y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 R& T  W0 M2 v+ E3 H5 I) v: o<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 F6 R! k9 R# y: y<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 r( y, N, m6 W, f6 ?<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( G% T0 p9 }- E- {8 e5 k<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ @1 x) \5 T& Z5 Q4 ]<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 H/ n; F5 k; h, r# ]* o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' \4 _( s1 i; a, g6 j0 T9 Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' y- Q+ Y, u- C! y0 i<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* V: \" G3 W& s/ |<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 W8 }# @. g  ]9 A<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! p, P8 e: Z; b( j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 F& w/ X$ o/ P" q% y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ u+ j. {: F' W) _5 D; B! [<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) }+ `/ Z: B/ h<P>I regret not dying</P>
, E: s% n8 s! a$ x<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 O% B2 ?. i8 W( k<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 t7 d1 ?9 l! L2 L8 C7 q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ q0 L; f! s, b5 J6 @& o<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 H5 O7 \4 v" d<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 ]/ }; r6 Z& l<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( y' b2 ]% k5 j3 o& U% i( M- `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 i$ }1 z7 t* B6 r<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

9 R7 J  e% k2 I3 h' }0 j 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>