【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
0 W1 x* |1 K+ T/ RMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; y3 s' e& X6 m$ h# RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
. F4 u; n: a% X5 U3 q) e3 z: ^# vWith the moon kissing it every night
$ k& S* p! ^* z! ]! SSeeing the sky content with its love
$ ~5 v$ b) a# m1 RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 [1 `( o7 k$ W- U" t1 g* ]* |Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 l1 P; a+ o% R7 }/ i7 j6 ?I love you I love you with all my heart
" t9 S: N" m" y6 e2 n  h" \, U3 VNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& i5 X  ^( ^5 S9 J$ A- p& WThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 D, Z( l) o5 }I’m still filled with fear
9 O' o( s3 \8 X' T* ^- |Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& @/ @* R* y8 i6 B3 tI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
. ?. Q, y4 X* ^. }1 JYour speech can’t even keep up with it
- t( d1 y" L8 Y4 _) GIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, d. X& t2 d) D3 g4 K% l7 NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; s# H+ z0 L. T4 @2 D<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  X8 d9 F" U* o; ^<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% U" O! V$ l4 V2 r/ u8 f) ]; _<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 p9 V* u: [/ v4 `! l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 |" c9 z: D$ ^, I: {9 i0 O+ M<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 K& W0 _( z. C7 Y  V5 I<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ ~" Z3 M; F0 ]1 x+ f% m8 Z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: P+ R7 @  ?) |# ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! i2 e# e2 H7 F, {: S5 F" @7 @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' l# D! F$ j- U* W1 M( Q<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# A, T( G: z: m  Y& D& [2 ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 W5 L1 ?$ d- A- M4 }" C+ Q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& h7 R: l0 r' N: F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# h% Q3 [& {& @+ z" I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 I& f- z# o! ]6 M3 V: O<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, v+ y( E3 a/ @  o$ w, F<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* ^6 o) `/ ^; [' }! S% D7 ^* E" A1 M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" o  r) B& D5 d+ ]" O<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; t" {- Z8 e0 k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" z9 |5 `$ z8 z4 M<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ g( Y* r( U: C; y1 w( q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# p  o$ F4 m- ^9 m* Z+ n$ e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' n% i* L9 [3 w% o% |<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ x" Z0 c  R9 |5 Q; `, |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 Y9 A8 t' O' h( R1 i<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

; w. ]" {3 n% v& Y我请你剖开它

/ t; g- y! U: e5 t/ x0 ` 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) p& Q% m% t! D  U  A# F/ D$ i. W<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>