【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
1 Z5 E& B, R& {8 m* SThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
- k/ H( D/ @5 c1 z' |- o  I: SWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" K+ o1 s* d. F( ~The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% e* m2 O" Q# e' p) T! U9 DThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 ?. C2 H; _  E4 X7 aWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 t: N& Z' }8 `7 o) q+ lYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! }% @4 U, A# p% _% CEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
1 x& m) k$ Z; xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. O$ O7 N/ b* i; B; t. kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 C* d1 `' j% n- \; u7 H% dI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 {3 R) K4 Q) W, n* b8 I8 G) O4 AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* n( l7 j: D, {I regret not dying
* |+ H) S# y& h' @* c) E' a+ L. z6 aI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, b5 v1 f4 v+ g8 ?2 J4 AWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; C1 {" T9 d1 {# a, |If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, {: o1 C; w8 [<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 q8 x1 T% u* ?/ X# r9 O. {9 R0 f<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 e# U4 c- X+ q8 T+ u<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 }$ e4 y, N. @  a  Z2 o& g: }/ M: y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 m5 M1 ]' b5 x$ I  m% p4 j<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 ^: J# q& m0 G+ S2 ]5 o& J" ]<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  R' K. y: e  S5 Q6 Y& c' l9 D5 G0 g<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& |$ C2 P! z: @% e& `4 f* k" F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) w5 `) P0 A# G' n<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" R7 h# K$ x2 m1 x" k% ]<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( ^) B# A4 r1 m<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 w1 g4 i4 V( m8 I* R7 O<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* W9 U. J; r3 i0 f" z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; I( p+ U8 w+ Y6 d; w# N. |6 \<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! q0 a5 T8 y5 T% _# m+ @<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! {7 c5 h2 h( i<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 A* z  E4 P, k" ~<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) o/ m% z6 O9 ^' m<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 j3 C8 H1 Q  P; y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 Q) h6 ?1 L& o+ [/ ?0 q$ Z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! Q  T  J* _! D1 W, z; u( l! ]9 K<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>