【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' T6 {, w5 R& ?4 s' BMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 G4 F0 M8 Z3 u' L4 d1 @) ]+ }  bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. a) f/ i1 y0 M" fThe sky is happy down to its soul
4 y( ~% ^! t# X& m7 V+ UWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 d% z/ C8 D/ J7 q; t; DIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 P1 @- N5 u. V9 YYou needn’t fear anything
5 ?9 ?- O) Z$ s4 u8 x: Y5 ZMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
1 G, z  w5 \; F, tI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( V8 b  r9 ^5 x7 ?! ENothing can compare to my love
  C! |5 Z- X8 y: M, c. t  g# rCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: ^% [  P" G6 }* kI’m still filled with fear
! W% @! z" `& ]3 K7 u: b) }1 bYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 k2 r( F% X2 U, AIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' }- r0 s. V. l$ k8 z9 J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 }2 p5 e: a; r3 J8 j6 Z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  v/ A+ T; v- k& n1 ^<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  m: j$ M9 {" X- i: t( [+ m<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 u% L3 u% K7 V3 W<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 V# T+ R6 O3 c! `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 n4 G; ]: V" m$ ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- M) Z0 b2 u; H$ f  s6 v<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ j. g+ q( }2 k0 c<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 Q7 X. [! c2 l0 J1 {0 J<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' a8 Z# B5 X* d% \; h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 [8 K2 Z& [8 W7 }9 L. S4 p<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- A% j7 a) j% Z6 a1 ^<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ L8 w4 s1 L7 D) @1 X  ]4 D5 p- o; [<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 W! |! N1 U  m& u) G<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 k- J6 l" q; Z8 Y# Z1 m<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! `/ [8 b4 R2 k1 _<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: l- T- B, X1 x' V- `, N<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 h$ W3 a/ R9 Q; M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 ~! k- h; e. ^3 q; J/ `5 |: A<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ G. X) ]1 T) y/ q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, o- C1 c0 }" s7 Z: x0 W3 k' e<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 U1 {& I4 q7 `) g; `: b, n8 M<P>I regret not dying</P>
: k3 I" E3 ?; ]7 b# [<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 b' b6 `0 w+ L9 S  s) r<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& t9 A+ h) Z* Z- m<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 G  i% s9 C& Z, @- |<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 V4 N- Z$ G, J/ |6 V<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ x+ U/ T. f! [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 W0 i8 ~) C0 N5 R<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; G% b" Z& O# u7 |. P7 D<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 E1 g, z5 t. K1 T9 ?) X3 I<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>