【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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, C5 E1 A" d* O- M: ~7 L2 k2 l$ h& c歌词我附在后面。
4 P: A2 a$ `! e5 y/ s8 AThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 i0 A6 d% v' ^+ `# q# L) t0 ~The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% ^9 [5 Z5 i: c. ~  C* E7 y% ^It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: V0 v# ~" r% p2 G( U- S  JYou needn’t fear anything
/ k+ N9 T, K+ @1 Z8 c& K: wMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
6 o0 t. S4 q* e% ]) l. s9 ]- hI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 L0 I5 ~3 G% d# xThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
& \0 `( @- _# M7 P7 W" {I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: G4 i5 v+ j* h1 Y7 d: O$ sYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  o/ }& [; q, M2 P: j+ B4 J& \I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 ~# T! J# j/ y# VWith such a tongue as yours,
/ \" X* L! ~/ ]6 e) |, p# ]Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# _5 e% V4 T3 }8 g. ~<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 p! I; B- K  g/ g! `<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' a' ~# p# p9 }! `* `/ e4 k4 T3 I  |4 B<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 b# h4 k. ]5 r+ r6 h6 p<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 w  i* @4 X8 F3 j6 Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 L% J! \1 @# j5 [9 F7 ?5 o8 H<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- G' s9 g0 r- E6 G9 f<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- T# L/ z; M$ w" w* f<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 k5 S' M3 T" r1 d! w( _<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# c. S1 `- A8 @<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 V" p5 Y1 ^: W- b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ {4 M! U3 R  ~$ j2 J$ P<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. `4 ^  q5 n6 t& l1 Y7 M<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* a( i6 E" {( @$ P/ Q% {<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ ~; @) z, E  |: e8 |5 ?: T<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' A( S- q& W3 R% K) {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, S' S; {4 ]& T: T% s' g; e2 a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 X* w; Q' x; w$ _<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' _! J; @6 z7 F. j( H<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ a! {) `! b: K4 G/ n<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 |) S9 j; }3 u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  @! D' @! z/ B3 y3 v* J<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 ~3 h8 K+ V+ J( D3 e<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

) @; [9 S( h4 g% r我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>