【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
- X/ h# P- d& {% O/ I) uMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 R& N" {. n8 P8 wWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) ^+ F- L  J! j5 q) SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 m( k# s, T0 t) Y  XWith the moon kissing it every night
' O- _- Y, v- tSeeing the sky content with its love
/ e( W* D! ]. o5 ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* f) n3 p$ c# j' t; fYou needn’t fear anything
1 j" \3 q6 V: k) p" i/ EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" m9 V( |2 W- w( m7 }4 l- j' G, FEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
' Y$ w0 ^1 u; v# U- V$ Y. j, TNothing can compare to my love
6 p# L- E4 m# H. ^1 hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ w2 R3 v5 v& O. ^& X9 d9 a' ^7 ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" q, ~! i* L, x5 W9 uI want so much to see inside your heart
( W9 A! R2 E- B4 g7 m% d- n3 DI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. q- l% R' m( z8 Z9 t* d* ^$ Q/ JI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 t& X4 v# s" d7 I# ]6 a9 ZYour speech can’t even keep up with it
! I, T" ]* s, ~# NIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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/ @" H- l, N6 G5 t7 I- p/ T. O$ S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 ^- n( L. {2 r) A) \& O<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 q7 I$ K) z2 N9 h<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ x2 q9 z, c$ |! _/ H- M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: r, M, ^# @' r8 l2 ]" E+ H. @. }3 R<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, h& n7 C  s( G* [5 v5 M+ V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 w1 h& C6 S8 }<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 ]* H, F% |3 h( e3 j6 m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 a& H2 u9 n9 c+ u# E5 ^<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, N6 Q! G' C, _  I<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* f( J/ a& z& ~: _6 S( ]1 u5 ]<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 ^7 ~( ]# X1 p3 A<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" S# |% [( u9 I6 `$ n<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# Y' g! j. }( u1 ^& B" z: E3 i  E<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 L2 Z8 |3 ^$ z9 n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 Z9 S: E7 T; o" }- A/ G4 |1 O<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! e  b1 {/ F& i- ?<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, y  ?+ l! Z* [9 G/ L" @! ~7 T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 y" n# o( {- h<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) ]9 a6 p& i7 e! {0 x<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( }: l3 {; o3 K3 S- L, b. W8 `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, z# O9 X& n8 V- D5 D  g' X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 C) n1 x3 h1 @4 B7 d0 P8 ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- ?+ g& V8 h) R" ?8 b% K<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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