【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
! n2 X& d3 R% _: h$ ~7 NThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- b: W! q9 t1 @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ r7 B+ @$ V+ u) i- eThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* Q7 g8 m& J( ]- F$ z% Q% [You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 K. b6 U9 E7 c0 cEvery other word you utter is love
7 U6 k7 a; ]" \+ @) rI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
6 d( V$ K: N! @9 \4 E% ~Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ E1 @$ ^/ c1 I! S2 {I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; z" p( ]; \' p# E0 oI regret not dying
  h, S  J' I  l- y% M) {I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 y& V7 _% W% ?, j4 `7 Y! n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  ?9 _) n* q+ x<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# M7 v1 t3 x4 ?5 H5 D! z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ {/ ?% K# l4 {& X/ x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, O3 K/ p% ]+ g. a6 o* ?- [<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
5 `3 H! Q, N. l! s<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, {+ J, p- r4 `<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ `, @9 m$ U/ _  H3 Y; {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 p. R% N# M: B; W3 Z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 W* a3 i% ~6 T% t! N2 O- p<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 S6 n% w! Z" r: o<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 @* O4 r. b4 G. r0 e. s<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, i- b7 V6 F* v; e8 s9 A1 {+ G* o* w" j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ B+ V! x! `/ M; K9 s! C; d4 d<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- p" P% M- B- \6 L1 E/ q; |<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; w1 D, }$ o: Z1 K+ ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  }$ T* y  r& H9 P<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. h" F! w) s* y. V! K3 V4 n# y' t<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, b1 R! P7 o' ~% E5 s<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* [) V: O" K2 f% E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( D) K8 q+ |! _, j8 l; h- r; ^$ m/ X: p<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. k/ M/ a. }4 U1 m& \7 u<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- ]% G  K2 J% D) J( ^<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ c) T, `# n: A! [9 `5 C3 c<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 B) [& t* \5 y7 j<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>