【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
) N& t: R/ g1 j+ ?% KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 ?3 A, p9 g/ w9 Q& `' u. CWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 }' D8 t5 J* @5 J  KWith the moon kissing it every night
, A+ [- Y- q! d' Z# \3 HSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 a! ~; d0 R& I5 Q/ v. @7 aYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% X/ e; h; A) [Every other word you utter is love
- g' M3 [# x" R' e! }I really want to know just how much you love me
/ p" I8 m5 n6 Y* j* H/ ?. L6 AI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 `5 c, F/ u) o4 E& QCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 G1 f! }% J$ b. o" E8 hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  |* t# r" T  j$ \2 T7 KI want so much to see inside your heart
  t! o6 I" F9 b5 Y! P$ TI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
& G, Q% T% w3 U# v1 v7 NYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 w. y( G* L8 d$ Q2 }; e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: Q9 Y9 u7 \4 C' T2 h<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, x. L, Q# u( }" M  d% V) r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* h7 _) T  Q6 r  j- c<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 t9 n: E2 t' e3 @$ f<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: P" R% P# k2 w. ~<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* Q8 k5 h% T6 m7 x$ u% H/ m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: I1 G6 Z/ y" k  a  t/ s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 `* u. }8 A! ]3 q# s<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 E1 Y/ L/ _/ F+ D7 K7 R* R<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 B6 ~, t% M! t. K/ H" o) r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; D( Q+ t. t0 M- [<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 r: _* E' w* }3 ^+ \<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 I* W% f& ?3 F; e7 Y; a9 O<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 b) G* T0 h6 O" e! t* t- L- ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 l* S1 `0 v" Y, ~" g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( i, i6 \8 P6 @+ q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' T8 R- u2 \% x/ T8 n8 K, Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: @: ]/ N% p3 M1 C<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: X, y) _, i0 r" N7 P4 m<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 l1 a% T9 ^6 S8 y7 m( W; Z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  g+ J9 C: w- u" h& n6 ]<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, c/ s% t: p' [4 y3 g$ d, H* @8 i3 m<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. @4 T; ?5 e* L  O& ~$ D<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. i; I0 F2 h1 \6 B! v$ ?8 Q6 N<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, u6 H$ J$ u2 Y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 d: ?8 x: N7 f: I& D<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>