【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* M0 K5 ^, G* q/ ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 p8 K+ U4 V; C! T5 WWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 [( h' o$ N2 u5 ?* K8 \6 z  {The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- K; |6 _$ I) g% D3 g; m9 }The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
% S: ~- p* O& V- R! `. jSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ x2 p, U, w+ ^& B' x" \. S; KYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  c) V$ r$ n  |$ D7 T0 pEvery other word you utter is love
4 c5 V- _4 T( H. c$ lI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
+ r  r: T: E% j/ d) `+ X; k' PNothing can compare to my love
8 `2 c7 o. E- ~- P4 g8 ^: WCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) a$ T$ X: `/ c7 G, J6 t! J7 y- TThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& v& p0 a- N7 rI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& o) h" z8 t. f: |0 I( Q, e, qI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 z& Q0 j) e# {I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 f' d7 j. ~& [With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; @6 k) f  S5 WIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 `! |0 M: B8 N( w7 V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- q# O6 b: a( p& f0 K3 x/ J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 L% k; I5 E" l9 T% a1 c<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% @+ D6 i1 f+ r- Z* H<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 ~1 Y8 W' u0 b/ D, d5 r1 R<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- p1 q* T! |8 Z+ o<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ T2 V* Q  l! E, I! d) u<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 w" @& ^, J% z' }' G- J& I" y$ }<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 L5 G) p7 S+ A) J8 _<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% ~! P. i, I  H" W! h5 M4 Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" x6 @$ w9 w. D/ N9 }  X8 L& n<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 F1 H+ L& _0 I) b# H0 ~<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; G2 g9 \  H  i" o+ _6 C3 b; W' a<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; j: Z) x5 H3 F" C- o2 \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. P- ~/ ?* F' P9 F<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 k% q% u4 }4 S' Y; I/ V<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  E/ S" _. H; Y( _8 B# @<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 i* `! G0 p, Y0 m4 E  L' r<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 x7 j) k: s% i4 V<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" a3 _# |% A. W' ^2 ]6 ?; E; \- z4 ]<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: ?* i1 |* y8 u( l0 o, U2 b" I! V4 B3 M  h<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 i! F" g0 y. T2 W<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 l3 O! f' L7 ^# z" p9 {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% U8 L. m0 V' l! \! b<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ K4 j# @( T* D# y) }' X' Y( x<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! e- o" Z8 f& |, W0 I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  v3 D$ W+ R0 r- N# a3 z) k% S<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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% ], T+ A* A+ l. I9 m" {. s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>