【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
/ Q2 \; b! @4 ^( H, \  n9 a- ?The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ L& h* ]" D. JMaking the sky glitter like gold,
. |5 q, c5 p+ k, h! OWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 {4 K+ r* \/ ?" S$ O, xThe sky is happy down to its soul
; h* D/ N5 T/ J, U# wWith the moon kissing it every night
5 `' m5 K( V# Q* RSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
1 j8 @( |! ]) ]: F1 _$ @/ G5 JMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! N3 _+ u; c% N% ~: [' C7 REvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" W6 f6 k! [! G( G/ V# hNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 [- x0 ~) o  G+ ?( S- II want so much to see inside your heart
: I( T1 c# s# ?1 e0 VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
8 [2 S* i  P% c/ Z8 j" c! DYour speech can’t even keep up with it
6 N7 ^) t+ G$ g5 FIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

+ w: O9 u9 ]- u% z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% C$ N" {. y+ s<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ z+ ~5 o3 J! x7 P0 [0 P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 i) ^  w" V  n! p  m4 K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 k! P" \2 k: l; u" x2 y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( h4 h1 m% x- L- d) M) z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ ^) O! f- [( b: \<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 g; g$ C1 C: e" n, x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& m: m& l' D  K<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ G. V* g) N- d. _$ ^6 j, U<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* D7 j& J# Y( `/ J9 U3 ~<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& b8 b) e7 Y4 Z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 R, j8 a6 i; S/ h3 B6 O$ A( E<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# l" b- [$ i# a7 U6 X4 t& ]<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( ]( Y) [, h$ T7 ~6 e8 O& B, }<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ m8 _9 V8 d: P' r" @<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% d4 w* u3 X$ V3 m5 i6 }<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 c) ]  }. ?# w  v7 F<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( @: }3 I" ]4 X0 c" R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' j( l0 `" T9 c  W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- S# g3 i4 \4 J& F<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ ^8 g- J' R: d. r3 |5 W0 \. |: A<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" V! E+ x. S9 J9 ]) A/ Y( X* @<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) v* H# Y4 _7 I/ c8 r) Z# q9 k<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& ^' y# y3 x! \0 G/ S1 ^& ?<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 e9 D, q1 q; g<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 y7 ^: h, z, ]; @  V) h7 Q, G<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ t# K9 y" S2 D* }' l: \" Q& t2 _- g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ @" s3 r! V0 W) B6 _<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' r3 V5 M5 O3 {8 N% Z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 C- p" r/ M4 G2 R- |, [, {<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
( k2 }7 k3 y+ u6 z5 ~% E) y
/ F7 X5 \' r7 \, ]1 T3 a4 { 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( \) {+ I. x! Z2 S1 }3 }+ J9 A% p<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>