【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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0 c9 i" S9 d1 `: C$ t* W) lThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 w6 ?1 E' @0 z! ~! p( g! lWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 c6 }. T4 ?- k- g4 f: _The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
% ~* R5 w5 v4 eNothing can compare to my love
+ t, z* o2 I6 J  d3 ?$ yCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: k& X1 h3 ?" i# l& UThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
$ E1 m; Z- |( @5 S: ZI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 F, m2 B% C: II regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 C" [; f% ^' U4 P( ^; b! uWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. A7 g: L, k+ h3 P0 f5 {1 ?Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 m5 m: U8 K/ {  Y1 [<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 c- p3 K3 N* _: G5 Y7 K<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' g0 f/ W6 e9 `+ _8 t/ k" c/ t<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& _4 l1 f  j2 E. b. r9 X<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# f+ h' K6 u' I9 l  L0 `8 t, @6 D<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. D0 |, K- v& @: ]& r  v6 I/ ~+ F6 n<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 I, [# O/ M, c# h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 E* U; `& l" G% g8 y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 I2 Q9 ~5 p% s# ?; e2 x" q<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ B+ [$ V( D9 @" S9 {7 K<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ `. D( Z; b! E. z4 V% ~' O8 F<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% i! K1 ]3 v: ]! H0 i4 ?+ i<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 x9 z) h& m0 C/ h/ u8 g<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# u, u& C* {6 N. \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* q$ F8 `" W, w/ }( @, I9 l9 Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; Y. Q! ]9 l, I: ?3 }* U<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* t# [8 b8 j: R, c( a: p9 U# G<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# z1 P' V0 B7 j# [& m<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- c( |# N# d9 p2 C$ u: M6 w$ V4 r# T<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; h* n8 B2 z( r1 t% N<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 ?! _4 n" A  d/ V; i0 H<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 K) A* U  F7 x<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 _6 ?) M8 v$ _/ P" Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' s& m9 R. R& ]5 H. C9 G<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 b; h- o( a8 A5 o  [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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2 P6 X, z5 T3 b& b9 k 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>