【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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/ K. v6 e6 W- s0 p' G% {, k. ?歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, \$ n, P3 ^1 {! g: R5 ]/ T  J- uMaking the sky glitter like gold,
5 L# i4 W" j* `% NWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' N. o; U6 f& W( S" yThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( p; k( x% F; e; ~* y, Z2 G# fWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
+ h, B' s  x) @( l, {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: {9 D& H# o9 p9 e3 WEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
& L9 V0 C9 C2 mNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% n, \2 T* p4 B6 X, lThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
2 R; b+ _- ?' \& V- @I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' J: C/ S% p) M+ L7 \/ ^I’m still filled with fear
+ `1 ?3 i7 I% W. j" fYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# t! Q! r5 P9 F7 v  k' {& TI regret not dying
8 @# @) \# u/ S4 F" ^- eI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 H% ?  q  u7 d7 N1 R- D( tYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* O9 a7 ]0 g: R7 p1 f) X# V0 c  {3 QRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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0 o3 ~$ n8 [2 N<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ S+ j, _" m" R<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ B+ B5 a4 V; |$ V( T<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 x. p. }! d! s, [- |6 p<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% j! P: r& W3 _; L/ G$ u) V( l8 P<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: j8 h! w2 d" V% x3 v$ I( ?<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. {" G3 \6 ?" C1 ~2 w5 B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  a2 C+ R& h8 z6 G: x<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! P" Q- l. @( R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 d9 y$ Q6 r, D* z. i4 b8 y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 @7 c1 y" c1 m; E, R6 V3 {/ e$ A/ j, g<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 D$ S0 `" G6 G" M7 r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- j4 @. F; s" j4 n' V" t<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 V' J, X) h; d/ j5 D; ?<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 J* {' T! E4 |5 x. f<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; e6 l- R* A$ |3 C<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" g" q# r( A4 |# u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, u: e4 q0 z, C<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 B' ], K7 ]4 r8 X* b. |' @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! o1 J! A# ?9 }5 h* ?5 J- G' X<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 G8 S7 R' k* A: f5 v. B6 Z. g<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 |- j( k. j8 P- u6 k' c1 l<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- f& I7 Z7 D: Q+ y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ Y4 J# h, ?  R<P>I regret not dying</P>
. S. {) K+ _1 P- g; i<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- Z3 \& Y% A+ J5 o7 Y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  g* l5 s6 Y: I- X; c<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ Y! D, Z# Q1 r0 \! _; i1 i) v<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ n5 T9 U2 ?) o0 F' q& m<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ t: M4 ?: X4 M- z' m- _. T9 c<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 `  i$ D9 n) y1 Q) ~" ^<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 S  r& }1 n1 ~, o! U1 K<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 C" B5 p" M# h; y( [<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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6 f; [) a8 u' q+ v7 P. W% ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 O9 r/ C* t$ T) O: c$ I% `<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>