【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
9 h! K3 @6 _: v. n, J! B1 E' ?When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& p; Z% |* ]' X# pThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 l$ V) K6 I' t4 W! @3 lMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" C; w' x* Y' t7 t& SEvery other word you utter is love
; p  w- r3 E+ n/ @% J' zI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
) Y( A# z0 u8 r$ {9 S& NNothing can compare to my love
; _) L; N3 E! C, G9 lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 d; G) ~$ f1 H' H+ iI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 G% v9 b% H" p  x" |! d& vI’m still filled with fear
" |" z: u- A: e  gYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ x4 o- l1 }( {% E  hWith such a tongue as yours,
- R4 _. R+ S/ pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
. L$ X& `- l, I% g  D* EIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 R4 B) |/ R- w5 S- URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% n: a( g* e% K<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! j7 x* }2 h# @<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( K% O  ?1 w! u. q* ?1 `3 n) X6 p; D<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, `6 n1 }6 g+ P- W0 T<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 D% X3 L) r6 \7 _9 {<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ n8 T: p- ]& B& z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: n& P& n- v% K: a0 c. r; L<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 j' |3 c( i# Q% U# P<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 `4 x7 \6 S* o# y% d<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- B/ H# f- }2 F- G( _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) H9 T: I2 H. D  v' G& k1 G<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* s. p' k$ T/ v; e9 T<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) h, a2 `1 M, ]* ~: y, I! a<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* q2 q) n  @) [- k# o" W  Y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 g2 a& D1 y+ e: H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% D: X. Y) g( D# ]<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 K4 d( |6 v0 |9 m, r<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: J& U: B) O, l& e$ H<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; K0 E* ]2 }( `% X, }<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 s% |+ s1 J) Q( Z. W3 D8 n3 b/ N<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* N- r6 V1 }- o* m<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 P. e. P8 R" [9 ~! b& m' T<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
* T2 O: }( I8 U# K2 G# q! o<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ q# x6 o% d. r; P3 [6 d<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! E- |4 c. _" \5 {# o% P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>