【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ t3 N% b% f% o  O" C; UThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! O2 X# g3 M  _2 o+ w( A' H( T  pWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' H1 \( f5 t: x- \+ ~% q& IYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# d# u  n6 P( O" }0 AEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% {9 t! ]' u. {7 K& gI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ e/ l4 [% E# o$ zThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) u, ]' B, z6 I: `6 uWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- a' i6 }$ F6 cRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ F& C" V! ~' M+ W- H. ~; q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 n5 {1 T* K- Z" \; r7 q# S<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 k: _$ U; g/ [- `# q+ `; h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ j% n6 ~' Y6 {& c6 K<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 W$ v- n$ m& _<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, B5 C* t' h( _) Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ A4 K0 T, B  H1 f! g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; d+ K- K( b1 S- y3 Z" f% J! g8 W<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, v, ?0 L: {1 h' Q- c<P>你无需担心</P>
) h; b8 Q2 \; T4 X<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 m$ x, }$ l5 ^9 E. |: k* p  K<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) ^7 Y, y4 d# R) j- V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 ^, ^9 V8 |3 X: ~( W# u; Q9 h% Z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: e0 k/ }$ z) J% M) U: j) J  D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 p0 z% K6 G% W8 b  B<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" p1 z3 i' a* s+ |/ Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: u6 E/ x0 v: L4 N- @# D$ S<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. f# H/ I  E' u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) f1 L% u+ S8 T' U5 a% H# Y' `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, B7 G' o- t  k  ^$ j0 b<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 {7 G8 i  }: d/ r<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; ^0 [$ F5 ?  t( U6 B. R) c<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# c3 z: U- ~4 M3 A+ a1 k9 k<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 [; r0 D) \: s% A2 g* S. P<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, a5 a6 T) q( E1 c, h# x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: \; C# h( O$ Z* e. S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: H7 c* S) K7 O7 ~9 w. ^<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 C; a! M( G6 a4 j<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" z5 t" x% D$ \0 t- u<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>