【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
* b- v  E6 s) x1 l! p6 F3 }The moonlight is shining brightly,
. S9 z1 P8 F1 t- NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' J+ `  t8 _( w5 o$ o" }2 CThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ W) ^3 Q# w0 N; J+ s5 K, tWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
4 R8 l. d# ]( _2 B: u, k/ kIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! A3 [+ p4 k" ~7 ^Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- C$ e- ^6 s9 o; v, T) GNothing can compare to my love
  _2 {, g) c& k# k- L& DCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
! u' x, U0 L, A1 ]% [3 vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, {8 g# z  C7 }  P8 D: RYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# m: l) ?% k# t2 o' K3 V3 p- y% jI regret not dying
  @4 w7 m' k& m( ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% c* r) ^# G) |; }5 B$ d; @8 I1 l<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 F+ w& l; |+ h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# O0 d7 |- g8 c! L& e) z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% R7 }& t9 g  }& Z2 R3 q0 e<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! y+ Y  B2 D% V% v$ @: {  P<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" r3 \( Z7 a: l7 I. X8 B" @! ^7 D<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  N4 g8 x) p& R# d% e2 M( a" v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' q( Y& o' F; m8 ^7 S7 i0 F<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 @2 e* X( L$ g' f; x3 x4 n, |<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- a" Q! @+ _2 ~2 h<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- D- i4 Z2 m! G8 e/ n+ }<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 ]" E6 x* N5 f8 Q9 P<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" n9 e+ ], F$ U: `# u8 c<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 ]$ z. l  Z: T4 X<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: m. ?8 @  i* r( s/ H+ w  M<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* M# L; D; i2 P! A/ ]<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 |7 F) u4 w3 Z! y. c& c9 F- r9 s<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 t$ @9 D& S. R- A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 |% i" p4 ?/ z- z2 f" P0 q/ K<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  d8 _) z0 {# D$ ~' g<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& w2 |; J0 y1 @7 @<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 ]6 R* {7 `: Z1 ?% p. n% \* X5 F& Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 p/ S" f1 @' }6 n8 w1 z/ `# V6 F- C; C, Q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. Y/ U. M( {& M<P>I regret not dying</P>
' l) J: N4 A) x* w8 i  _$ J. w1 y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 W% T9 z6 ^# u  Z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 ~, S& G  ?. |: _8 R/ \<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( F! q1 W. g) `# k  N: m<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 m$ \8 R3 p1 T$ o( k! F0 Z+ l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% a0 ~4 }. O  @4 z7 X+ k: H<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 S! v4 T& F" y9 q" J9 \- B<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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/ w$ @( t# m) w5 q5 d9 u我请你剖开它
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+ _. ]+ U% Z0 Y1 x  |9 T6 w5 E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. u! R! Z3 U: r( D4 i<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>