【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
3 a! h: m7 b5 PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) h5 p0 z4 i2 d( EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 O! {3 }& J3 J7 TIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
3 a0 `. ?! y3 h8 e' q( zMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
* V1 b! M8 l* \& ?  t2 tI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 _( `1 Y2 s  D3 P6 FNothing can compare to my love
0 ]2 v3 }7 m8 m6 v: R. P& ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 S3 i5 r: g8 k) l( \2 sThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' j- i1 S7 E9 m( u6 H9 WI want so much to see inside your heart
, N8 W! c" |; A$ o' v4 |# r1 e8 F- UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 W3 H' \: {1 _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" [8 Q$ J( M+ |. T" ]I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
$ T3 B. A' ]1 M( hYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 C( \; e; @; I. k/ ?- Q0 aRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 e; x: T7 W6 t3 N7 \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' K; a) n6 C( k2 Q$ T. @' T9 Y6 x<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 }$ \+ ^: I! l+ g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" p8 a& C& P9 u1 O# h" S( n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 v$ Y+ X+ X  z) I9 Q  D) a+ i<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% \% J0 F: R- D. K% r<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 S1 i1 R+ H2 R: u/ L: B3 t( B<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 i4 ]4 {: |; r6 J. \* w2 g, U<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- u: M0 W: {3 P$ n  ^; w3 ]<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- K, W: [& |! I+ j4 C$ f* i<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' K, y* n- Y6 _9 k; d) s9 n: f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( P. X6 w: w2 G! i$ j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ G. z# c2 L1 h, B* b( ]$ v<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 G0 ]5 P$ w1 t$ l5 m, c1 u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' c* [! t& a6 M) b<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, Y4 Y' J3 g& [5 R: n. i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: G+ [9 f" Y! B3 h<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 f3 ~8 v9 G; k( f; x6 i' m4 Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 {# u5 j: j4 m- N* i; s<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  ~/ Z8 V0 o" c" [- V! o<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ g4 ]% w3 ]( D0 H/ Q4 p<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; _7 t9 h3 p3 r; |) M<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 o: W) d  V5 N8 O1 J<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 t) k$ I7 A1 a, k5 ?( D<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% W, ]& k) i+ Q, u. k5 K<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>