【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
) L& G9 `, B6 l( L4 q! X/ |, w3 uMaking the sky glitter like gold,
8 h! |- X- v3 R7 F5 y' Q- o& _( qWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ L/ O, F) P" l; ?9 tThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: d9 p. ~/ F; n/ A6 ^The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
5 R4 r( S! o- |Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
- t& V/ y0 D* S6 w+ w' t5 y' t( ZMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; S* h. v! r9 |8 m) e' p5 dEvery other word you utter is love
& p8 q8 `: f; E% v6 gI really want to know just how much you love me
5 O' A5 Z# I3 [1 ^% f9 f% ~I love you I love you with all my heart
& x, w; S' {4 Q2 Z# r( \Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% m) Z. ^6 d: MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
, s* n+ d% I2 n) a& ?3 y' s/ ~I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, p; }; p0 ~) {* ]1 d4 L4 L3 q$ E3 jI regret not dying
' m- n9 t/ r- b4 u$ Q* i0 sI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
  p' ]8 O6 h0 z8 `; B8 L2 eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' g8 l* u/ r" Y, T5 k# }Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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3 a/ L5 \, v& `; @' o# }  H<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( t6 t1 k# Q- I3 X<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( f7 ~# X4 P  H2 i$ H4 N  Q& H5 X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" j6 h; n  L2 y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# f$ F4 ~7 N' b<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 K4 X" Q! N, C<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ J3 h2 M  c; i<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 E+ c! j7 c! \  n1 G$ P<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 K$ X) p6 F! Z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
9 R/ n! R: E! ^<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! `$ U. Q8 V4 ]4 w/ R<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* G5 w  r$ O) @' `" y& E<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& w3 e, z8 |. l; e/ M5 k<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ o* V6 Q8 [1 C( o  a( v  _<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 c! y+ q- Y' a# G" l<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: Y) M3 T2 `5 X<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* b' B% v- Q$ F, [" U; B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) h% q  M" @; j0 j1 O( i<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 B; a8 j# W6 ?  ]8 a. z/ _# }! i<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 l; F, j' U! I! S<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 X: V: f# r8 Z- T# [<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# ]) \5 v! t/ w" w' [5 ~<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 u5 w$ ~; h- L<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! p$ x+ D! Q# t: d1 O<P>I regret not dying</P>
, p5 J+ D: i4 O9 G<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ g2 {( U* _: o& I$ e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ D/ a2 J2 i1 R9 _<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, f. \! Q; E9 S<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 x9 T/ @% u4 U% Z2 m1 J+ Z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" z7 {6 K/ j* I" B+ ?/ g: K<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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2 B( f6 V8 R# `: j我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 _- [. o2 {5 C<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>