【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& H* i2 m, C/ E0 c- lWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 A# I  L% E3 f5 rThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ t7 a# R" S3 I5 e* P0 M4 JWith the moon kissing it every night
, v7 k& A% w! l, a4 rSeeing the sky content with its love
  p- w, V0 [- ]2 Y8 \6 [It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 h+ e" g7 n7 o5 J* q6 A- B! O) HI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
+ N2 L# n$ u5 p; L3 GCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ k) Q/ B0 z# MI want so much to see inside your heart
2 [! o! }5 `- e4 w( d1 N* q3 J9 NI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 {/ M; _4 M* y: {: ^$ d: n: NYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" G5 A4 W0 }, Z6 F  LRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. O( i, `% D  Y  N" X; V; G<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( }+ d* m' D9 l/ e<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# n5 ^/ X7 T' j2 Q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  A# d( D$ h* `. L<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% ?% s3 Q8 v0 c/ \4 O  {<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% v; d# G: X. q( I( T6 b$ V<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ b( x8 r# P( b% g7 h. h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 p) v9 C1 g0 o1 g5 n9 t& o: W<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
: o$ b# a6 W, K& B/ a# _<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ d  h' H8 [7 G0 _' m7 L4 x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; k3 Y2 T) f0 `! I3 ^  U! J0 e<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  {7 l! e1 X5 d6 v& w# {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- |" Q0 W; T+ m3 e. Q) w" ^<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& d! N( H0 Y6 K6 k( s2 U+ R7 Z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 k% o$ z$ M; O<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# i5 A0 Z+ G3 S8 z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ N  S9 t3 T  r$ u3 E' Q) r# f  A<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; s8 M5 k' I0 E& e, c3 p& \<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. L$ ~. I& M+ G! H* t. ~( s<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 \  M% c" y/ c% u4 A% ~! B. R+ U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 L- |  o2 v8 }) k6 t7 o3 w<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" }0 Y$ i8 M4 v' s7 M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 R) N" Z5 z+ q4 U& \/ R<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" b+ G* {( Q. f$ m% b<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' Z# u* s: Y! A8 m6 q! V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* W* h# r; \. R8 r1 K; |* \<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 t* y1 @& C5 A7 J. I( i<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& a  h. u2 c6 o* U<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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" w3 S6 u7 Q- f8 ? 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! c, O/ {! a2 u; [" e" T1 P& E* ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>