【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 h$ t4 @7 u. n- g. b! J1 \歌词我附在后面。
9 o  q% V- W5 K5 ]( XThe moonlight is shining brightly,
, Z( O2 W' b6 b* @7 d' [1 vMaking the sky glitter like gold,
1 d% e/ q% l9 g4 GWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) ]1 @" {. k: c& n0 sThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
8 \" k! i2 O. ]  P+ {2 hSeeing the sky content with its love
3 O; J& ]0 e. _- uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# \: A% @" u+ S7 rMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& i" k  U" b: Y2 ?Every other word you utter is love
/ i/ \) A' A; h3 e9 m) G1 L: ~I really want to know just how much you love me
# H1 T: ?$ F6 kI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 E: J2 M+ G  }, R8 GCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' U5 x! L! V9 GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; \( T$ p8 Z; o/ ~. HI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 Q" b+ |2 v+ c9 R5 e! f# Q( t9 \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. J  Q2 |- l, Q; \  _<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; E. g, _5 F' W; c& x7 [<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 R# R* m. P5 P. G<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% `: s, S; \) J5 n7 m<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& i$ t, S; u5 p* z. @, s" L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! u1 o6 _+ [4 P<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 w5 [: l0 k* m( J6 L; _/ D<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' s1 u: a, u+ C3 C( ^) q1 @& F5 F8 r<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* c5 R+ _2 W" f0 G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ [8 p( p7 W' g" D+ N2 n6 z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: m; v& F9 G0 c, _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- s4 _9 q( _, s2 m4 [: S<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 J0 [( o1 Q- W/ Z+ L) z- W* s' ~<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 V5 w( W. H0 }<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ Z! k+ t+ w+ U1 h, ~% \0 `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 {  s( S; Z, l2 q7 a4 [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' S0 ~$ d& V* D8 E6 P<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 r: M; e8 }8 B5 K<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 N- K# d! }  Y6 D; t9 J, \! ]1 d<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 D" t  q3 E* i3 B<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: I' Y# X# [; X. a7 l<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 I; A. G9 v. ~6 E<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" f! `' `) [8 N; ]3 T<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: A$ P# _% j6 U3 ?3 ], t* q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* X$ B% s5 w$ A# Y$ x<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) U  _7 |  l0 [9 `, N; `5 D7 F<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) o, \+ G0 |( d4 w<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 \" [( J$ p, j* ~<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( C. ~, z- f, R- ~1 C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, H$ j, d; i; {) G<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 _" m8 A2 J& P' @0 ^% [  f<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 m! e% M) b" Y% V4 x. ~( l/ I* c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 w. g/ y: i6 H. b1 L# b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 u- X! d6 r+ f  J) `0 a* B* x<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ [( e# {& `0 v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ R0 \0 q5 C& x9 d2 t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>