【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
! L! f. g6 m( I# I. P) y$ R* H- NWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* E, r5 @! l; I. e( H: q# h) eThe sky is happy down to its soul
; j4 V! o! d( _With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' U! U8 `5 M3 i7 ^6 \; JYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
, Y$ _7 Q, G4 C- iI really want to know just how much you love me
- V5 J+ L, ~, B! B( m) gI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# Z5 F4 l0 ]; e+ A: }* b5 QThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  s5 Q# C+ G0 B$ _+ r* A  jI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
* _2 m7 g  c2 m" l. rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ k; Q& B( X. VI regret not dying
' X" P- b3 z  d/ m% m( [! ^0 P% oI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 O4 W4 {, P) S/ {With such a tongue as yours,
$ V* z: i) ?3 J  d/ I* k) n) lYour speech can’t even keep up with it
4 z) n! n7 _: d) [If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; n+ X$ @4 t$ \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 N3 v. o6 ~  s* G( J<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ b# w" X4 s9 R' c' S% A/ D<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 |$ b( r* i5 J+ S6 m<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. R- a' J4 u- _$ I7 O& o9 V; [<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) u: l* d& h6 O3 `5 U0 D$ k" M! B2 z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! q: G) S0 K9 K<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ N- c( n: R, Y8 @3 e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 i. f9 {7 }. r4 ~; G. c3 w0 J<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 V2 ?/ t; D& F$ D: O& s; D<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% a9 \# ]# ]! C* O/ {0 ~  i<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- ^; d7 I( s- V( ~' q$ y% _<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ D# ^) R0 Y$ h8 b% `  z' ^2 q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ x' b) q1 f- m3 L; [4 b) Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! I; Y0 A% u: T* V" C8 h) g<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 m7 f: ^4 t* P& R$ T2 U3 x; {<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 i9 ~% y' U+ r$ P1 _<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 \7 U; }7 ^9 H& c! `- b, t# U9 c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# A* K- c! I% _0 z# i! U( Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

3 q" k+ {( y% s9 a( Y# g3 t8 I5 I我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 ]! v8 G' X' Q% K% a5 m, f3 g<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>