【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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4 o. O9 E2 R2 o5 D; \. ?3 s歌词我附在后面。
  k) V, a% X" J! `  C: W3 ?The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) W+ o4 k5 U, n" L! i. c4 l4 R$ KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 k& e& V: u& `+ E# n& j$ z& eThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
( a) e( {3 P4 {Seeing the sky content with its love
8 _$ _: M" u  X4 @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 \$ N" j3 j' P" ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( D! f! V& `( z7 P- k/ B# dI want so much to see inside your heart
' _- r6 t& @" d  `+ F! c- `I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 V% G5 }  O4 M; S9 DI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 u/ `; d+ ?8 J. a" |) O  OI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 O" ^2 J( n0 s, M3 d0 ^( xWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 }, U$ G# u1 S4 ]$ d& hIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' b. S5 v5 y+ t6 X. `<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 V3 |* b$ q% F# L! F3 f, P<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  f: K3 z8 H! O: K  l, L: f<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* Z% h" J' f" d6 Y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ Y9 G9 X4 ?3 e/ u4 K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ Y' r. T" G9 b<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. B  v0 h5 o1 d0 E, [. z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 H0 N' t( V5 h1 v/ j4 }0 f6 ]<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( \1 o1 s; E& m/ e6 L2 `<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* }, i. ]6 G) `6 ~$ i<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 \2 p+ X4 n3 t( ]1 N8 \1 {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, o+ ?: f% q  G6 |+ x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; u+ t- g6 ^( v2 Z" C3 q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# x& s& }2 {5 s8 W' O<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 T# c* ~% t$ T; G" s8 j<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& r: O5 e' {( ~6 _1 D<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( W4 y0 p% J) m<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 c3 K7 O7 i! s; Z/ Z6 K<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 _# S% t. R! Y5 w* \- P# C* S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) H" X% b! ~1 w1 W1 {<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, r' j9 U; C# K- J<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ {5 M8 A+ ], K& ?<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# w$ j* S* h; [( B# f; d' h5 ^: n8 d<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

7 P  K9 D5 W! V; ?我请你剖开它

4 h/ i# _, _( [$ b; e) f8 n 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>