【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
0 u- [8 b6 X  z& V+ zThe moonlight is shining brightly,
% T1 T8 ]7 n3 ]9 K0 ^7 K1 ^& mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
' c0 U# x' A3 [# F. GWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& c7 a1 X6 ~+ y/ n% {+ _With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 b0 n& t  ]/ m" ]5 _7 I! YIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 H% f, h6 n+ cEvery other word you utter is love
  u, \' j2 S' K# TI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- I4 G& y; q6 }: z# z+ N$ ACan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
3 d- e# C/ V& X5 R; \! E* y( ~I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 V1 L2 `; D  O) e' ^0 N9 uYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 j$ f  ~  J% U* c& m7 }I regret not dying
% l% r6 N' T" @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 Z  y; e8 N4 s" P; Y/ j! dWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 z8 L/ N* n- `5 P4 a% |5 p<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 b1 C$ F  t& a" w0 {- F<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& T( ]: T; A. W<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# q& G; G& q( Z! A  ^' I4 Q& F7 i' K<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. u2 m# O, P1 w" |* f8 \2 r<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ j6 g6 s$ Q& M& g8 G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 {; H- t1 c% E0 B2 m/ w<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( [( q  ]4 O+ i: g( ?- F2 E<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) Y! v( s0 f+ C( U<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ q0 {6 K8 i6 \# M; T! D0 `8 Q% Y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 X1 g6 H1 n+ \1 C, D<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' r# J" J* s/ K# f# e& Z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 y' ?* o* K5 X! j7 @, f( N# ]# _<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& p+ K6 g" N1 L- v1 `2 n; M<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 Z5 p/ F1 [; v1 ], ~4 L1 z2 Z( I5 ~<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 v4 t2 y, e* J. L! a4 X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 R" J/ Y. j, T" \7 p; d. P+ N<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  Y0 C/ k( ^* C* b3 d3 E6 I<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; K) S# C, H$ G5 P<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 s% F8 s5 j: s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. ~/ w6 m8 i. g" \# t8 q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 g0 w/ i! x4 H( y1 {* k<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: z' G& M: Q+ w<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 U' n0 ~. v+ y1 }, v8 n( E<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 P3 Y" u7 K% i! ^0 B3 \7 V<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* ]) O( |$ g, Q3 U  T<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# _7 F6 `2 |- G; s+ P<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# l! G6 c" Q5 a* J' d2 b  p7 z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 U9 l) R8 l5 f. S9 l, Q1 Q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 a9 D! m- i# e, V" \<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( t/ M" a$ H# S# R: i8 z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

, a! c# @5 ~" a" `8 _ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; ~' Y+ r) z, J) H/ d! r<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>