【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 |0 \0 v* h) Z3 F* a, aWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! c) [, |  g) c  p+ ~" S6 oThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ m6 ?! k  p+ c2 kWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( n" A7 K' h/ G! h/ NEvery other word you utter is love
; S6 M. i" j1 a7 Q  j8 rI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ t9 m) x* m( F  Q9 [% m2 PI want so much to see inside your heart
" _5 O6 n/ ~- P4 Q- `I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ T2 z$ u2 Y* v& \9 r3 ?6 T& [I’m still filled with fear
+ w* M# E, h( R: h% oYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ e( Z% c' t( f0 h9 ]  p! aI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' n5 U7 k9 o" _With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# u& z( Z: p& w( C3 x5 @; N, CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

3 K: X; w$ l2 n  m3 V7 F% ?<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 P! F& @2 \* h# E* L! y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! e" v* {- s1 K; z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' c- x( `& J, j' K  ]<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' t& z! P* i& U. Z4 _! i: O<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) m* I- I) p+ y& p<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" a, F7 l0 H/ r( u: T1 X<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 H. K# [5 d0 `+ ]! Z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! @8 u5 B( ?  P* q* J* E& o3 v<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% e7 ]% N$ F6 D' `, |<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 J+ z. T$ S& S<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 B9 A6 v" T7 o+ {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# {* ?; m0 m$ H& F<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 W3 z1 R  e- q, q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 U. x8 }! s8 x6 u<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' ]& s: f! h# J. H% N<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ I7 t" C1 Q& b/ l: _: n<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( s) T* M6 R3 U) {( P; f& r<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; E! ^: p$ F' u$ Y2 `; k) h& F<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( F6 ]$ u, b2 x2 L; c<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 G. _" [" e2 L/ t! |  s  @/ O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! {" @6 g; \, w, e) G: J<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  X/ i3 G2 k9 H; ^  j2 F<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 b1 M/ Y7 C4 q& |' \8 M4 u<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& \! R: f* ]6 c4 i/ M- f<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>