【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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7 a# j5 d8 k  w. t+ a* N歌词我附在后面。
# c: ^: n8 D: g! y0 D/ ZThe moonlight is shining brightly,
3 \/ e8 x1 h+ d1 j8 zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; n+ n2 F' S& F( N4 ?4 [; p1 k' FWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 P2 D9 L6 B( `9 }/ e; s( ~. K' B& NWith the moon kissing it every night
* R6 b6 s3 D) |6 }1 \$ r% q" v8 PSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; s% w9 q7 `+ L3 C% rI love you I love you with all my heart
3 g/ p4 V4 I+ u- v, ]" s: mNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ t- `5 c+ v" Y4 v9 b' o0 S! ?I’m still filled with fear
+ n5 Q: _" B  aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. L& g8 ?9 I9 m1 X2 P2 rI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: t4 v; a& K7 E: p3 yWith such a tongue as yours,
& P7 X3 q3 {6 H* K" I: N8 ^Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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2 I2 \: t+ r3 Z( {# ~<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 ~6 e2 x2 [0 A8 |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 s$ a% p$ O1 {<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' t  v# \9 G$ V9 x3 F<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) ]  c8 D2 @; |<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 V8 X) |7 N! o$ w1 ?<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; }% a; b& |/ l4 d2 b<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) `2 |; I, [8 z# A; U<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 _8 G9 {3 q- Q- [% K+ p! v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% g" l- M; y, u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" a; w9 J) Q9 D$ x<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 D4 u# i9 A. W6 b<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' B1 w/ i4 a4 Y' _" t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- ?9 I" {3 E; b2 ~* j, Z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 s" A! |" r5 Y: u- f<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ e/ a1 A1 n9 B5 D" o0 {9 C<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 H  ]+ w% p1 R8 v+ k<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ H8 D" |/ r2 K<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, v8 M: Z, ?# k# ]( N2 K8 Q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! Q% P0 z; H' z1 l" R* i. `9 }<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 }9 g7 w3 X8 G. @, E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% d0 `$ O8 S* N3 H8 G6 N8 o<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 U4 |2 `& L3 @' |% s5 ]4 t; {$ Z2 z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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5 E1 V, P; _! u7 `2 _. [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>