【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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" D' u- O4 f! z0 P5 d' U歌词我附在后面。
7 ]; i, ?" b8 s. n, rThe moonlight is shining brightly,
" o: T; w" Y' e2 J  ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, W7 C* u$ ]) e8 u8 TThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
$ a: h. g* w  }Seeing the sky content with its love
6 @% [$ k4 R1 I3 j; yIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ u; Z6 N9 e; A" WEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 P- V+ Y3 R3 g! eI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ {& M3 l2 z+ E" [# [" r! oThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  C- ^, I. j2 I  v. t$ h5 LI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
+ }5 I) v! u; f$ M, \# `+ T7 |Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: `9 {. P  w$ H4 c4 Y1 i( jI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" D" X: A  u) p& b$ ~With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; y# P6 l) r0 B' }( x/ W) V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& y6 d. d8 D& B' M2 ^9 O<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 j$ H" e# B1 n! k4 a6 V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 Y4 O) H) ?! c& ~<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  D+ P  k7 }' s8 ^+ G& q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 y6 `  X3 t4 `7 H. \+ P+ \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# V: M* r5 l, j) T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 n5 x1 N, y, ?/ ]0 s+ T( }3 G; v% W<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* V) q$ S3 ]( {: h# U: g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 d1 |6 }/ p7 e- D, C! I<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ f& p# H* @1 s: f/ d- I% Y& b+ ]<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 e* G  o0 C" N; G5 y% ?* r5 K<P>你无需担心</P>
& i+ a( p2 o" x4 i<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: ^( I; s- u" a$ _0 e<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 c1 K2 X( v4 b: L: q# H0 U  ^" [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ \* Y$ `5 m3 `1 ^7 f7 k4 n4 ]<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, n: b9 X. ~$ K" o6 P<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 p; h9 r# Y+ _0 [. r0 R  h" C8 }0 e<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& X9 b" k' E7 Y' [/ Z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ P+ m  d- C# X% O7 Y. i8 j<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 i) R+ |0 |9 ^- T  U# K3 m' ?<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& A1 s3 l) F$ L( l" C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  i# O4 m, }" b, n9 N( N- j<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* I; S6 j" U* M  a; ?& i; f<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( {0 f4 N9 J+ U<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 x! Q9 F! K8 k- U2 T; X! Y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- ^! |+ M. D2 F4 ]  x. G) X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ `& f( w: Q/ B6 G) k6 @<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  \* N& M# i- c9 S) k<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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% y" C3 K* {1 \2 V% E) [* f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>