【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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8 U0 P" C$ q1 M& o歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 K  u0 p4 [% A3 v5 M2 fWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& T' R; n  h8 O0 F8 F( l. qThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 ]$ G$ |/ Q& P) S+ u7 \With the moon kissing it every night
" z) p/ R! G2 Y% p1 L$ g# ^Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& G& r1 h! c4 c4 [/ Y; iEvery other word you utter is love
$ p1 V2 b$ {! H4 uI really want to know just how much you love me
4 L3 c) ~- }! hI love you I love you with all my heart
1 o% v3 P5 z- m8 pNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( O/ }& v; I6 P& J, L) ^+ ?* Y4 sI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ [  [1 D% Z, `. ~& m- RYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' g$ k3 n7 q4 r  k8 }5 xI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 \/ }( I1 ]  Q( B3 ]* P8 a<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* C& }. U5 p) `<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 H: j" ^2 I3 x* d. e+ \) G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# M; Y. @/ j. i, Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 e3 q2 g: F4 f% }. I<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; f1 g0 Z% u% W<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 J5 ]. Y& f& F) e( S+ _7 }, Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, `( Z) x* p; b3 f6 Z( T1 V( H/ N+ g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 D4 W& j8 i  j, @' K  x3 P- p<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 J4 z0 A( l0 W1 @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ p3 O, w# }6 r+ }7 @<P>你无需担心</P>
. r0 V& F: \  @<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! I6 Z6 i' o5 W" D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' e3 S2 M# h+ k4 p* K) I<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& j1 l: P) J& A+ m9 S<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 l( _& A* D7 |% N<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 p* `4 Q, r( J7 Y  ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! A1 m3 R7 R8 H  o* x6 X& C+ j; C7 A7 F<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 M1 V4 M8 l. R& i% V<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& O9 _$ M, T# |<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 Q* L" E% i0 I# }<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% o+ S0 P5 r8 d/ W6 T& B<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ H. a6 b! V/ c+ B7 |- w' M<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 C. ~( F5 x  {) Y1 I1 N' V<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* B" o9 ~, E7 W* o3 i<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) [2 _( ~- P( M# z0 V<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 T4 \" L4 k3 E' k  N<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 S5 _/ @+ v8 L! d$ _) \<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 D& _( k! U0 ?4 U$ c5 Q' q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: v# n4 a% W& m' I( Q; B<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 j) H/ c1 n; L/ [' B! e/ G) ~9 Q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ f. Y- D9 d2 _4 F0 L: F. s* H<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 o- n0 _- b6 g  S: A% I<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' W/ h4 X  [% w6 J  {. [# k我请你剖开它

; J" @/ B( X% p; z7 n 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) a! j3 @1 T% Y# ^) M<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>