【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
; z3 r  A7 A  VMaking the sky glitter like gold,
$ o& c7 C- }! f( AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 A0 w+ h) H4 j- O2 sThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
5 x- X  _4 T5 p8 DSeeing the sky content with its love
: R+ R3 K; ~# i$ S* C& @4 k$ \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; i4 M8 K6 y2 c0 pYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) m8 O& B& U: H5 tI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ Y( K/ |7 x  q9 wNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. q; f3 [( t7 k% a+ A2 _The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, ~# j( Y2 x$ d7 M% |4 DI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 ]7 O1 D7 T4 r: b1 n  }* w" G4 cI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- |; T  c1 R- n; }: TWith such a tongue as yours,
' t( d. L. _6 s0 p9 oYour speech can’t even keep up with it
/ G1 P7 |/ i+ k0 O, ?' YIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 S. g9 W8 L" |' y+ B- F<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- \4 L) A+ K& \; d5 Q- t* b( ~, j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. `2 q0 i2 i. U% g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" D; c: i3 }0 E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* J" t4 g4 q" A* W$ G& R, k<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* [3 ^5 t4 L6 a! p3 k. x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% p( o: o& q) ~+ K# ~7 Y! w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* _) Y: L1 d  S0 a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 U7 R7 N$ {4 q8 c. u6 M<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! {5 i; K! p8 M5 [( n<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 k7 x- S( v2 V" {" W5 V! `<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. B8 N& ]4 {  _3 q3 z- D1 H3 ~<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" o$ q" a/ ]- j. J( ?. ^: }<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# T7 b9 U/ v! B; }' s3 D8 {+ J<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# t7 p! Z, O. t% u; a6 H3 ^<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 X( {$ Q3 M9 U0 J; X7 D<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. V( l+ |" N$ W' B6 v$ i; W<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 O( O) B* b7 z) `+ g9 g  m<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& N: D# S  S# M) t) P<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; T: g6 M/ f7 h<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 G2 O+ t, B: a9 ]+ P<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# e2 }, z4 q6 Q% G! {0 ?<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( M- q% M7 s  N8 X: `<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 Z( A* t% |& X) y: m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ `. W3 }' m' |0 b<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& n' O; Q' U/ C. c" p/ k. B<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, x# O3 ?% `/ U% P; o<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 d- I4 X! E9 Q1 `' x  C! w/ Y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% U  g5 Y- o4 ^$ h<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ W& P0 f/ `4 e2 S<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>