【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
, Y6 _! \! U/ p1 FThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 ]& A. L4 Q8 g0 _When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, f* A" N1 S  q; L: qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, V( `; T6 e& `$ B3 f& i5 h8 ?; |* pThe sky is happy down to its soul
6 @" w% d+ U6 w3 _7 `9 x/ U1 ?With the moon kissing it every night
2 C8 B0 T: K! z7 a, Q; U% w; I4 @/ M4 ISeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- R/ ]9 p; ]" V9 H4 f/ f, k6 UEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 J) g! D' e  Z% qI love you I love you with all my heart
3 S) N$ n5 r/ A( Q0 m9 h( JNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- M% H. w7 L; x% @5 F% ^* GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 B) `; T8 Y9 e6 xI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* o5 t/ n$ \2 y& Z! b3 ]I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ s7 S: O/ f7 k8 Q" D3 L% LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
9 Y: e) J, w6 B0 X2 E$ sIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

4 s9 w/ \! t, [2 S0 @6 q- j<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ [. V( U- _4 f- |# h<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( C) c) n: q  w  }) ~9 ~+ a<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) L( B8 D. _: E1 Y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 W( k0 r- r# Q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 w. O+ }, r; |! G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 W1 v0 o9 @, _2 I5 C<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 n5 j. V6 S, P<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ P5 f5 h% k& A1 h3 l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 R  A% s" v6 e# J9 Y6 z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! e  G7 w! |& {% u<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ v( }% B! s4 t$ `0 k7 j; F  m<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* {  C% ]5 W; m# k& G  u0 l- P3 ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) J5 Y. F9 T  q1 E6 }2 o<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 _# j5 F& k/ i<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' P1 j; P+ p8 L) |& N<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 B/ r9 {* i) x6 P1 d<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; v  ~  I, Z5 c1 _7 I3 u<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ j# x1 b3 _5 Q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& x# W% W" P! e, S<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( @( n+ h+ a  T: ~; ~& ?" h<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: K: Z3 R  ?7 K1 O<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ u" Z$ K5 ]( k9 w2 }<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& S9 f8 Y9 f: u8 G1 S% u& g<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 V0 `' ?! g+ J7 B; h<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( d3 P# d4 r. ]4 Y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" O6 e; r+ I0 a$ F9 f2 q. Q' u<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* l+ \& s4 w6 X; ?- B<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 n2 V: @, z4 V& U9 R0 d1 \" o- u我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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