【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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. v9 p* p  Q) {( g" `1 F歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 B$ Z: P- x" W& q0 p+ z9 XMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* G: u0 X1 Z' P( W. wThe sky is happy down to its soul
) M- D; u3 _5 d. [7 G  S2 G, pWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ y9 M& E' S5 e0 n6 ZYou needn’t fear anything
; p: k' t, M, A; nMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
8 U! s4 @7 {. k, z$ K  ]Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: Q) E$ y$ g$ {! YThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 Y& l3 }- o/ eI’m still filled with fear
4 |' f8 C+ ^% J! R  {( V6 eYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, _: j1 Z" r7 i1 \0 pIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 m# g7 Y2 }1 G& H; E6 Y) O<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- H( d) @- m( p8 a" ?; _<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 h8 e: K# B" F! A5 Y- Z: H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ d9 A' S9 N5 ~" s9 T$ N<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 V( e! a# }4 i7 C9 Z( b<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& \6 p- b% x& `; X% ~# L<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 _+ u& h2 ^* _<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* E: ~$ R8 `, u+ u; j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! Y% d( a  ?' O. b) f) w+ _<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% O9 E% T& b6 P: |) o9 G) m. }<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- d2 Q" S' u8 j' Z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! z  |: b: `. `! j<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 |: K3 n. E: r<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% n" z  E3 ~9 ~9 N4 A2 A! O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 ^1 k0 E9 r# M2 Q  {0 w/ e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 s7 c7 }* q8 E1 F" g<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 b$ x: v: |4 q# k3 d; t4 q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& T: q- A4 ]) X. F4 M; e<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ \, k0 N- M! u6 C! H6 w  c<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 e- ?  M1 ]# }, J/ C. a5 h/ G<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 d& i; R  a- D+ h1 a<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 ^( V) Q) H0 |" t8 B& Z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 I6 |8 s1 n( T* g. V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, k) ~' q+ u1 t& J9 E! Z  M- M<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( S- Z  I1 H+ W, `( _. l. t4 s/ {<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 C7 z, |2 o3 [5 |5 K9 Q/ R<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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0 k$ S9 o5 @9 x9 Q9 R! j我请你剖开它
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( L1 l# |- b* m3 X7 G4 U1 Y) K8 _ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>