【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
- `% u4 U% ~" D# q5 ^9 P9 pThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ ~( U6 C, c4 f3 y7 n' x! n: B5 tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 E( L+ E, J) E# kThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% u+ K. a0 N& M4 J# t+ nWith the moon kissing it every night
5 N  A8 P) n6 x" mSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# P( I/ }! K) |( z$ gYou needn’t fear anything
; c0 m6 O' g6 V- d2 MMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
6 L! Q4 f9 M/ R- |* W+ V1 aI love you I love you with all my heart
; R" a6 @" N4 T, j, l3 x* [% m3 k! yNothing can compare to my love
+ g* ~8 h$ r7 G/ V$ z, W) `8 N6 tCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ k' n- O. U1 g$ I8 `! }The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* s7 Y& |9 _9 E4 q1 f4 {) TI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' `- |4 G& P9 x' G+ [$ J, C! U9 sI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: N- A; S/ ]: i# z0 v# g+ aWith such a tongue as yours,
& t$ r) j+ ]  Z& J1 G& hYour speech can’t even keep up with it
2 `; f" ~7 ]# R0 J- eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 E; c& I  [% w4 E; P" d" QRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  d& v  S- P% k( R# Z( ]<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 R9 R6 o8 @( v+ P. K7 x, I<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 Q: V8 t# e3 g: K  h! e: V& m<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% T' h4 `" w5 E2 d0 P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ N" w! F& \: M# Q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ Z9 s# _/ }* p* k3 `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 ^8 D+ @# T: O$ M) D3 g, D  F<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 x  }. F* Z! g4 i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: j. c6 T6 n) p. q3 I  G! b' _* E<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
& i. M. H( }% H3 d<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- X; y* m  W5 W6 h: o' K3 ~<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' o$ \& W6 N, S8 L# @1 Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( k0 g+ S& u9 V) H! ]$ o' N: ~<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, c2 |& O7 N' o( P7 e7 E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ {# i" s) v- f7 ^' E<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 J* y/ _! d: q: T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( c0 X5 O2 K- n0 ^/ {$ [, x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" W( i+ Y2 L# |9 C( t<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 o  i; G! @# |" A3 Y+ U<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# |$ I; D3 h* X<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 E0 e, l- H9 {+ R2 O( [<P>I regret not dying</P>
: o2 T  m6 f% ?; e) X4 G<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* ^" j2 I8 {& Z) I# C) g$ X" d0 u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 R5 h8 u, q& @. q/ d/ o. B( b: m5 W<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 g# H# n' C" t$ ]  D<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! H3 s/ g4 A  m' H/ v3 s/ Y8 V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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