【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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3 }, }$ t( a  o, Z# T1 {歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! @: O$ p5 f9 z6 ]( q( AMaking the sky glitter like gold,
! h* i: L2 u) x5 f3 x9 ]% ?( ?When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# O+ S1 M- I5 {* }The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 B* X/ t2 I  H; ^- E; ]4 G5 vThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 r! ~; w9 @  P( v  I9 l) \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
: k. [/ V, S: Y$ u9 ^7 ^" KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
  X2 `9 \7 `; z  S. `  J. c  hI really want to know just how much you love me
1 X  H* P0 d8 p4 X+ w+ k; ZI love you I love you with all my heart
7 `6 H) H+ t: {9 w1 F5 _! G- LNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. I/ h$ ^  o7 ^0 ~  u" DI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' R6 |3 H1 m& A5 hI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 f* s' `2 V7 O$ i1 a, r<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 `; Z) _/ l% d/ i0 G3 G* {+ ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' ^9 s2 {6 [. N! Z: ]8 S: k& K+ R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 e* `% E3 U" _% x, B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  ]- l9 f* d  B1 k1 Q1 m+ [% M7 S( F/ F<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' k, l& D& {/ s<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% g0 e' {2 y( o' ~& j<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- u7 C( g' i' O, R<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# B+ P  B) Q& e9 B- G4 b<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% x. F3 x9 R3 n$ z<P>你无需担心</P>
0 s9 J6 L) A/ v% @<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! P: f0 ]; Y7 v1 v% N) B1 S0 N<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( t* ?% G1 W( C" n6 I5 Y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 C) Z) k. A; [4 J/ e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 B1 q. l  K8 H6 K1 L<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% Z# r/ s3 \$ ]9 Y4 Z% f+ S3 U<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( R+ U, J4 }: h  j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 b8 x+ ], W6 w; G2 E<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ [8 r! h* c, a1 i+ G3 |" w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  O, K/ n" x/ U0 C* K- G" L% y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. H6 }; c) W% S# [" x, f<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; R- F; Y0 q0 |0 y/ C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ [8 t9 k# `2 R- m" k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ v; {# {( F9 m* F5 \* S9 Y1 ]4 g<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# c# |3 z7 h2 w+ ^& N  H: E$ X<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, b# d# z* F# N5 O0 H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; ^7 \  p; \! e2 k  W: R* z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, o' z3 ]$ `' Z, J4 F. @<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 J0 Z4 _; ?, L, s# `<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 v0 p( l* P3 R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  K- i, ^  {, E. j' a+ o<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ Y. ]- @; W+ @# I$ \% g<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 G: Z) z' g7 i+ W  @: [" O- h<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: o6 ]) l+ R7 M, k! s<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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- D" h) E% g) U) U4 W3 }9 f! s/ I我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 A( x( R$ c$ n' m<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>