【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

" D8 a: ~5 M. E5 T% l4 G# v<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODkzODA=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>
  J* g1 D" @; x7 Z1 |* M& Y' u

歌词我附在后面。
" G5 |5 R$ l( t# uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 ~5 S9 ]# L1 A8 m) U. `. r$ J) wWith the moon kissing it every night
6 u9 v/ N+ n) l9 \# u# q: U: d+ vSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% u1 v6 I- h' U  XEvery other word you utter is love
% N: \0 M8 e/ H) kI really want to know just how much you love me
8 U' q6 l* c1 U2 \' VI love you I love you with all my heart
0 q' d" }" C$ |9 Y$ NNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 P+ Y- z5 }  DThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" |2 o0 }. w3 DI’m still filled with fear
/ N/ u6 r4 @3 D) w' i8 ^' i. MYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! a) S& ]2 b$ V0 cWith such a tongue as yours,
  [) m" c, ?) S' c! s7 CYour speech can’t even keep up with it
2 V- U' g8 ?* \: Z6 n$ VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  c! E* @9 i) ^. _, f$ `2 VRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( j: Q0 [$ Z; z1 S; H9 k1 @# F<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( ]4 ^$ p7 T, P2 M1 L<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" P# G6 i5 f# V1 ~<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  N3 r" U# d' K5 P. a" J- Y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% u2 M4 i* d$ y; k<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) `$ Z& h5 C- Q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 [5 Q9 {. l, s  n/ ~. z7 D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ R$ k6 m0 K2 \& Z( O* k<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 b4 v4 W7 Y" @% k) S<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 L- [  H, k3 [) V+ |. h; m5 o<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 }( [# [0 \" `$ S  o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! q. x! Z; U4 b" T<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" D) G! k% E- C<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% C$ }- Y7 F% z6 C4 Y5 h<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ c& ]: N% ]7 |8 P1 b$ h2 Z5 S5 I' N<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- c) M2 P5 S; b. z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 n6 G. L2 x) Z- q$ j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ t& ^$ j& J6 Q- {, h! Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% ~& w! Z! B* }1 t" f8 y) b<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ l: X% B' M4 F& k) s) u5 ?5 N* M: D( K<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. g: B3 [/ I* B7 y- k! m<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! Q# l3 ]( y' ~+ s# B" c1 u<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- X: d% w) `9 ^- ^0 V& M<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% V# G0 ^4 h4 j. |* j<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

: \! i! l9 V& q2 Y6 L 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

<>

I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
) l8 S/ h% _/ x5 F4 S<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>