【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ k- w* l" v" B/ |歌词我附在后面。
  C) i$ N  b$ \The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 W9 v3 d2 M' ~' b. ?( z3 p0 B. BThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( o: h* ]0 i- w  W( F6 c# \7 F3 |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' }! }/ d8 k% O$ ]- m- k8 EEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
' R* e9 V/ G" g! {( U4 S$ X8 WI love you I love you with all my heart
  g/ V- D: G9 Z8 i( \+ v" ZNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 }7 ?. N+ z0 \" z0 BThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
; P! c- e/ Q. I4 w2 E. t( B4 JI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! D1 k+ ?5 X0 L0 H4 a7 O7 L' iYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: |2 a0 r; k  j/ t* i4 J* TI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 ?  @# F1 |$ F- O- JWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
( k# l5 S2 \: |& rIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* H5 P" V: T4 W: ]' _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 k" V  n, v& k<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( f# W( a/ `3 F5 r* K$ p( i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& U6 _9 g& w( t4 }, K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( R: E$ b0 _& O<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 O, K, @7 m6 T$ t5 E9 M. x<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 g# a2 o6 @7 I8 v: q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- T+ ^3 y/ k+ q+ c/ V( K. c: g<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ ^4 e# ^& _3 ]/ T# X4 B/ c- Z% p<P>你无需担心</P>
; z# ~% F% s) F  X5 `6 q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: V1 z0 f' t) F4 E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' [$ q) l. ?( b4 J0 V9 j<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, T8 _0 Y4 G" |" A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 j0 V8 x* b# {8 \0 r<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 ]1 q  M3 K6 k" g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. H* S6 U8 H9 F<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* |& ~5 |! j, O1 @, w, S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, `& S9 ^# }! V! m  h<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 a- F8 b( ~( [/ Y" \# X<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ u5 R5 t* a6 ]/ V<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' z9 v5 b, ^# |1 S7 A7 d<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% R" ^  E! k/ A2 h& j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 \0 v9 Z& L- C% K4 i<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( D, ?% h% i, E  l7 Q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 R/ g& R5 I) L) l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' u# S& N% ^/ b  K( H! _! i<P>I regret not dying</P>
- y: e- |/ h8 {5 A% [3 B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" E2 h. a% }  K5 M3 v+ r<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  g8 k8 ?- C1 I! `8 H( j9 N) W7 V, I<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, A! @! z+ L/ y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ \9 C5 c3 e, N1 B; E' X% R4 G<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' K0 {/ S; w; M<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# S2 x/ U6 i3 p. a" N- N; h<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>