【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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2 P  y! ^9 H, i歌词我附在后面。
1 X  Z- J, G* a4 `* `' v: o7 GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 `" s% r9 l) U( l% R, c" aWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* y% D* h; ?% s. o  vThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 I8 }4 m" P: hIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
1 f$ [% e6 H; ?* g5 hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# {. Z4 V2 s5 V" e  ~  ]Every other word you utter is love
% P: i7 {6 X  YI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
' K. F. X$ t) ^, bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 J3 i; S; x+ N3 VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
- H: d1 A2 ]4 i) b$ U. fYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; U8 ]( M; ]* k- A# Q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- c( Q+ a2 A, `2 f<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ G: |' M  r, r  k% D$ F! J# w<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 i$ F4 T& C" a0 n% K% `) S<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! m+ t8 M; l# v( o' Y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( ]+ m% x& {! L$ a! s" I<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, u% [: Q# u3 D) O" ^" D1 \4 G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) r1 u% S* o( K& d<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* r( }  o- Q* m<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! m* _: {# @# a. |- p4 L8 d" A0 ^<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 d  j, k; a, g, z9 T2 X# E<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' T1 N3 g2 }" s/ G- g  _. g<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 k; a3 ]& H& x7 S<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' A& t3 H, q1 l. Z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# O( |8 [! {( @" @& P8 `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! ^. q3 W" j4 L& K<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: V. @. `  e/ \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 Z, h6 q) m" q4 d<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* K  ]8 m# K) x3 e& r* U$ b! D) u( P6 W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 K* K8 i/ B3 D1 i# Y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 V3 B; M- Q4 m* u1 S4 M. U% u<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ D! Q: R) h9 m2 b5 x<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 k& A4 T' d* H/ X3 N+ x. C( o<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 T0 @) b2 E* G" W/ X# A<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 q; m0 E* f7 j9 t3 Z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! T7 Y+ r) U. r* [  ]<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& W0 q8 N! f: m7 a<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 J5 D5 o, k* O" |+ L7 i* [; u! r  D<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' _8 N( V$ X! S8 m' G 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>