【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
% t9 g8 e! X4 I$ `$ lMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' _, R# M  |/ kThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 d3 ^( a% B% Y, aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: G0 S) T4 P  l" T! M" qThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 d# [# ]2 l0 S3 ~: K/ q1 fI want so much to see inside your heart
& O2 n& b3 d* a  k* wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ ?3 p/ O; n) S( i7 ^# Q0 rI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 r& |* _# M8 ]9 u% F3 J" ~: o( k; xI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! ?$ A2 |9 ^' c' ^3 r8 eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, D  h' r$ d) Z( t6 Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 z: \3 G$ T! e0 \<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# j; b4 E1 r5 y6 b4 }<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ T7 W6 O! T6 z7 ~; Y) q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 B' K$ s9 [& g. S& i( i<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- b- V; V; r0 c* b4 s4 J5 w<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% {+ R' T* z6 ?  c' O) s<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) J: Z8 }4 c' P+ T<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 V- b' e5 r) u2 l+ o. n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 |! @( ~& P+ a- u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, Q: N% H% d/ L4 W- M. ]<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ o$ x+ {' K1 I  R<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 x3 `8 G# x/ `<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' `$ K! ^5 A3 L  X1 N<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* H0 k- ~1 c. ]5 L3 Y# y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, H, z: H) ~! R<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: C! ]- k1 a/ F, T$ m1 z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' x9 {% U+ }6 w5 y& i- W<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 y2 ^; h" }# S# P+ L* `7 p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  g) X. Z* q9 x<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 g! o& F8 {1 R. W( z9 b<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 w, ~6 L* v& d' g* W* R2 B<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 \7 z6 h3 o7 j6 r0 r<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# t+ D. R$ N4 ~* s3 |7 A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 c7 ]7 G" E) G1 G1 s/ |<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 m7 Q9 D$ p! |3 ~1 q  B4 R<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 m2 _: O3 p4 p<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 H# _9 W; }; {) K) F& [) d1 ~5 W我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; L  z$ w5 s* Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>