【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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4 B) n+ A9 J3 H0 s0 ~歌词我附在后面。
0 k; A$ o+ u9 m0 L+ gThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* L: B- j- B3 d4 i+ ~# |+ V4 ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. C" [* M" }; \( ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. I# o3 J* ?. E6 i( Z- `7 hThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 z* s9 \" {* }+ WWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' {- k* D3 K; IIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) O( C+ Y" o6 P: E3 U, mMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- n. p) I, r2 u( A+ e' k( B5 Z7 ^! }! `" yI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 c1 S4 K6 t$ r. R/ V9 VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  u  L6 ?, O: G/ iThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 u7 D  |" m. AI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, d4 N3 Q) C$ Z4 E7 h- WYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 W& j( ]; {7 r% E& c1 m, |If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 j3 f; {3 g* I3 R1 L<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 M' h4 }! L6 x& o2 Z  |7 e) A<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 K* y% T; C, ^# O4 f) k<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' H6 U- b) B* R# b<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" j  |8 x* U- j7 n: F/ u+ U/ x, L6 F<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( X* o2 D* p7 \3 R1 C4 I<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: _1 ]0 E( F- P2 j<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 p: `* D9 C% G$ H<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% {4 O! R/ Y1 H6 |( N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ p  }6 A) F0 X( O  j7 D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( Z% ^: a* l4 K/ r& g# G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ B1 l* y6 G% o+ U8 D2 f<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 {6 }+ O5 m# P<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" A4 u6 k( a4 ?/ |8 A1 ]+ W( V<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 I, ~9 C: J4 G- ^<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, y  S% I) N9 Y7 Q% s<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  B; U6 p! T1 k* q  ]+ ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ w* E3 B4 v+ Q2 N<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& R* B7 F" \, F# M8 o, r0 X; B" f<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: p: O' V) S% S: [% ^! [) w<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& L$ S" o6 D- Y/ n- H<P>I regret not dying</P>
' w+ C! i% v2 z' @, l<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 _1 G) b. n' t' W* y! h/ V3 j<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* E+ R! i: d- w* t0 e, N<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 V& ~* Z9 C( [. ]* b: g8 B. y7 s$ S<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 V8 n6 W, _4 P3 ^" D<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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7 ?: S  Z  W8 @' w 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>