【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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8 B* l1 y! G2 t' c* c) x歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 @* x( x& J! e7 _, eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% H5 k" R. `* @0 M" GWith the moon kissing it every night
" [) w% a; |5 K6 M' x3 w, k+ vSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- d' n5 i" {0 I! {- F. k8 e4 OYou needn’t fear anything
$ ^3 H8 Q% |; ], l# YMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
1 e% m/ l  y. g) i. `' k5 FI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' t) Y' A/ k# L8 hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
, ]# F! \. d$ z0 r) Z& Y/ JI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 u8 n6 a! G) C, t1 T5 ~I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  k- i* X; Q2 @" mI regret not dying
* N' p% |* B& {0 @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 ?$ ]2 B: U% `5 I5 JYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: s3 u% A# F/ t3 X9 o% t<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ ?5 k1 l3 F# @  D<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( q' V/ W# s" c$ H4 P7 D$ W<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 W1 w  L; {0 V, z3 t& l<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 W7 l8 E  E) s5 O5 ^<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! F3 F7 k' i; a  [' e! {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( T1 V+ g8 J9 m' B3 H6 c# R2 W; I<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  w" x) L" r4 Q& J2 R<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- T& b7 O0 r. J  k1 C# N+ w2 s. m<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ n, n. p+ e3 `! }. s6 t: n<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 r0 }, K1 |9 Z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ f8 [) m0 i+ J: n4 t<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, `& @$ A' c% D3 }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# A& Y; w! m9 ?+ ~* E( m5 r- _<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" o4 x4 g' K2 K; R0 k6 b<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 G9 Y' ~8 l5 g! K, O  ]+ n0 n<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 ^6 q) N. }& q+ I4 i<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 \3 z8 B/ R" s# d  E* {<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# z8 F  m3 R6 S: R; E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

8 i# Z" f  c+ p4 n3 `+ j) S我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) u( E: R! `6 ^7 k<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>