【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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* N; t+ t5 O& ~: P1 _' |7 P歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, k2 j4 b; v4 A2 G9 O& I5 FMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 t) J) O: ~6 V. p$ [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. Q) T6 B) a) d4 T4 b' }8 vThe sky is happy down to its soul
. ?  M, Z% S/ E6 x* ]With the moon kissing it every night
- I% H' A5 n% v2 _, G- M6 eSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
! G( @; A2 I! b8 KMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 ~1 w7 N% h8 X& Q7 q0 ~Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
; M. c% P4 V  K1 K9 f% Z8 JNothing can compare to my love
; l$ p9 ], ^3 j9 j7 z9 gCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: r, x! N5 }, e7 _The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 }' _9 I7 B2 p- k2 A9 NI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ V) _% C: }% ]' y6 @; GI regret not dying
; v% |* c6 ?1 A: hI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" i' u) G- X9 @6 K5 xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* j8 F6 C# @- X* t9 A( m<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! M+ @5 U( L8 _4 Q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( m& S, ~7 S- B/ p2 F6 R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, z- y8 [! f# H% a<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' i+ C$ d" r, N1 {<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! f8 D8 I' q) I' e<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- h+ M- n9 x4 f* t3 A, r+ m( F<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# |1 e6 L+ l/ o. F0 m1 X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 u/ I5 @; g7 A0 s' y& [  R- B" ~" e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* x; \! r4 Y6 O; b/ Z5 I" z& l<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 w2 j" [8 U, E) }<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 q" @: ?, O( M4 {0 ^: p7 k' S<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' o+ E$ X" o! I* M& p+ B$ r% t' {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 c: {, I; R* z1 T& D* }, N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# I# [2 W% d6 ~, v# r<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# v5 w" C0 B; t8 i$ s<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 |4 H8 K2 e8 J5 o7 Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 ~  b. ]: g% o  C' V9 U  W<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: O: h3 B) S! d7 t+ J; W* ^( q% Z4 X6 `<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. k- x7 T) V0 f$ v0 E/ _0 G<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
' m( Q1 a4 ^: u<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( d& w0 t) `, e9 V<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% s8 C; z% u. D2 M6 r- R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 F6 a6 j3 g  E, `" l. K' {2 M<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& m. \' ?- x0 i: O9 `$ f<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>