【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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% ]) S% Z) M* g. Q. o/ E歌词我附在后面。
( F/ w6 S9 u. s" t8 [: p, F- wThe moonlight is shining brightly,
5 s2 ?- L( \/ l: MMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- [# q& p% c, |+ ^, |/ h) ^The sky is happy down to its soul
3 H. w! c* Z' e' Z8 ~With the moon kissing it every night
" B7 U: M* f! y) L/ q8 CSeeing the sky content with its love
" n: E# v4 V$ K9 dIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 V' W& z/ e, Q$ e  Q/ C2 LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 i$ u4 ~* @6 o8 IEvery other word you utter is love
. w! t& N/ s0 L6 wI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 E. u) d: _) [! e9 \3 i4 mCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 E; j7 A1 M( z) ~I want so much to see inside your heart
1 P7 A5 j- k2 dI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. K3 E! H$ I# d0 J6 @I’m still filled with fear
3 ?5 A! Q5 p; c- O! qYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 g' d& b' K3 G- Z- G  XI regret not dying
; t5 ^( s0 b7 T$ J6 g4 ~& [: @3 AI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& g! p/ T# F9 d/ c' S/ XWith such a tongue as yours,
4 H! E( A+ v  ?5 {Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! m4 v; D# H3 P9 x2 p# @! j+ t<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. K/ ?* S, p+ D- n<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 X; k: u4 O+ @) A  [- N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, L- W2 ]$ W0 V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ e: w! j/ Q& l; h<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* E0 Q+ z( l9 j# t<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ k/ i) c/ ~+ d$ Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* n; f# {* n9 ?% H( t5 i9 X4 k<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 o, \& A1 h$ l. c<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: q' C6 Z, f  K! m5 @<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ I# P3 J5 ^, f/ E% A1 G<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ g  z# ?- x3 P; k1 S" q* S<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 ^  X6 x! k0 g# y$ y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 q! X- K$ l  U' k- Q9 @2 K<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 _$ ~% R9 \% f+ C% Y& O  c1 V! {' `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& l& B+ n* ?5 |' }. t% h<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- V1 i! h  f4 L1 Y1 n8 u1 u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 T. }* Z, p" ~<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% @8 P# k" L- k) z6 b( [! u, `! W, {* q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. p7 Z8 ?: n, g1 W4 Q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* m7 {- V9 ~+ P<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) U5 J9 ?/ J( E! `" P<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>