【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 o5 ~* N/ v. S9 K' B. eThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 S: S. z% O' `, T: e: l0 A8 p+ WThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# Y+ E2 H, ]: R9 w4 UWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
! e; K$ K. q  |, U7 t# x7 \1 _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
$ |! a* l* l- ?: q2 ]' Z1 SI love you I love you with all my heart
  s$ Q- I4 p! _8 C# o% \Nothing can compare to my love
  u1 [; U8 X6 {' O: m! [Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& i" X3 k/ B% zThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# c4 a" o' C, i6 oI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
( [8 d0 f% b$ l# Q1 o* |# lI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
1 G& K$ o" Q: r7 f, [; E% F. h5 NYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# [/ y, u( t! d0 o' z, WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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- C1 j& L% j- s$ w<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ X8 I. ^# P9 |5 p<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 h1 X, ?- l$ _& v. r  O<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 I$ P7 v& ?. f* ?1 z" F<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' [% \/ F) O7 B- q" U<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! g4 O2 D" ?: J8 ]9 }6 ^<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( p  ?( s) `0 o! ~2 ^) Y3 S9 Z- Z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
8 j) [6 o, T! u9 n5 ]) v# N<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 ?6 E6 c8 g( a<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 B: [0 K" c) X/ Y4 q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. `, {3 }9 k! }<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% ?) z/ a, i, b3 ?$ _<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- F" J4 [6 w' s! G<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& s7 j! L" p' |3 \<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 ~- G" e8 y1 C1 I<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 W) A6 p4 i% E& @/ `" E% x4 E! }<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! X  w2 `: |8 ?0 j& \1 [<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 Q' P6 W8 c) ]<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; W8 m% n1 T* Y6 i  o<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: E- q) ?! N; X( P5 V<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; a- g$ k- }! y9 L" E( H  A<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* G* u$ `  j0 y0 `<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ r& A2 X( O: k$ K/ ?8 F" Y  ]5 f<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ F' P/ B% I- r- v5 P<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 n, S  s. a+ G1 d  D<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>