【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
" t5 |3 P- s- I1 [- a( IThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 z* z2 ^. T( Z" NWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& S1 A2 [* {9 T8 {% iThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ y* l8 y9 @1 h5 W9 I* ]  {' bSeeing the sky content with its love
4 G/ y4 \1 K1 f$ q! e3 L" hIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; H. m1 j8 ~9 l0 |; Q0 KYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
" K. D) l! d5 vI love you I love you with all my heart
: @: E4 j5 P' L- _( @Nothing can compare to my love
; J6 a9 `, J1 o' G7 I7 P2 Y( W6 RCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) W4 D4 t6 h) h" }- w2 J6 H+ VI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 j: E9 b" Y& y: f  kYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ t3 E1 S, f0 j' E0 u2 RI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& k& O2 Y5 K/ E: j- l<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ Z; C3 w6 r' C<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  \; N8 _$ U5 z0 S, I<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" j; A: ]8 V* D<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# ^9 n1 ?" ~) {7 a# u4 F, X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 J( D8 _5 F, |/ _; h2 O# H5 ?2 _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ D. y9 p% [$ R% {6 q, U  O, E<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( Q; A" s: A0 @0 G<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( @' l; t9 X& f' I7 ]$ ?<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( h$ ]* s0 s5 D! x<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" d; F: `: R0 o& l<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# [/ U' _- b' R$ p; ^5 z6 L<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' R" P6 P6 ~" S* u7 a6 d<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 H+ Y9 O, S. e; a2 h8 L<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 ]2 m3 K. a  k, l( \9 ?<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ [/ R9 O" k; }<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- N- |) D5 D! `8 {( I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  ~! n0 F) L: v/ U) S% ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 ]2 n) w- R1 z1 P) j* ^<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: t6 A/ e" l2 d+ p7 A+ b+ o; Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 z+ O! s- Y" R9 r( I( B# I<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, \0 b9 e$ x; |$ N8 p<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) }/ W9 p2 o7 H3 }; s) l: x<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 b( j1 V* o2 N0 ?<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& ^$ N/ ^  R5 q5 ^<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 x" K2 ]. p4 z* w& T7 j! r2 U" p$ |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 s  @; B- g3 }/ R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% d% e0 ^/ V5 L<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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( Z; i, e5 p  C* m6 G! }7 R. |3 E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ T! \% P% c, R0 L0 N<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>