【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
  ]8 b- @2 d9 ~2 F" N0 k3 fThe moonlight is shining brightly,
3 r* h& S/ `3 j  \Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 x' L  b* ?" J7 J( uThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% p+ |% j0 o0 MWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ {8 q5 W( H# Z0 ]3 I/ M- V1 TYou needn’t fear anything
% e% V5 K' M: [- a% T. @1 BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ z+ q; Z! ~7 x7 \3 pEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
0 u. X5 e/ D  E5 Y: tI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  S( D4 H8 t3 _5 y9 u$ kI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 [! P  a6 y1 T# `Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 ?, c5 O2 Y. _8 y3 C: M/ L1 mI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% M% ^* g% v7 N  H# `With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 h* f2 ^: D3 u# S4 F) y% sRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 ?0 x9 t4 A. ~* X% `. u<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ Y4 h5 A# [$ F9 M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& U$ C) Q3 k' f5 b- p: r# Q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# [2 K2 e1 _; J8 B5 j9 O5 d+ Z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, a! e& m3 K! L: K1 j2 x3 C$ Q) N<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 ~2 ^7 V% k/ q" q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 E6 E+ M, U0 ^1 t- d/ H' e<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ N. b8 h* i* N" K& x+ Q" \<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
5 Q, I4 U9 y& g6 G" q7 i<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 ~. m# h, }8 S' u- o* C& }<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 b# i8 N( x; y! n, T<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: j  ]2 i* F( }<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) m, |+ S7 b- D- r' V  O<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! _, z& f2 R# `* i( V4 U<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 f+ e+ U& J0 M, z) N2 I<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) w1 K1 j- A$ z* h& h8 R+ i0 e- |<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; k8 [5 M! t2 X3 b<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, k5 n3 L/ e% P. l% l3 K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. l  J+ Z) J6 ]  H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# L: G" e" R! x4 T% w2 g<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: q' ]2 E: ^* V/ \" a3 x) h) f" b<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# A- ]4 O- K0 B* f<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, T, X; \% S) F% {2 H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) H$ ^8 d0 W# i" K<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ k+ [6 G0 \# V1 d! F$ G7 }; h<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
& `+ v) X4 Q0 D' d7 J4 K, c0 v
, h2 L4 a1 L" x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>