【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" e" d6 |1 b8 CThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 H, v8 S% a! M: wSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& b2 ?. B' {: E+ d2 uEvery other word you utter is love
% ]# s# r3 x; @; \5 qI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
/ N6 `' l/ \+ J4 r6 r1 R: uCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% O  a7 C" K$ `' _: \# V; \The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* D  ?8 V. Z+ Z, D2 ]I want so much to see inside your heart
$ P% g# L- b: s! YI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 W, e- n+ ?4 S; l0 CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* q/ g3 Z  x( Y) a/ lI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 g% M! Z9 A; ?1 JWith such a tongue as yours,
& X  [6 m* j; n- m( zYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) y0 D$ F& S: c: W3 H' t& ?- ^" zIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 i% P- j+ Y+ W7 P9 S7 A4 G<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: l" f$ Z7 G( D  ~2 L# @- i; E<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( h7 ?* O: b6 `$ w3 K+ q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: S. ?$ C0 B) \! q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 Q% T" Q% U) ^0 l$ A. _% d<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% t* M0 t5 K( R6 m; t: m5 o% P' y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 \1 g3 \' k. O6 ?' w& p<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  o( t  G" K0 r<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! z# m4 I' R* T9 m' C! u, M) X# ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 _# Q, F5 I3 L: b, y# [/ z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, Z3 y: C  c$ f0 ]6 p/ p<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- F6 n6 d% z# c% m+ U$ z5 Q' ?0 \<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ K1 R3 j+ b+ B& z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 y7 r  u' \6 a<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# }* p) P7 Z; ]$ b<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ x$ f6 e" a, Z! j9 m3 J+ }<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* o, Y# _' b. Y' E3 P9 @" j+ V<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 D3 a) O4 l+ \) _- p8 o! O2 I. f<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: k: G: j6 M: K) v' J<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 u- A3 O( `) r6 b1 H3 a* s; ?# t& k<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& ^5 E2 J2 I4 \& D% b<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 f( E' @3 C8 U1 v$ O; z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" z; q8 G" H7 j7 }5 T3 L0 h% D<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 Z- j4 q# a- }4 y8 @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 U% y1 l# _) V5 o1 W<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>