【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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/ [* m9 b! J9 g2 M1 z0 {歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
0 D4 s" a1 v( L# o) QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; s$ ]: C( \; B$ IThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# a9 r) D) A9 q6 d4 v5 ^4 f- {9 fWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 A; P* \# u9 s" k; H! IMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( h: ^- Y9 G7 Q  L4 XEvery other word you utter is love
/ x, y4 m: c: n7 ]9 T7 vI really want to know just how much you love me
% ^6 F# H& U, k' X8 @I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 p" g7 i8 `  a, `0 H" u3 N. r; G% X3 s; {Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" V2 V3 F: l! g5 F! G# q! dI’m still filled with fear
; K! Q! g# n$ q/ w3 i+ IYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ X7 }5 k! |# V* DI regret not dying
( O7 E2 F. ~! h% II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  O+ h! y5 ]* TRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

0 g4 k4 H4 m5 p
3 Q9 L2 x* N' r7 b6 L9 z6 w<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) x/ V7 \% _# _6 _1 `* Y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 Y9 G. m$ x* B6 Q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" a# l" l4 j3 @0 U6 L2 Q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 o# O7 q' T& M' H! K! t<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* r7 b' b5 z* {7 |<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ o- J# `. D  l<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 D$ _7 N4 M6 b8 \% e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% {3 @/ ~/ T$ O3 f<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. \! v7 G3 t# [( h- v3 B1 B. W<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! n  l5 I7 Q; ^. w: f<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* V" f, Q" |. x8 L$ r6 W8 y( @<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# z9 m$ X+ @  @, X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: h1 k. Q" r& a  M$ s<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% q" I' G2 J5 c+ z' a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 }/ s& L: [. ~9 G& t3 H: g# n; Z  i<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) C6 s* b; e# j( ?<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: ]  A4 h' p, A* Q. E<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 Q  Z5 V) V4 |! |1 |& `" G& i<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' q2 X% `9 b% [& c5 R<P>I regret not dying</P>
- X6 C0 O. z/ U4 W6 e' F4 s3 Q3 q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ `8 B6 I7 b! u( x& s4 w<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* O9 Z$ M% Y  f6 k<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ v- S- e- w3 C: J1 A' F# V<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 ?7 O7 G+ e) m) [<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 G8 N& T) s6 }5 Z! u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* q* n/ O7 [- Z9 U6 M<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 I8 a' W0 n9 I4 s<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
% n3 ~! M% o1 G( l
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>