【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
' _' a9 ?: S! Q4 Q) zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; L1 [; `/ b+ o5 jWith the moon kissing it every night
3 b4 f. x( T% `% O7 a( f) dSeeing the sky content with its love
7 F4 W8 y6 H' lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 I# a; |0 v9 L1 UYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
  f0 ]  R1 K8 ]7 G6 Y. cI really want to know just how much you love me
8 U9 L5 u  W* F0 y6 \! EI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
; P: [" L; R( w; gCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 \2 [& \. ?2 KI’m still filled with fear
0 T  d0 `  p7 |3 D2 o- e( B+ H+ r9 ]. PYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
- m* c! j$ C: ^! U( j2 ^$ hI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: {6 \3 {8 n: j: M% G1 jWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 I. Y3 O" m% _3 e<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# X: R. j1 n3 O  k% S- @<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, U8 @( ], {, P' k: R<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( b2 O% t. D. Z% e# a3 Y; D* m. P<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 E" y! {" l) R3 t* c<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" d( O0 k% }  R& b- e1 b8 l, ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
& D+ t+ |' H  L' }; x7 [<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! m( c. B# C# _2 @: q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" }9 W) E9 E4 ?' q& T$ g<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 N( I* b6 p3 o# g& N* w: M<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 h- {0 c5 a7 _0 `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) G, o7 S/ Q& V* Z) w5 B<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ Q) D5 j( E+ K, L. C<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& P1 q( o5 W  s5 v' ]<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& L0 X) |8 O8 Z; s<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 ~  s( H0 R. t: c5 B  H4 r<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  _/ b8 X* v! h* B4 v, h! ?( p<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ L; q0 _7 c; B2 ]6 O% C, Q% L<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; s; t" Z4 e- v1 C* Q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 }- b, K. P+ c+ M<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' ]3 X* K8 R( {6 b- x3 ?<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 C8 S0 y: ^! L4 C2 u, D% j<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 M, S% Y, p0 b; h( ?<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 g/ m. [" m- ]) `2 ], k$ S<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- R" q* e. L3 w6 k+ Z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 O( \- u, ^( k: L# G6 E# ^我请你剖开它
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7 D  {/ A. a, u 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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