【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 s8 L# t8 S3 p# I: x3 I/ l) yThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! L' r% ~5 ^& S* ZWith the moon kissing it every night
% w4 k" p+ r2 A4 x6 e2 S' T/ eSeeing the sky content with its love
% J3 W/ I) ~3 iIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
0 @5 J5 l; r% z, p9 X: e8 pI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
3 @- U0 f3 T4 ]+ @/ h2 wNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 A, V* r8 _' ~$ t7 \I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, U7 r8 Q5 w! B$ J- \" zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 h8 ~, I$ K# d$ a; |: x+ PWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 j$ o% G; i5 q- A" Y; u$ a5 hIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' M+ P( V" x0 t. }! B8 a<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 H; D9 R" [) u6 m<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 T8 Y% r1 \) _5 Q" a<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& f- m( B7 W/ d4 f' P<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- f9 S; R$ i7 I$ ^* l<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. b2 @- l* L( |4 x$ p7 b% l( v8 G<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) b. I. D6 Z5 x' i<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 m- U% `/ c9 }' u; o9 P6 O<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' c2 L! _$ Z' c- _8 r. S<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* t# G) |0 Z; D( A<P>你无需担心</P>
8 l0 R  c2 X: N7 i+ G& y5 \" D" \! v<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ K* x3 M# Y( L$ V0 y# ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ t" L5 d5 a8 E) e, _- Q3 m0 w<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 G) E$ r( r% C5 l8 N<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, _/ B, |- s' g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, q* q  I3 r/ T% L<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 ~) }: \/ B- _0 e<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  L0 E7 _/ W% p" `<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 @8 _. L% \/ m; f* Z' |7 d% P<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( X7 X; \; R, h' P<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 N' g6 e- K" w2 [* o. q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# \8 S! H  _* [3 u$ d<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  W( F7 t1 w: H% M<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 \5 S% T; _& ]  p, F- F<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 M% ]1 T4 i; R5 c. u: ?9 E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! G0 e% e: O1 M9 y# b; C& @; v<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 f8 v( }& I  E2 Z" ?# X$ c<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" c6 J; t8 ]; {: H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

# c% |, ~. |8 R+ H7 K5 a9 |我请你剖开它

( a* N; i7 [* k* b3 M( z, C8 F 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>