【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# }$ R! G, E. F% ?0 W1 y歌词我附在后面。
. s8 B1 g, D# x3 p0 B' |0 i+ tThe moonlight is shining brightly,
- Y8 K5 K  {1 ]Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 @6 F/ P/ \  ]) Q7 x, N! SThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 J; w& m% b/ ~; L2 B8 VYou needn’t fear anything
9 X0 R# x, ^* Z6 F* ~My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( p7 I" V5 N* |/ M9 J, YEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) `/ ~* q+ F6 B3 C$ u1 ]6 N% TI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% z( h* o0 ?: p; G$ x/ J# n4 uCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# L/ a8 F8 v& S9 jI’m still filled with fear
+ F8 ~" V/ k0 }2 \8 }7 A4 z/ [Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 l6 A( ?! h: [6 ^I regret not dying
8 P) h. l, W" |7 LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 \# |9 B; r5 w  PWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

% n. E+ H: w) [* t2 ?<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- G/ Z. i2 C* a8 s- V$ m<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 S1 `& w/ u5 `  ~% o) |<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* n' f* j# i: d3 n# E<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, Q4 e3 R" M* d5 G! W1 q1 e: L4 H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ i$ z" e7 {( C. b: X6 [* ^- j  L<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' E2 a9 \' n( X6 W8 I/ U( X<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# o4 |3 @+ u* d" x( e3 d<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 a& G( V0 F/ ?$ h; G- J  n<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* @. N9 l9 U2 H# ~<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ E% e7 |0 H5 y0 G<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 A7 B% Q: l2 c: N5 d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 b- M1 C% e" e* H2 @, d& S' [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) q  [1 v- V2 J1 I$ F0 }% c<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 u$ N7 \+ U' D& A! a' V- p0 B0 ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% ?6 S# d9 F5 C3 K4 ^4 C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 I. R2 u+ ^' Y4 E<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; Z1 y. N5 `5 z! d<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. E8 E! O+ D! z/ |! |<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; M+ s2 {, ~, K9 _' w: F' S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 }7 X0 @" k! E9 Y# r. v<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! K5 i/ v4 E" B3 y: |) D<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  c/ [: V: u/ q- N, z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

9 J& F7 r% ^2 v( n$ a! [我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  {% v6 |* C1 X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>