【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ r" @. l3 g. C% X8 v歌词我附在后面。
' X9 \* I/ x: v/ b1 vThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
- U! a! c" f1 cWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. H; {; f5 m& i) B5 M' ~# K( bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 Z8 ?6 L+ _& cWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ h$ z$ o/ Z6 B$ V4 wEvery other word you utter is love
6 i$ {. }9 B( T2 L1 kI really want to know just how much you love me
/ h" l( v! C6 j+ xI love you I love you with all my heart
- {: n: e! X) T: r+ pNothing can compare to my love
6 @, O# _% O( @! l) a- \* e, v, s0 TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 o5 h: J+ R# Q4 p* ^The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* s0 k+ \3 Q  @+ dI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- V! b; d$ p0 D0 z  B. P5 MI regret not dying
* m1 z3 f% |3 f% t! tI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 O& \# c# y) e8 z5 ~With such a tongue as yours,
& L6 V' p, ^  x2 tYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

' ~. R1 n2 L! Q8 U5 z( |<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 s) o8 B8 f- d- w; @<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 W; c$ n& L; o/ K; U! d& O0 p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 y& d1 t4 ^7 K9 W: q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 O' ^, {/ n3 ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ e) g! V$ H. W7 x. n" t<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, Z9 y" n# d2 j' G5 V; v1 s  c<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ {7 O9 f% l6 [; ]<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 b% Q" X5 j+ ]6 a' c: c5 z+ `' f; }<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 U2 I  y5 W( Y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& v2 \6 l! F0 i4 A1 @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 \2 |  m8 |4 C! b# y& b: D9 U5 I* j<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" q' h5 ^7 {7 |8 u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 z: Y+ }  k3 P" I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% r& \  N3 W' ~2 S<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  U" p3 y3 f. ?) f: n2 W<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ i& E6 a- x% F, B* X/ [+ c<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 g! K# Q  e1 O% ^, [# @<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  B4 ]# J7 s& ~<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ z$ W( i  g# y1 E+ h1 e* d<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  h9 ?/ r9 ?/ i$ W2 X/ B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) L, M8 q# ^+ x& [<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* g* V" X  j/ e* e$ e4 `, c# n0 N<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
  k$ x  ^/ ]' S5 q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 L% Q6 K; z1 h; ^<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ ^% R5 A/ J5 W3 l<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ ]# ~9 J* v6 R: p8 R$ f" ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. E6 m  F$ n. y, \2 c; X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>