【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
" j( }3 Z: C+ o+ T7 F3 f. lWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& u2 L2 N, D5 T* S( @, w; U* K4 WWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 z* |  s/ t  iIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 W! f6 [& [  a' C( FEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 R3 n. X* C( o8 XNothing can compare to my love
% d! T, `' }/ O' kCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 N: k& U0 p, x+ @& g8 S: FThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: i. k4 B' w; a# kI want so much to see inside your heart
+ h$ j9 N; C7 X) hI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) X$ ?+ R( H6 X: QI regret not dying
) r$ C8 c# m* @- L3 o0 A; N4 W$ dI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
- {# c  O' l: \7 c2 G/ ]Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; ^6 {7 N5 s1 N( P2 ]7 {<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; f5 P/ L4 \, u<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ i9 \. ~$ T* j+ e<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* D5 n6 X8 W- S+ I<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) Z& J$ h4 |. v<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 p; d) Z- x: u+ B$ ~) R<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" V; A" {( Q, M5 [; A4 I) t# q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 Q# s" u" }+ n- C6 T  d0 f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; q6 l) d6 j" m; |<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 B& z2 u9 a, g! @<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 [( J2 p5 H$ f& ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 C: V: j, ^5 c8 N+ p' A<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) r/ X4 q( d7 R7 D3 o<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 v7 _& F- I* h) N<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) f- n+ Y9 z7 b, Y& h7 l( \" Y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 P( |0 h) B6 N, u/ |! f<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 }  U# U- d/ ]2 c8 c# v<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 f  I5 d8 z+ k$ N% v+ `<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ z2 Y% j' a: f! N) f1 w<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 I- O6 V7 X- M<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- B  d/ S4 h5 r4 U7 z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" h2 b' t2 M' F+ [0 H2 J+ C<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- f9 I( }( j6 [* p& N<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ I( j( U" h5 J3 Q$ s5 z* x3 u0 m3 }<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ ]% e  f5 l  v% s<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 M% _% ^- ]4 j% J! V* x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! D* u7 I2 u& F$ c1 g; B% p( s<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. i0 l; A( i0 r! w8 B  o) l3 s<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ @- T  q5 V) L( V$ }: N0 `<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, ~) i/ X7 D+ j3 S" a; P- O; P" s5 \) I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, P- z3 v8 m) M' I2 d4 l4 i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( R, u/ C; M7 i<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

7 I9 `( s' n- z4 x- X3 R3 Z7 l0 C0 \7 C; H我请你剖开它
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5 P; r/ l- q/ G; ^6 p. Y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>