【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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: P0 a' ^- _0 m4 h: m5 H& s- I歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
# I. J1 c4 y# cWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% l6 y- w+ K8 uThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ V9 S# d) C+ B$ S2 Y9 t" {. H9 o7 iThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ V" X! ]0 m* M! ]* m% c$ tWith the moon kissing it every night
* b! ?7 D5 n2 s5 sSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
% Q5 b9 _& V% e7 oMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ O3 t3 L. ~, LI really want to know just how much you love me
9 U$ h$ u' z) Z: X+ Z- Z8 M$ P' z+ M" `I love you I love you with all my heart
' N# x: `5 g  y7 i( YNothing can compare to my love
! Q* k( ?4 ^, UCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! U1 j) u2 p# _The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 S# {( h5 s% f' D3 P  AI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 b$ p, G$ X) f' d$ z$ O$ t# CI’m still filled with fear
7 a! F' M" L' C& J/ pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, g3 o) c/ r) N& YI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
# N5 m3 I& C7 U3 @; qYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; j& Z  f' [) R# K1 ^/ C9 f. u' M<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 B) g/ k4 K0 a! K" }- `* T<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) h/ k4 y2 |+ B9 _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 V1 c( h; w5 }+ J& D<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: |8 J+ o$ H' U# x- P<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! Y6 v6 d1 b: y. \! t4 u( |<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 N# \9 i6 k( \1 y6 X' M<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 D3 K; \2 b  x) V) I* z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 Q% F' [/ M( O3 Q& u( P. v<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 x# Y9 P% N6 ^4 h1 M, c<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" Y+ l1 A2 S( V" ]6 x1 f<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 W1 \: Y1 i2 q" s4 l<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, g5 m' L6 l6 i& H$ H* b<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% _7 f& ^. }. z% q) N7 Y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 \# k4 G9 \; e. X<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' n; U# g+ n( O; C5 l# i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) y8 \9 n' C7 p4 D" Y) N9 Q# b" C<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* W) M6 V" Y6 m# U<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, C- m. x2 c0 i, q0 j: Y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# w) g& X# G. ~4 S<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% O9 k* c: c+ m9 P& P! {<P>I regret not dying</P>
) I! c9 a$ d, Y5 }! f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 o2 j$ c8 _$ \, g4 Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% V# ^, P% }9 \4 `3 K0 Z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ G7 Y1 s2 i& S' O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) m: M& g- B0 c6 H9 K/ Z9 I: K<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" v4 y6 E1 b7 z% @<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ k- N' j; z4 O6 ~% ^% y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* A* x. ]' K2 X+ C6 N( ]. p% E% v# P& o<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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6 O3 i$ J4 v" A( N, U" O# | 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>