【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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/ l# |. a) U9 ^8 h歌词我附在后面。
* h4 }+ D/ W% t% ?( J- r0 T2 g+ FThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
# ]" P3 ~9 d5 |, qWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) `% {% h- G4 r+ C9 }+ AThe sky is happy down to its soul
. x* s( y" P" R5 k  r6 ~0 hWith the moon kissing it every night
$ B" L( s6 Y$ d3 F1 \5 }Seeing the sky content with its love
8 T4 Z3 G7 l' uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 S  Y. Y* k: x& JYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" N% A' K) z* i3 S/ T0 \3 a; xEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
" c2 S0 Y# q* g8 wI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& k+ E2 `3 A, O; ^7 u0 _2 _The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
& O8 z0 A+ z+ ?. Y  O6 rI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 \) ?% w6 F+ D; J! V) B7 S+ M( gI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 {9 |! z5 J6 i1 d, e% Z& \+ oI regret not dying
9 q" t$ ?1 H0 k2 m9 \  L. Y  g. A/ II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 H/ v3 [8 \8 p' W5 Z6 @: XWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- _# T+ D% K! m+ Y1 i: t5 ]Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" P% N. B1 D5 E/ y! w2 H<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, B! d% c2 i" j8 e<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, x  f, C# Q$ @( s" q6 h0 v9 I<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ X8 |/ _  E! N% D" Z5 p$ E<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; x* X' b/ n4 |<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* J  }5 C: D2 Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 T+ V" j2 p/ g, B/ ~8 T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) |4 h  c8 ~3 E( t/ }% m* D1 @0 g<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- J% G* x0 u; B5 w<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 o) @: `) c* G" J$ t<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 L6 c1 G1 y, B<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 c& a6 K' s' T! U: ^. ^4 e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 A* B* k0 e  g* Z: f8 B<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* P/ @$ d+ J9 I% w1 v$ l, ?4 _<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& h, q2 J; d  J: M# x+ H<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 }, f' v. X) J: b. s3 f3 ~<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  d! `# E4 ~  t& R3 |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 D* H% e! \6 ^7 s  w<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) y' B* q; [( u3 @+ a# o4 S<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# k  }, a' r. b+ I- Q9 \; p<P>I regret not dying</P>
( k* X7 f1 V& s4 T: m7 z) D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' B3 Q' u+ t3 ^<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 w& H$ q+ c& j+ [$ I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 @' H& u3 o$ W0 L' u: A<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' X# t$ x! _9 E% t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ u# t& c' {5 Q# P<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 j- q" h4 U, s- B3 R2 S) A. l: ]<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
3 X/ K# }( N7 v: U' X# i
, Z1 O6 ]: x1 Q3 E我请你剖开它
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+ `& [+ g$ S/ x% ^% W3 }% k' d3 h7 E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% }- i/ z9 r0 S- L5 |5 T& Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>