【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& w+ W( o6 Y2 J# s$ a! g1 WWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ X; i( C4 X, v/ ~( [" LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: q  r  t( z$ [. \, K, w# wThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) A/ M( x! g8 U& k6 y, [It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 v3 Z" A1 c& PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 O1 P7 x: V, e8 lNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, K& \& T( n- E- c! |7 kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ h' `& K& a7 B7 X7 |3 ~( YYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- G4 r& {" \. H5 k: L! D' p1 e- }I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, ~, l3 E* r( S2 q! {Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# ~" t( p9 R; M<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 x& q5 D9 @& C8 M# t7 b& D3 }$ G$ F<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 X* V6 r; }+ U; x) o<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' Q% |, I. g+ d# s+ X- n6 I7 C4 I<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. D1 [" ~4 ^* I, I5 G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 J4 z6 H3 u+ k' l8 i<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 G" K. A1 I6 ~) q2 ~1 b<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ v) p, S$ B) s. F) ~' u6 \<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( F" P: x) Y3 n3 L9 T" V  w<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, i4 E* d" k9 ~, n9 m! g: S& l<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 ?* V/ G& P+ C5 Y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ \" j2 R4 `9 U3 I$ }<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" R; {& w! a6 c& s! ^% @4 g* p/ X<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 \& C& K5 \8 ^% g9 T3 O4 z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. B  T  a) G3 w' f<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ X4 Z2 a( t$ C+ ^: L; n3 h0 b; {7 P<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! k& {3 P# b, m) g! r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 M$ h" E/ A. ?" `  M( |( M<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! C3 c) \! S  `# H+ w<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 X. W% K5 V9 H2 {7 u* F<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 o; i( S/ k3 b* A9 i% h$ ^<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ A2 {9 F, o- k2 g! I- {+ i/ i<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* }! \" Q& P1 `: ^8 Z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( U5 H- g: b3 ^<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& M+ D0 h" [0 ~+ d& p3 j<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 @$ _% _) E0 G$ G" a9 h, W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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. c0 R9 M! i3 \4 Q8 j- E我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>