【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 B) E, V7 P! w3 z歌词我附在后面。
) q" N" n3 h" n. M5 d* Y% U1 KThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( b) m& g3 E) e: t  s8 U$ mThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, }* C. a( ~6 e* o3 k! kThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
  d5 @6 ~- H- ?8 m2 JIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) L" d" a+ D: g* P: ?) EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: w( t, }4 Z3 w- o' WI really want to know just how much you love me
) s1 w  {) ~, II love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' r0 ~) F1 b& J5 bThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 }, V" V; A" CI want so much to see inside your heart
9 R1 R8 c) B, n8 fI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  l8 `4 r) {+ lI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 X! V- I6 m& p0 [+ a* p* B3 CYour speech can’t even keep up with it
8 V* X" ]" s* C4 FIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 ?, P+ ^, q8 i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 V/ n# c8 k3 I8 S! O7 X& }<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 W: p/ o0 c: N<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) t- p3 S& f! F  @<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ c: A* `: j6 L# s<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% B+ K5 g5 [: p4 p<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: w0 u) |, i( R3 q' f. ?" g  L<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( u: B& s& W) |1 x% |" L<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 t# o7 H( [1 R/ Q1 g+ H6 b! O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' @0 C7 {0 x5 R; ?  m<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, {/ q! E6 f1 u<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ A, G! u- [( ^* k0 y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) Q% k. T8 r( v1 t. E<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( Q" w4 h& X7 W) ^6 p<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" ~; c2 }& {* z+ a  D3 }<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! {* D; w2 T& {/ E7 Z. h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) g9 ]8 ~& n3 m0 N( g( z  K) u: D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 `; I. i/ T7 i  y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' a! E" s5 O! B' i; G<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: B; O8 p) {* D( _/ \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 g, R$ U7 t* T+ ?9 r+ t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 I) o( x8 x2 ]" N0 _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; e5 m7 _" j: G' U1 b' X) w" G4 e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: Q6 a* Y. M& u) s$ h- W* I3 c+ \. x<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" x. P0 U' v+ @3 f<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( H+ U& ]$ i8 u; n" k. a<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 d1 Z  m1 a1 \! C<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 s  S2 ~6 U5 @% c; I! a  o<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 V) U5 V) Y+ L<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# j) t% m8 ~3 H+ A* x0 }' V3 F<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" ]  _0 Y, n( H3 }<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 l9 C3 I- v2 T6 ]2 `9 X<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ Z4 e7 U0 p; f1 X. c6 n  J2 V<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>