【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
+ D6 x* G5 h  I1 n& I5 dThe moonlight is shining brightly,
7 |9 w6 @  H3 R% Z1 KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 _# Y3 {% \( @5 q3 a* UWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 a, ~, z. f: oThe sky is happy down to its soul
, a! q3 @, w* }& Y6 [- I2 d+ h2 Z' QWith the moon kissing it every night
( `% F4 D1 }; ]" C) USeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& e. X7 X' \! m( z$ ZYou needn’t fear anything
) a, U2 r$ y) M' l, Z4 ?) NMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 V% N2 d! A& S1 t- yI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 i+ Q) T2 g3 u! J3 E, j9 YCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# n/ `, W0 ?9 Z1 iThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! M: P2 J  m; V  t2 E) DI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 d  w, v. `3 U* V/ X' {% pI’m still filled with fear
. L% C6 Y) t: RYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
# l1 r' K6 b$ O/ Z, [/ A! HI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 b( g0 J$ h) z: ^With such a tongue as yours,
  C5 I( \" S- [- ^( V/ l5 Q" ~Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ l8 ?$ _5 ]8 ^9 ], o6 ^  m/ e2 y1 f& s3 |Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ L: M! `' v1 T- N' p<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- ]6 j4 V5 s& [. n/ X5 T! p" G" ?<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' s" r% p' f  P- f8 x% }4 f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ \" X! h$ h4 u* l9 P0 X/ Y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, c/ E- i& l5 m0 R5 G1 V+ n+ ^4 q. }<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 f) T  T) C: a/ T9 z8 Q6 R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, U2 S+ j& ], H& k& X; K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: \  n8 @; n0 w/ F<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& j! g4 A1 b4 l( ~1 a+ C& ?9 N, r<P>你无需担心</P>
9 E" ?" W. Y, ?; W<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; U7 R  n& H& C& D5 o) u<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 ?) d  A  u6 ]<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ B3 c+ j9 \( `% L. {1 F; ]3 g<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( S% ^2 q0 H; b+ |- X: e6 t- S<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& t( F- y! l. u& h7 g<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) F- k* s5 B! [( T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 g0 w1 p( y9 `: d0 F* \- s1 W5 H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  T1 S# o7 d: i% I0 @<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% q# o* T' z4 u. ?- b: k<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* {' \; T# |) f( x( q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 {! F0 y" j) _<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" \  E: U! t+ t" y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. X9 o4 V  i' T" D<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ I) X8 a& r1 l<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 F8 k" d6 Z2 o! Z5 C# Y7 T( v$ ~. B<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% ]4 g2 Z7 P) n+ Q* ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- v4 X  ]0 s0 y6 x$ q5 h6 t<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' J0 F  L7 f0 y# z4 a( t' F; C我请你剖开它
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+ z6 t& K6 r$ r3 E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>