【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
4 H% `& B$ G, m7 AThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' N7 {* O' A2 T- Y: gThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
  d2 T; M- ~+ I" CSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' ]: {/ l6 z% C& t+ j/ FEvery other word you utter is love
7 \' |' @) s, ^$ {+ @I really want to know just how much you love me
1 q5 t, t3 U7 r' X+ |* kI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
: o2 h- _: @* S& D4 @% Z* p8 ]Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, O& S  U5 D% }1 r' s% g; iThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" Y" l$ _- g; y4 F: gWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 a/ T# S" @* qIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. C; q) e4 v3 g, M<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 Q! Y$ X/ r! f& @; \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 y4 _: O, E$ a* H8 P, i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 }$ e3 E3 Q5 w1 j( f<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. f" J7 _9 m% A! {) z% ~<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! ?. E2 j8 ]% P" U- f# Z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- N  o0 B3 G3 A# R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 Z' U9 O: C  O2 R<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 e, E* y% d0 s1 \+ a* ]<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ B" O' m1 \5 C  r7 i2 ^& ]9 [" ~<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  l; d, a) u3 j5 ?/ T) ]; u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 M& H9 x4 [! b0 D+ U& \# Z6 P<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ Q/ l( G' C( X) z2 y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, x! J- T, T7 _. }7 i' z  }- C<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' w9 X5 a' B; n( D<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% ~8 O& t2 T, z. b  h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( U1 h4 y0 D3 e) k8 f* i* C<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 t0 }: }5 X# J) d  [5 L! c<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ ~4 k0 o7 ]1 l<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 u6 `! j/ U+ j+ v7 J8 [2 N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 H+ v, ~- ~: m6 I- _7 J2 y" k0 e# }<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, \( k. t' R, P+ A) T( V9 U2 K<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. y4 o/ G. c/ U! T* _! k<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 P; D& Y: j" I/ R5 Q- x" e0 I) w<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 e. g: {8 s0 E7 k' \" `: Z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

& a( m' [- \/ Q( a% N+ R 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>