【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 i/ ^( y. I  m9 S! ~歌词我附在后面。
- u# l% X! i% `- `. bThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ X3 u: a0 h: }) AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ t! @! X, c- f3 p' h# G, w7 }) {With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; L; p$ s5 \$ ?. nIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! z& h7 ~0 f4 \' ]+ Y" C# ~# ZYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 I# x' [4 F1 ^7 {' J, e3 b- ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; H1 c9 W6 k6 Y2 R" c8 }6 H* SI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. ^0 G' ]& j9 G8 y  k7 G0 TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
0 y7 ]) Q+ M) S% R  M  f' \( l0 FI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 ]+ y+ h+ H6 [" S( n+ kIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  h7 T; M' q1 `( t' I( Y' B9 \Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# h% h' }; o1 V<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; v% @. s6 z- r/ T<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 R4 E9 J' l6 }0 z# y* J7 D, c<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 J  D4 H8 i! K& Y9 N' W<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 I( z/ O. q4 f( S. K; _% C<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  v9 V* O' E+ j: t( N( `9 u<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 R( Y) r9 n; K1 v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 Y. H7 B9 d- M( X/ O- D- i, d* |<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. _+ g- Z1 k6 |: l* H* }. Z% T<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ m0 I9 F* |0 r<P>你无需担心</P>
: ?  u/ w# k( o0 Z% `4 K( z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ n, n% ]2 ]1 O: w  E, Y' m<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- w5 ], U' n9 Q) e7 V* y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 y1 {# z1 B. f, P<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 n. y9 z# {; ]- r* ~. v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ X+ z6 p. j. x7 T& m! @<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 a) L  n! C9 z' a9 |% z9 S. J$ G9 z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! W* A: K# I& z2 M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 j$ t+ O/ B) K/ ]4 r" h1 y; l4 L<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) v* ?- D! G2 b2 Y0 P/ V" g<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 S8 G) U1 T3 h" M<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* Y+ Z4 q  Q* k# s  u  U<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ m- o: Y) h' r: E: F<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& i' a9 |% j! C8 z; Y5 x  D<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 K2 c4 N- C+ S<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 i5 Y& \4 M! _5 u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 d+ ^- j6 V  ]<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! S5 r6 m5 F$ X3 \6 _/ ]+ W<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

2 g/ r5 ?  q' d我请你剖开它

% f, j/ L- ]* D 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ [4 S: L7 \; i' ^3 y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>