【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
- M: N3 D3 p; e. _8 p) wThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ |- H; s8 E( O! jMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% w9 V! s# J. W" G) ~The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
, H  t5 `0 r9 ~2 YWith the moon kissing it every night
1 S5 `" t: w( A, FSeeing the sky content with its love
" F9 J. P' ?* z! DIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- C. S3 D$ m2 j  k% d3 WEvery other word you utter is love
- ~  A# J  D. \" MI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# d6 H) X! o& D% T2 g) \/ m4 @Nothing can compare to my love
5 F9 m) {) ^/ a- T# [2 _Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
) d  f' L* A& d8 [# ^  J' \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 a6 g1 }3 v( C5 d! D5 AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: A  }* }% ~! gI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 I! S! ?# C" m7 ~If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' b9 H, Y: h0 ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: `& l7 Q: ~( g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# D7 Z* N; M/ [0 C<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 Z& g3 W! J) Q+ b+ {<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 x9 y$ `- R4 o- l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( U* O; o/ }) g% {9 |<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 e3 f& `* }" _0 O; a+ h<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: t  ~% _+ }# C5 n; {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 Y/ K! z$ A8 {+ w* X+ X4 b<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
( W& m8 Z0 S8 m2 X  r0 {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: w% f' `  K' `" }' w) i2 Q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ L5 c4 u7 B' }' Q- K# l<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 s: i7 K0 Q, s1 Z; I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: E% U0 ]. l4 S0 h<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& B1 ^3 D9 C* y  \; W6 A1 G+ ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& r  t1 A, c. k$ d- h; v<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 }, \( N& j& z% s  H1 r5 J<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ \; @$ I0 m% E<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* [: Z9 x; Y& S8 [3 _- B<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% y" _6 p/ y; `<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 p8 F5 h4 ?8 ], W2 M# c% p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: ]: w, {% i. W4 a9 J<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- e! Y% L# F& ^9 |<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& G, _' n, C: u( O  h$ f, i<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 d8 X9 p& Q2 d$ H+ ]<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 K- n8 s# j- N4 S5 ]  x<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ N3 i- m* ]8 w% M- B- O0 u) H<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. N& g6 o0 W  f2 r1 v, J* P<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 [6 m5 h# }' C* ^7 I<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 U. @/ \+ j3 T7 S我请你剖开它
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- G( |* s9 {' E1 R4 E/ a2 z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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