【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
$ [+ s2 g- z6 l5 F" o+ S- T3 I# _The moonlight is shining brightly,
) P. M2 B$ _" z9 d5 g8 LMaking the sky glitter like gold,
/ x9 w" a0 J5 p/ U) DWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 Q" f: D3 R$ [: YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, @; U. x) f$ v" F( y- TThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. P1 d9 @0 q0 u& }: GYou needn’t fear anything
' L7 H- E+ F6 FMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
* r; E$ ]- g2 t/ X( ]. {I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: U' k- i7 c. S8 w2 \; I* CThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ g8 L3 P# X+ Q8 a) X; E# DI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
* p' E) ]/ M5 `7 t4 Y" |6 bYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 i1 j: D8 G) ~4 m( u" h4 sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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2 B+ d( M8 ~7 _! _: }<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 x+ g3 `0 b4 W7 ~<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 Z7 C) k- _' Y% ?* W! o" d9 ?1 P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 ^/ @" h3 r1 S- [0 t2 u$ p. R<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 @0 Z! I2 f" L( L# c$ U: S<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' m1 R" A; R& ]/ F" h8 Y0 k<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* U* G/ [" V( k( m<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; [# O/ p( }0 o' s9 Z0 m( F4 z: \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ K3 z4 d$ T6 l: {' K$ l<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 y% [1 R7 [& c2 b4 z' Y4 ^<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 `5 x( k9 C" q9 M0 i<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- _/ D' a7 |4 D0 L8 T3 }<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 k  k; ~1 r$ G, T! c* m/ Z( l<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) j3 h) k8 J* C: P/ m9 M2 K8 r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 g- W; B2 ?( N: ]  S/ R<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! F8 I/ ]( \; a. d  t4 z/ v<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 y. k/ a0 a: g# o% a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, E& [+ E- Q1 J  u. x) P<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 t. u, ]& c4 E<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 o' q2 c) C: D" G<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( \( k! d  X4 @4 B  I<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" U& _3 V9 |8 u4 A. t1 Q; F+ b<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ d$ q! X6 d7 o( m' E! ?! J<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 w: b' e) r9 ?' j  f# [, V2 q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ C, B+ P. O: f# u; s# w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# ?8 F0 e; L1 R4 i0 g5 N# e<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. `( K) U9 |+ x: d<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>