【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 D  b4 w, |1 gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 A+ h, d# `& XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) P# e7 U! P* e; v( _$ Y0 O$ tThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
, }; L  l5 A3 i4 }) \I really want to know just how much you love me
# V; n5 }( I: aI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
& s% o$ U+ c1 ~" H; dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% |. S" k9 S2 ~8 RThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# a$ \- {6 C) f, }I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" p! A7 _2 A3 WI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 E; T8 U% S8 _% q- y8 O! xRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ r4 w  Q; |7 Q2 G! |- B<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 d3 n) Q& {4 E% c- O<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' S! B* a) s. e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- u0 I! S, W1 U" j# [<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, a1 u( J' s- I: g/ g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 f) p$ ]! a& p" C& o: t& u, Q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" V' R* [+ s0 V) p% }# z" h<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 a, B+ T- e& m4 F<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; }  x; ]  `2 M<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% s- [5 H! f- @% I0 ]5 \- C<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% G; a# D7 J6 s# p<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; \$ w" p3 T& d2 M5 ^4 J<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 T" a* G& n  o* B  H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ b& {( f* d) U/ g9 z( [9 o, D- G  k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! ^5 q3 U+ }. m, L9 E; u' K<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' s1 \/ u- A1 ^! D7 ]7 p7 K<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; a; m$ C) T1 F( s" H* O# x: ]- Y& |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% m$ z) q9 y4 Y/ A7 L9 A# ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 p, J, s7 B9 b8 B2 E0 f2 f4 c5 _<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  A+ g) F/ `) q6 C/ l" }* D  w<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ E0 }8 H4 j& _# j9 q7 U' Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 _0 M  R' q6 ~' K# |<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ x$ n: T  F* X7 e3 \0 }<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# H3 `$ W  m3 ]* s% V0 w' z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, p% W- @7 g- A1 k<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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