【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 O' P2 G5 g  J6 y* [歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
7 j. F4 f# _$ {; JMaking the sky glitter like gold,
5 L# t# s5 d% x! fWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% z1 a$ |2 _. vThe sky is happy down to its soul
5 ~+ ?+ Q+ e- B: h( hWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 }/ f" G/ k8 w6 X9 xIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" b; P; Q+ o; ?" i. `. k: bYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 }: ]) W2 H: D" U8 hEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, b( r+ b+ _  r: t& x/ b1 ]Nothing can compare to my love
9 y+ h# O2 A7 LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( l2 S, ^5 O2 [: O( X% l) {" [! JI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 s8 Q/ S, Q5 e- r" QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 p- Q( t8 @$ S; FWith such a tongue as yours,
" O4 b: q( H- A  ZYour speech can’t even keep up with it
. }+ K# d9 C# m' m5 }' A/ v7 bIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# z$ \0 _5 N  Q9 A' j+ b<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, \. o# p8 C) m  g' r" A<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! q% p3 t. C5 D( e+ n<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& _4 ?2 _- n6 e+ V<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ S* m/ @. K( K1 D- C<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( X4 s) Y! _9 V3 _<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: k6 e( A4 n9 _5 d9 A/ \, @<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- M" R4 k8 r; c7 b. I% l<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 Q+ y2 k+ w" s  A" m" z% r& Z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ }, Y2 W9 J6 H- X7 L<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! u+ p' z+ `' w) F. X<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ x+ z3 c6 D9 ^$ ]/ g/ t- y9 h<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! H, h1 b' i& U" c2 a6 P<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# w; C) P# M) `/ D$ Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 @* g& ]( s* p# h! N<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. G( X$ h6 B& _' p* ?0 m: [) Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- l( T  a6 A, ~/ N" c6 r<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  z3 c" E; \4 S' H' t<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- |+ L1 _( y& c; r2 ^1 ]% G! s5 R, S<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 P3 o2 ~# x" Q3 V- j! H: n3 n<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# h( X& L: h3 q9 `) z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- u8 K# k3 o* h; E0 w5 l8 j, ?  @<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! f" A% f7 k3 v" D+ ?* N0 w1 N. p<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 E, W* _( m: E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% Q, U1 f: d. y3 X<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* b8 T5 y8 `$ r1 o<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ K; F0 t; T9 A8 K* J<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>