【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
- d- u, p4 `3 I% JThe moonlight is shining brightly,
' E' V0 M2 s& Q% w% qMaking the sky glitter like gold,
% o; q* L; q) u, g3 ~When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 z! a5 o& X) b8 ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# u* t  w7 a9 M# wSeeing the sky content with its love
" p$ U3 A$ y5 ?It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. F3 U" }! W4 \0 S4 x: P  y' S' ?5 vYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
  o% x5 \- j7 Y7 F* i! d) P( JI really want to know just how much you love me
) u: J9 ^2 s! S% |! C+ bI love you I love you with all my heart
1 k) v6 y% ^/ q, l( L" v9 [; R1 r# jNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 c  j0 n: ?' ZThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( n! ?2 ~3 J9 V8 [1 O" AI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% g( m* W5 }* N( l% {8 ~- V% F. zI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 S. e! H' P8 ^With such a tongue as yours,
- l7 c6 S" O, L1 D( ~" hYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ p9 |. t8 y' DRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 C9 s( w' A9 J0 J1 X<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  D" j' [- \  F! Y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& [! \# I* L7 W5 u<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* ~7 g5 N( p) a2 F( S8 `<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 V+ q6 x+ p3 Y+ J<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! M2 D# ~% R2 [<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% A% j& ~2 b) c2 i<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 X( E* f+ b$ T1 f. J<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 W$ R) H) r- h- L0 u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, B' S5 q4 w( u6 n$ N1 `( `<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: B4 Q& w/ F  j8 y# {9 @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 X% L  a. j$ ~$ L<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. t4 U5 T/ N) M<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; n7 _8 h$ V  W5 N<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 {, n' i. L. M; F<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 L0 e4 l2 H- j5 b& m' @# l. t8 J<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 A7 V( i4 `5 H8 @& y4 Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 U# g8 a7 e& l4 A9 S: G) X+ f<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- {2 g0 T8 K2 D% S; N. F- f/ o9 }<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; Y* x7 d. Q% m; m1 i% i, f* }' Q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! S7 N/ ?4 K: N+ d) y6 [" R: i<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' ?7 y, ]6 F9 b9 q! L6 Z5 m0 G<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% H5 r& F& l8 h, I" j4 n<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 B  o5 b& T( \5 x4 C<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ c+ b$ g1 I6 Y- B. d<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 ^8 X7 w% B) J4 H1 J  }: B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 f& q5 k2 [1 o: ~3 {<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' @( }0 Y! I4 h& y) p* G<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. M8 D" t7 z) ?) E. S6 j. X5 D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, |5 ?9 Z+ _( B" F$ L% {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 m5 n" ^; v% J+ }4 ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% V  G( V" ~. a  e' H5 w( V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

3 @! J+ c7 |0 Y; @- v! l 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>