【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- n: R& P8 \, j' `( i9 xThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
1 j/ A& q: ?& [  s+ G/ oMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ N/ d% e0 a9 B* v' G% s& M( H2 HEvery other word you utter is love
  ]8 Z5 G( o1 L# d, jI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! \, D% B) [2 ~, G' r% CNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' ^9 i. c% `2 z0 Z8 Y7 \, D5 zThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ o! i6 ], o+ b4 T; R3 x: F8 A6 W; mI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 e9 I1 v' H% x: f) ^- EWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 ?, [' K& C! @, a( @- W. v; RIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 f" X7 ?7 z. O. o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% r# c/ [, E1 n& Q% s8 `2 \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 v9 q# t2 |4 J: w, |4 Q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 o3 Z2 G# ?  F' v/ U, H. H/ ?<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# x' y3 ^( b- Q3 {, ~5 ~# n3 E1 N( V; H<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 i0 s) H$ H! ^  a$ o$ E<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* P9 Q- `2 `' R5 s6 D/ H<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( R  u2 n' A; ?5 ~<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ n9 P: B) U- S( }. o<P>你无需担心</P>
9 [& D, n! C# r: f7 X, U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' z+ R* D  X- D* E) x( m2 m" T<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 Z% [* K, R. ?# a: B<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, W2 g# \* c$ @. w) ^  K( L) U<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 \3 K/ x2 c9 q) D! U<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ O4 a9 p1 H. z0 W4 t<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 P, U# {8 |( W; k2 w) g3 |# {0 p<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' o, U( q4 P7 X3 P( E<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  n' N9 a: ]. W5 t<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 M' Q& \# h- g1 D: T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- K; X' U; |! r; \) B) l+ A8 ~6 n<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 |) b4 h2 V  @  h  f' R+ c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 V( _/ Q! \& W: ?3 g<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; x, q/ e( a/ c; o8 P( y<P>I regret not dying</P>
) k. z# Z; h& f( ^9 [: O<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) I: ?  v' I- D9 A7 \1 n/ @<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  s& w) ~. i( y) C4 N<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 x5 {* Y  U* U$ M0 p  X<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- x0 b  R  r( Q: {! K) c<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 J7 N1 U( O4 P  h' }<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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# a) y0 f8 v$ N) t 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>