【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ o8 F. b/ S, }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 y: O6 d+ i, k6 r. ~With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
  P- L! C: l8 c" Y  {It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
+ G& W  _* p4 T. vMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
: E3 s: R5 ~. ]8 _4 J, \I love you I love you with all my heart
" ?, ]& R/ Z, g. b$ yNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) V0 V! @6 D1 bThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ R5 u5 Z2 `% Q4 i1 d* f3 VI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) W. w# i# e7 V: b/ oI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
# H7 m. S5 M, ]$ q! }1 JI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# _5 _/ V+ j* N3 n4 xWith such a tongue as yours,
0 v5 m* ]# P9 TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
3 k) b$ f' o) c: z) _If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ X. z! }2 k# A" }8 F& Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 Z$ }6 D2 e) h6 W" u6 R<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 L9 N. ?! I! J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 S9 s) ?) T  U! a' B<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. N& I) p% R/ T7 i<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; H- B# s, G6 G: |. c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 [5 _# ?, S. u: a<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# `- f! N, t8 P$ i4 q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ `, m2 z* ^  u' |<P>你无需担心</P>
0 k. G3 G- p' |<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) v- A* s6 S! l& H, S; P<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" U) F- K" [- L4 H' t6 y8 T<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. ?+ [* q# x" S( Y6 T<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. k7 C2 l, N' V/ }% q' q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* h- G1 {2 d% v5 |; r( X4 ?9 H<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 d1 q- i+ P+ @& q" o<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ W) m* j6 t  Q7 H% m<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! A9 u" M( Z1 x! F% x8 Z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 R1 e* C# n$ J<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 M0 v: e" N" j$ \7 ~* N<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 P' b4 g' J( ^9 Y7 @% R<P>I regret not dying</P>
) ]: T8 _9 E5 {* g/ s, ^4 J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ G2 [! V2 v8 s8 a" U) N" ?- J<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' \. {* ?' [$ ^5 j5 G5 ?  o8 i( `% Q3 L<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; m9 J# r9 S: u<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 A+ T8 j5 n$ }* V3 s<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) Z; f. B' |3 k* _9 I<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

6 @$ ^! F) E( Q0 M& z我请你剖开它
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; G- m% f4 t/ n 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>