【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 B1 \% u/ B# l7 I0 [5 qMaking the sky glitter like gold,
$ A! X! S( J0 S1 S7 LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) X. i& p. g5 y. J# u! [5 ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
, N; G- W+ q4 j4 ?& y4 \Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 }- u- j' ]) ]) ^5 @" U! xYou needn’t fear anything
+ A- B$ I1 S" @% }$ FMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) l& k& j9 D. KI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& u! I9 M7 u, L/ g' b8 g  [I want so much to see inside your heart
0 U$ N- i( n4 P7 [. ^7 e1 KI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 U9 p* `1 P" S9 MI’m still filled with fear
! d" |& P# N* }: Y, _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 u' h+ R: `1 x, Y9 aI regret not dying
, |3 X; E+ S8 z8 {1 c: [* YI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. C* A% D7 @+ H8 c: u+ bWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ ]5 H* u  f' a' w2 i- j  s7 xIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" ~0 C' u7 p" l, n' B<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 J6 j& O, P( M  Z; U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; a: A, x  _& y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- {, t2 w: ~: e4 \0 p! g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 l8 J$ g/ U8 M! w! O7 \% F+ k<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ @. n; f% ~6 e! f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, @- U! p3 Y% V4 O/ \( v4 ~<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 O: L3 U4 m: A) A<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% f( T0 Y. V- H' V% g+ P$ k<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( y7 w; e5 j+ }0 L8 ~! @! A<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  m' f4 k( i# E# I" N8 {% u<P>你无需担心</P>
! Y- W0 N  E. h$ h! N  P<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& F4 g+ r( F9 [) |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 O7 G3 T4 D; g% q6 q% w' x<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 B' |, H/ x! j$ `; P: I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; q  Y1 }4 J6 h! }0 K) R2 z+ y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 K/ w7 Y3 d" O& ^/ `' W1 t<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ |3 g2 v4 [$ j6 c: x$ p  _<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% }; X6 ^( y* ?2 Q: K<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ w3 q8 L, X4 q6 Y$ S; u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  O4 G8 h) c# \  Z6 W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 D- b# R9 Y# y9 F<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# x9 c; V0 _6 l+ e& p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 E8 _+ f3 t- ~: T6 d+ ?4 I<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
- [! P) s5 h$ U8 i; @1 S9 A<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 [) U3 X) ?/ R. l) `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 k; H6 v. n5 D9 E4 U1 Z' r6 Q( l<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" o5 P" ]% i0 ~! p! C7 x<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ R; E; S0 J, j2 v8 V( \0 B' [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* M& k9 V5 e5 b) K* ]# x<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 i& s. [" j4 w8 q1 X<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

) R! B  H9 }) o( C$ \我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* [; [7 ~0 j! K4 C& o+ m<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>