【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 B# `- t2 p/ f4 C4 I歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 s2 b6 S% A# N( Q2 c2 dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" a6 F7 d6 r0 @; d7 ]  i& B* ]The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' G2 r; A! s9 N+ N" W2 QIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ S5 }: ~( o6 x0 o1 s) m" rYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* z1 {# t$ k4 V! OEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) x1 Z! m5 B, l5 Y; x8 pI love you I love you with all my heart
- X% m8 x4 v0 ~+ |Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# E4 C; F+ e9 k+ g- ~& `$ ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ \* W2 s: U7 W$ aI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: E3 p7 j3 x0 \I’m still filled with fear
8 i8 q1 c/ m& x6 E1 m- mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, V6 _& t8 l% s& KI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 J; i+ `( H$ |2 OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 {- r9 f8 m7 V4 d# x( t" [  r" q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 @: L$ A* [  j' {! q( h: q+ d<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 U+ Y, w, Z; G<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 x) A0 ^4 k6 X3 o9 x" J% y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# b- r5 K6 z/ Z- C<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* O6 d9 F! a2 V) y3 H1 T<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; \" Q9 u; y6 r9 ~" P<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( l2 Z& u$ T  n0 l2 l! s<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% C# I. m, u- I0 g9 |% P<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ ^9 B0 v) B: O1 _& h<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 x% q. p  N' ~<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ Z- m1 O- [3 e& e) S1 i7 ~. \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 s3 A5 k" F1 {4 \, r* X) z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# f- v! X2 G; K5 W+ k) b<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 U- Z- Z; D* W* h  f<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ j8 p( Q5 y8 ]$ J8 q! t  F% O, V<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 S, }8 S5 H/ T/ o9 ^( `' U* J" z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* q- F- a8 Y2 [+ b<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 X6 d- i' S4 N2 r8 b+ C<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 B! N7 [) Z) z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. z' d, N" Y3 b! X<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: i, T9 t' ?* N  ]0 F, y* k+ F<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ l6 y- m: f. V) ?<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! j4 \) F2 T/ B8 G7 p<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 S7 D$ @; W1 h<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 N. `) w4 @5 b2 ?4 L8 @<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

5 s% \9 ?, ~1 T3 ]; j我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>