【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 u+ _9 g6 R6 C8 U% \) A% _歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 S/ C( \; S$ D7 O6 T& EWith the moon kissing it every night
* |0 W! e0 u+ N! [( CSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- w% P1 d+ }) g3 u+ ^/ f& S1 G" tYou needn’t fear anything
5 l+ Z- X& U) QMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* V! ~# b+ {+ m" P. x3 p2 fEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# I4 b0 Z1 N  N- r' i3 n" ]" uI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: c- G/ H* A/ C3 r# oI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) b. y' R! a- x* \2 bYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- E. b0 X9 p3 A7 b/ d! _# \Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ X& @6 |& Q5 f4 ?! Z# p6 d<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; R% a: p% z9 h7 g( ]! H, ~<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 @9 H2 I# Q" C# z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 a# _$ C( M0 z1 A9 t2 P<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) r2 q# o7 p* }* B<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  \0 k% S" a! t$ y& l/ [<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 h( Q& s/ b  v9 {7 |<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: G+ ?" r8 u0 Y& e2 ?. u  q" f* L<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) C1 o& n+ ~) m1 v' `<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  P, L4 y; i) g5 s8 P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& N% D% ^! ?: _& h1 v<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& [% @, a( i# E<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  B& V3 n# p( O2 e0 m6 h<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' G4 A& }* G2 o4 C3 \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% [2 @2 ~( a. M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* {6 C% j" X  @1 x8 E+ o<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' @' _3 x: Q5 I8 _5 L$ y: i( D<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 ?& G2 J8 X! P' K; d/ Y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* a, R* I& v( G% p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 u( q; D2 g5 x  l+ s! e/ }<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 q* ^1 O* Y2 w8 c/ K3 P' w<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 G+ _' ^4 l  @+ l% c9 e<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ F6 B5 J( m  l  l) {% R& Q( h<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* c7 ]' Q, E: O2 j+ q+ m' u) t- B<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 o: ^2 u3 T- d' w9 K& F9 j1 @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- I7 p) Q! L" O6 I<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 R6 ], s8 J) B" q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, ~+ \' j7 r) n1 p& B<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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5 h3 ?/ L! g4 K5 a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>