【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
( k* }( F, k7 h7 c- k- u$ E* ?2 }( Y9 MMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 ?6 o9 [% c( t1 F( OThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
9 {% n) H% C' i" Z" H5 FMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- e. Z+ Q/ x& i* F# H0 ]Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
9 j. x! |2 x! O) FNothing can compare to my love
" u6 d0 D$ P9 wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. F3 Q7 [& w+ O" \I want so much to see inside your heart
/ E  t6 Z. G+ xI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; ~: o! ]; F  ZYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- k2 ^" U, N  r2 n4 w1 [5 PI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
1 v7 E4 Q, t) C' F0 `Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& A  z# h3 a  b; r% J1 C& v<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 J& o3 {/ _9 w/ C6 f8 u2 U" N* b<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 u: e9 v- V( h2 E<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# N5 @# k  k  {$ A$ {<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 O$ ~# m7 S1 z# V- A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: p% N+ P" Z$ |) A0 R2 Y0 |8 ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 n4 J4 f2 c4 w! g; ]; p<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ c5 a) N. H; O& S' @<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" R8 N6 d& P" j. y1 K; l# U<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ \) C6 g  a3 F& o<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 i1 ~# a  b. h* p<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, f7 a9 s( @! Q" r- F<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) k) b+ u5 n/ y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 C% D( ?8 P+ B$ h6 l/ f, i<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 U9 r) i+ }+ A* l6 Y( t<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ p- i$ [+ ^. U<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ H6 v( u+ r6 o0 p% X<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 P/ t! {" x* M( x* \+ s<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 `7 o* c; e" _<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* F8 A8 z2 c- X1 n3 E- J# |1 ]3 m<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 u; @$ `# ]7 C; Y& u: [<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 ~% e8 }2 q- h' [# |8 `. s9 A<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 p3 ~/ I0 r) L5 I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  _7 @  q+ H7 r3 c$ L/ C! K; B0 _<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 O' J4 r% X; F6 y. R* R: l* A<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ k/ H( F2 V$ d5 f) e<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; N% z9 M4 e1 w& V# F<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 C3 E1 F8 S+ b& r" C! |  h# O<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. E* C! i; \3 }( A# {& d+ i<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; v+ i" e8 t( J' g) m( X" F<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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$ K0 l9 d5 V! P0 `我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>