【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
( q7 g& s0 F5 f7 o9 g/ ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
' w" H7 J5 ?3 X% XMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 L6 }3 Z% H: _3 d3 p, z. s* ?9 hWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: T; R- m1 ]1 A' P  X$ t, U+ |/ k- OThe sky is happy down to its soul
" l* W- A* v7 M' B5 EWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
7 g  j5 [4 i) k1 ~' f3 O/ _) eIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ S; i4 V9 {+ W, B- ?& }I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
" p; L( D- G' n/ mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( q' x2 h" T) h+ D! e, gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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5 x6 ?8 D7 ^# X5 J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% Q- A5 w5 s( S  p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 L1 \: ?# L, G% Q! D* g7 w<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  C$ d8 ^8 w2 m- x$ w<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. k; P7 x% J$ E* ?/ D<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, S9 O9 p% b/ L+ w: O" U5 v. j7 S) C<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
# v/ |) x- N9 K4 a3 \# p5 J/ w# m<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 |( p* o7 f; |% \' z. ?- b<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! c- Y+ K# Y+ B/ Z3 K* S<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. J/ z) P/ \: k4 y; R4 E<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 E6 k" l  i  i- \2 O! H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 x& q+ a3 d- [) O5 `+ W/ o; D* c<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, z: d9 G! f0 A" ^# N! L/ M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; Y1 P3 `# f4 w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; M: I& ]# C  T' H5 k( t- c$ U+ L" c<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. y. U3 t7 T" Y- ^4 @' A: `: a. |<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& r9 u& v. H" A/ |) u<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' `% V1 M8 `& d8 f% d4 B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ H' @7 {" J5 B2 D$ B" z" y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 W& E8 p- v& P1 c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 K; y: Z7 ]$ m0 ^1 z7 e2 z3 u<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% V! @! b) ~1 f6 x, f; V! y  [<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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" m0 X0 g; x; W+ N$ \7 S. v% Z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>