【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
. W3 [7 `/ v9 wMaking the sky glitter like gold,
  W4 X0 i) e8 K+ j2 H% |8 }- U: ^When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: ~# P$ M# r3 H4 N/ q. N2 I( DThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* J5 y# k. L6 z' ?% r/ o: k# |) s7 UWith the moon kissing it every night
) A5 j1 l! C2 r" vSeeing the sky content with its love
+ e- ]3 Z! t7 j9 e2 k: \, \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
, f4 Z) g3 P# r5 u! N& y3 G" u) Q3 YI really want to know just how much you love me
) k; H! S8 U4 ~) ?I love you I love you with all my heart
3 d  h9 O- \; o' V7 vNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
7 ~3 j; O. V0 }: p8 A& hI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ P* M. [0 |. Z% q+ J4 L& J! F( x- MYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
1 H: n! r( W3 z( lI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. v7 J. w; w% Y. P  {1 d7 eWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. x9 L9 p2 z) n* ]# U0 l* xIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 ?# S) }# m  _6 I9 y8 fRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, X& o3 `7 ]) f& F9 D% w<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 L) [0 O1 X; E4 o8 I& \' s<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ v- G+ \  v) N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 }" ?9 d! `* Z8 s* b, H2 w8 H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 [! l2 z  m8 I% Q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# T( p5 C8 L7 `% L0 I4 \<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# {7 ?& M# q( C' `* k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 a6 G* P+ l, y. B; v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 j; u8 e  q7 L' X* E, O1 \; e" C' T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% b9 w8 n/ W& @4 z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 Z3 k1 \  K3 U. d7 z& g( B<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 b7 M9 E0 x8 g" g+ D1 I<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) h5 T4 M/ j0 Q& ]0 Z: w% |<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! z0 G2 F" A1 @2 Y% ?3 D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) `/ h$ h- l; S5 R( `) a7 l/ U<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 e* s) s/ h; g" X5 |) r; D# X9 W<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" F  J4 J9 J+ c2 V: `! H4 y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. E& o% J$ w% @" |2 e! m1 t1 H* s<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 Y, b0 U/ A; ^1 `& E9 Z: r3 H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 ^$ u: J' b  C; _" g1 c4 r<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 M  q$ Q' y( x3 ^  E" R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) {) e8 T; Q3 v& |! J- {<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 h: X. Z2 i3 J<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. z% {2 }" H! w8 ]. S0 u$ C' X% o+ i<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 j. b% o4 H4 H3 g( \# C<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ M4 K) M" G* a, J* _( C<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, P* D8 C7 v- c0 [% s  X<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ ], w7 ?; x' C: C# B8 R  _<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. ]9 [& W& V0 B) L( W9 M<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ k. s4 U$ q9 G6 ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( O( ^# H, t6 e1 T, ?) I2 b# G' \6 L<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# a6 T) ~9 o. X. G<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# G, ?2 d1 F, L8 g! m3 |<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 Y  C' r0 M4 ~<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) j7 {" ~+ E( {1 O9 ?# J5 t4 U<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 Z7 y& k6 c& I4 u* L<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: L5 f4 A- e" u' h% }  S<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>