【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' U- B/ g2 P$ z8 eMaking the sky glitter like gold,
. p' t* ^/ X! M! ]; x* t' f, ~4 dWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; l7 h( I8 c  P7 ?. C. GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* C( ?6 M- s, aThe sky is happy down to its soul
- [' y+ }2 s6 e+ RWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% {5 b0 w- q. F2 r$ WYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: t' M9 d5 s% Y( E5 d$ BEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- H4 |. }# w. h! C# n( M+ WNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ E. V9 N. M1 f* EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, N0 v/ P* R' J7 R4 kI want so much to see inside your heart
6 p6 k7 N/ e' H4 zI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 v4 C% K# k  T6 `Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: e! W; y2 u" \# j# J$ w+ aWith such a tongue as yours,
0 y6 Z: c! w: O* Y  X9 T# eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; U6 {- k" y1 o2 R3 @: _. Z( d! XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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4 j( v$ K7 O5 @7 N8 }$ U9 l<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ L$ g% ~% T! W# X' H* ~* U<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 y9 ?, f5 L: C% g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ W" f& R& s8 ^- `, l( h4 w  A<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 X2 y$ x6 r1 u7 b<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 u4 S# i3 [" c! x8 ^<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! ?" o( K) |9 J<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; W4 J& \$ u* K7 H% ^1 \! h+ M" Z0 }<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; @6 m9 {6 G! Q" ]<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* o9 u% [* o( ], w9 R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- f+ K, s: I& h7 @<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ A, x. ~. Z0 S' \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ }$ t2 ~' Y% t+ u' S; {$ z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* f( ?; [: k! T" E5 v! t2 f<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( c* ?. ?3 [8 l3 M" d- y( v<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' {" E: L& Y' n% r2 r<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) q' B- Z8 y( Y  s<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! r5 v7 r7 |# z7 i  q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 c9 L$ j  p$ F7 v, e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& e/ A5 I3 N$ x$ d/ y6 e# |) f<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, L8 E8 A( k- P( z" I3 [" |. X+ V<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 y- \. ?! N+ {- {6 V! f<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# H1 Z( ?* V1 E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" I2 w& V. _( S<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 ~0 U7 ]/ Y, D% ^& {1 k<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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