【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
% F! }( `! O( t1 z' h% iI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
' z7 m$ r1 L3 L" C$ ^3 _Love… just the word love
! x/ _/ \0 K- |# d2 r, aWhy is it so difficult to express?
% |9 q) p- }' J8 l5 J0 lI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
7 N, W7 d3 {0 T# q& V  w% P7 o: ]9 UI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
* R' Y3 }! C/ A% PI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 ]8 _- T% J7 S) `8 B: ~I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 F2 B% [& Q) h* w- {Can I entrust it to you?
  j8 N, n% v, m. CEntrust my love within your heart
5 x" g4 A! F5 X9 g7 L4 dCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
# h/ r, [+ i7 J, }$ m" _; Q" J; J<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
. s/ B3 p. B/ `3 q<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
: k& R) U$ h( G6 [2 ~<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
& |* u7 i+ Z0 T( v- {$ K- }! {<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
% }) ]! p4 c. ~" X, z* i; K: p3 s<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
3 _+ H3 I. d. j% r/ n" X7 n<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
, n: a9 l: l: r, `6 y* c<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
8 A  ~$ X7 ]6 j8 n. n<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& e. x' q9 L) s8 ?; v- S1 n4 v<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
% B" D3 t; Q% K<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
3 Z* P4 {; c. O4 n% S  T<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  x, N0 R6 S) E1 M. P, I<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
' x1 N9 e" B' n  a% H0 Z  }<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! N# M+ C. r* t0 N8 m<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* v8 A3 G. ]# F/ T6 s<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# l4 E; G( o1 l8 w<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( B8 E' u* a2 m# \- Z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
5 C" r, i& ]: o/ g* K: S<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
$ V" r2 }* Q" _( u1 A<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
2 k) D" z9 N2 Y<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
. p' Z1 k- F8 Y5 W5 G' W<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 |7 \. Y0 C2 _5 ^, n<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
8 D2 R7 K. `$ X7 z: g4 w5 l, S# B/ R<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 C( ]" `8 B  A! t<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ C) d6 t% G: B" o" l<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ R1 i7 c6 E% m) ~9 e<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- _. x  q) [4 ^2 Z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* `+ v) d& n  Z/ r; m7 R( U/ v<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' m) D# O& k2 x: C6 O2 E, ^<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
8 V5 P" h7 g; |+ Y/ G: I. T<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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7 y* h/ B  X: f! Q9 m6 b3 K% D/ @( ` 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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- j0 ^5 F0 w8 q这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

4 p4 A3 F# g+ }3 p这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 f; t2 J6 z! g/ d5 G<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>