【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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  Z/ Y( E2 {. U$ x) g9 @我另将歌词附在此。
& l, O2 o2 @( l' K( ]6 y" J( YThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
- {. U4 r/ j8 vFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
4 J$ ]! b' Y) fBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
3 |7 C0 H% u; V. j' R2 sLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
1 T5 l) P5 P- [6 ~One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  ?9 C. h3 m" ~& i. R# MI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
% m9 l/ v) @2 C, e' hEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
$ R8 j6 g) y( R7 O2 KI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 Q" H2 C" ]1 g6 E6 h, r- r8 FIf today isn’t too late,
& `; }& V0 M/ [$ T- r: VI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
& R) L$ B; b/ rEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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$ n' }* P4 i& ^. e( g[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
7 U0 n% V: y# v6 c' i/ r# q$ R<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
3 v8 G" u* T2 p8 A0 b: L; j% o5 ]<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
$ u& }; _0 \# m) c& g2 I<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
1 @( L  A4 H$ ]; V3 C8 z<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
  E2 i5 f# c6 ]) k; u. Z: H<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
' Z) T. u' G8 K$ N* U8 _( n$ U, [<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
7 z& s7 _" o: ^$ f<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
" n7 u2 ^) B9 c+ h) h2 j2 t<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 ?4 E6 ?$ k  |( e<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
6 j) E1 o0 f% ?( O( N( K<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
2 M6 a5 h" b. b9 h* k/ k" |<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
( s# u) l! z* u( W3 ^<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 ^: O$ O) ~  Z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 n$ m5 f; S7 E( ]<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 p7 ^: O9 Z$ n5 `; D# N$ m<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 o1 u  O" w% e: ?% R  n0 G<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! x8 Z8 j6 b2 i/ q& u- V  i* _<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
4 C# V2 m* C' i6 K$ j) ?; z<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
+ I' ^9 b, Q6 N1 t9 Q! u<P>但我不会 </P>
2 u1 V# l0 v  U<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- t- e: E, q  S3 @" t+ ~) T<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; D- _, Z) f, Z( V3 {% g<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# n! l" ^6 B) D3 w& U# k' K<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' n1 Q7 Y- u  O! l9 \* I<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 O9 u8 D7 [5 V" w$ e* ]<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) C+ f  Y( b: i" R+ ^1 l<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

# \$ T9 P1 s0 X6 O9 C+ Z8 _& M) w% m这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 G$ _; F: Z8 h* f0 z& ~4 K; L% {<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>