【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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! o; X/ L# `% O- N& n$ P; p) O我另将歌词附在此。
* T( C. |) G7 t4 w! A$ ZThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
1 w8 t3 _/ O) i# xThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
# {: C. E! P% o# m' `From the first moment we met,
. Q0 X$ {1 ]3 G* r& N  }( t$ `I already loved you with all my heart
# V" V4 V3 T8 Z. G6 s% \* JWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
9 O* k% i+ `5 K" o9 Z4 l& ^If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. j) |+ Y6 H: v6 w6 e# JIf today isn’t too late,
  g9 |) U4 J1 E7 E4 R, xI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& `; Z3 N! U. V+ m3 rI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
+ O3 r! {8 w! C6 jEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 N  N2 Z5 P) @) f- _I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
) A4 m- Y/ Z- z. kEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
, t& w8 D  {! g; X$ ~; H+ x<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
2 h& G9 a8 n5 ^6 o, D<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
1 A! B' x; f1 `<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
9 p9 N: [5 i* L. t<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
' Y/ y& v" O- Q6 L; @* S% s( }<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
! u  t! B! R, n: R5 s<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
" Z$ ^, P8 c1 \8 z0 u2 w<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
' ?% C) g( \& \! y<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
: R! r+ ?; i9 D: ]3 c<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
' H& Q, b# Y7 M. j<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
. }" a; e( }. O' c) {<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 l! Z7 U$ s  ?6 S: t' g6 ~) x<P>我想说我爱你</P>
! A* H% a" V9 K7 P! A3 K& v6 F<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
/ W2 P& i# A; N9 g+ ]; T# z: W/ f<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
3 B- z: P: s3 \6 [5 P  r<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- z  W' g# n( ?! e# ], D1 i: X<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 @0 J. i" p% ~7 y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- x% }, q3 F! s( S  s( F8 N<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ d5 N, p% p+ ^) }: I+ C; ^, |9 D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! ^5 b' x& W- k- y. c% x2 p5 C" y" b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 {, r, p/ V1 C) D# f, ~<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- o6 S! b6 |8 v$ x, p; f<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
9 B  a) k/ v$ P2 {<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% }1 C- H$ i2 D/ y! O2 a7 G<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
* Y0 ]8 ?$ f9 ?+ J% L- J<P>But I never did </P>
. V: Y( q. S# s3 @' s<P>但我不会 </P>
/ v5 p( z. o' ]) W/ A; p: Q<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
3 J3 a! {8 o9 i9 ~/ e% y<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 H  v1 Z" W5 q1 S$ V<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 J# E" B0 l. P+ y2 W2 N1 K9 U<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% M! V7 U- o: u, k<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% o  u0 N! u4 G6 o$ P& u. A. k! U<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

' B) ~2 [% L' X* ^, _ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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9 R/ X6 h2 G+ D+ \$ N/ h. |# W这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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, S( N3 a4 E  n6 Y( S4 E, ^<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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" |2 a/ k& J( F; i<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>