【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
& t! s8 H. |# xThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
% s; y! z: r, A! wFrom the first moment we met,
2 V& G& J. T5 N3 dI already loved you with all my heart
% r* X# k# @& `* t" e+ V+ LWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
9 k" ?$ ]/ i) e3 H( M9 h2 VIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
; i$ ~( z4 W- }2 ~' ]I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
. d' X/ t8 H+ I! k% RI want to confess that I love you,
1 h, e: l( _. O: B9 vBut I never did
/ e/ r# K4 v! J$ \; L' `One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
" X7 y$ w3 X8 W) X1 V3 \I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 H' a/ y% x  ^1 I7 I. Y( rI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
+ Q) T9 k. i3 b( Q2 P. L! hEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
' v/ D& _, z* _4 i/ Y1 [4 g" AOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
, t( F6 A$ \; U1 k' B7 s# |$ y1 wI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ E# o3 t- P* U) Z* wCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
% Y: q0 k3 \9 u, z$ r1 rCan I entrust it to you?
: k! R' T8 v$ W+ d, n' v! GEntrust my love within your heart

% b* z% [0 O& y7 t: M4 R4 x6 S" X0 B[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
( _2 l9 {. h2 G$ W0 w<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
3 k4 ?9 H6 _$ H0 A# x4 n<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
* m0 [6 ~4 W3 P. D* v<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
8 ^  G: y( ^, X7 L5 o<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
) i8 p5 z# ^+ ?7 y' m/ L<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
- E' u1 m4 T! @& j( m+ I& C. I. d<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
: h) c+ L& ?# ?1 l<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
4 d/ q/ Q7 Y* o9 E. m- c. \! n% C4 G<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
, K$ N7 Y9 t# G' A. w/ C<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
+ s: A5 ^( W5 A0 H) [8 ^<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
1 B" T/ r# i% e$ q$ i/ V& u( T<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
; k5 y0 l+ i( ~7 z1 O8 N" g: l; H<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& A% T3 i2 y) N: \<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
# l. n3 Y" `3 P& S3 A<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
8 H# W* B, c& U<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
' p* {: u' s1 @- x9 I5 \<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 f8 s9 z- u2 x4 z; a$ a<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  j, G3 w' x- i% ^<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; q1 x- \3 e0 F, A) g' r<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
, L' D- R  b  [' r8 u<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
1 p, z: r' X: Z& ?' `7 y6 j<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. k$ o" [1 t3 l% ~<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
: L+ b+ d" |& c<P>But I never did </P>
4 Y. i8 s. B. s% n, ?) |( O# Z<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
9 w7 _, Z) K% n: _+ w  [<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 a# i% a% P- R8 u$ v8 R<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" N# p0 m! o7 D% K* B<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. q  ^- k, t: A2 M. y# G$ @: c) X<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ z$ Z( p0 [  e<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- P+ t- O+ [1 K5 J8 Z! N  ^<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 F1 ~2 e) c2 Z8 p- ^# o% R<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" C( z2 c3 I) R1 N6 P<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. i- L( Y: y6 f6 l; w! l/ o<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
4 e9 T. j8 B2 \( L" Q6 [<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
" D( l$ `6 e" I$ F<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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/ k: w! a) K4 M  J; V4 Z+ E这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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1 R0 L) [/ a% [. z, w1 p. X6 J+ |这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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+ W' M2 z6 K5 c+ g. F9 _<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>