【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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: f2 G- N: m$ [3 y) [+ U我另将歌词附在此。
$ \7 Z2 ]2 O- I# g5 x2 m: ~The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
  \& O( E  a% `! I0 aThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
9 Y) t* u! Y# [$ p/ h3 u* IFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
, q. o  f; y. |) {We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
9 J" E4 X. ^8 p/ g  pIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
: {! a! k0 [* S4 l# k2 O" [: FI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
, a7 W0 @- D" O$ ~3 p3 f7 _' TBut I never did
4 j& [) j" U4 `5 T, vOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) d. |8 A" j$ O0 qIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 v) j3 r+ _9 a. T$ a& B" ~Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
1 J1 \- Y/ C! j% P' DLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
8 p* c  l; q  I7 [. \# gBut I never did
! M! Y( @; Q+ ^( E- X9 B5 r  |One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
( }& N" ~" W; E. @$ ZI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# k6 m4 K% L) sCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
, ?- ~8 e# n) ^+ k. J$ _8 ?Can I entrust it to you?
- X& q$ S9 r* u* v: D% x( S  b7 IEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
8 c/ b0 v" g5 \. y; D$ {<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
: m9 q+ V8 ]% I9 \- x: C<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
& F" q  j8 [; d2 S& U8 c$ M<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
: R& y/ ?/ f  i<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
' `/ o" L0 P1 I3 ~3 p: r<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
* x+ `4 L0 p/ x<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
! z0 c% \4 n! a( \/ A3 c. A4 \$ t<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
: x- K6 }( E) B2 v5 z3 |, x* v% Q<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
0 g, K' b# \, `: _/ q! Y6 |3 m0 X<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( U+ F& A  I# m" Y* p, G: q+ y. y<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
" ]8 {/ s' R2 m; w<P>但我不会</P>
' |# \8 b$ |3 E6 w<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
3 a4 F; f% z6 S* r) S<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" z  \0 F* y- S9 c<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' i3 q  z' h' _1 }4 Y3 t" [<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 R2 n: M* u: u& ]' K+ @<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 W% H5 r5 i" p5 Q  ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 p$ B7 n/ {$ B4 E: I, \# [<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 @* b5 c  t1 x" E<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# [+ H, d$ t7 k/ @# b$ s2 \& Y<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
  v; I/ E, W+ P+ x1 t<P>但我不会 </P>
2 q' l. n0 H  l<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
9 K( y6 p) F) m% e1 [<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  D: ]* N" X" t7 i$ F<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
; ]" _; j* l. n  C( A7 ]: B8 Y) c<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ O. l% J& W+ `+ ^* [<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( C: ^2 g3 t+ j<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 `1 N6 ~3 h8 W7 z. ?<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ l8 E* u  n  [- G0 y2 |/ z+ G% B<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ |  E, Q) ^' E" [2 l<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
. p0 f% V# m$ K' s$ N  ~' ~<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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# ?, e' W3 o  {5 A这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>