【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
0 E; s2 P5 K8 C$ VI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
) b: s" j8 T6 H& z3 E, E9 YBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
0 J. H! C/ l9 B. RIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
6 q7 X: x8 L2 }7 `4 O4 P$ U# PI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
7 H1 d3 |( W( {) B: ~I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 C5 M' n% G" M& bIf today isn’t too late,
. E1 J- h9 Y" D6 ~, MI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
4 e( Z5 {. F5 ^& y$ ]; _5 @Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
7 q& L. [/ I$ a/ n, IBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% j! _2 ?* ?; O5 f3 ^I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! b8 y9 D( B: Y, F* GCan I entrust it to you?
0 |0 ^5 e7 f9 G) {( x* sEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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! y' P9 u8 S- F# j; ^<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
6 y) E) y0 P6 E' Y<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
- s1 V5 J3 f3 {/ f9 ?<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
* M; o9 D. {5 E<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
! l. k- z1 L: w! M- A% y7 ^( q<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
0 o$ @4 k/ m& ^" ~  n8 D' O; \! \* [<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
2 b* Z2 g" l# P* L% n<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
3 e1 \* Y$ U7 ~$ L% [<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
1 B& w1 R/ }6 f  N<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
# O9 L0 n# j% g, E5 ]) G# W: N' |<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
! J0 \1 e6 |2 T" m<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
! c7 T: n# q# r3 T) k5 {<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
. ^# U; r6 v  C9 w<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
% M" L; ?3 k; j5 d! Z5 R- u<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
9 R6 B6 G5 [% d- K: L<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# Y- m" D% M% O<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
) x" ^! U- [, H. `<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
) h% \- k+ w/ e* w) s7 l+ m<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) i  s+ E/ ?, c& H% B8 ^<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 d- S6 C* T- K<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. {4 P7 [7 N5 G' F% u6 h3 j1 ~4 n<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. J' I4 A- y. D3 B<P>Love… just the word love </P>
: O% s9 _! }3 E& \- z% v5 u<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
: V# |' ]% y; S0 ]<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
, G# O, ~' z4 c5 b2 X2 J& w<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ ~, S* {- x3 d0 j9 ^<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
8 j7 Q, D( A, O<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 H% @; h6 `& |2 \7 T! k4 Y- k<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 H  O0 z3 n4 m& T. U<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- [# a+ j8 G% p# f& R. s, H! H% P4 y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 |+ U7 F, J  `/ N& W/ g' U<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; e# s0 D# `# v2 V( T/ F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

1 }8 i1 q$ g) p 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

$ ~/ ~$ }6 z$ h4 f# X: w  h这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ c+ M$ u5 U0 i7 @6 A) e<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>