【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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1 r) l2 r* u* E我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
0 x7 T- Y2 P' N) L  NFrom the first moment we met,
" v0 W( Q; f; i; f5 H6 \2 sI already loved you with all my heart
5 H& z. p0 J. X% n$ k3 \: [We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
/ L8 L6 m6 z  \! S* JI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
& Y" E; i7 I# n- ~' N( d8 z( QWhy is it so difficult to express?
: S1 w5 Z* H- u7 ^+ z0 f* J2 [" JI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: q0 S) f. J2 s% E0 @; ?I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ C1 Q7 C9 v6 _/ W9 eCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
5 ~2 f# q) A2 ?3 cLove… just the word love
) D$ K$ K7 y9 P  z$ GWhy is it so difficult to express?
- g) ~. F1 G/ e$ ]I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
( _( k0 E1 I, A& g) D! ZOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( T$ ~% {" r* RI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
& _) Z% P$ w' u' |2 u6 BEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
8 A, H# U) d# X0 ?4 |Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
$ c, R8 k# P, V2 M" r  m! s<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
& @& I2 x2 e, D$ O; t/ f' d<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
' u  E' w8 s" C8 q: j<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
; _  |6 i9 V% x6 E  X5 s<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
' T& q  s* E+ S- h<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
$ [4 f1 W9 D9 s2 C( B$ l. j<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
1 L$ i* x; Q2 w+ M2 ^4 B4 ?<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
7 z& l8 A& V& Y+ B$ H) I<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
. V' `9 W: p( \; q1 E  U& v<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
" x& o9 V5 \6 a9 Y0 t! M5 H<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
% h( x0 s& w; i) Y<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
& {3 Z9 u& f# M. f; L<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" Z# i( j* j+ D+ O$ a3 g<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
2 K' {; A* b$ U; h" i. F<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& j0 d! f  \! ]; j4 G<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
" ]; r+ `# }6 K3 B6 ~. E0 H) U<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ u) U: V4 O- ^0 E<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 a8 `9 A: A% j2 U9 l& `* }# |1 x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
& O1 ]3 t- I$ X' Z& Q<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
3 t  i# p/ m' F' u$ o<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
# v. [- O0 a4 A& u/ ~<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
! t* n# s- T+ X1 V5 Y3 ]7 x* t<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
. A) x6 o, j) n0 u<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' {' }$ H& f3 h, W8 C& d1 ]<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 d! P+ Y# b8 h/ Z8 [$ J0 M<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 U, Y; A1 f% b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
8 ^: T/ D! F) ^" R' N! q/ I<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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2 b: I: u7 `5 L: [# | 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
/ U6 D* Q/ x* R( s
这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 T& O% e8 }/ B+ w这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>