【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
: ~' L# x8 h$ R8 o  ^4 F  |% gI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
8 L& P7 o  R6 kIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
) T& U( ^% _8 i- h* E) p2 CI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. m" O- q3 \. eIf today isn’t too late,
) ?+ H" C2 h, F, XI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 [; @5 B% Y5 i. }/ zCan I entrust it to you?
" F8 Q7 f4 h" o3 v# A$ T4 _+ TEntrust my love within your heart
+ H. d/ |& a# w' ]# D$ U- `Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
2 n& }- E# [$ z9 t9 Z3 vI want to confess that I love you,
( Q$ g6 P; ~& E; G  o9 P) M6 W5 RBut I never did
/ a+ ?" E9 |8 O3 M8 dOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
7 o$ h( K7 c7 a% nI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  w1 q! W1 O9 M3 ZCan I entrust it to you?
7 T9 S4 W" w* P2 A- ^8 n) KEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
$ @  Y, v8 s4 d; E8 g7 gEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

& b$ J1 G* O. ]8 j8 J* M  ?; I3 y<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
& {3 S7 a5 @7 ~  M! v; v<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
- s! n5 Y* C2 Q5 T: @<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
& R( D* Y# b- i% N3 Z<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
6 Y7 p7 n! c. h1 Y+ I! U; E<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
2 }0 F( i4 n. g* ]( p" T<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
% r( s& X/ H: o% i<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
$ i! }7 @# |& `<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
' o1 e0 G* S% a  }<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
$ I  M6 y$ f. z. a$ ^4 k2 G<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
2 v/ ^9 V7 }2 h: b: W+ v<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( P# J- u- Q- _<P>我想说我爱你</P>
5 D3 ~3 s# Q* {9 ~  o: T3 r& N<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
6 C: e" j; E: @$ }) t<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 }; @4 d8 \! f; y. u4 A<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
4 U% k! K( O4 h- p7 c/ Z<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
) z% Z" X, c+ D' R- W* Q& f<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. S) A% m7 Y( ^. m/ _" `4 ^  a<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ g0 }/ f) @, }, b% z: O* }. ?, o<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
* M  ~  I+ z! z. K' C0 |" Y' Y% V<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 L$ J' K# ^6 ]<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
1 s. r0 f) c1 y$ \6 f7 z! t<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
( C% ~, `6 {; ^<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
+ B$ P0 T5 s' T5 E$ K! V<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. R9 B/ B( z: u& Z; l<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. Z8 w( K0 P9 L0 @& m<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ l6 w# u0 h1 d& E7 j$ A  A  I<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, k# S" C' O; s, Z; R5 }. U7 ^<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 l2 T$ J( l4 @( x3 m- N) b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 p! ?" y- Z; f+ h1 t- e9 b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
& d" \* s2 w. `1 z<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>