【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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: y3 r. N* m3 ?( p" m我另将歌词附在此。
7 b  ^1 ?4 X  ?7 J+ F  s) s4 \The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
1 s* T' H, c: |- |$ f% P) OThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
" X) n. l% i; I2 ^8 Q8 A# i" RWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
# ?) O8 p& Z% L: X+ t, A6 KLove… just the word love
& {2 `& i$ M5 }3 i3 _Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 }9 d7 Y2 {4 U: V. c; zIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
! z) x5 X9 W* c& k; y% v7 aWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
5 `3 \1 d/ q+ J+ m) y$ s1 _" ?But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- a2 D) s/ W' i3 bIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 |" |2 N& Y6 |9 q$ BCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
1 H; l$ H4 _3 }- S3 L& O+ w, gEntrust my love within your heart

2 Z1 z" t) O; i- a8 {[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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( _8 {, ]) ?9 Q$ G<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
2 c  W$ x9 {* f1 o9 m<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
) H6 e: D( Q$ I1 g! R<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
6 W" m1 S) c+ R: d# S8 I<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
& N# U. y+ b2 `/ {1 b6 s<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
( g% C+ i! c9 g5 m<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
/ N3 Y% w2 p8 z* }$ w$ h- i; g$ t<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% K- }, I# o) p7 T$ V$ b" m- v( Y<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
- W. g/ ~. p% g9 s% I7 a- d5 |$ x<P>但我不会</P>
' [1 i( J. k7 _# h: h<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
$ v) z! s2 s6 _5 A0 }9 _! Z7 V+ P( P<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
8 h3 |7 x  j9 ~0 D' h: x/ e<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& A- C- k. W3 N: ~/ D7 R5 Q; ]' K<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. L0 _' L( J' m3 G" V& T<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 {/ A- X: H7 Z8 U+ I& w2 ]% y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 ]( o1 f- G4 z% y5 b/ N<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
9 R0 [0 c8 n5 c4 b9 q" o' `<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
4 t; F. V1 g% ]. G7 f5 b& ^<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
% t% r$ q6 Y- i. w; ^1 W<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
: a9 Q9 P" m$ L( w7 |<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
  k1 x. @0 e5 r<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
  ~( ~: h# b( ], L) I<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ @2 Z$ h. w+ e8 |. T+ }5 E' n0 A<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! v# }' z0 g! p; @% V<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ I; |$ K0 ]9 g; j- W, ~# K8 w9 _<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 x: k1 H5 x; \" j( N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 @* k6 |, t8 ~: s5 M7 r1 i3 k3 S6 v<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* V& p$ H' c& D4 U- Y0 g, j<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
2 B) W" s+ L' R2 T<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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1 l# r& U4 g5 j+ ^这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 a& @& Q- R( N, [<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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: \. q2 k  G7 m8 e  f5 Z. t<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>