【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
+ s; y. D, h  S& B) G3 n# tThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
) ?5 s$ m) n/ l2 IThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
3 r: ^+ G% C" s/ U2 L, h% xFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
+ w3 R, B8 h+ E5 \3 \3 J+ ]9 vLove… just the word love
7 S2 f+ b) i8 C) Y8 M- z0 MWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
5 o7 r7 W" v- T( A7 ]; w* U& q; dBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" H& A' @3 W4 R" M) k9 u3 ~If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, L  _8 [$ I3 O% [1 S6 U( NCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
% B, C  r/ u+ ?- c1 AWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 a) Z0 g% k+ L" V5 J2 _7 wIf today isn’t too late,
. u% T% h. }' f/ ^I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
) g- \  s8 Y1 L8 F9 Y; EEntrust my love within your heart
+ i: z/ \# d* \1 u, kCan I entrust it to you?
% N. f3 M2 o0 J+ C& B/ O& T! nEntrust my love within your heart

0 X' A$ a1 h% T+ w: r$ t1 k[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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3 t) u" }; R+ N. _2 C: q4 s* h- ~<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
9 E& B# A2 \: u! N* Z; `  T<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
3 R2 W7 J  q, n  i% V<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
; u0 }: F' X5 N+ a1 s# C" F0 ~<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
' D& H0 q3 ^/ `+ u# |<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
' L/ W# @  G+ X# F3 N<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
7 Q2 M1 a* r( ?% S2 ]<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
$ _+ r, {2 w/ y* H3 d" R<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
# h. Z7 @$ `  a. \$ f<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
# B+ v4 x) c- D% ^2 I8 d5 H; j<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
$ c% y4 g% @9 L8 w<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
7 F' S1 m' c2 V<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
# R. J/ @) J3 a1 q2 I<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
' l- J+ o2 b& j  [' S! D<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
8 f  M4 @7 ]; v" \0 M& t<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  y' I4 ~( D& O; T) ~, M<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
. x5 J$ {5 O& D. e6 i* K0 x<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ ^2 n' s+ w2 @/ I9 `<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) W3 W. a" J# \0 r1 o7 V# K<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. W1 k% x0 e1 D<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: @! m( x% t0 M. Z& q; U$ G5 e<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" |' h2 g# `; Z- S1 [. E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# q6 r2 s: L  G( x4 U<P>Love… just the word love </P>
$ g7 g7 e6 m6 Z  z" |# s8 L6 o<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
( D) N' F1 s/ K( M  V<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
2 t0 C8 |: ~4 Y' c<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
; b- u8 i& d# g* U  X; y' T<P>But I never did </P>
% y# m6 Z9 l' }' K/ l! m+ ^% N<P>但我不会 </P>
5 m7 u4 K- a+ m6 z<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; c9 X9 M7 U7 q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
7 k* l* l; }7 V1 m<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
: S' t: f/ _9 Y1 ~/ \<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. \4 j% ], H9 B. @8 M% P, P<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 `5 L+ }' u+ H8 E6 }0 S$ A0 o6 k9 `<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ G5 B6 I: ?* B+ `8 ^3 [  W9 z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' [0 v# ]. J5 A7 q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( I8 d: p5 d! l; _<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* h9 h8 o# p  Q, L) A5 U# ]( s<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
' E, v4 Y4 `6 B<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
6 o. {/ L+ p4 i/ @<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>