【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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% `/ t: B* |+ ^) l我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
) t& c  M1 `1 D" S" g& G% y, UFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
. C/ W4 P( o" v2 {6 {( A) JWe meet and talk everyday,
% b# q4 n5 l3 s+ kBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
2 m5 O+ F  y# U+ j; _If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 i  K' u7 J  n7 I+ m1 AI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
5 e: f& S5 Y% R; TI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. e9 Q+ a! }- r. U7 LIf today isn’t too late,
) I# @* S- r- v0 o6 j/ {I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 O9 S6 N1 X2 nCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
% }6 m" W& F8 w# I! o4 C( ^# R- Y, uWhy is it so difficult to express?
, \& [2 b4 C' m& K6 P3 gI want to confess that I love you,
8 P8 \: G+ ]& x7 G3 g" {But I never did
1 L, \* J# h" cOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 n8 a5 f5 b* j/ _If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
# r. B; ?# ?" v$ w( f7 k4 t1 r- n# iCan I entrust it to you?
) D, t$ L4 H8 ]- V4 i1 OEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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0 ^" S: ?2 L8 p4 A  B<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
  T0 Q/ n& u2 r5 @( K# l<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
8 L' J/ p1 k5 H0 h<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
. {+ _( k2 o/ W. Y6 [# H7 [<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
1 _- l  M. X: a  j# l& s<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
* q* f2 {1 ^% C5 C) G# N' ~/ f1 Z<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
; x: q" S( ^2 g2 A0 l/ U<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
, @2 d/ l' i" V0 E: T. A<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
1 X) p2 t8 I, U% K3 o0 O) A7 Q<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
- V2 a% _# s& q9 D* M4 n2 f<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
+ \; p: d1 S, T/ {<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
/ q$ [! w3 H1 h' N<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
9 P7 \' e5 }$ ^9 r) f& e, U<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
  q3 y$ B0 b+ X+ Y9 Z- {/ V: }<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
  Q, `3 ~" v/ W& x<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
* W3 g6 m& l0 {: ~" z  m- c* Z<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 `/ b7 u5 ]1 W+ k+ ~4 L<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
- w+ m/ c" W3 _0 T3 v4 y# s; y<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 \1 `2 e3 G! w$ @3 h7 E<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 @/ y& ]4 X$ j& e8 m<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) e. q3 ]2 {% p% y1 v( l- e: i<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 B) A+ ?$ J. R<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 V0 ~8 K6 }7 ]9 n/ A<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
4 d% p" X. }# |/ ?) w. x2 |) ~, L<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
- a' s8 C5 Q- G8 v<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
; v0 j# j2 d; O& O6 l. K<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
  ^2 c3 h$ G0 P: v( Z+ U<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 m) [! g" O- u6 J<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 e; E' ]6 c: x! a& J- |! _<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 _% \; `2 S2 m' N<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! ^" i2 A; {, c<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" P! K8 p7 `2 K# e* _! S, W<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
+ S2 a/ {/ ~4 O5 S<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
9 o6 G! H; g: O8 `<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 [" S- {, \2 k  N<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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) d" {3 X' P1 h- t/ x  b1 e<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>