【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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0 G! ?1 A' \1 ~; ?我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
$ [+ h7 [3 Y. p( @From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
# ?) y- r5 G+ r6 xWe meet and talk everyday,
: f* h* w6 L; e+ S* a$ b6 cBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
9 f, X9 I, R: h1 q) {  r) s- AIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
1 v- t0 ]$ L( l+ w2 eWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
, C3 l- o; j+ v3 WBut I never did
2 l: u: z0 Q$ O" H$ D* a7 [One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; a7 q1 ~' f  X9 jIf today isn’t too late,
$ j. y) @$ I, h' L- iI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 J* D- I# N2 ^2 q$ KI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* d5 f, l* T  s8 c5 rCan I entrust it to you?
; a& |. U4 _) Q8 JEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
& a: B3 T& U5 w: ]) A2 kWhy is it so difficult to express?
- I1 b& V7 T- J8 e/ L8 x9 D# UI want to confess that I love you,
8 \( r/ \8 v% f9 m# |9 U8 eBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ G0 x) f1 c4 f2 b- LIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  I2 L  b- c$ E- n+ xI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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! I/ ^. j# z5 ^/ u2 }  r5 s* `) T[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
& z* P3 {) R/ u- s5 E# Y<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
4 E/ a, _* T! ?, K; Z<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
- T; [! k6 ?4 _2 Q0 j( v' X<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
3 }: V  @4 T. f  f/ p& b( H<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
! c$ U: \$ I% f( C7 A9 g<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
3 V: ?9 Q& I* P) x: S# T) p! l<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) c* K/ ~+ D# d+ p" l$ @2 n- I5 g<P>我想说我爱你</P>
  b' T- b# U5 ?' ?% p<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
  Z$ M5 N' w8 v1 D: V) x- I: _<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ r" s; {2 H" @/ Y: Z- b<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 r4 i) N) p, d8 S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# x) F: b5 J3 D; S<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
3 Y" W2 e/ m$ I% ]6 `/ C8 y<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
) F8 C$ U& W0 E; o- M; Z! s<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
, U0 h, X! F: G<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
. ^6 o' l/ C- h# t/ s$ y' |2 n<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) v, }" E3 S; \<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' `$ Z2 L9 z& _# o  p; W+ V; `<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, h; j; u2 \* q1 N; |3 q) j2 K5 W0 {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>