【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
+ k0 F, a. K* w; t$ gThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
' t( B- q# y& ?& S/ l1 dFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 V2 ]8 _! ^( U( kI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
+ P: W$ m% e3 p0 h2 YBut I never did
$ {" ]/ |4 ~2 ]# I; b2 yOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ U# i- {2 o( Q. vIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
$ t4 s1 n4 L+ h) p$ y- O7 u8 U3 kBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# h) S; i$ z  v* G/ g2 fI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
. v$ o  K* S9 TEntrust my love within your heart
; Y: Z$ B5 n# MCan I entrust it to you?
3 A1 C/ {. s7 F; }8 x5 Y6 r2 C+ |Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
: v  M% }( ~! J  o! z<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
$ ?5 q) n( s" _<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
( I. M0 N5 U: B/ a  J: f$ k' d# q$ ]<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
4 C2 ^$ K; b5 {7 R# J% g! D( O<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
5 s: w& ^% ?- L" i<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
5 o9 \9 R- l% {/ w4 v! P<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
6 H; |( A5 R" G" X) z: a<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
, K$ z. r, W7 l- ^. R<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
+ L# @- {. m  U<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
4 y" s6 O8 K+ i% n<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
; Q; Q( _4 N( Q0 S! R" @6 T<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& Y8 a, ~! d5 ^6 E<P>我想说我爱你</P>
; H3 Q  d) p( V( ~$ @<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
; b2 w6 Z3 [/ Q9 C4 ~7 |<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
+ h8 O2 d1 C9 z3 q  C<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
. q7 E8 p. |9 {, ^<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 K' u  J. m  Q7 g: E<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" O4 O9 ?1 D, ?<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 z; @( p# \, g8 |<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 j: b  O5 I( s0 _; g  `" B<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! b$ v6 @4 _$ O7 r<P>Love… just the word love </P>
  P, A0 F5 E) b1 a3 c; O* Q, G3 U) Y<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
& [" B4 A8 {3 M) j0 Z+ N% s<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
7 \$ I* x) E5 J<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
0 a$ |7 v1 p6 ~0 B# H' z7 j<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 K* s5 M% {' t' E& M  U+ o<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 p- ^  m* o% A$ q: L<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 F9 l& U( J0 y# t+ T8 ?<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' f- \, j# T6 Z+ [<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 t& \, t/ E8 U) w" M<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! [' q: s4 z. r! H7 P<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
" v+ v8 l# I% L3 S$ f, l7 h<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
- c3 {6 W8 t2 U# j! q; P<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 h6 c1 d5 ?% b<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>