【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
* A* Q9 t1 w! b2 u! {' G- Y8 s- ]  \, bThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
, F8 w, T( Z8 yFrom the first moment we met,
. A, Z' v) T! V" G' j8 `+ }) A5 gI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
- X1 _& _5 q' m6 `Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
: M4 [& X! B* ]5 W( _( k( a: ]But I never did
( U- T* r0 T6 S! x8 X, VOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ L9 Y, t5 D2 f) A7 KIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 \5 }) n0 [4 j) Y; WCan I entrust it to you?
" V8 p- B' @; cEntrust my love within your heart
4 K; m+ D# d1 G2 }* h# I* jLove… just the word love
" o& p+ v+ o$ E/ x5 v) A) e1 tWhy is it so difficult to express?
0 e/ ?* w* E8 [9 Q0 x9 ]I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 A1 h9 a6 q9 T- W: F) _3 mIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
/ j" l9 I' K. r* GEntrust my love within your heart
& Q9 }" U1 A% b. }Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

9 `7 C' s. W/ k3 N" }[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

3 k  P1 ^; l" b1 H4 W0 l<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
6 z0 m9 z0 M7 `<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
0 z, K0 C9 i, @- U$ c- P* w<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
+ M! u$ a7 h8 j! C) b5 R<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
7 N, B7 L  \0 d5 b- o" H& O, |<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
+ C7 v7 _" u- D4 a# k) ~<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
! S3 C4 G5 N2 ~<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
( K# s0 _+ E5 l<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
8 w5 \* t! j5 H7 s! o<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
. k( w8 i5 ]* y5 d1 N6 K<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
9 }# Y  ?1 K! u( C1 h<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
+ _4 X& z/ I$ h+ W+ Y<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
3 F# D5 ?( m% f  E+ p<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
. W/ G2 b, f! t$ C* A3 b<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
, A! O# W8 d) f9 r2 p# E  ^<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
. U% g% z% K* C' M  @* N  @" \+ Q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
# A- \" h8 K/ Q1 J( _7 E<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
' W7 ?0 f( K- N$ S3 [" E7 }<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. `) z; ~/ T7 {4 ?5 d<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 E  a3 T( `+ N<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 J; S, x" a% Q$ d; n<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
+ H2 l1 C, j: P/ K& b, X. c<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 v) b9 n% c0 J<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
9 o3 K& D' l/ _; F<P>但我不会 </P>
, L- ?8 E) G0 e: ~1 a% T  O<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 i6 K; e, X( g  {. u4 U<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
- P% l; w2 n) D( C<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 h' g/ v( G$ u  q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% m& O# Z" Y, j3 Q8 L, e4 ^<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 Z6 W# B; [% \3 ^3 Z1 ?+ S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, h. P9 j' P+ a( z/ d<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" P4 k% ~5 P! h5 b! U4 m7 l- U& ~<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' g# L  X- {7 T6 k3 I# _<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
4 }1 F* z! Q! p* A; x& a9 W0 H<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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4 p0 d' P3 I$ U5 I 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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1 s8 @- v8 \5 B" l* r/ J# C<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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4 l5 z: c7 P) y" P2 s<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>