【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
' `: X$ z5 u, E# J3 x; C( XFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
% `+ b% H3 {9 G1 W. j' ]But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
' M8 ~5 P  X+ ~0 B7 KIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
# g  X+ {6 O' c! S! Q: p- oLove… just the word love
9 C( e! Q6 B: nWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ t# H, p, j3 W$ U4 b# M' I+ w. lIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* M; B/ x$ m" r3 DI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 a; m3 A( C& u5 [Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
7 S0 _8 e4 M. |8 n, \  U# Y: TOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
6 }+ r) W" W" ?- v! _9 XI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- O  `* I8 O$ u# NI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( z6 |5 q; \3 E" ~2 H! MCan I entrust it to you?
0 \1 h4 _5 X, G1 ~6 }* REntrust my love within your heart
8 m4 P) r! T2 nCan I entrust it to you?
# g  R$ r8 I0 IEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

: j4 j1 I  D6 ~<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
: T8 @+ L% I- [( ?<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
/ B+ j6 @9 Y9 t! U<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
3 H3 m. C' S+ ]9 G<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
+ w, n' _, ], ~5 A8 c3 }<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
5 r% P  [8 x! S% s, E7 ^+ W+ ~<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, F6 s6 A7 W% v4 f<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
6 m3 o, [0 @. K& b. |8 i<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
  J9 h: a9 O, x" ?<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
, q" Q8 B& k$ o9 g4 f) K+ b<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
0 F" p$ p2 C* w<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
% l7 Z+ K* l( G6 x( Q- y) R<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% D" h; n+ t2 y9 c" s<P>我想说我爱你</P>
( R/ l$ z, ~9 x4 F- x: G8 q5 G<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
+ L3 K4 W  z: E* k& N% R<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 N& _: y; i& b8 u<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& N! k! \& K/ ?6 m4 \# X<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& i( i  W5 {  f4 S9 o7 M0 F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- W% P7 k# t& {7 U2 h<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 Y) M) M) Q' r<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 u3 h- d3 S! h<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
" J1 @; R; R/ P! P) A; w<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
  b  g' D) ]  V! G% n2 n% N<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
) P' h* n, g2 o5 {  j<P>但我不会 </P>
+ p/ C9 p: C* N6 I# `5 u& s0 q<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
4 u3 t8 d6 a) L1 {+ K- T* B, A+ F<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
7 R4 s$ Y% ?' @. I<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 B) c+ b; r8 `) C! A<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, r1 i  V* y9 J" s<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 Y' C! T( S& w% K: c3 d<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ n, K( U( ~# d: C<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
% N4 v8 ]0 J. T<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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4 C8 H; W4 j0 n这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

/ b8 W# y0 \1 t4 v1 m这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>