【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
3 ]' v7 t: j3 NI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
$ B. V# Q% ]1 T2 eBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
, x6 K/ B3 h6 v2 K# u4 Z2 I0 eI would probably know how you feel
: ?# H+ O' r" z* [, ULove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
. Q( `* ^: w( l) O7 aBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 `: T" g' `3 Q+ [3 O3 X; d/ G/ H3 JI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
7 ]6 B6 t& M+ X<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
9 g. y$ t% A0 K- n<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
1 p8 \2 {' x, \6 X3 U+ o* k, O<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
& o+ w. F( P4 P9 O% j6 _<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
5 s& r) d# H6 N! s<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
; T3 \  O9 [% W( R1 y<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
. I) y' ~" ~0 }8 }' s. E<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
" S, Z  Q. W! \8 R<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
$ z) o1 J7 s2 @$ r  M$ O3 ]<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
9 u7 r9 f* b- Y6 G6 d) ~<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
, A* s- Z0 ^' H1 A' Y<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
* A! D/ f2 K0 F* h" a<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# y/ y# _* w+ d; {4 _" q/ T$ h5 f<P>我想说我爱你</P>
3 y' n$ }& M: F. [/ J$ Q# @<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
' k) K- i! D- Z<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
; S% J1 L) f: K. Y; k/ s3 e<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" P3 R6 A! k9 J2 Y- }! J  e<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
2 F' i+ R, T3 c: H+ U<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
* J  @$ V6 q0 b4 t  G( F& h: {6 d<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 N( e* X  J& T" L+ w<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 _- W, f5 C* u  y* y" S& @<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* Y$ l/ G# A0 U<P>Love… just the word love </P>
) o+ Y5 v! ?0 C5 M5 t9 @, s+ \<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
" b2 z7 q. C$ R9 [, G5 {7 W<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' G+ F# x# y3 J! @6 _, i8 c<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
. E  O0 y8 S8 V<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" B) N% i, p2 m5 R: `<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
4 C3 k5 D1 L% [3 C/ z<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  }! n- @" X1 O, x: ?" |8 s2 f# K<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ a8 V% z) {- @8 R<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
9 z0 H$ Q: ]& A, r6 B<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 l0 ?! @' l# p2 i5 o3 l% W<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>