【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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7 U& J0 V' z3 k/ [$ k' }我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
/ s% T# X+ Q+ k( f! q! [5 a% N' fBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
; [+ p$ }) J' O9 I$ jIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
' E. ?3 l9 T( K0 d0 N. r) tLove… just the word love
" ]+ S2 O9 B# R7 w/ _Why is it so difficult to express?
9 O7 y" a' i( F( v) H+ V  @I want to confess that I love you,
/ V  q/ m/ A/ W- qBut I never did
5 d- N: U7 f: ^5 ?One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
" R9 s7 V4 q0 q' L* BEntrust my love within your heart
. ^. {6 b& m  oLove… just the word love
- {5 m! N7 Y% qWhy is it so difficult to express?
4 _; E# [3 A& W/ gI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
  h$ ^1 i6 P1 q( OEntrust my love within your heart
3 N' x5 V6 f$ k) L+ o* q+ T, JCan I entrust it to you?
5 F% B& o( d: {4 {Entrust my love within your heart
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* u" |9 q& h7 h3 M[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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- W: V8 ~  O; i2 U/ X0 u" Z<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
+ x1 s8 x- d6 y6 J2 N4 Z1 |<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
9 H8 [; h& p0 q<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
$ ?' ]. Y5 q* {8 O<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
( \" x: H: p" x<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
% A9 @8 @3 X5 A<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
- }9 O& C8 d! H2 s0 f<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
1 B4 B$ @( D9 d6 E<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
! Q7 D9 i$ B6 K: P9 O5 O5 M<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
) `- l) o. p9 m4 Z; [+ K<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ L- J2 q) ]- f, l- S<P>我想说我爱你</P>
7 K+ l* t- Q2 L* g; i<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ g  V  J, Q3 g8 A, ?) v% Q! v, |<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 D* N& M# e3 ^* k) j$ @<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. {- c  `; }/ r" b; R+ f2 X<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ Z4 V5 T/ h$ I' Y) G: t& B3 f<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% S0 {# G! L) l9 X<P>Love… just the word love </P>
7 L% y* L2 }4 k+ P1 j. P<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
) u6 a* v, m9 ]; E; R8 |! G, V<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
* h! x" a$ V/ ~0 L<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
3 v) Q; V5 t- d: Y7 Z9 x' X2 S<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; g2 `1 P5 Q& M5 G- o& C<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ j3 i4 o$ j. M' c% B3 D<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! l: P& _1 \* D6 G4 B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

% k. d' `: ~5 c6 C; ]% v 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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# ?  f. \! x5 ^! a这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( Z- b- `( ^' t<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>