【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
( S. s1 Z( o0 g' i1 y5 _The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
1 n/ z  ^& U  B: `( A' `I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
, u+ v' o) O, a# F( b& W8 A! p; lBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
# r4 _) ?0 W- z7 sWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
" @* a7 `4 {# k2 Y6 f9 W) jBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) H2 @& Z1 [& P1 C7 u6 j* w7 SIf today isn’t too late,
  L3 V# p. _/ u8 _1 }I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' d) _0 Q! @! J  nI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 x3 m  ~" U2 Q3 OCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
7 B: q# s5 y) l+ C7 Q/ BWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
; [4 r, p0 E' LBut I never did
8 Y! _" {  y. {, a- Y2 KOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: [- P- [' s1 |+ ZIf today isn’t too late,
8 c# F# Y3 {! nI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
3 x5 h, E, J: ]) ?Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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+ j! B1 p6 a: z0 V2 i) X! b0 U[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
: J2 g7 }5 ?. g% p% c<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
8 o' K4 ~" s$ F' P7 a<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
; ?0 ^- M# Z+ W$ O( E) g8 T( e<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
0 @% b' ^: ?/ r<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
  t5 R% F8 v( u# O- P7 }5 p! J4 I<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
. v* i6 u8 s% d, L& Z5 F& S<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
* |( C6 o; Z5 V$ A<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
  f) ]. s- I3 d$ }, r! ?<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
  ]& n! X& F5 L% A' S/ c<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
2 R$ W& _- t. d. S, g<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# ~) h. _/ X7 {! H& @<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
# F! V; Q. U' W<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ {" l* R7 f( r$ }% V<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 o. {2 p/ P) w<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 I; N3 e; ~0 x' ]: ?$ u<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- [: _; ~+ g; ?  u% g8 b% a% t<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* H: A. q6 m6 O! X9 a<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! [! A3 n& `& S/ _* B% j<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 J6 |$ m: T  B<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
' B6 [9 A! j: I& t5 B' s<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
* x- F- P2 S% X0 a7 M% o* h<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
' U- F- }& D. M0 U: Y/ b; ^4 d0 B<P>But I never did </P>
4 f) ^% e# o: N' k$ [<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
5 [# i2 g2 A4 o" C, s<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ y- A) n' ^, R% O; ^<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# Q& _6 e, f4 l( F<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& P( J/ t0 S# I/ W! c<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
" K7 J$ T3 L' ?9 A( L<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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) y6 a0 Y8 s; T: n; K这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& ?! S) D! V, o0 a+ x+ }6 _<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>