【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
$ O, E) ]( |& L4 }- iThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
+ f9 ~$ J0 k7 }' x0 N' v2 uI already loved you with all my heart
  i" W/ R: {0 T. c, rWe meet and talk everyday,
. k5 ~! J* Q9 `  J+ o7 `" a1 t( @( ^: qBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
$ s. G5 `% a0 A. D2 e, D3 yIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
" c9 J5 Y# ]  O6 D, MI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
+ P5 l) I9 k+ ^, e& n$ TOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
" Z- H3 |" [7 J/ f3 `I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ Z* ~" }5 Y3 F2 l% D) DI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
' i8 R9 m, A- bLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
( q- I( U* w! A0 u& WBut I never did
% ^- H8 ?2 a0 k- D+ ^, b' }4 iOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
, f# m! U1 S  r. @& g# lI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
3 t( s; q7 @, s3 z7 x8 s! }' R* sEntrust my love within your heart
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( E7 d$ e2 _/ q  _' ~7 n: P) X' s[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
" |# ?% q; e# y$ m8 a1 j<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
% P; j5 V# q9 S# G<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
) Z. Y/ E  p5 E: n<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
! S7 X$ a2 P1 k<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
; `  t1 V$ u+ c/ D, ~2 Y<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
2 C' j  Y5 L1 g- E7 h<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
7 o5 S' ~( a/ A' a0 B9 J: F8 e: K<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
5 Q8 O# B/ ?0 Y7 U<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
. F$ T/ s. {2 O4 d  u' N, |<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
3 a/ h7 e* F1 F/ a. @<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 H9 k- ~1 _# c$ C) f4 _+ i<P>我想说我爱你</P>
) v$ y( \% X; f5 }" a<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
, I$ N1 u  y2 F1 \3 ?9 w<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
( E! y- y- Y" R<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  D  T0 w, X9 Y<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ ?* n4 Y6 ]+ h* B* p' g5 `& W% t( ~. g<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" B) L! z) c7 |6 ]& s6 i: z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 ~& x. L# z% Q. t+ {5 o<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, I% L  J) s3 k: Y# Y8 ~<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
  Y0 [$ @: c. ]) R9 r<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
4 t- X" k3 S1 W! l8 |% E+ s<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
: H! ~; }$ ~0 e2 X1 l<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  |) l3 h2 |5 f& O<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
" I0 K% r$ h7 f<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
$ O4 E' x) T( T; K: [- f<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
' j* Y5 X1 H6 [<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 L( _" L1 r: _  \* ?* M9 v<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* p2 R0 w& H' l0 H; R& o* W6 }* D<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* I: V/ J$ u5 |: O) W6 U<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 h) n( O/ N2 p2 T( Y: W/ n<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 ^4 a+ o# N8 G0 Y( g$ }<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

* l; C+ B( b$ J" A# S0 q( \ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

* {: K. j3 k4 |  r# [/ ~这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

# x  [9 M  a2 n9 B<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- C& _( J% m  h3 T. K7 W. k7 m<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( ~; U" X9 B8 y! i/ q: k- c<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>