【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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( \3 \' s: Z" H: k  s2 \; p4 r我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
$ ?: x& B1 ^2 E* CFrom the first moment we met,
( n& Q/ m4 l5 a  i# S0 M+ h) ^I already loved you with all my heart
, p, S) a0 }; m6 X+ T4 }We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
$ t3 \6 X+ g* O. L$ e3 JLove… just the word love
! J+ k, y: x1 k) ]7 NWhy is it so difficult to express?
" i1 V- Z6 v/ x0 wI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
% {! x6 Z$ |$ |+ yOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
  [( Z- r; O0 }0 F" e& W- [I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ x: x4 r# {  i! VI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 I. j0 L, {% mLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
* c* f3 G( @! n% g% _One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
. h0 T3 \" n. n# R1 vI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 ]7 F' S  `# U1 L. V2 xI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ g1 k6 b( ]0 W1 M  h% VCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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; m( x7 R# l. h; g[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

5 e* `( g  t1 x0 j! \7 X<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
3 q6 ]* M6 b: S3 F<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
# G1 ^: C4 M: D5 T6 p( Z<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
0 @& H9 J& _0 ~2 B, [<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
) c$ M& O0 G8 @. O# C7 E4 G( N<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
2 Q! f% N6 g& g  K, D7 Z<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
1 x3 o8 u  v4 k; y, w8 |( ]<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
  Q) M1 I) |) b5 `<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
* i0 Y( C% ~+ ]4 N<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# C! [5 C) Z& x2 Q8 p( i<P>我想说我爱你</P>
3 ~" h8 L0 b& a' L9 K9 ]; B0 N/ T- v<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
$ C2 K/ F3 Q% U0 ]% W3 y) j<P>但我不会</P>
9 l! L& l, O3 J4 M" Z0 H2 S6 N( y( {<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( c2 z& D9 e0 P<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
( J9 @6 ~; H1 M% z& G<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 g# h- ?8 a9 L) i; \: y. @* U<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: {9 U2 t, `7 O: n' e' {<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* ?* P! _+ H9 I. I<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  N4 P' O0 h0 T3 O<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 ?0 K+ z9 g+ V0 X- i0 A<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  ]& P- h- v: F1 r" a<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ b4 h+ x$ p$ d<P>Love… just the word love </P>
- n5 A" Z3 B; L6 @; M  s0 [<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
6 X0 y- {2 f' a0 U7 r& s6 W<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
: y$ s5 t7 j! m" \) F' R9 l$ ]<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
+ G" f5 a2 P! n' E/ m<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
( x) f3 S3 c, b8 }5 \<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
% ]# c+ O4 M: t( B' _3 j<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
# d' j7 G/ ]) P  k5 c9 a4 u7 h2 q<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 ?# f9 L0 V5 o9 `( {<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 j, \$ u' q/ j  |<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ l# Y( e% j1 B( v9 l! h, a<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# x' K  |/ [# s' ^0 D<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. Y- I: \1 }5 j<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
. X2 [+ L4 w5 H4 I2 Z  n9 _7 c<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

5 x. e; |# h3 @7 Z3 q8 ~1 ] 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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* U/ V7 g/ Z7 {* \0 z. {<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>