【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
- M1 n2 K$ u6 j4 W5 MThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
; k$ E2 \- i8 O; M% BI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
- I! q* M7 q+ o# P6 b: M$ UI would probably know how you feel
& u5 _% `- t/ _* l) k# d4 q4 RLove… just the word love
& u, M7 g' Q8 N- J/ z, C& w% [Why is it so difficult to express?
% d. u8 V( Q! k" j( UI want to confess that I love you,
- H* q* l* q, a. w( o& @But I never did
- S! k8 B! R# Q6 P# h% o0 C# G5 UOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 ]' g4 G. D, B2 l( Q# XIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
# V( d, a/ @9 q- l7 G  I9 YBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( t; z& ^, H: ^3 d* wIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 `. Y! T, r5 }0 N. L5 R) RCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
6 {' ?6 `* c! c: h: P+ b; EEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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. W4 i0 ]2 i+ F# U7 S5 F<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
) O) |1 Z% n# D# D: ]<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
) A9 {% O! [" z9 E( m! r  V! v<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
" m7 \- T" ~. ~3 E3 W<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
# a2 ?3 t5 W4 i, p2 C4 S<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
; Z4 L( |: J8 j4 Q" i<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
/ C7 [( O" m/ w<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
. \  T) n, N& s<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
" W! r! E" [9 ]<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
3 J/ T. E$ J% d2 w1 [<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
+ q" e" t0 X! A5 l4 S% @<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
: m$ G( f9 @) A& H2 u<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
! r# @+ P( A: `4 a; N6 l, F<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
0 E# r* ?; a' o<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
) [2 d1 B! {) t1 E9 l0 s* ?2 D<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( g: ]: G6 j# l6 C<P>我想说我爱你</P>
' x5 a9 v) [- R8 M( b$ P& [<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
. _! n* B* e% i<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
; Q- ^: A4 G. O' Q* s" G<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 M' B# A/ p8 j* f% Q, M<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ h: U! t( {) w; j" E1 l) x3 i" [/ [<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 D* {! J  n. y7 X- r' K  y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* T8 o: m1 I* `4 S$ {0 Y( M/ s  F<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 L- a5 V- x9 r+ s<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ M+ M+ e) o, K2 h& j2 l: ~<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% t3 ~6 R  j0 j- `* _3 i<P>Love… just the word love </P>
+ a  c6 C: B1 k# `) F6 Y<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
0 d% p' a; A) E8 \" a- i<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
1 o9 g6 ^" h% ^  k<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' n$ e0 ^/ \3 v* l( r; H2 X4 g<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
( ?% s: D0 p* R* o* k5 L$ y<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
3 k! P% Q+ H! L; V7 e<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 M0 R, a% _$ I9 u<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# g, s- g: I7 B# C* m<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 ~, N& K6 i( `* A; n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' x! j. G1 D1 e( j  _: d; u- h! G<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; R/ i& N; [- a3 z: [% _<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
+ K1 P! F9 _; n. }! \* d, r7 ]<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
- Q, ^1 H' N8 J2 \<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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1 F4 y! I: _4 i5 K1 }<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>