【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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6 X2 G% d- K: c$ o  F9 `% p3 E我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
8 J4 v- U' N% h& ~& FThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
+ i/ {) y4 c/ aI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
: P2 C) W( e: \3 o- ~  f- h) ^But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
# o- ~( s2 }9 V! WLove… just the word love
( h9 J5 Z; s  j+ |) g$ ~  K; [Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
$ m9 O# K; _9 m2 F" f4 v3 b8 {8 c# UEntrust my love within your heart
1 O5 `5 g0 ?! i: m/ U/ n/ ~' SLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
4 e) ~$ f/ M: \( r7 Y( l) lI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
' r3 z' o( _: \One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
, ^- `; Q: A# i" r; t3 [I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( S# j* n# f- w' i' I- kCan I entrust it to you?
# s  h9 i% n1 MEntrust my love within your heart
  m- F- d, P+ @" `) zCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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6 N0 K% Y# Q  G0 d& _$ Q' l<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
  w5 g5 y% f5 z5 `1 ~" |$ y/ a<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
  W( H6 b8 r' y1 ]<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
( `  |2 g2 w4 o) Z: r6 s<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
: A$ E/ e( b) `5 u4 a( o<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
# H$ D; ]  u3 C; B8 Z# G<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
2 B8 U6 X$ Y5 k& L<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
0 q  x- l( b, z7 P<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( S! ?  V, j5 _! [' ?  P& J<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
2 d6 f4 ?( A7 l. R( ^& |<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 k5 j& t( X% _6 i7 A  u1 x9 ~<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( ]/ Z, V2 M, |( F# l3 n<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# I. _5 }/ c6 \0 D6 [<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  J% L$ @8 r$ N! c7 N<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 l$ d/ p/ f& k" X8 i<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% i) s1 Q. ]8 I7 d<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
# j  W- k7 a' v<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
; S' k2 l. p+ K1 z- o- f, h* ]* n<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
$ h" R' k( x+ Y<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
! [0 H- u; g0 M  P& ^<P>But I never did </P>
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<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
- }3 a4 f7 Y0 R0 h4 M! _4 Y2 f<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
# V$ Q) _2 e2 x# \' A* r<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. t8 b/ V# H; `* n4 M<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 v8 a5 }. ]2 f. J+ x; R1 a: b% M% H5 i<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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0 Q, b6 x/ P: ^) q' D8 F这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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8 T" H5 X5 N( s- D6 x这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>