【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
: s. A4 y; k" G8 X; `But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
' U' ]. s  |/ c/ ]$ T0 @  e7 D# Y/ NI would probably know how you feel
; o# C0 X( K# LLove… just the word love
6 N# Z' M$ ~( l, b8 h- X: v6 S( ?  nWhy is it so difficult to express?
- r% f' L1 j3 J! U6 E9 l) Q4 V' p- eI want to confess that I love you,
" ^0 w; h! R2 h( L# Y* O! FBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
+ @8 E: M; T0 g, p/ A: _8 f1 GI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! k9 }5 y) n; S' o8 h3 z6 f* P0 t  mI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
+ P: K! {+ G; {& ]( s; ^Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
$ ~- i& {6 q/ O$ _Entrust my love within your heart

- u. n) u- G9 S2 x# H/ z[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
+ |$ f( l1 w4 F( P7 [/ V" B4 u<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
4 [4 E+ ]# p1 v0 L. n<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
  X5 C4 K" H$ `7 ]7 U<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
+ d) Q4 A, g! E1 D/ z<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
7 v+ z9 G# u1 Z! u0 A2 ?* f<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
  y8 a9 i4 ~4 D" C" h8 \<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
2 r; k* m1 [: Q5 A2 ~<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
/ a" j+ \$ S3 v. [- F3 ]<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
3 {( P, v+ K5 ?: \) r<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
/ F: Q5 C( b) a9 U1 B0 J; w<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
/ s1 _- Q( Z2 g. W$ p  b3 g<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 P1 u, }+ B6 X- V7 V9 z7 u& X<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 ^# g- S1 ^$ [( |<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: r- B: V# d1 t<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) d9 Y; M) H) n3 |6 P: |<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ S1 q; }9 w5 S. k% h<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 M2 S7 L2 \% g' d<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 ?% I* f, g7 ~6 V<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ J$ H- D6 J! b* T4 [<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
* H+ y0 _' P8 n" f; U/ \<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
+ q- R# y3 r" o  l<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
2 p8 D' z: E) @* X' y% n, x  G<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
9 O: `# p7 O7 z4 l6 a# }# K' a! V+ @- w<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& K7 \, p7 `) C5 }3 G6 F<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 r8 k% G) o/ U, q, u<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 u0 i7 b0 |; z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
0 D( I+ O# k/ k( `<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

; X& Q! }3 t1 A: A 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& F7 ^. D. x) u. w# ^<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# [" s3 @" B! G<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>