【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
* S6 p' T, K1 b$ @- Y/ ~9 Q) a" I$ sThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
# \+ c$ _' g1 \3 Y- }9 `I already loved you with all my heart
& s5 z0 a7 D1 wWe meet and talk everyday,
6 Q9 ?) ]4 g. f" B8 rBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 a$ m; l" G3 PI would probably know how you feel
! _/ c& g  h1 k3 Q2 |0 dLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
& w+ y) I) v4 f4 ?: fI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 T$ P4 \9 p6 c" {If today isn’t too late,
7 a* d5 f4 o' @" q+ s) |! LI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& e4 v2 a" @1 s  B6 CI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
$ n1 C) r( f! U% bEntrust my love within your heart
; ~3 H* u: D+ s3 Q5 s$ H6 p/ Z# eLove… just the word love
! u3 j- ~) h- x! d( I# Z! fWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
5 g4 d, [. S. K3 oOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. G" M/ n; w2 e" U- yIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
& E5 W) ~# n0 \: J9 s5 hCan I entrust it to you?
2 S7 v, ]  ?! E6 i9 mEntrust my love within your heart
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9 Z" ]! S' n6 }; ]: J[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
9 }9 N3 J3 V/ p<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
" ~: f4 {! K# Z! ~<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
7 K: W% O" G8 Z: f* d<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
: j7 O+ z& @* u; F<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
9 Z- c* f. R5 Z<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
5 g# p0 W) L; P6 l' N<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
, e3 ^1 ?4 A4 `; |1 s<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
) a2 p% w: o4 Y8 W( t- |<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
6 ~  P& w- a5 _3 g<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: @* G, ^/ o" }# w5 C" l" ]<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
! K  J( k  K) F  D<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
& V: ]- B; A2 y! _: T<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ p4 r* |+ D1 E" V2 N* K. t<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, |+ |  [) }2 U0 N/ Z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 |* Q& t6 b' g5 U, `( b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 w( D& y% p5 ^( V. a<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
) h2 s* b; x6 m* [<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
3 S2 O( X& I4 K<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
4 K+ l5 E* d  U  Q: c* X<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
8 U5 N; b- n- P% B6 b<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 j- `2 v4 _7 |* Y7 `: T' o<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: t# e, S4 H1 g<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 D: h* ?/ J: d9 }; v<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 ]+ B" S- v5 p: @0 m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 Z0 Q& q7 ]; ]! m  i<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: ~7 @# o, i8 [4 j; h<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
! T$ O$ x) p! I' C& U4 S<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

0 f0 Z. ?9 R. H( v8 k; w) ]0 T这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>