【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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' F& l! C$ M$ \9 h3 n; _我另将歌词附在此。
- s& ~  Y+ I9 n( b0 S6 q# |9 BThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
( K1 N( K% n9 p" CFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
6 R6 ^+ I' N6 Q& m+ g! h0 RWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
! d4 j4 _* I- X* ?# wIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
, M: }  }7 t/ A; CI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
4 s0 n: ]  h) u8 E2 kBut I never did
/ H( L4 J; O% l! r7 r" }; }6 b8 vOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. j2 H1 n( k; Z; q+ O, w  zIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 w/ z9 W# M' R% }& X: vI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 B0 O$ _; j8 ^* J  N" l/ aEntrust my love within your heart
. `" C5 Q6 \% k* `Love… just the word love
' H6 n0 }# }+ D' HWhy is it so difficult to express?
$ ?  J- y+ H. W4 t9 {* y: XI want to confess that I love you,
& _- ]; Z7 i" [; [+ N& k& ]! oBut I never did
2 O3 ?1 Y4 k2 K& u* vOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 u6 {2 g$ f  V1 }8 eIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
5 z6 u1 ?) y4 f5 z! j! ^, q, \7 CEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
0 w9 c' e- i1 m( M1 C% U" G1 k! XEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

* t. Q& _* q; d- ]; k<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
- W# [+ q: d2 p2 @1 a( K<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
8 v; M  p$ @$ V<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
$ D" J& _7 }; O% ^<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
) D1 z7 B: \# F0 A0 T3 w3 c! @<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
: D" ]( q* ]9 c) P" Z5 w  C<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
0 Z1 o: H9 r" S* {<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
' g8 i! f" }. N% V# h5 T0 U6 P<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
2 ?6 u9 L& N5 o  s<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
( J# n8 I2 u' d<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
) z2 h, }7 L5 W/ |<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
* Q  H+ Q: Z  d$ `) f* Z<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! F  {# y' Q8 f. f* y<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
  a7 h! G. z. R& k) B) p<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
1 @" C# i8 l- @+ P4 f<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. u+ R5 Q0 Y2 j+ G( H<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; w+ V' l: b" T2 {* Q<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 _7 J; Y6 }" o4 [8 q. T<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. X5 B3 x1 q# j. @1 l; w  p<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
5 H* V% |& d7 }1 ~3 g<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
9 l( ^' b( c. {9 T8 [% X* A<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
2 N' v/ @1 i% N5 h- V4 G<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: Z) \) Q; c8 d* q* L% u3 Y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ V* h8 F5 f+ g+ O<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% M6 {5 |3 Y7 Q0 [<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' f6 q# T4 [& e0 K<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( m1 X: G( a1 }<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 z' E, g( E7 M" }9 k. _2 H<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
9 f9 ]: a$ F( t0 j0 R3 ]: }<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
" _  `* y- r; x& I' ]& [) T<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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7 S. l: Z* c. f1 {* M 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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- ]8 q( b+ L" ]' {% Q1 Q<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>