【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
  x. A) T# C- C" b- RThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
7 z  F; c1 v3 ~  J& QI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
0 \, R/ z) k& J" Z/ [: RIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
2 R8 [# \+ p5 T' gLove… just the word love
3 Q3 ?) T3 `  u* J5 A( sWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
" Q; D& b( b0 D4 f) ^" ^2 P" h  @$ iOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ E8 g5 C0 t; W3 j& W3 k9 ]If today isn’t too late,
! y; U! I2 X# x7 ~. A! R! nI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; i+ ^5 l3 {9 d( f' ^I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
7 O/ y* v! h6 j: O  p+ n% G& REntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
3 w* u1 L2 E9 m. c8 C) TWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! x" ]/ k3 o8 B1 fCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
) d& M  N* g- a& h" c8 X; c0 \Entrust my love within your heart
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3 A' C) Z. p6 M9 V[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
1 R1 ?  n5 z: ^# y: f8 v) G; L! l<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
" r  H. K# @4 g( f! }<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
! o  B; u- m  g8 u5 \0 z* Q5 [1 W<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
2 f9 D2 X6 }$ n7 C8 D<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
$ P& B+ Z' }1 b4 V0 A<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
7 S* }3 M* D  r# l3 X% ~2 s<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
% Y( L4 O) `, \$ _, c<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
- y0 M& M/ X5 e& L<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& @! b# K. X5 k8 r- Y6 \8 l<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
. j# B% `) [( b7 f, S" D* v<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# Y  N9 z4 T5 p: m0 ?<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 W: ^! k6 [* z. B/ T, u<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% G. b4 ?2 Q: Y5 s' t! j<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, }, K7 _- @1 ]<P>Love… just the word love </P>
2 ~5 O5 Z& E$ x<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
" k2 e) j0 |5 _& `<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
7 a' ]1 ~) l. @& I7 A* S% |<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
) D; N& c6 I$ A3 u/ q<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 a2 G1 b: W9 K- v* \5 ~# F<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
9 P: ?0 L; I# v<P>But I never did </P>
1 L( V% {0 l1 r6 ^. l" n/ t<P>但我不会 </P>
# N* R5 X. s  ^4 ]0 a<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
8 ]4 p4 F0 W' E+ O<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 k. D" c$ g' J9 U. t" j<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 r- ]6 @. K- u' @; y3 ~# O6 `<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 F, I% Z2 X1 f( _<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% |3 `' J' u+ s" ^+ A  O<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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, W* G# F6 }) T& m7 A3 U" z这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 D/ e# B4 [4 i! p<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>