【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
  T2 R+ H- ~+ R4 i2 c" zThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
- C$ d. I9 j, _/ nFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
; @% I1 U5 L: TIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 `% A$ c) d* Q$ U0 ~I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
, l0 I# V) H& H8 Z! x  [But I never did
; j3 O0 H* g: v& _) WOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ N; c  c7 |- @& aIf today isn’t too late,
7 z, J; N5 w* H' w+ FI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
, N) U5 B! m. iLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
* ?6 B4 j. i5 fI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
; n* o' R; V- V) x: C; t' }1 JOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
# g9 r0 S' Y4 K2 `% yI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
/ h7 X, \6 w8 r& y8 fEntrust my love within your heart
+ N% f, v# o7 I# B/ I; ICan I entrust it to you?
9 M! H4 W+ m, z: n) P( d" m- aEntrust my love within your heart

: u8 Z0 N, @+ V# u$ {% w9 `[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
- `0 ^) }6 K, c8 g0 e1 Z<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
4 X) T( S7 F$ e5 |<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
. `9 m0 S: c/ ~2 U* w, ?<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
# U2 B2 h2 \9 n6 I3 x<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
4 o7 T2 H" W5 ?$ O0 ?, r<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
) k* z  {1 G  k& j$ u0 A& U+ e9 @<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
7 v% X9 H) X% A1 C) y! }9 D<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
, E0 @4 ~) W& R0 \<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
/ z' S8 O; C6 P7 {<P>但我不会</P>
0 V- S; \2 K. C8 {0 y8 H1 \* k<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
9 [( ]3 @0 U2 o" t<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 z6 I. o" c3 y* o3 d3 [<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 }7 X' G% {  B7 x2 ~2 ?<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% I  q4 s  p& f6 z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 k1 }0 n7 O0 L+ B  [* U<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 g4 G  {% D& p# V7 t  L<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
) o% X6 T! Q, y( l& x<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
& x# x/ {8 i2 K% t<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; u1 g5 Y: Z5 y3 E<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% w8 @/ o9 O# f<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( B" E- a4 b# Z1 p& d# u<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  X% M  y) V4 M  x+ g. z6 G6 a<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 b1 O- P# h: s: Q$ a* A<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>