【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
& U+ ~/ x0 j3 o8 aThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
7 l, t. A4 b0 u- RFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
6 \$ I% C! o. I" o9 nWe meet and talk everyday,
' G- P1 ?/ }* LBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
$ d$ h" P9 o1 a. _: |( \If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 c& F, N3 v# A( _3 W' E/ yI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
7 y- l. C3 G  f: B) h/ k, t9 sI want to confess that I love you,
, @& f3 R' {& ~& U# i' p5 ?& T0 jBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( \' }# c4 n# w; E( f+ \I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  a7 }& N, I0 E& JCan I entrust it to you?
3 \  c; C8 I, i; y/ G3 [Entrust my love within your heart
) z, Y) a2 N' f; P5 tLove… just the word love
4 B# j( s2 p& H. k' m( t, FWhy is it so difficult to express?
1 K/ K6 r" v+ xI want to confess that I love you,
& L3 z" g' `" n5 z7 ~But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" u8 T* ^% o1 Y  e5 i! Z2 P, s' x) m- hIf today isn’t too late,
  H# q% l/ E1 wI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 q! E9 k- ~0 w. `I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
, U" Y5 {5 q, V; }6 i* mCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
' j) `7 b) |5 C2 m7 Z<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
7 {" T/ k. W5 ?8 t<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
* Q' O& A. y4 a<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
. E, W! u; g3 N  c+ Z# C$ S& K<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
  I7 {$ x, \- O' E<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
3 G! j9 u4 U2 C) ~* H) X& s<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
2 b! Q( ^7 E) `<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
# X# U7 W4 O0 e  W<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
( i2 }# w6 t! h<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
- f! Z" l- h+ f; F7 E$ M! l<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
( O+ |6 C* a: F2 g) y<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
' l0 C5 t7 `% T1 P$ v/ ~: j3 m<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
' y' y8 W% y  K<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 h+ A( J8 S/ j% ~* z; G<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. w' ?& k6 x6 t<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ K; h) X' S3 |! @* s+ y* P<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
+ w0 K8 Z' {/ x3 z! S. A<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
# \* x0 S0 x3 b7 C9 y- J# ~2 W<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
5 g2 T0 h* V" H% ~0 o<P>But I never did </P>
# s# y7 E; L  i9 K! E! H+ {' H+ h<P>但我不会 </P>
) c3 Q  x- a  D: B! T' Z% u+ c2 a<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
! b7 I4 v% J: u( K7 L; f5 J$ O<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 [8 F( z+ _4 d<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
0 k; D$ V7 v, D<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ q! ]+ F8 Q  D. ^<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" q4 Q$ F, k' `# c* `2 K2 r" x<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* C* g6 t+ ?' L' `8 n+ A<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
5 S( F( {+ }7 C1 {6 ?, s<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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2 S8 _% a2 `  f& X/ b这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ N3 y1 x; Y* t. F, B. p<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>