【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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: \! p* l5 @8 Q0 t$ b我另将歌词附在此。
3 D/ C! Y1 J/ |% G+ |; Q/ oThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
& H. M' B1 U. z9 tLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
7 D/ W, n! i8 \, X3 ]" \I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
# M' r7 B) ]! B7 J# z3 q- s1 bOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" M, x8 W# O4 l8 Q5 GIf today isn’t too late,
* E0 n$ p5 y& b1 O3 X% e5 i; c+ g5 rI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 A& H( }0 u* C# D7 [4 mI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
7 e9 n5 {5 q  O0 N; C/ ELove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
  A% ~- X/ l4 n) e" |8 V* vI want to confess that I love you,
) z# C4 Z8 X9 l' tBut I never did
+ k% s* n) m# {: b( DOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 a( o* K# _+ a% pIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
9 W/ c9 F+ q3 a3 k& JEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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7 b! j! T5 G& U! l4 G" f  z/ X[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

  q5 s& j3 c# j, C; l<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
1 p' {; U+ y: ~- R& K# r7 {# v<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
- Q- W; Y1 r% F' l% W<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
/ p+ H, P: A. b9 Q7 q( A' v0 c$ u<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
# A7 j3 z: a' E4 C( V<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
2 |5 i0 @- z- P0 H0 S<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
# Z; w. V# V$ `: O1 b) g3 ~) F<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
, I6 _5 }- H! A* ?& g<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
, q. y0 y5 {$ v<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
( p* p& B" `0 \* Z# P/ q, N<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
! j2 n$ q  |' ?3 f3 b<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
/ `# K0 [  L0 t: }9 K! q+ B<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
# W  L; E* r' W<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& p9 Q* H" M. M7 x# w- z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& v+ l6 d( t  r' U<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 k$ n5 r8 U+ Q5 Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! L  K; H( O, d. z8 b$ o( v! s<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. I5 |! t9 h8 x3 }<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
8 A; L/ J1 T! y9 `8 k% r" u<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
' J+ {9 I& f2 v" Y6 O<P>But I never did </P>
! n, U6 O' I2 P' W<P>但我不会 </P>
& O6 @+ y/ J# k  H0 F3 K- R<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
0 Y* e: K% ]0 A! M; u& `) |2 F<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 ^$ W4 J$ i2 @, \0 J2 D1 p<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! D. Z' {2 b; U! Y+ o( [( u2 `<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) S: A8 w% i) g' v7 E( f9 `2 s<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' C- i* N5 P, m! I<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 l* \, }& r6 [! n<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% B& L# e  I& d7 T) g0 C" C8 x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
/ y/ Y6 h# ^# x<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
# M' l; F: ?1 `  Z1 h5 D6 b) ]5 W<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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3 f+ B2 y3 r0 i5 g# C! k这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

' A$ h' U0 x3 z; K7 n5 e! i这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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8 r1 N/ p, w# i/ D7 C4 d$ |<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>