【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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( a8 k: d% c  _5 t- t# Z( ~" ^& Z0 D我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
& ]! W. \8 U4 S5 `. u# b1 B) V* yThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
) ?0 r% H' U& `7 gI already loved you with all my heart
' p) t1 B& Z9 Y9 @, gWe meet and talk everyday,
4 f8 l9 E+ x9 U4 U+ UBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
% S; a3 w# ~3 [; _% S" jIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 l0 m8 }2 i* m( ~( P1 g5 r3 R  U3 _6 JI would probably know how you feel
, |' V( {9 E  Q( c3 C7 f$ }! |! rLove… just the word love
( Y1 X5 K# {0 [Why is it so difficult to express?
, [+ w' @1 j& M' M) {1 B, [I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
6 C. P1 l3 W3 K& y7 h% p; wOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 `- t1 w, M2 K) k4 o1 O1 NIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) [8 E4 M  K7 q- c' aI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
4 W0 Q2 ~1 I/ wLove… just the word love
1 T. C/ D9 [+ BWhy is it so difficult to express?
; \  @; }4 E3 z% N7 yI want to confess that I love you,
& r* T! L, b+ m9 b1 ]But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( D9 R6 O; _8 M2 N8 ?If today isn’t too late,
9 F4 L8 x$ d8 [I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" I( [) K7 T  [! r" s+ a  o- [I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; @& d' J. o" I9 F! O0 LEntrust my love within your heart
; g/ E8 h+ t! q+ @& D9 |4 lCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

4 B7 |7 |' d" l: q; K. V<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
4 Y' P8 u; D( \$ O% {<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
( c/ L  U5 l, c6 i) p1 W' @& D<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
4 _# U7 v6 G% d4 ?6 q. N. O& x<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
* b! l3 J# T7 U% H1 [2 \; u9 a<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
8 E& `4 J( V9 w3 _! J<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
4 q5 v3 J$ }7 [, o! D& K<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
" `$ Z0 d. w0 R7 M<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
; z" E3 S: {4 b& T5 e( d<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
- R$ Y% ?5 G2 l: Q" y<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
8 F% U8 s: f$ W+ R<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
# W$ p, m1 `- v4 ]8 @  y<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
! ^1 s0 X: x; T- v0 V' ?8 H<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
$ Q4 ^* h. d0 b3 {* f! x<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
4 V- b; v) E6 H. q* W/ {<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 f/ I4 ]9 |/ A! t" f  c# S9 Y, d<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. p3 h: q  Y0 V% Q2 c<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% I3 i. _' [6 w6 t<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& @1 N: }2 ~5 ^8 N% z- y( z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- |: B0 ]0 L! _& w4 s  S, ]<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* }0 V8 M2 M* j0 D. c<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: q. x2 c& d1 j+ W7 [" P<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& {* P4 d7 p* h# y1 {& J& u2 T<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
2 _8 n1 y) Q2 E4 D6 C$ T; E, v<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
& a+ w' f* l- [/ @+ A<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& n, Z1 N- R$ N0 y/ A3 e- D& Q  p<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: n) w6 I% W% S) C6 W<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ @' W0 \# ]2 b: Y  m) G; G6 }: l<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  B7 `2 g* h/ ?* F9 L<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
6 g  n+ e$ e* ]# ~% S, K' ?: ^. I<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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# o5 I& i$ G& m& \2 n 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

# J( J' l) y* ^8 s  ^. q! p- T3 j& E这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 H# Z4 Q/ r5 b/ ~' e/ j* f<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ n9 {4 h3 W' c- m) B9 U* g<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>