【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
7 z( U  c( a& F$ a  O; q/ ?From the first moment we met,
( Q& a; ~2 B* b2 A# H3 p( fI already loved you with all my heart
) W. F4 T3 U6 c/ aWe meet and talk everyday,
. K: j. q% c$ D% Y  f& `+ f* bBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
3 M5 A4 [0 T9 ^. G) D/ ]5 j/ nLove… just the word love
- w' X- K) q3 B/ E8 RWhy is it so difficult to express?
) K& R) w4 `9 R; b. x" MI want to confess that I love you,
/ h6 u, Y. r2 u3 {/ m" u/ QBut I never did
( ]) h# \  G' E0 O! y* k( uOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( y3 |! F. n$ F- R" Q3 ?If today isn’t too late,
( t3 n  a6 D: ]- R" {I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
- J% m$ u( R( y- s& q  ~Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
8 L3 ~9 ]& U/ I* W8 QI want to confess that I love you,
* L2 U) m1 ~' m4 J% ?8 b% vBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 l$ C# g, f& F- O7 Z" ?: e3 M& }: GIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  ?1 x% `& u) |3 I' M7 F: }$ O& C+ iCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

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oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% F5 `" b2 ?# ]" Y' Q$ p<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
& o  J) K' d: n- o<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
- R0 n! h! \8 r$ I# M+ E/ ]  ?0 ]<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
- S) c  z, l* K<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
, q+ b0 i1 O5 K& d) f6 M' ]<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
& S& C& _  j6 s: K4 J<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
4 _2 P1 n6 t+ U2 m% |" e<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
9 C4 @; v  n9 O  s' r/ j& \<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
& J$ ^: P3 z, E# I1 m6 E! A6 j<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
% r5 ^) u: f4 F<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
& M7 l2 u/ e) j5 a0 i/ Z' D<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
% K% S$ ~7 L5 D$ I* z# t<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 l: z& H; p; S# A( F  ^<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
. ^- V; {: W2 }/ e/ s<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. @* |6 U1 q" f3 i) E<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' B0 I' v4 U5 d* v4 ~) r<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) L5 |5 U$ r+ I( l. @9 X<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. G* x7 W& r1 o# @<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% S6 Y$ I: X: i# l( t<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
: y, q( ?- K- n& C5 ?; x4 x<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
6 V& N( M% `- B: J* q" E9 S& R<P>But I never did </P>
' [9 z1 E) W8 |; A) n4 H, ?* i, `<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
) \" H( a8 Q, {! V5 \+ G6 T. x<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
) l8 _  [" D  G1 U. K3 D! P1 K<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 B" I2 e2 [/ a5 r  m8 t; Z# Y# l$ H! r2 s<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* [" U2 e& y7 x! S: [<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" B1 m+ u; }8 w& S2 l<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. ^3 C8 c) T2 ~$ t7 s<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( ~+ J% ]% v- M$ W) d  h* O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
, |/ k' [# N. O/ s<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
# h% o; `1 ^. }9 Q0 b<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>