【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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" F( {0 q6 Y! l9 B我另将歌词附在此。
4 A* c) B+ W0 m  t  N# LThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
2 M9 I6 `( v. ]5 G9 J0 x) iThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
8 ], |3 D2 K8 D8 h  T9 JI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
5 R% p. \* Z4 e4 j0 p+ w4 k$ T3 XBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
- J5 ?- A7 C! M. h+ ]. ?3 X% J) nI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
2 t/ v' Y6 p1 h9 SWhy is it so difficult to express?
' h$ d0 d$ X* `* X) S6 D" JI want to confess that I love you,
% o- C/ m/ t5 T+ K6 t; |But I never did
& g1 t/ o! k% ~" @One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! i( T/ [3 N2 EIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 L5 ~5 B. V# E6 ]$ SI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, F" q/ K' q% }Can I entrust it to you?
2 K2 a* ?1 V# PEntrust my love within your heart
8 z( q5 m7 u; s% y( |2 YLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
% F# d" c1 W; T0 UOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) V; [, y/ c5 zIf today isn’t too late,
# W: I0 s' R0 @) }/ R: j; b) KI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 ~" H: f+ v6 ~8 L- P# W6 `! V1 |I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
( s5 U- |7 x6 B" WEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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# k( f5 g% ^- l* m<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
8 U  Z/ [3 E2 q$ F- O* a  O<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
7 Q0 Q- C9 R. J9 v<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
5 T/ U; ]0 @6 p6 ]3 m<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
: |" A# A; ]8 P<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
( k- u+ }3 s9 {; {<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
( O9 o7 \) K5 i5 X<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
# N' K: u( C/ g: R6 ?" [: y<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
4 Q- t4 Y7 n, ?& f4 o% T9 m- d2 ?<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
. a/ v( M% @# v7 W<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
" T0 ?( U6 }: I$ T4 W2 V9 Q<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' p" O8 [1 f4 T+ \. W5 ?& b<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 {9 ?' v% w* Z/ n3 J  J- j* C<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- H; I$ P# n0 w! ~' F<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 ]! i3 A" k. X$ k<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 M5 c& S6 N( r( m! w6 {3 M; Y7 E<P>Love… just the word love </P>
( ^& K4 }( l) |* L5 o0 m4 a<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
. `) C+ Y. j1 \  E: F, ]<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" k/ o" l; Z, Z9 U4 I2 T# J<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
. q3 g% ?7 c# M4 s<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
/ J. b7 X1 A- y' m) \- N% Z<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ j5 u( D9 F% ~2 d( P% c; T, R1 i<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; N+ y) U+ U5 l5 n$ |  \" L<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 L& |5 L/ A) k# m- x5 N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
! z( Q  P' U. M, p<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

+ p5 k- ]* Q2 ?( c4 z; s 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

- G# J: D2 T0 O% |: J5 x这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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6 b$ Q2 @7 k' w4 r9 ~这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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! S! m/ k0 V" c<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>