【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
  _0 _$ A+ ?+ RThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
5 N" F: P' h1 N% t6 gFrom the first moment we met,
! g% H( Z# I. Y! TI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
3 ?% L5 U  w) t  f0 o6 pI want to confess that I love you,
  _: ^3 W  o' S0 fBut I never did
% e8 _5 }( c; B. }One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% s$ h1 u- D7 J7 z& RIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& ?$ z$ X' i; `% j4 NI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
; ^7 n( S7 W( Q) yBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
) I1 l+ U4 Q; s0 e7 TI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; i7 h- |0 N6 v* D  p/ xI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
% m9 \9 y* V- b6 V" FEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

- _6 J; i6 |/ E2 r5 a5 p" E- x. Z[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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2 `' V4 Z! v! H' W$ P: M" l3 K<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
0 x+ ]9 F# X+ b3 l9 @<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
2 j* z8 F" o% U) p6 I<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
9 [8 g& U+ w) e1 ]0 \' ^$ L<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
. ]/ b7 X7 ]9 B: P# ]- V: u<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
* Z7 c- R* X( S& A2 ^) @* p# p<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
, n, `- L+ S( b<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
8 F& v6 X# X' h! `' s& k) \/ t<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
: g+ Y7 q1 t& E& j6 a7 F9 ?+ R; Q/ L/ r<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
: k# Z8 F' D6 d<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
1 \# ^" S. f' ?6 V$ `, o<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
/ ?- w" |8 X  d1 X( J) x<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% t8 i8 V1 Q$ B9 s" u<P>我想说我爱你</P>
+ {, b( i& y" {) x. z" Z# S<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ L* C1 w; c, w; W- ^  Z9 C<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ r9 l" [! y' B4 ^6 W: P# {5 |<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, K) K/ K0 V( d/ h& u4 r9 T<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ Z$ d7 H3 @4 s<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ d+ j6 ^" n1 |  n, K4 x& O' q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# ]# f7 A4 {6 s<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# Q; m5 e1 E  A: @( V% s# {<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
% g% f  a  h# O) R) i4 N/ B) P' A<P>但我不会 </P>
  g4 V7 g, H$ t<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
! `3 j6 t0 G$ v2 i" B% a<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  a( g4 k" e, I: v: W: J# d<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 k3 x+ i0 l' S, e<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 W; M) t3 q* o# x2 |- j6 \7 A, r<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% r4 h/ W3 J6 K1 f) y( e  T0 U4 R<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

3 M9 ]2 L9 D/ L4 T1 n1 c 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

; q" t' ~/ U9 W5 J/ H: z" \0 Q; \8 f$ E这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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6 f1 f" ^2 j$ A这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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& K1 Q+ `4 D: m& f4 a<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>