【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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0 {. g. F3 M) V' X& \我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
6 m% `, H7 Z2 w1 Q" `$ y% wThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
+ }/ Y1 d* k! k4 }- tFrom the first moment we met,
0 O: Z, h% i( I" q3 x: uI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
9 K0 |& g' h( Z$ t% F- v" ABut I never did
! J  v' T/ R- P' Q5 Q8 S3 ^One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- N$ Q$ h- \; X0 `% C& _If today isn’t too late,
6 P2 G. e3 `6 `; f$ U# SI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: |3 P4 T' O4 M+ w' WCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
$ m& t4 ^- u0 WI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
( B+ k$ d0 P( p8 F6 yOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ C* P, u# @8 K7 C! U6 pIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" w* E' a& O4 W2 ~# Y8 eCan I entrust it to you?
% T7 l: d! o9 TEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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* j% e- _. C0 S5 ^9 [[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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/ O* g, r$ x% e<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
6 Y/ b7 C  p0 V5 a/ C0 ]- `" ]: N" ~<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
' l3 B# H1 {7 T2 {<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
; F- A, C' Z# c' j0 f4 C8 S) E<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
' s5 O) `- r% R5 U4 U<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
0 l8 x0 U3 M- o' s+ ^1 A. {% w8 U6 a<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
$ @8 s- w7 X4 F" O, d+ @+ F$ ^<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
9 C! v- a0 ~( z( M<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
: _! @, b& j0 N. J( K- ^8 H2 v<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
1 Q/ r$ x' K6 E7 i$ y<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
) S$ \% {/ x) }# i* t; `<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* j4 P, _9 i) c1 {<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
# f: E; K) H& u<P>但我不会</P>
$ z. K; ~, D! |7 I<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. O' |' o, A# a$ I2 o7 ?/ K: C<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 q- Y/ @& ]8 o7 j. v8 U( U: V, [<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 Z% U/ x' M; q8 G3 D8 u2 y. J7 Q0 I<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ ?- `9 g: I1 r6 t<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) B% s2 F& [% u& y4 y5 P<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( X( c8 D+ E4 m( G" E6 k7 @' Q<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
3 |0 H) P- a8 F1 }+ O; [: t<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
# y! p& t3 Z/ d" D0 c<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
- K7 S" |1 l) n- U<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 T% ?& \& z7 U  o# ~<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% b) h  ~% }* j5 k- i2 l9 K<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& G9 {) `0 h+ f! @  Y. _3 h<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 ?9 D. R" v& Y8 o- b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

8 l% n* x% i) A, e这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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0 s- e1 v3 Y$ d<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>