【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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4 m- Z7 S& u$ j# |* o/ x8 G4 \我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
/ Y" y( p4 C. a4 lI already loved you with all my heart
) c# a  Y& X/ _, R/ F! O: nWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
9 T% C8 i/ y: Z3 m9 N# }If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
% q3 ~3 \# ~+ a* z# x. H( PLove… just the word love
6 `  q2 K$ Z. Z1 XWhy is it so difficult to express?
9 n* `/ X; K6 a0 Z5 C" }# pI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
; u" j1 a0 Y( Q7 m" ]One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* h7 R2 Q4 M  A* m' QIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
" X# u* d( z! e( |Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
3 J" G% z. b* {% m3 Y$ UBut I never did
4 k2 O6 s1 k* Q& }! ZOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
/ ?1 l& ?# H: pEntrust my love within your heart
( S1 a  z% k* T& ICan I entrust it to you?
5 G5 M9 j& e4 `0 U% C6 G* y* L$ rEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

& V9 c7 p1 ^7 z* a/ l+ u) g* Z<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
4 o( A& ]0 c; a# @% @1 J<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
2 V: O9 Z# q& {% k<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
; D4 H' o6 ?& L) J. G; K<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
7 o/ P8 B2 Q' w! u2 _/ o<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
+ R5 }7 E% N; c! x5 g% J<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
7 z  j! b" S% O- o3 S<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
* S& h7 S/ h' ~# G2 X$ q<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
3 U; b% R. a" d8 E" x/ b+ c2 E1 z<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
! X; v2 c) q0 u<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
  [$ i" q/ R% R<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
2 ^' I5 |# v, n! S<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
$ x3 y' n. t$ \* ~<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
$ Z( A/ ~& i% B& p( d. U, G<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
9 R1 ^4 S# m6 y# _+ b<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
+ O- D# S7 `& J6 w2 e' h<P>但我不会</P>
) a/ }$ [  f! R) @<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
0 B9 i/ {0 r+ s- O2 e<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* i* v5 q7 @0 r9 k. h; D' J<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( j( f' K6 M2 q9 |$ @<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 D! e8 f* Q' F  H<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
, u' k5 _; J& O% ^, Z1 Z<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
8 [) M; ~0 d+ e9 f<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 r4 K5 ~- l5 W' z6 m9 A<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
% t" ?+ z; ?; y+ U, x# k' v7 o<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 y. v& A! i& A/ z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
4 Z: }7 G( w  ~9 U2 J( S' r' h<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 ^% k# e% N; i: T5 }6 a0 O) [<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ A3 j5 t5 o8 Q* d2 @4 ^<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  S/ @; j; `, o5 j( D<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; C: R+ z1 @2 F<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
# C! N1 [, R  b2 i8 N: g0 t! ^<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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/ G; z9 r0 Y* ~2 Q, g 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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% h% t) Z* F/ w# w0 u5 w这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, n6 a2 [" v/ ]5 A% T, Z* K" D<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>