【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
5 P, ]) v, k  [2 P! ^3 r0 I3 zThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
3 a! y! c8 I8 C6 K3 [9 RI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
$ N) X8 ?- V- JBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
. W3 I* k0 y1 NI would probably know how you feel
( Z0 D# V9 F* q4 A* lLove… just the word love
0 O% ]0 w  V* eWhy is it so difficult to express?
# N2 @9 t* [0 N. c! T7 ^2 T+ uI want to confess that I love you,
6 {2 f! I6 E$ ]  S: j. l+ vBut I never did
, S- S0 H+ ~6 c3 |9 NOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 l. h- C6 `  d0 n  KIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
5 I& f% @. G$ V5 e2 @- x. uWhy is it so difficult to express?
2 e7 o& _: @7 F% }- QI want to confess that I love you,
/ t! `* j8 K9 f8 IBut I never did
7 e, t' p# q$ W! YOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; R. l- E& a. s0 _3 L) SIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, o: z) B2 Q+ a: m# z3 [Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
0 @4 \% j1 r$ w: H( _. t3 O5 gEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

( G, ?+ s3 g3 h0 {4 N<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
) b" u5 n# E. L" A% N<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
! R( s' r) ]; X" K! D<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
5 n" G3 E5 R: {7 J<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
" {2 y- p; @: F3 F# I. D<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
9 g1 C, j1 d* J. b' B<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
4 m# G: N4 H) i# }4 v- i<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
7 D$ O, P8 I/ [- |<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
$ ?8 m# U/ u4 L8 G<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
9 D" P+ K+ @4 G* }0 O" ?5 }& l- v7 Q<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
+ w! Z$ E( r9 n<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
) Y8 v2 Y  C" Y, Q<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
$ v1 I8 R' t0 u  f% ]<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 U$ P" V! |- q- R' U) {0 L! ~6 T<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. }. U0 S. v" \. P; q+ q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 `9 `% C' `7 g0 n2 Q& k6 D<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 D! w$ D9 a: n<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- E# ~; p2 `/ E6 t<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
0 B6 [5 t" @3 h  E9 l<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
  V( z8 L# F, a<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 s3 F% P5 ]- n" l) z3 H! _<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
6 Q" z5 L2 S0 f+ h/ \& W- G<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
% w! U7 X- c8 P4 O- }<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ m' c7 q7 ~$ N+ c% }<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) n' t% t: e1 r: b- |<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 ^1 J) k8 I. O" M/ k9 c3 n* y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, c4 {  ?! v3 F4 q, m. K) O" Y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, U6 i  c4 r3 e. r7 \, K( h<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 w9 C8 T% Q+ A<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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3 s6 D8 |0 j0 l" s) b这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ M, ?( P+ H' Q7 E6 g<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# n! m3 Y) l% T! @0 V& |<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>