【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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; }8 E+ I# j1 M+ ]$ j* u我另将歌词附在此。
7 m+ g0 g3 x& e' w* o6 qThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
$ E& \- m( W, AThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
+ G" i% x' Y: X7 e) m4 u; s: VFrom the first moment we met,
  Z9 F2 ^, ^$ mI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
& ?' ]) J0 j$ [Love… just the word love
/ n  W8 E8 E$ C# MWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
+ H" _5 [& I3 [+ U1 {3 E( `' K! C- uOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" ?4 v* c2 B; {If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 `8 G8 ~' @$ U- x+ Y8 [Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
# d9 L% P6 ^7 \% k, K! f7 T/ ]Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
7 m7 b3 h% E0 M* B3 N9 [But I never did
/ I2 O+ [! I" R9 ]' y6 [4 ]7 dOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
. M1 l; q9 H6 k) p5 @$ o* uI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& U5 W6 l( A' I/ p! \I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
' o  r' D$ E/ T4 N" @6 J/ ?' eEntrust my love within your heart
. R2 H7 L# @! DCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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/ H  P( E  I8 f# M. k6 M[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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) L1 y) \( [- H& V- \<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
, ~/ L* O8 r# m" B6 X) X0 _<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
* J) u) e+ Z" J+ w$ _9 v6 @- V<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
4 c& G$ L  _; Y: b<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
5 w, S; P4 S* o/ ?( R1 ?<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
7 _4 w. t3 P* u& V3 C/ y/ ~<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
2 j) n8 b8 @( ]- s<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
; Z" r7 W4 Z9 z3 |3 L# k( c<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
: r  U: l% [& Y# F2 f<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
! R# M" C6 w. I* |$ B$ O1 k<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
4 J$ r& U" D, R% [7 B2 H3 W; f; j<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
/ {4 }7 {% Y  {% r* p, ~<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 y* M- S, Q3 z, j<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
  v. T0 {. V9 i( E% A) P<P>但我不会</P>
5 Z3 o1 J/ \! h0 X<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
& Q, w% g: |5 A1 V. J! g2 @4 w<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  R( S7 ]9 t' U9 p7 }+ K5 G<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 L1 [2 J4 ?3 h" P* f3 O<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 Q+ e. V& k4 U+ \  `% H9 G<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% f0 E+ m) |' K' g# H<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: L$ x) V' |7 f9 n1 o3 d<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, K) L9 c( u6 Q1 Q* n<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
2 \6 \2 {6 r, t* n5 m( n2 K$ e+ q4 P4 o<P>但我不会 </P>
) o" Q, F/ h9 y/ T. y. ^* P<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
, [, k8 c" R) ~$ s7 O<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
! e) N- p9 c& m! i% G% P+ j4 V<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. z: N& R: U+ k: p6 h<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& U- e$ m' z1 r% n3 }* R<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& P" m2 Z' C, h5 P<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 }) z2 F# b& a: V3 C2 a3 f  ^<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
: O5 ]# q# b/ H) _<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ K+ c0 ^& K% b3 Y! C( u! ^<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>