【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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/ k4 Y2 r$ z7 A' }我另将歌词附在此。
1 E/ w3 \" E" bThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
9 a( D5 J4 P9 }& m( w5 W5 P$ n6 DThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
+ Q! Q; v4 K) }. ^: DFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
9 D8 |2 X. y: q3 RBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
: c& [  m* b) R4 LI would probably know how you feel
3 r+ \7 ~( W2 P  J, a. w  i/ }Love… just the word love
; E3 I/ [9 Y8 f" K# l" BWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
  w/ }; H: Y5 Q% TBut I never did
' h8 d* t. Z+ E$ VOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 W) z0 g9 i+ P" y! ?I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
# w# I8 Y: s! B" Q* w6 vI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
/ J# O+ {4 H3 V9 X- P  mOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
9 W: w5 w: c1 }% qI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
8 X- l2 B6 J! l- g. pCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
/ I1 x3 d7 ]6 B1 K4 e<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
5 L8 N' W% B1 z; a# t. N; q/ S<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
7 p3 W% b9 R6 R<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
% r( I0 g; {. A: G4 S- t4 Y8 M" g<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
" q8 O% Q6 {: k# E: I' a; G<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
2 ^9 `$ A/ T8 a9 j7 [) k: a& M5 B<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
4 t' k, L$ A+ p& A$ \# F<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
4 \, ^; V# B( p  d" a; |2 U<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
$ d4 Q" s. @3 B5 O. q0 a% F<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
# O* s1 L% k& s9 G6 @. i<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
$ G$ U- X# ~3 S% Z% H<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" F% |! h% ?) O9 r7 b1 M4 y5 G' v<P>我想说我爱你</P>
# B' {& p/ `- p<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
3 n  m% f  D- g<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% o: `! T& w  i1 a9 [<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
2 q; |7 q' ?5 E$ P" C<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* s% s9 f% C- b" \4 ]( {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
* j6 l3 J' \7 G( ~, y% E7 C<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 z/ i6 C0 O1 W# r+ ]' g<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
& g$ P: U7 n* h; z<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
! f+ |: U% ?# x0 f8 a, K' a<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
5 G) @0 A6 E, O( o. G1 t<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
# s0 H5 X. [6 C" Y8 u0 ~! f  L: W<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 L- i: U- u+ l( g$ j, T1 @<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" @7 t9 s* V1 W& d& ^, ~9 r<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  h8 l( Y# R+ x  f5 `5 N<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 w; b  @- P- E/ E' o4 r1 x$ i<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
4 a' @0 ~5 V. W  M<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

; x$ g; C* U, H( h/ t% O5 x这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 v# p+ n4 J- l7 i" _- E<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>