【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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; w. p# m) r! u  R# Q, w我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
9 W1 l" X7 Q4 d/ m- I0 ?From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
0 h* Y& }/ s6 o- Z; K6 t8 n  hBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
* ?9 G9 |$ [) Y: Q& qI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
+ d. s$ N. z3 M1 \. c( v+ PWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
+ G; M8 A. c1 M5 C6 J( N# POne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 W6 e& c, ]0 Z. V1 _If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 L% a$ q" ^" a' U  c6 m& [I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
& T5 b* g" C+ @; ?6 @$ VEntrust my love within your heart
5 C' M! ~: j9 YLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
3 Q9 E. V, j; |4 m/ MBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
" U6 Z2 c  R% h: N) OI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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  B" r) j0 P' m[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

- d* v0 a  n, U, p6 O" \! T4 [6 Y<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
& `: ^/ `6 P3 l* A" {8 }5 T<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
2 O5 n) {( V6 l: X+ ?6 R<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
! @7 L1 W. P  y) b3 X+ E6 x<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
' q+ E: ~! c; c% Y<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
1 z" n, K* D. w* X" k' G<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
/ s3 f' N4 ^/ T1 v/ @+ n<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
; D# }1 o$ z( |$ [3 g2 q& ?3 V<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
) V5 [- B! i: f<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
* l5 @2 \. @1 ?8 Q/ F+ e<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
4 a, S( P7 X. s8 \1 u' b2 Y; k& m& S& n<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
9 Y7 _7 u8 ^& s! V; K7 s5 j<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
$ c* t4 L  T' E) J; D" [& [' Z<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
! j+ q6 F. \1 V; V! I<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
% |7 n* |( u( E8 {" F<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! ]5 w/ H1 W& p% H$ f<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ A3 u$ t" W, }+ J<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' |* X. }9 T5 E9 q* G<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( j. b( P1 R' [( y<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
$ \" \+ B6 o- V& N<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
9 n6 z# l9 J0 I) ]<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 Q7 X) U" d8 S; S3 O<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
, a0 K5 ^6 R8 p4 `, N0 y+ `9 R; f7 m<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
$ X/ p* J/ K& t; U- N<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
: c2 N' W3 Y, `" {* ^0 d<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 @0 A1 w. a& j# P" E0 B2 R& L) K3 o<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ a7 u) H  J. q/ P# J' d<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' ]# C, j" [, T# S% Y2 x* ]<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 U7 h8 ]7 p- r0 w<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! ?3 d9 C$ D7 L5 y* w+ t* ?<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! E1 ~+ ?9 x  e* {( P  o<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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4 {1 k) g' M: Q  }% w 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

4 `9 {- S( O& d7 f% x( P这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ Z; a1 i) O8 X0 d- Q<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>