【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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" p- L1 T, D7 l我另将歌词附在此。
4 ~! A: i0 N" c/ p& [+ j* F/ gThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
9 ^) |0 J2 K) D  v* _, oThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
4 u* X, k$ R* D2 t7 SFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
/ ]. Y/ v0 y9 C& c+ s3 G/ [7 UWe meet and talk everyday,
0 V" \# e9 v# iBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
  Y  i- e2 Q9 Y- i) ^2 wI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
8 E+ i3 ]! Q6 Z- Z7 J% B$ e7 TI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% E6 O7 U" H4 _0 h( M! K6 k2 }If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 t2 @3 _9 [6 y6 P6 u8 p# QI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! u. U8 G2 Q; |) e7 }4 J& jCan I entrust it to you?
7 a1 d( z$ r* W, XEntrust my love within your heart
- X/ y+ F8 C8 h: s( {& XCan I entrust it to you?
" W% P* s$ ?0 s5 j' rEntrust my love within your heart

9 A& |( v6 T- M3 _0 n3 t[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
6 }+ g& Q# m4 \  H( W<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
  i3 I: S1 Z- W' o& k<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
9 l" N3 ?3 t5 M4 k' A5 H<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 E; f! Y9 x6 U6 ]$ C5 j% [<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
: K6 y2 H" w3 o  C<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
0 g1 I0 x& b2 o) a2 ~( p" \<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
/ r& u+ c5 {* N' M<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
* X" E+ `' R' M8 m<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
6 @+ @% p  f; K- Z$ [<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
/ I- }! C3 O$ f' ]+ \3 a<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
) k2 G2 S6 r" c8 p<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
& Z( n% M; S9 k$ m<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* Z0 ]1 c) ^! S0 x; B# P<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
) m7 N3 Z& x0 Z# r0 Y2 H<P>但我不会</P>
: z; d7 _- r0 M( o. h& V<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 X& P' N" u* ?/ U* ~: n6 `<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ j& |7 `! Y8 K<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 E/ y& N$ ?+ G0 L+ f0 T- ~* S<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ ^" H$ f2 C3 `$ p$ f; a<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( |3 _8 P. p; J6 G<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ R" |) i4 d5 j  X4 {" s% z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 Q( g7 F0 ^' }  r8 c, V) q/ h( b% E, X<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
6 J9 ]; }: s) p! K, r<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# N$ M- f7 h- S; I9 g<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 n, F' `8 V. i<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# ~& Y6 z/ _! \<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 E6 G6 P6 T. x) a: N* d( p<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) ^" ~$ O6 j7 u; T' h- o5 Z& O<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 U( t0 a- R* G9 m  i( n<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 Y, F2 H+ l3 d<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* C# @0 P( Q+ ^9 b$ H0 n, O8 K  M<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& X# A0 b7 ]# j' M/ h- ]<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
3 r+ }  F" p; g- S<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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6 r$ D) E& V& q4 a/ W<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>