【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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' `9 p- ~: _: P! N+ L  t. X" z我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
% W! Q& C- Y  r) B$ G0 V: p& QThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
" j  d: X( r+ O" LFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
4 y1 u: ?2 u. f% aBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
: ~) _  j! I  R# kI would probably know how you feel
& D. {0 s/ j7 |! }# a$ nLove… just the word love
0 ?4 D; C7 d7 n" `% D1 cWhy is it so difficult to express?
% m! Z  b5 ?8 d5 eI want to confess that I love you,
% ]  s# d5 d( J7 D: uBut I never did
3 ?' L6 o! d5 p0 q, r* r' _* |* DOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
9 x1 C; j; G7 F' H2 [I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! V4 S0 j; q6 m1 ECan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
& K. y& ]- _5 e* \* MLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
( _* ]. d; P5 ]I want to confess that I love you,
4 |, Z4 N3 U& f) r) n) {But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! S1 z9 A) R$ w1 F9 _If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
8 h: ~8 W# m' NEntrust my love within your heart
- {! L: N( x, E. G3 s5 V* rCan I entrust it to you?
+ K/ [' G$ t$ g+ ?. i7 ^2 U& c) g0 Q2 OEntrust my love within your heart

% O) f$ \. }$ J* X[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
2 O( W  v7 X4 q; E6 W/ y; a; K<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
* N) N6 o2 K4 w4 H<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
& C2 y( ^% T- z<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
- M. M0 |) {% Q9 |: I6 _( F<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
5 t" d& I- z  P% M9 O0 e  U+ U<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
6 W% {% `, K- ~3 |  j" v) ?<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
. I1 O( Z, A& b! v8 l<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
& Q) T: [" x, |! j$ E7 _<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
8 o: Q& C: z$ _<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
. B& J4 r/ \- g5 _<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
% v) \8 a2 m; O$ l& @' w<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
+ {7 E, Y" S. b. I; Q- C1 z<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! c2 r+ Y) I; z8 p$ F<P>我想说我爱你</P>
" [) L$ l" a& q7 O<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
, m7 m' ]* m9 G  F1 E. A<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: O0 h7 ]' X& \/ r* T4 K, u<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
+ I) B( k& G0 A<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 {. D8 B* l2 F& j; M/ _4 l<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ R8 ~& F& F1 e* ]. B( O<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ ?2 M4 Y! }: ?  Q! K5 T; ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 |$ B; J. r$ c9 B+ U<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
* G% Z, F' N5 [5 C4 o+ r5 j) p<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
9 n; U0 u2 y% U# G<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
, h- V8 o0 X7 x' ?<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 s) H5 `7 n. a! U<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
0 O( m! j# ?3 e5 a( K6 o8 X* v! S<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
! i' }6 V9 m: Q6 E8 ~0 D<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& n5 ^0 y! E2 E! U2 n<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
1 B, G' x8 E: M<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' o: E6 V4 z& p* W: G& J' Q: C<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; Y; ^. ^- y' d: l) }! y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ ?8 [9 F$ g6 n* {% x8 g<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
7 a2 D  ]* M+ I" F$ T' s<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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3 }: t3 d: D+ b# [. |这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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. G! ?% S, F/ g) t<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>