【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
+ c0 W0 j9 Y1 b) DThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
+ Z$ S! n& q/ gFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
6 q% I0 y# W- K' gIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
0 c3 V. y2 [( U8 D8 b7 A# sLove… just the word love
' J  S7 k% D4 _0 C, _- Q8 e* IWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
0 \1 K0 l5 U# u5 b$ @But I never did
' Q) F& F) E! I4 u1 xOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( F) a0 n. m+ F* e- |Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# G" _  k# I  G/ O8 N5 _5 L% ^I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) ^8 Y( d; n! f6 B- Z/ H$ MCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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$ e2 D- Q/ D# S  W0 w# A[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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$ x/ y6 y* Q% W1 N# T1 L<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
: Y  R1 }: {# X# B6 C<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
7 b1 i$ |% X: D! }. }' h7 P<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
2 c/ H+ c) G0 ^" r# b1 ]8 ~% d<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
' w; K1 [/ b) P1 n7 f8 t<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
1 h4 j$ I7 l6 {' c: p/ N<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
6 @. ^. g1 H( H* {4 t<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
. \2 P2 d0 S" M$ f<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
& z, p4 w% _* j6 X# k<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
2 j  R/ s$ s6 j' D. o1 Y% s# x, m<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
7 U. u4 N# Z! U8 X1 `<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
# T# A- ~4 j1 q; V: h: X# g; V<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
. N8 t8 _0 @5 Q/ H6 Q& C<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
# }+ x. e$ k+ |7 C" f$ D; V<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
' U5 [6 A+ C, p1 u( V0 r& {<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
. i4 A" k) J! [8 |<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 m' [, g0 |6 b' g<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: R: f1 _/ p$ c" K9 ~. i<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 w9 ~4 `0 F% S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 T0 R+ n9 ?" _: Y2 k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 _! L2 _2 z: n. N& c# _<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
( m! z  x: }+ w/ ^  k$ Z+ ]<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  y$ ^2 ~, ^3 Q; ~2 ^<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
. D8 b2 C* u9 Y( O! u<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
; y6 e0 E  \. n2 g' [<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
+ P# e- G- K! ]3 x<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 F5 ?) R  i; I' o3 J<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ ?6 U' I+ t* G0 c" z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 k/ m* U* i4 K' k$ a3 d; j' R<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 i) e; k! Q% w5 x9 H$ s7 v: O<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; y$ z; M- Z0 u/ i% K& U<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- {2 }4 V. B% A# D' c<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- o. ~  K2 h" w<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
( n3 @, r& O. D& V! \. ~% D<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
( l+ `: q2 I- W" i<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

; Z# X8 z2 r7 h这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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: x( f+ R% [2 G( T1 Q; P! R- |<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>