【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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1 D5 [" Y7 Q/ K& Y2 J我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
* E+ O! ?) p; {/ B5 x( `! M7 yI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
1 b1 d" V! o) bWhy is it so difficult to express?
7 z  H$ n) _9 q, j, S; pI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  K6 ]) a5 E  H7 }+ _If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; y6 N; `) S4 T7 ZI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
7 |2 n6 ]& k, x2 sEntrust my love within your heart
- e% [! F3 L3 r+ j4 q; D& P' xLove… just the word love
  L" w- u/ ?4 p/ ^Why is it so difficult to express?
* m) D, N/ ?. g! `I want to confess that I love you,
; I  I! w6 M. L' v) N# hBut I never did
7 N* Q0 a* }! ^4 Y# H; _One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! i. L; C  ?" _% U- LIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- s6 V$ ^3 ^* Q9 W( T+ L. j" ?* G: ICan I entrust it to you?
2 K( D. w' m! \: f! }Entrust my love within your heart
; ?! c3 v# f' S9 ?9 P" A* b4 ~* YCan I entrust it to you?
4 }+ v9 v6 T  b7 FEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

2 B" p9 P5 B1 Y3 w! b# b( U<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
1 S0 U6 {% n- {6 \$ l  v  M<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
8 D. U; z& r" [& `6 X<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
, \. }4 _, x9 Q% `8 W3 n<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
5 k4 s; j% M" B<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
1 G  d% A9 a; W# @<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
" H( l: l6 D6 K, M4 H0 U# a: t<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
9 E* x% V- i) L<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
$ {: G/ X, j& Y1 z* O<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
2 t* z( i% M2 M# t. C5 Q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
. m, V; U. B. x  _+ N# L( u<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
9 n+ f7 S& h7 l7 f! f' P2 _1 `<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
- l  C0 Q, Z' v  r<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
- s! @' T0 P, W3 C" p; F. m$ D<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
: S. p5 {2 y1 s1 L  h8 G<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  H9 f5 K3 t5 `# u3 g<P>我想说我爱你</P>
$ w/ I1 K3 y" _% U: b# L5 [<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
1 p# B7 M9 |: v$ Z<P>但我不会</P>
( i3 }: ]1 t, ?<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
7 A4 [$ m, m5 z5 E; _# R5 ~, S& w<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 b& p" ~! k5 ~. I/ _<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: @0 Z  }; S! l9 Z# U& O/ J<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
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<P>Love… just the word love </P>
/ K9 d1 z5 Y. u/ V) o2 ~+ V<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
* U6 J* Q. F% z' d, ?, m<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
; |( |, ^' M& \5 V, u<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
7 C) b2 b( Q" e0 [8 ~/ [# `, b<P>But I never did </P>
0 Z: ?! X5 j) n# i( ~. }<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
9 ]; r3 f3 C( Q" l6 c: {3 P<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ p, `! j$ e2 J/ }' l<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
5 @- A' t8 \' W5 z<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
" U( [! _/ ~2 Q- r7 M! |<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# {+ {6 [  A. r6 J/ `<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! p. m' L( d2 Y" O  c5 D" n<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* S. m( F7 h: B<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
3 M  G0 ~) x0 g- c! V<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

6 N& N' [! p0 T这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* \2 u  C4 D0 J  s<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>