【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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3 Q( P* e% s" y4 d我另将歌词附在此。
, S" s6 m' z9 ^! KThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
# ]+ e& V4 F3 V+ ^That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
0 d# D( [* F) l% i& rBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
6 r8 P- N/ Q3 y" nIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
2 g) k+ c  k' x- aLove… just the word love
8 r3 N0 @8 O' i* ^6 f4 gWhy is it so difficult to express?
& W0 \) y  |; p& NI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
  P8 k& v1 [' U: f' q5 ?% VOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" X* R% {2 V4 ^1 |4 N* ?If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
0 \# s  o' F% e- BEntrust my love within your heart
) r, q4 S% B9 l$ m6 O/ M* Z2 f5 XLove… just the word love
1 j' m3 J- t4 M0 P& BWhy is it so difficult to express?
; b# f2 F3 y# x  m5 }I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
. I* }9 x6 o. r5 I. M# WOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 x* R$ a" D* g, GIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! C4 E5 O; h- d: J: A/ T0 ~I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) m. P2 n5 u$ [; S) zCan I entrust it to you?
; I, w9 e# @: m/ u0 ], t7 w9 A- BEntrust my love within your heart
; ~+ q( g3 M7 v* _% x% Q: ~: ^$ WCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

0 m: G- H2 s/ l1 z- Q; m[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
9 z% j2 T) M+ u' {- D& T* R5 x<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
" o5 I1 l' S" Q" o<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
9 B7 \' f  l: \: o% l<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
: x- y1 P8 R- B4 _<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
$ U) E. C. o/ X1 w+ A9 X" H, \% b9 e<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
  T5 e; u. p: D0 ^5 p" w; c<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
( j* d8 Q+ S0 u6 \. o<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
& }% |& d4 X: e5 u/ t8 l<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
$ S  ^" _$ e" }) `9 U- E% l+ C1 F<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
- u4 ?* r  g' g. {<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
, S% Z' k1 q1 P# @2 z$ W& ?<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
( B/ Z, c# J$ W  T6 `<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 O! u$ c) ?4 H<P>我想说我爱你</P>
. S6 T$ e( j2 }/ j/ p<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
, a) N- }  Z! M: g' L  I<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
" e! Y/ g! V  v( m* o<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
! A: M% G8 y) K<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ c) ^! f# E# G- I  B<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 p6 }% {. M' M" o* o9 S<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  P( C, l( n5 @+ N0 @<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 Y8 s% N0 t, @7 H: r+ g: t- `<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  w6 F4 B9 d; X( z7 m! u<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; R! j3 F( ?3 N- T) c- _/ {2 K<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 n2 ^$ d- z& T<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
( G( F- g- R$ P" y( t<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
) e/ }6 k  W$ B" @, i% Q<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
9 D6 v$ J% v) ~) p<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, @. G0 M- ~: H2 A$ N' x3 j( ]<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: F6 K8 w. Q9 d  R) Z& x$ u<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- N/ e5 u2 i4 w$ d/ G5 x<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 Z. x+ F# T7 }- K<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
# z9 f9 Z% I6 g2 X& R) J; }) E<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
1 Z% E7 d( `" G8 K: I<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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1 W( o6 }% U9 n2 x这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) ]! ?0 n# L3 J% C<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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; d  i- }3 X1 v6 q$ C: H<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>