【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
* L7 O  n; F. cThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
$ i3 x# }8 t; S7 ?+ w6 k0 X* `, XFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
) v6 z1 Y" ]4 f6 UWe meet and talk everyday,
4 Q0 [2 P  t5 A, E7 FBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
- D; x! `; ^; }, jIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
9 I! M+ J+ X2 @; ~! EI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
& O6 |" Z, |+ B7 k; p, e9 cWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
4 {2 T9 [# w7 lOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; E: \4 k& w; ]$ a) t: s; W, lIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
, \9 m5 o$ R; H9 D6 j/ \- cEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
; m( f1 Y$ U1 o1 F7 o1 PBut I never did
+ [( l# G, n. ]6 SOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 U* G8 M6 b* E9 C" @1 wIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ o0 k& s0 z4 E2 G; eI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
7 A2 [: {5 C; Q) TEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
, A% z& C9 |0 y- m3 m<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
! k0 b* _( V6 N- j; s<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
7 H9 ~) t% O2 C$ Q<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
$ _6 d3 H" F/ D& [<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
; E4 H/ W" I* Q3 D3 N, n+ [7 W- C* p<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
$ w5 K- y- z; o2 I9 u( U<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
0 i  G8 _& N! ~3 D, s. z<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
1 m9 ?- Q1 V8 h/ r0 R<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
6 @2 U! k4 @3 j6 u) j% g<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
( f4 {- T' n3 m; }8 X1 o4 v<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
" S# {+ u$ H8 C& j<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
# X2 l9 r" }) K! W; w2 ?' K<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
  X" o. D0 f: ]<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 u: u8 L0 M0 j7 d- H<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
' n5 y7 ?3 ]3 v2 h<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ _& M! N7 p; X<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 b" K9 O& f4 H. H6 s<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ h  J5 d8 F% B( @9 @: [<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
1 d8 B2 S' W$ `+ D9 W( o1 V2 H& J<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
* ^+ Y1 I' T/ v# c6 J# a& a<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
1 P) @' E3 Z+ S4 s' [1 L) Y# T<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. T$ `) H# f# H) B- q, j<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
: ^5 Y( b* F# D$ ]$ s<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
( B- n2 A- z7 k<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* C6 U- k5 Z  b<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 X' S7 z8 f. |# M<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 W( ^: L0 O/ v& J" l, B<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, p" O$ N1 ^4 J3 v) i3 b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
9 A# q& p# L5 v$ X<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

1 s+ `; J: y+ u' x5 R+ @: S这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>