【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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! _& Z! E; O+ p: u4 v* r: A我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
7 }, i, N5 a/ s3 N( O" [But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
; A8 f7 @: G) d9 oI would probably know how you feel
9 ^. K; w& `- ~5 D8 ~7 M+ hLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
% `" x5 G6 c& BI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
- x! h% w/ K: [- tEntrust my love within your heart
) G! x" A  Z, R$ q& ULove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, ]( p- q7 |0 c) z) m8 i  r/ LIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ ^9 P4 S% Z- {! K; ^0 v0 ^I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% n% X$ n, B$ E; j; aCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
$ ]( N8 M. s' g+ l. G" ?Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

" `! r0 {, X$ h% I" e$ M* v[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

- M0 |( n! W/ l' `' t; W/ ^9 M<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
3 J% U& w: y) m<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
" U% _7 e5 g5 d<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
% `6 A% f& Q  z7 \, @7 i<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
0 M+ w7 b* m' t7 y3 Y9 F<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
- l, {1 m$ l6 H<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
2 k1 x6 P5 V9 L+ |<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
# U/ ?% K  J1 k9 W% n<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
0 i% C! Y+ u7 n<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
3 p7 m( p1 i4 X7 j# ~1 I3 h* r<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
! f3 j# K, G3 p; j: |<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
+ c. N) K" L* G$ b- [) P3 T& J<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
# m! O2 Y: q  _& B5 F/ w<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
6 t3 h7 u: {, x. R<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
2 [9 C3 z. k5 `1 G. X1 z<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 C* v7 h3 [2 `+ N, X. h! D; n<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 G) \% B6 H1 F<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- H5 c5 P# i( `& v& F# N<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& L/ x! ^4 V/ c( G: q/ M<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 m+ e& f+ ?$ {6 D. J<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
5 K/ l8 f2 d5 X$ e; T: c( l; N9 N6 o<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 J+ H, X5 B1 R<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
% V1 n5 c- Y0 S<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
' E+ D& x: Z7 G6 q<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 Y# B5 }- ?* P, f+ J7 ?<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 R& N( G) Y" [& V) ]<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) |: w( t/ }/ q0 [5 j: l" J( |<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  ^' N# J- s' ]4 o7 f<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 p% S1 _( L$ V: {9 E<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 J) c( b9 }# m! E+ E7 W<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
! X' |9 O$ k' G* [5 o<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
! C% e# ^, N; O<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

, O/ k! E% j% i7 |这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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  y7 W5 [, ]. {, E+ y5 s# u- H) U这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: |: J3 }! V( e2 [* K" {4 N( g<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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