【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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* b; q- M( [" e: ~( F# ~/ @8 q我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
. k, U. [; `0 ]2 y0 V% i7 VThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
; J: K: j2 T5 f) [From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
: J0 a& _0 `8 }/ C9 vWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
8 c+ Z+ B9 K3 n1 S: x; y: L( h4 JWhy is it so difficult to express?
1 }7 v5 ^$ K+ e0 F: u6 @2 r" V; yI want to confess that I love you,
0 g" c2 I8 H" SBut I never did
' F2 w. O' i) O. }/ EOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% Y; K" t" a7 b& uIf today isn’t too late,
. o! }/ H# x) i5 _5 [2 _# f- lI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 j. R0 Q' l0 |! v# T* T8 x2 k9 CI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% R6 u0 Y5 @+ J0 f0 h7 KCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
. z7 C( \% n  N& M1 n$ _Why is it so difficult to express?
5 z' f/ K# C, v3 z9 kI want to confess that I love you,
3 h8 J! _* t9 J$ {# I& WBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# f5 u% F# O  _1 ?- U  T" iI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 _( `+ _8 [4 j) `Can I entrust it to you?
) L3 \& E; X2 n6 J0 N$ {Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
# v) G2 ], C3 @- CEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
2 `$ o& B% B: M6 F  B" ^<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
; F% w3 {, G8 g1 _0 x# Z5 J<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 ]3 {% @3 e7 L7 Z<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
" U1 @3 Z0 a) {' a! \& c<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
9 ^5 C1 Q4 j/ N7 m9 K: O<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
) |( M1 q; c( S7 J- g<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
, V; c4 D7 X9 K( ~- C: j  y" u<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
1 u' y- ^' o% N<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
& O' l2 b$ o. M  i8 Q<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ d+ _( J4 ^4 A& E+ U) C- Z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! O/ n. C, \% |7 A, B' o: x% E<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* U5 I" Q9 S' k: x. s8 m+ ]3 V<P>Love… just the word love </P>
+ W9 ^: r9 [* U, p+ E* m. N<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
% a. h0 J/ c) W6 a7 I& W<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' c9 a# H/ S% E' E6 h5 g<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
) |! N3 u" K! q  g<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
- Y3 O0 X8 H. H/ c/ _# z<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 I. J7 Q+ W; ?; v, e<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 q) l1 g! _" J<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" V2 @9 u5 \' }* ?- C  Y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, n' X' _, H9 x) j; h0 c! [2 Q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
2 t3 j4 y' E0 m' D<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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( I; B7 R. G! z) Y7 q这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>