【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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3 K) u' Q  b9 t$ d. [7 T6 e/ C我另将歌词附在此。
7 j8 ?) Z+ D! K' SThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
) x9 r, \" \9 w: D2 IFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" g9 }* A: \3 g, J* t) k( _9 q! gI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" t( j  s$ i3 s" S  a. sCan I entrust it to you?
; k& x8 q; X$ s8 }2 L3 `5 J! D  ?! REntrust my love within your heart
" U# b6 _; k7 C1 @0 `Love… just the word love
; ?, {' t0 d; R( dWhy is it so difficult to express?
  }6 V$ u6 @! S" }  E* MI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 d) F" H- A7 u* t% l. iIf today isn’t too late,
' F9 y2 r- M3 L% F, j$ g# q1 RI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
0 r5 a0 M$ E* uEntrust my love within your heart
9 l# e/ B1 P' d% Q- yCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

7 Z9 D+ O) ~0 ~6 m5 ?* ~# K' M0 v<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
% _9 ?5 I0 u) O+ L! g4 @4 O<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
+ F. T& [' D8 t5 N* w' V( `5 H<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
1 }# T: q8 U0 J& E) l<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
4 X$ r) S; M5 }( Z7 I  m<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
0 A: a& K* Q. f& K& f<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
4 z1 D5 {$ x$ y6 P) J! O<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
* v7 K7 ?" [' k; R3 [. p<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
3 f# `! k" r# Y) P6 F<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
4 S$ R5 s9 P  C! X<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
& g! S* [$ j4 A3 o: p<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 O4 Y- f* H& v- u* M% n<P>我想说我爱你</P>
" H/ }& b* @% y. d<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
! g' s* S& E7 Z: `& u9 _; H<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
7 W$ H, F) L, l, ]$ M# j# m" a- A1 o<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 f8 o" Q# R5 S* W2 m* t6 ^( l8 l<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
, X- a- g8 f6 N# y0 f/ Q4 H<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 y1 {0 I, n7 f9 Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" e# W4 F! j) V$ _' F8 `<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 T: t2 y+ U0 q/ Z6 q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 j, c$ }& a8 `  ?<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
, |/ w4 I. p/ J% D- c<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
, t& g" ^; v1 n2 Z& H<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
( {7 l7 F% G9 k8 ~<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 Y* ]& k8 B" B5 [: @<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
3 L2 Z# A* u: \" E<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
' ^, b& ^& V: b+ w<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
% z; b# s6 _# G# J% h<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* r. Z& Q0 f# T: Z0 G8 x9 S2 m<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
2 n% e/ T* _# n% g& ]<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! M( e' d9 p5 y<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( s( z" b  v0 y4 m! |: C/ X<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ p2 Y* e; r+ O! Y: d. L9 u<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" S- E. h6 j/ v4 w0 y# g, T( K<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 d2 P2 p2 \% `2 F( l3 V, a<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ Q' F# U$ `) e! L<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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