【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
# h$ C4 U2 E' {That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
5 V" g; U8 C. B0 \% v( tI already loved you with all my heart
8 ?* u, z, g: g& VWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
! u* z) Z1 X4 U6 ^% w$ A1 s8 RIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
: R6 H, V9 F8 e9 [! n+ L2 A0 S& aI would probably know how you feel
9 ^) V$ m$ A+ GLove… just the word love
% T9 P9 F0 L9 pWhy is it so difficult to express?
4 w; l! T; |9 z: HI want to confess that I love you,
' A' y* N, k: O/ K* M& N0 UBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
/ b9 A$ {9 h8 a) ]8 @2 RI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 `- I  K8 o  o& U. H; \! l' `* HI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
( B, X- V& F5 q# [" fLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
  p' }0 Y% F7 s! I0 P# G8 J. `* eBut I never did
9 D6 N0 O: `" Y& J0 UOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* Y( T( r- i* O/ ~9 q) [If today isn’t too late,
# P/ l7 W, Y6 C& m6 |! N7 ZI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
; F6 I# i# q9 O: B9 n) ?2 C' m7 ?Can I entrust it to you?
; x. @& s/ Y- q, L8 fEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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8 ]6 [$ `& T' F* l2 U; F5 a/ J<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
  ^% C& G$ T& \2 c8 b  F<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
4 g( w/ A: R/ @: Q0 V<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
( H  L' z- L2 e1 c: @  J<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
9 |& j- ^3 i& t" L; r  i<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
) R* `6 M4 w# \& |# A" p. a1 b<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
; e# n) _* z! v( L, K<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
% M' @0 `7 }$ V) n  `' S- s5 `( a<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
( p# ^( E1 p/ c& I6 r$ ?2 f<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
% z& R0 t* o/ g<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
  b. U1 w, a8 s3 b  f8 b1 R' x<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: |; H( W- E& k& X9 L2 q<P>我想说我爱你</P>
5 c6 o0 _- Y" Y3 u1 C) T1 L<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
) O! @# t* L' P<P>但我不会</P>
+ a" c; i5 M- Q4 E* L* L! G<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 r+ ]" n. `. s# }$ h% H<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
( ~* |/ V& k1 F6 Q+ W# F7 T<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 c& c6 n. k$ Q( L5 G<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' k; p5 {' U# }* U<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* w8 P$ S1 {8 P7 g<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! o1 f$ n( u3 f& d$ P<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! v$ c9 K$ u# \. B5 M; |1 s<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
1 _2 |0 [: v* A, Y& `8 N<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# W5 C" R8 d: K% ]3 O, _<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
( d5 Y& [9 C7 b3 P0 @7 `<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
. l' u8 `3 m) M- O<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
" y$ u0 t* L. H7 W  V<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ U* s. y. i7 e+ s9 ~<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, N1 t3 K/ V) F6 m<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 F8 G( y& G5 @# \<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& ^3 n& U7 s4 @) U! X6 h<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
- m& a! A: X* R& I<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

3 C; N% S7 n& d 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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& D" J8 y  Z4 W; H9 X这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>