【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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+ }0 j' O& L! T- I* }1 c我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
6 \3 B1 n0 S$ }" QThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
; [3 i$ q, C& W( H" JFrom the first moment we met,
, ^) K/ N9 G4 q6 F: BI already loved you with all my heart
" @3 o. D0 s, x; l* i' UWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
& j% {: Y) E; S$ z4 XI would probably know how you feel
' X$ s! D# x8 k+ Z' W. ?" ?Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
0 \' a$ R! }3 ?2 iBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 x% v2 I( y9 |5 CIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
0 U" S7 v9 x: x; f5 EI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 B# c, C0 F' s; X: S1 r; lCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
( `6 A6 U$ u7 P! N+ ?6 m$ dLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
: }( `2 O/ p7 DI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
4 L8 A; a2 J! BI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
! H3 z, f4 U9 o0 a7 ]) _5 uEntrust my love within your heart
9 W* R+ Y0 h; Q, GCan I entrust it to you?
) y% t) `1 v; ^# K+ K: vEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
( C/ I) ]" e: i/ q2 j5 {/ `<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
: P+ ]$ S* r7 [) z1 `<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 O6 A, d$ l# U( L; D" |<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
9 R2 L) a5 d9 |+ S  _0 X<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
5 Z/ z4 ~# E6 j4 ^- T5 ?<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
2 G/ m8 ]; p) L. O9 B<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
+ c. d9 S- p  \% J<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
, N  s/ H# N* p3 P5 k2 m- l1 ^3 J<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, g' T- d! G% S/ I; n. y$ d<P>我想说我爱你</P>
* W% y1 E8 D: f) p/ Z3 s" B& H* w<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
* g  f6 y$ k+ o: D  }6 N! s0 f<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 _! Y( f7 A) Y, S+ h<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
7 c* t" G+ I" _* V0 c" P' p; F3 V<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! M0 \9 p2 s5 T  n6 q6 T<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 S* V0 ~- n! M/ j* I! l<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! G; V( L4 j, x& N, n/ t8 c<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# I; [% p9 {3 r1 \<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
; u! b. n* I8 E5 Q<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
% U# s$ y' [9 ?! ^: N: B# n$ t8 l<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
9 c4 P$ U5 |% l1 q( n<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
) m, @; g% `* h0 ~& N2 d/ f<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
( X) F* h2 t/ k; F+ i<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- l: {1 j& @! u<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
, }( Q- A( A" G4 o+ O" x  P<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
4 i8 x/ N* E/ D/ q/ b9 M2 h# P# m6 r& h<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 S" {9 P2 K) s( n! w<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! ^5 A% R2 u0 b<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ W! O1 C. U1 M; X8 {& m: Z% d) Z5 x<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, D! b& ]" y3 F: y! G! w% ]/ C, \9 U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
9 X$ S% w' o4 D/ Q6 x* B9 C. q1 N<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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( [- P3 i4 O3 f3 J$ L2 w, T这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

. }" E/ M  w& r6 `/ W) Z这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 C# d2 p+ p, m& J<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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" i, e" J, X3 e7 P4 A8 W) G8 N<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>