【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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7 Y7 U+ \+ e! e$ V4 ~4 N5 a& \" ]我另将歌词附在此。
$ e3 F* w+ z4 U0 P" KThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
# g+ x) ?% v- e* D  @2 B8 qThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
% e1 a0 F) v& i: d+ q& u, LFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
$ T6 e* F- c! |* ^* ]1 J, zWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
0 b" W/ i: N9 G, x2 U  NWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: `5 U  ~& e  i6 b8 J- P: Q5 sIf today isn’t too late,
- a5 o( _; m- X/ Q! B  D; Q, PI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 f' l: z! Q0 i7 ]7 j- C2 oCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
' g6 p, C( t. u. j2 P$ H. C7 o& s  ULove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
5 ?. f9 @: M7 ~' g) t- cOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' G% v. l9 H& P' Z+ _I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 n6 ~6 A- N/ M/ a4 jCan I entrust it to you?
/ v2 |( z  N/ w5 I3 vEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
/ W$ W  @- o4 S& yEntrust my love within your heart

0 ]* P0 b( B+ y; e1 n7 N/ A; C4 G[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

+ u) }$ r& E" c6 U<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
7 S2 C7 c0 p* k# j( X4 R+ x<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
7 q2 c" I/ v2 b4 C<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
$ f( {5 Y4 [* {# c3 H) u' E* [<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
" G3 `, k, b) S4 K: E" g, a1 d<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
4 Z8 ]6 {3 r  g<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
/ _$ O' A5 E1 u% F7 k# m& w<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
) o1 O; z% d9 f) i, X<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
$ n: C2 k  L% F7 U  q3 f; q<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
* ?3 u) e: r, o1 J<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& [6 N! N9 Y, W5 o<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
: b) q9 z9 h+ C0 j8 Z; j5 `<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 K/ U; d9 t* d; w& ]  V# e) c<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  K1 |3 Y0 b) N7 T<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% T: M2 x9 X; c- I% E<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 @, d' h# V/ h* r1 P<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
: X% F1 f  p; I<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
3 Y$ M+ o$ Y3 M# r% q" A<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
' W; u/ G: [' _" r4 J<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
) }) h6 T) y0 e( t  Z) @4 f<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ V& p- I- V/ s% K' v<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
9 c& w) `/ ^2 r( L% Z+ e( a% M<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
- \" h% \! M' ~+ Z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 g9 }+ p1 Q2 O! B" [% \& K<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 v* [- ^7 v8 {6 I$ F<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 [, T& f5 N. A- S<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
; |2 I8 |  e* D7 d/ m/ N& C1 N<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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8 k! e$ _4 L9 X' k0 l) B这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 m( \) t4 B8 K; M<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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+ M* J' }- D* k: Q- M1 [) u<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>