【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
3 `9 r+ ~7 B" R- _! pI already loved you with all my heart
# ~) N, v5 @2 a( t) pWe meet and talk everyday,
$ _" Q7 C+ c+ a* D( a6 |; C; HBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
% @8 A; Q" Y2 F7 X* Y7 s4 @7 \I would probably know how you feel
4 f, H, W) S! R* R# d) M  yLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
. w# X5 H/ D7 ^' r/ ^I want to confess that I love you,
+ m8 x5 N5 r3 ^$ h) u8 OBut I never did
! j1 C8 n# Y0 t+ }# rOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
& |, h( c, t5 T1 s8 t( II want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 |- ^9 M% H# ZI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ \9 q, d. u6 qCan I entrust it to you?
0 n4 D& ]7 v; n! OEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
& z0 _+ v, {6 l6 l4 t9 X) _I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
: ~) v5 ?% z3 ]& U, g  [! z& x7 e) hEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

( P2 R: ]. Y2 ^4 U. u[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

2 q: e  [' ^& o<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
! u5 @* K& F, R: `7 M# P  Z. k<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
& W( E+ c8 z! O  F3 B  z( E<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
7 W! \" y5 l$ P$ T9 t* t<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
5 U3 e1 w: D5 V- e3 }0 M7 k<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
$ I) t7 ]9 O* u& n7 K<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
0 m9 ~4 d# K0 ^; O& G<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
# N: k* v! U3 B7 o<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
4 g0 y5 }5 e, ~4 x# n' P$ q% _<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
  o9 f2 E- ]7 Q5 }9 g<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
5 A& A$ R6 H9 a/ I9 n<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
9 m  ]( v0 h* X5 G<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
/ T- Z1 d* e+ A1 a  g& V8 }<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
4 u3 ~9 ~: V) Z; m! _% N<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 C0 }1 s4 `: l* M* _<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 u* U2 d2 h! j/ |$ L7 O# Q0 H<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: i; u8 P  q$ X5 X; j<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& B0 T  P7 b% S<P>Love… just the word love </P>
* b: o2 X3 D3 ^<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
! {: A4 H+ _* w<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
8 m9 `: {* P. Z0 n0 T! \5 u, k<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- _7 R2 z0 U/ g& E<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
6 r2 {7 c1 f2 r8 m' @( r<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 Y# u7 U3 Q; c+ c3 L# D0 D0 S( r<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' w: J% d+ z5 m. s; A" {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 ?" [/ I& {  ~- A6 C4 d6 I7 `5 ]<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
( ~/ b. l; v' R+ F7 W<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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/ K2 [1 D1 E6 c这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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0 H% r2 V3 {9 Y0 t( ~. `" H- ^这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) V) H& n2 f! I0 W. u<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 d/ I9 W8 j% m8 i+ Z<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>