【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
, u, A2 B3 w; V. HThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
( n8 Q1 _9 S) U' B0 ~. {* iI already loved you with all my heart
' p7 q* T; b6 Y; E) `We meet and talk everyday,
4 `" i/ E9 i) v, c+ E9 tBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
8 X' O6 s2 B5 B4 h  y, Q# BI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
4 T! |' }2 g0 H2 h4 x0 Q( ^7 ^! FWhy is it so difficult to express?
. r. R- G& l$ \1 xI want to confess that I love you,
. z3 E0 R4 T4 Y* V7 t% m2 D! q! q% fBut I never did
4 T5 N3 Y: S, D3 U4 N3 d# zOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' \: Y& S" V8 t2 L& k0 Y9 `' pI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
/ M+ q$ ]: ^$ l/ Q% @I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ m1 K- O) N/ eIf today isn’t too late,
: y: K. @: K" t  K: q; RI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; ]+ M8 l  @( SEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
7 ~8 y: N" j1 O! q  N( o! M: CEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
* P& b4 o$ f: T7 b<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
0 ]8 n0 ?6 B9 I& h2 Y<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
4 W9 ~1 D8 I' O$ l0 e9 F<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
  S+ D. k* r2 C" J: r2 t<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
  f  l- M0 o+ ]- ]6 @; p% Y<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
0 q# e1 s0 \" E# x<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
0 M; `4 \- J6 H8 i$ Z4 }& n& L<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 G. ^, h$ M4 D+ P4 e/ Y<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
7 g1 K; L  ]$ \9 o7 S4 n<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" Y( \8 U% a# y+ Y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
7 }; b& G/ O0 Z<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
. e- L; g9 s7 K& p<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 S# ^, s4 p. @; [% H' U- N" W<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) h! C5 B) P' ]/ k7 {6 _# u<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
  o& Z4 o& r# {<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, C( t0 C" ?, m% v' V2 ~<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
; e* P# j- l) @, O( d<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
% T* \/ N: }6 U% ^1 y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 T# z: [, `# q. U<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# P; X3 @( X3 Y$ j. T, e9 U7 u<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ t& F" ]% C3 X0 u<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( J# U# H' G5 U<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
0 T- c0 m' Y  g# g" r4 K8 I<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

% i, |$ X( \4 T# O 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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9 l# _: T$ Q7 y( c# \- W<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>