【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
: N- `# j% U8 j# }0 j5 w' @$ FI already loved you with all my heart
3 Q  r# J# n9 w  Y2 }We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
# t% I+ ~4 @0 x- T( f; d2 FIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
4 s0 y# [( z1 y, p' c1 Z: x  G4 @7 w* U8 UWhy is it so difficult to express?
( T) E. ?& J' L+ h. l9 _) o* I. W' P1 BI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' d7 C& V$ A" J6 l! P( @( K' n* W% mIf today isn’t too late,
' m' K6 |& g7 \+ aI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* B0 ]( K+ Z$ P2 `4 v; ^4 b" F0 j6 \I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 @) P3 ], }1 fCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
5 @5 y. ]: d9 ^- D4 Q, fWhy is it so difficult to express?
3 ^: a8 m1 a" l5 P9 d, D7 [I want to confess that I love you,
7 R$ t" F. u. l3 k* v& o& r/ tBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 G* r; [- I6 j! \" {: hIf today isn’t too late,
$ ?- P* A! W. g! }" LI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
8 |. V% R$ G6 {. L- i: @Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
: y; N$ U5 r# B) |4 T5 Y" iEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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' Q4 e9 n# e% Y<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
  z, o0 B; v" M' K5 m<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
9 r3 n5 x9 R, ^' S& ?<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
! B: e( x# G! c" _<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
. ?4 d' v9 Z+ _! p' X( w( k& U<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
$ n5 O! T" W! q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
7 _2 R9 a3 H4 t" ~: ]* @4 y& R! s<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
" L" E5 o2 M) b& Y/ v5 T<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
8 c  \0 s% _( |; _" ?<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
3 N& h6 ]3 z. f9 G1 F* S<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
4 D  Y6 Y4 a% C8 {- d<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 {: I8 _$ q: ?; R& k' g1 J+ Z<P>我想说我爱你</P>
& r$ I1 U9 X4 x3 H<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
' f* x2 o& a7 _5 f( ~. j1 A4 I<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ D, w9 J: A# k6 w<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! q! [4 q$ n7 L+ K3 I) G+ T$ u! O<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" s" B8 a8 W" r  F  O- j<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
$ t0 D  F7 p" e" ^& D% ~6 X1 @$ [<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
* K) r5 A' U$ P# y, s" o; T" b<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 W% J. e# L# W+ Q3 U7 y<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
0 ]& |+ c6 d' t1 E- U8 p- w<P>But I never did </P>
. d6 q3 B" n  S* o4 R<P>但我不会 </P>
, s/ ^* i$ o) ^" o& H<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 y, F, k& B- a3 Y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
# M/ ]) m' _9 f0 j' }<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
' a: l- z2 S: w+ G5 s, d<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) D' l  M  @9 w7 {5 K3 W<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; ]* ^! y' A/ A, ~5 ^2 p* Y! w<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
0 `- c6 M! U4 a' P4 t  }% S<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

, _. G/ {( n3 ~/ ?这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  \! j# \; l8 V8 `0 N<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>