【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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* B! C# j' a2 d5 O1 J9 v' X! C. U5 ^The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
" ^- ~: d4 m# Y# f' z  WFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
/ n! C$ a8 o: lWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
' T( `, U8 x' e( }, bIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
! e  ?; [3 `  L: e8 I) \; jLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
9 b# o8 U9 [2 V9 A6 sBut I never did
. t* Y2 H% ?! x5 E' T9 \6 d# R" aOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* P+ ?' G4 M6 e6 l$ Y' X* |. \7 WIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- V5 y. J4 ]) i8 yCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
! y. a& i; x; r: w: D1 oWhy is it so difficult to express?
/ o3 O/ @( [( u; y( I3 t/ m" H9 }  LI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
/ `& ]- p/ v% V- L0 MOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% P) S7 X; F0 l: m+ wIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
1 e- A1 g- {# @% C2 O$ NEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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/ p! l9 H# a- a/ Z/ n5 D4 T6 x[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
' z( H6 _1 @+ x<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
/ [$ K) {8 S, K$ j6 r- y3 b7 N) f<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
: D$ T* P& q0 Y# @3 V+ ?<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
3 N7 V8 e% o5 }: l- \4 d. }2 C' ]<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
( h; g% y( Y3 p) W: W; P( @8 l<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
$ v! b& \2 L. z! E<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
0 ^3 |& |+ m4 _* w: y+ U6 b<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
( V% K/ D* A$ X2 Y<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
; F; k3 C5 W+ \<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
9 b' R* G$ _2 `+ E8 k<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
3 }- F; f: ?/ |8 \" r8 ^; Q, {<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
6 W9 }3 D! u8 x6 c$ f<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" m+ S( T! Q$ d<P>我想说我爱你</P>
  _6 m* ~4 ~; J: Q# j<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
! E2 }- \) A& y* W8 o. C<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
& _4 f2 G3 C! |3 c+ _<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 I( Z0 [2 M& d9 B6 c. ?<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ K* @1 s. j% ~. |! y' g<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 g' a* j  L  P<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, b1 P) w% B) K' {7 |/ [, i<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 n, Z0 Y! E6 {# g<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( Z# H& R" L+ N2 @. r6 C* k<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
5 |+ o& Y, |; X# Q% \5 ^<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
. r4 q0 _+ c8 A% \4 p8 H* A<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
4 d5 b8 D9 E" P<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 R  x6 W( i/ D: q0 H/ n<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
" K) U, m# H& g9 C+ m/ E<P>但我不会 </P>
: Z# f4 l' W. s" b; \<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# ]8 r& W; u/ ^! e<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 I7 F+ c( i: a( B<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ C- M! d% V8 [0 |9 I* H/ G<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( ^  f& V. E, p! ^<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 p) Z& [  ]* p7 o/ T4 y* Y9 d+ _9 C<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
, L, {/ u: _& ]<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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7 D( i3 ]3 X& ^# g+ E# M* f( P这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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- p1 r% M/ L- _<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>