【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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5 u/ L, b+ D8 k" a我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
: L1 G9 M( t% \- A, D) zFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
4 }/ r! R8 _7 @We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
1 w: A' T1 w: E3 cLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
, b3 y6 E9 a, X% j- n# VOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  a8 U' Z* y, R- _/ o/ L5 zIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. p+ P: w' Q" {( x. ~I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
! H: ~$ B. \& o# n5 i, M: rWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
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One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 g1 A: j/ r+ c" B3 H' e: {If today isn’t too late,
$ J2 [: E/ W6 ?9 U) S+ ^& t; KI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 |9 ?( i0 y$ [  v% W( JCan I entrust it to you?
) z. ^5 ?* u. t- C  T- xEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
0 X$ l* c4 |, s6 j- gEntrust my love within your heart
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/ n3 C) g3 F" s- G; v( n[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
# ]4 F3 O2 L& B! F- {$ m; B/ p<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
: H# E- U$ N9 A" @0 y8 v<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
  ^$ G# r; r4 W& o, j<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
" m2 S; ]9 A$ D# a, P" h& [: ?5 u<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
2 ^; a) \  P# I9 k0 V( I& o<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
6 K% F! l$ l$ O9 Z9 D<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
7 V4 H! N- b  d! J- u<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
8 d7 \9 J  M& s% w0 ~1 E. t: V<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
2 ^: x) ?+ K+ R0 R- l4 F<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
  U+ h/ C0 w6 C6 {- P7 Z. E- u<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
% a4 F; t0 N- Y- H! P<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
# f) L2 }* k" |# F0 ~3 }<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
# I5 M$ u$ _6 r& F& u  v1 ?1 Q<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
. L7 C6 |+ x' C% N# N<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
! E+ K* \2 _/ y<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
; m  ~& p- m' k9 B: X; Z) Z<P>但我不会</P>
. V% o- _& Y' V<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
4 o, [: E! o9 {<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! {' m4 h  J$ A3 z" l<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 ]3 z' F0 n: Y& h$ z+ |3 G. C' S<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 B2 T! L: C: P* Y- Y<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 d9 r" o. O+ y- V' o/ C3 b<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; ?0 \, y/ x" b<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. z: J- E8 p; o. D) z9 d$ a<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
2 I2 u" r6 W$ \0 g& N3 z% f<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
) T, _9 _; W1 K, w9 Z! G<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
) W5 ]+ d* i4 j- w<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% ?! g. z$ l. t- L- H<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ ~; B% Z( ~. w1 X<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( C& P" a7 B# E' L6 b. g<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 ~8 B3 U) T0 G( Z1 O5 d<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
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<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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  n5 j7 p6 @9 M2 T6 @ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% S! g% q1 g% R! A. _- U, `<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>