【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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" T8 R2 q: \' B# [# T7 e9 qThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
" g/ E! I/ Z7 U7 n6 w2 U8 OFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
& w7 ~, ~3 \" M2 |If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
0 X, D/ c, i' P- rI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
$ [! S& X: @+ L, [I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 M% H+ [+ a" U4 QCan I entrust it to you?
; J; P5 W6 a: M( Q8 {' kEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
4 Z' _- {% x: R3 FI want to confess that I love you,
4 m( \# x' i! X, e. gBut I never did
) t7 N( M1 r8 E$ k$ B& \. zOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) @! Y4 e( h  M- Y4 dIf today isn’t too late,
5 l# n9 Q; C' b" S/ bI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ R5 |' {+ u$ _! {' j! D; wCan I entrust it to you?
. U7 t1 k( N) @. E; OEntrust my love within your heart
( d; U$ z7 c% l( T$ y2 aCan I entrust it to you?
4 d0 X: {1 w, j# r- V) bEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

6 }) r; b3 y- p7 o6 A; W1 z<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
4 }: W9 {  H, D! h# ^0 W$ v<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
  Y+ k  k' h  d8 s1 ^<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
+ G  n/ ^/ A. w( o5 E6 T+ ~- Z<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 W7 ?  i+ B/ z& b( R<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
9 M0 g) }& O5 c" \  u* s<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, u, i: T$ L4 g0 @# g+ t- O- m& S<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
- d8 _5 a3 L% @, V% O0 P" s1 Y! C<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
% ^# B" z' J* q" U5 G<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
, `* [% F6 s. P- `4 m/ o<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
0 k; A( c* k6 q6 P/ o9 n<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
4 D* C: ?7 p" A8 t<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
  z) l0 ]- H3 [<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& y0 r( i! ^9 N<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
) j: k. [4 \* ~" o  Q. {" h/ u<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
1 t6 V; \: y+ F  o& @2 W<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  D* B' M# o$ {# _2 f9 ?" ?$ o  m<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ o' b8 P7 [! _1 ~7 `<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ ]$ R# Y# C: A! y+ U7 x<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. C7 ^  k; A; _$ j& F! Y! I8 |<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 ~+ F7 `: v  V$ p. }9 X! Y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# g4 {8 S$ h* W( T: s% q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 y0 p6 n* R1 r2 r<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
, }9 p% l5 d: G+ y( f+ y9 ]2 T8 U9 e<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
1 Q9 `5 @) K4 s) v1 n! ~! y) _<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
; y" b8 G5 C- e) ~5 o9 Q<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
3 i! N7 i8 y/ w<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ R! o2 \8 E  V7 P8 R9 D3 X<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 a9 w! e' R' H1 G% ]<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 s! {- R' \) e# _# Y3 b<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: s, `# h9 Z' f<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. M; s2 V4 F- G+ u* z1 ?) U5 K& g<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 O; I7 h) i' p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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3 {% g; j; H2 z" ?( j) v& S/ V这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

! @% N, G% W7 V8 R) w: A- M1 o这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! q5 |9 Q+ X% r6 f# b- d<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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/ @- }& L) ^+ W# _" _# ^<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>