【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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' w7 [6 ^  b4 C- K我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
# R% H0 f& {( |  I. wFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
6 y9 V4 B9 ?1 L* ^( jIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
) i, e( O5 `: M0 w# R: D3 B0 aI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 P6 f5 U" B' d& j' j+ t# ^I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
8 d  V; ?& H5 b8 I8 pEntrust my love within your heart
1 F% V1 G* V% ~! _Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
' X, [% u! o: l5 \8 ^" b" |One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 w' q8 _4 g0 Q8 b6 J7 ~If today isn’t too late,
5 P; M+ J0 D- F8 q- w5 D, v# ?5 nI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ i$ H; Y" o: ^  dI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% [4 O2 T" g4 s  A) R; l4 j6 dCan I entrust it to you?
% @6 P6 H* q2 D) p; U  LEntrust my love within your heart
2 \0 n$ E3 z* x7 I* @# GCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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/ s  O* z' Q" \# B! {8 V' q[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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2 c; h+ w+ p+ t, G<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
- @9 W5 O+ G; X9 A5 r<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
& b% ~# q8 g$ @* W* D<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
5 |3 x! H! W4 T0 G1 ]<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
2 }# \. O" m1 N; H% l- j<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
; K% O, }/ E) P/ U" ^! Z- s<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
; E' O! X, n/ O' V8 }<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
5 c: q6 L. P& B8 B/ y, z<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 b- H& |4 z) @4 [<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
$ A  U5 P# ~6 c<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
9 D  Y8 R% ]. h, v4 X<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
. a+ l! F% u8 s9 l$ B- `2 m<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
. c4 g% W; a4 W9 |3 x- a<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 N7 y( g* A, @) w<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% L" Z/ K7 A: f2 Y  h8 U' F9 G0 l<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 D9 A( P; W% {0 |- O<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 ?. ^, k+ Q: K! r' P<P>Love… just the word love </P>
! F/ }: ^$ Q, ], {& ]% D<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
* K0 w& d, {. a% h+ y<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# p: Y. P8 W9 ?* g  Z/ g<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
1 n/ y  A8 S1 W4 d. P8 ]<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" Z  n0 ~+ I% h& L2 d* A<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 Z# w: a$ a) _6 s* Y5 D<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 R6 o( ]6 u1 R& z8 ]) U<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
( E) K# e+ O4 _- Z<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
: y, E& v# f+ b3 i4 c<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

! ]& z; w- {* ?/ G5 L5 Z这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 ^4 h0 _7 A0 `: V" J1 C6 e<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>