【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
6 F- r. b2 r! `5 T- A7 BThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
5 h1 p) D2 j2 L1 l2 b. fFrom the first moment we met,
' z, g3 Q) ~0 sI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
6 t. @' l- ]' t+ m. Z4 gBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
9 Q  W2 L; c1 T; r# s( fIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
1 b- p! l9 y: w1 oLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
; v8 j+ {! |7 c, C7 v- jI want to confess that I love you,
; M- c: l7 S* l; Q3 T6 {! G7 eBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
/ j# P8 A9 Y+ T3 Z7 KI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* I$ p# |2 T( j- u! y% t  MI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
7 z$ o: F% n" T' ], V% V4 |9 @Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
" `, }. _+ u/ U6 D9 oWhy is it so difficult to express?
; u1 p; C9 g/ u( i+ OI want to confess that I love you,
: z7 d3 \2 H4 r0 IBut I never did
& `1 E' P- a! D3 K4 f: KOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. g# p2 H1 \1 ~( J' ^" z8 g: GI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, |0 b; g8 e+ M9 E" I* MCan I entrust it to you?
, q+ U+ A1 `; v4 J' X! r' W. }7 BEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

* O5 i) B. r( I" z7 j% a<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
' u2 p; F- ~3 e9 }<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% ^; \: _5 }) x: }) X+ ^# B: G<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
4 n3 Q6 R6 T- |7 l. C8 H<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
+ ]* ~; Y. P5 Y3 i<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
' q/ M4 ]% N7 m' F6 U<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
0 P- h9 m0 P; a+ @$ z8 r<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
' K; i7 y6 z1 L- `4 C<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
8 t" W* f6 K8 W* M0 X- _<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
0 \: L# ?; N' t: r) p' n<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
; d8 i5 k: k- C  y* L: ~/ {<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
6 l2 M' ?5 @8 J, \8 Z- P' c  u3 z<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
7 k( G( U1 M4 W8 |. c<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
/ M/ h( M* a+ ?) _4 m& D0 M<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 F) [# s& l2 ^# X: U<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" C7 {1 j; ?. D5 W9 E<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
7 h3 C  V5 e7 J3 W: Y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& |; B3 Q% A- A; [# ~0 B' ]' W<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
2 a0 |- Y0 Q, i6 `+ G; ?6 R2 `, ?<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
- N/ G1 z1 L' J$ t. q; l/ ~<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# q& {8 G1 F- o0 @" [<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
. _+ U1 u$ s! L3 K: H$ I7 V4 \6 [<P>But I never did </P>
% M* D& i9 c* U. Y<P>但我不会 </P>
6 P" t, E+ K( ]/ ^7 W# T<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
. v3 T; m* o6 R. ]% `% X% ^6 o<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
# ~/ b1 l1 L& }, Q<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
' C6 q/ I' ?5 |9 U4 n0 b- q% \<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 c. q; [) u. w9 Y3 {; Y6 m" E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! R% @/ z, n; |& p* x1 Q9 Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  {7 w& |, O, ?" [" Y2 h; j<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) j* [8 M/ X, V1 d4 s<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

. f# ^8 c; P! T这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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" Y/ ^5 |7 e- Q! o0 S<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>