【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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  g6 W8 h+ h4 N我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
3 D8 I- W! R, P. e9 aThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
* I# X: t' h0 \& X) e$ ~8 N) tI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
5 \' p! Z3 v" R. P6 tBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
0 M7 N$ r+ K2 ~8 s$ yI would probably know how you feel
* x5 a' s* W* B, v0 }Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
# @+ P# z' v3 }; fI want to confess that I love you,
) f  y, l( Q& P! [$ {* {But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
! q1 X4 o3 c6 m# e% i9 ~I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
, V- p" M( z( j* WEntrust my love within your heart
# @# c6 N! S5 @' l- o3 iLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
' g7 G5 u9 t: c, N* V3 `' \, VI want to confess that I love you,
* t4 D) t# u# m4 mBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
( ?0 F8 v4 c) r, i& TI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 m  e( X3 X$ m, y; T/ k# e: rI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ F0 d9 ?8 r; m" MCan I entrust it to you?
1 e# _2 `% U& j/ b! e% y* bEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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) W' O4 d7 L" ^& D; k+ ^7 D[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
5 |# L$ I. E- R8 f( |. a<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
2 Y2 E. c5 B) I) V  v7 Y<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
' m- l' A- c. m) M) {- X; _<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
( p' s% A: s( _0 R" ^6 Y; f6 K4 F" V<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
8 X7 a9 u5 H" F<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
. X6 M( O! H" N+ F<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
- r$ V+ P4 z1 o& R6 O<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
- }) O, o* h& r, f4 y7 p<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 D5 [8 o" l  p5 I7 |4 w/ D<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
! G& J8 x$ s5 a' y) |. F<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( R; d7 J$ f9 y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ ], S9 b3 n3 [2 j<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; D. S& I0 v! D. e<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 c" n! e; _  X% K6 a<P>Love… just the word love </P>
4 D; f7 `3 g* r8 ]# |<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
( ^6 ?8 j9 n3 t. \1 f<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
& Z% ?7 j9 ^: }$ b% M. O<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
, r, M; Q8 U8 B9 Q5 _<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 l" h# t, g/ S- m0 T" N<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% n  H& k2 ]* l. H; a<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" W  F7 ]0 r" K6 l. O8 u<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" C) o% O0 K; G" E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" y( x3 O9 s* O: f3 w  I6 v4 [<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 B- s" r5 `' N: h; r1 s" n<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
$ |& V6 q* k7 B3 U# w<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

' A1 G' S3 J" ^( {& {5 ` 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ N# I8 c$ l0 K4 I4 e4 j" ^  m<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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- G* y. _7 O# t2 s6 D<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>