【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
& q, f  G5 P  h8 r, K  o0 rFrom the first moment we met,
( c; e4 _! g$ x: K+ |/ }3 hI already loved you with all my heart
# [8 E  h  V  YWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
; O. G* {; c4 tLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
" l# c0 t2 r( |1 ?# I, YI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  q! y! V8 F/ LIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
7 i. N5 @  K5 WEntrust my love within your heart
5 i# }5 |2 m7 Y/ F, WLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
/ m" c$ U+ q: ?6 h  RI want to confess that I love you,
9 e" n8 n% S, M) p4 }" cBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 {$ D# [9 ~5 z+ k- fIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( N! Q  c7 X+ o- H1 o+ t+ SI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

, x7 U3 d5 F4 j0 d[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
, A  Z: n0 o" j; T- K<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
) s% |" w2 c- \3 K& c2 B" s$ r) j" t<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
7 [/ O; i- L" {/ W) C<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
) F( m/ @/ T9 d<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
: z% [" Q" W; n6 k( b: k<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
  L2 j  x2 s- n1 G% g<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
9 A9 c1 Q' f, [! N0 n- }<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
8 o7 G! w4 m* K% k, d6 L<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
* s2 A0 w6 l) E<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
6 V6 h" w) J& V4 ]- _<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
0 y5 Z  q' r' ?( b$ i; d. H$ T. x<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
* P0 L. H$ u0 s/ n<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
: H$ z* p  J6 |: K<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
1 R9 L3 j7 P4 j' X5 I<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
: j8 u: W2 G% b<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
6 h: f- }, |+ e* w3 x3 [<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' n+ {; [( z3 ~+ ^<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
* ?* r: A; ^. [, S<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
# G# G+ s7 k) v& j" c<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! }( U0 s/ C, J) U5 W<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
7 G' o! I4 D1 W: M) l4 h/ ~# }<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 r' q/ ]. k/ X* e6 E% W$ o<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 d/ c* X8 R' k# W+ y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) M. p+ o2 F8 k4 M<P>Love… just the word love </P>
, C" Y6 t! b  E* q0 a2 I1 S<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
1 e7 o+ R6 {3 c4 v- A# N<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
/ p. I1 H- [/ a% E6 c) u<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
( `' J5 V7 P( X<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
6 P: a: s  P1 G6 @' q<P>但我不会 </P>
" ~& g6 B2 f1 G' @& S<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' K  E. L/ X! \  H  N2 ~2 n. y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
9 p+ h, s) o0 W& z6 t7 z% s, x9 Y$ c<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 D6 k9 h% P8 H! [* \9 y# r9 c<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 C" y- l2 |- ^0 c/ _5 o<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ c! H6 |( E2 q! F$ }<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) M# t2 V! v" F" G: }3 F/ Y& T<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. o2 P1 o. w! X& Y8 O/ S+ U! v<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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2 |8 U5 `+ ^  f( b5 b" B- v这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>