【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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3 W- }& w9 b$ A. I+ r) z我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
* L& m+ m2 W# ]. V- w7 q- g" {: F' j( _6 MThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
4 F- u# v* o, [6 k# N, [! Y: nFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
8 `5 `5 E: @* nBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
7 i* w) {" k" e3 R* JLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
, w4 z8 R2 ~( g& `, e8 NOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
! Y. d& G* i, _: B- qEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
7 q8 Q# l$ s0 b' }& F3 j6 Z3 iWhy is it so difficult to express?
3 I. S. N0 N; j" J& d5 w  EI want to confess that I love you,
6 d- F' _8 T- ^6 N# vBut I never did
) i' D. H0 g/ p% G/ W' R2 yOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ W1 ]! |/ t5 d) U6 m% O, {If today isn’t too late,
, V, z& q: B0 J# n9 DI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 X7 Q- l3 y; j6 L2 p6 B1 SCan I entrust it to you?
  d5 v  m& u+ A" lEntrust my love within your heart
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Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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/ L; s; [( S6 ~  ~* ]2 a<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
2 g) E- L& `! U6 j/ R5 I<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
+ i- Y$ m) n* |1 F( g; k% I) N<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
8 u% p6 e( X9 w' \. T: F* U) P# D<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
8 [; |0 X5 ?# ~* b" |2 U. C<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
& K- w" A) \9 j( \+ U3 V# S0 m<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
( r8 Y: r. m) F; z( {* X<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
) N' u1 Y, I0 W% y0 R8 A# @0 a" S<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
- A: e& B, H$ T7 O1 \<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
* v, T! X7 B5 m3 Y5 H8 j3 @<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
1 J8 z) Z4 \1 P# k5 v6 o6 Q4 X<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
& C: M, t3 K) m- a/ `<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ h. K, _- x' I1 M<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 ^& A4 \( F4 K5 E! t2 N<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
. _  e6 H) n0 `+ c<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
' n' f9 J( Y6 m* C! Z5 t<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
8 w: O4 M9 s7 F1 \0 |<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
: L  Z. y* B0 }& R$ z3 B<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
2 m# E: V) E( F% q- ]4 s# H3 `<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 A3 Z/ P, y7 v<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' K- a3 j4 x3 u3 Z" B7 X+ t<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  D* \$ y% q+ Z1 S3 L2 @+ {<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 l, M# W" I3 V; E3 r<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
  g4 E0 f* _- |% a+ i$ D( q- j<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
0 e) E2 A: `$ Y# J5 ^<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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' O  c. X6 V& N) ?<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>