【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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  P- @5 e# [1 n我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
" N2 W4 @4 b3 G' J4 h6 qThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
5 t1 Q) E: V- bFrom the first moment we met,
( U' W- S3 M+ Q# E! JI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
6 s7 |- {" B; M& D2 j8 `1 fBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
! h( k* D( h- TLove… just the word love
$ X$ J8 t  s/ y! K5 ]( W0 `Why is it so difficult to express?
/ i) r) t/ A+ V: }! n$ mI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  S; k, F$ ~# [( D- m& z5 `If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' P: G9 t( E: ~* b+ r% v) VI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
# s1 G+ I) j0 A0 q  ZEntrust my love within your heart
; V5 m9 H7 O% Q% U0 c( DLove… just the word love
( b: v% @+ {! x; K! mWhy is it so difficult to express?
; |( r% E1 L4 J! gI want to confess that I love you,
: C  G0 v$ t* @5 r% JBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
: _. e( z4 x. AI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
# k7 n6 _+ D* s$ \6 t% {' ~Entrust my love within your heart
3 s7 z7 i7 W/ _. ^  ^( S; sCan I entrust it to you?
- P& p  K8 L% z2 d4 m* d& W# p+ rEntrust my love within your heart

& N: c2 d/ _, l" J+ H+ X[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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5 Y7 S- E" p& k! h( B3 N<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
9 t7 m0 q" N- h- `* i6 H) m8 P  y<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 e9 D7 P' r! Y+ u4 D2 e<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
0 |1 O- E, P: c+ o5 A2 A6 ?% Q<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
5 k) y/ ]0 O, N; J7 U( g<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
" q. i# I3 J- g8 f/ s, N. _<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
8 x- |( K9 v4 d- z5 }<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
5 W$ h. v% J+ ^2 }) K, U6 _+ A<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
* W0 m3 L6 W7 O: I0 F$ G<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
5 B) R% o4 P, q1 g4 O6 s: [<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ L$ a' k; a( C<P>我想说我爱你</P>
- ~# T, g! e$ e# y) I<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
7 d$ T2 Q/ U, I<P>但我不会</P>
$ P) D' Q  v" C+ ?- ^: k, [<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
+ z+ I9 Z# t6 v* I<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& ~0 R6 ]! y7 i; M<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
: ?! Z- }& ?# V# z<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' U) T: T% u' s' v; K<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 o  z8 o3 ^: ]<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 v& s, u; q) Z" w; _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 |- K3 }3 M" h, P6 H' p<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
) f( n7 Y7 }% V# H6 P3 g4 }<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
6 S1 B1 e4 L  J: V' W! B* l<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' b! a+ ?! @+ O2 m" b<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ [$ H- u  }* y; n, l9 c<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  i. x5 _- Z2 d8 E4 F: r/ O! J<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 V) ^/ C! T& _/ F. {/ y2 W<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" h  H3 ^. }) z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 G" Q. U8 n' X+ g1 N$ _) {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ M. |5 {- n: m' R5 V. s<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 {7 g% G/ F5 r9 V, J6 y& Z  y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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  w: k2 i: ?; F7 a9 j( e这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

# [9 w& Q3 k: K9 L- N这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' Z. g& i5 u9 t<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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