【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
( ~. h' Z3 q$ VThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
; E) O5 p: U. ?0 g8 y. WFrom the first moment we met,
9 d7 t$ w8 _% z( F8 FI already loved you with all my heart
0 o0 O7 K* M' P5 {/ f: oWe meet and talk everyday,
' f% b2 B7 w5 y9 E; DBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
! B- n1 B" _* NIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
) K% z6 |# ^% c7 TLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
4 v1 J' Y5 a# _I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
5 R6 S4 @- [# R) K+ @9 B1 VOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 }3 ^1 L( o! b: Z8 S- W+ s2 x! S3 qIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ y; K* Q4 ^; E* V0 O+ F& c5 @1 ?: FCan I entrust it to you?
, B* G* B& m  c+ c" D7 A* i# }Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
/ a; f; U# r1 \8 Y  d2 vI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: Y8 M$ @/ p+ kIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; ?& V* Z0 Q9 h6 n6 bCan I entrust it to you?
" }( f8 T  @$ N# b" ^, wEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
: c8 |! \  n6 Q8 VEntrust my love within your heart
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0 M: r( o+ L- i( W  `8 R* ^[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
0 c: L8 S# }1 U<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
' d2 j, R9 E- e; U; ]3 f6 T<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
$ u& Q$ ]- p9 f% ]9 f) _0 c0 R- |<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
8 J; ?: W3 D! R$ N: n/ _<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
% C. z4 a6 o/ f: a5 N0 _* n: [1 O- |<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
% r! C- l# z$ ^' S; G8 k<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
) l, |& b  t2 h- J/ O4 V  I' O; \<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  I7 o2 l9 ^! }/ Z  R2 h' q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 x  a/ f* C# O) K' G; c2 `$ ~, }" [<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ k3 I# C; M+ f" v: S8 j# X<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ Z9 ~8 C/ o0 G% T, u" x- ~: Z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  b, a. @' D; f- T6 ^% s<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 w: F& E3 W. n  r& R# Q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# ]. b+ K3 J1 A( M+ w. S7 q2 _/ a<P>Love… just the word love </P>
- q7 c0 \) F# j& |% F. E<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
; }- Q6 k/ R! t; p<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
# _) ^1 B1 E- t8 k/ Q8 [- l<P>但我不会 </P>
4 Q, \) t, c  u6 |7 {0 i0 H5 ^<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
% ]" d  j6 P1 b$ u<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; m* g9 _) V' y  p8 g8 S<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
5 z7 {# H6 W$ H& b<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
- W# y2 T- _* `; [6 K- Y! t<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- j" @2 v7 a" D/ }3 x! E6 @<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ ^5 d$ F! s: H/ Q* v9 ^<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. Y0 e5 ^& W1 a<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( F) k) @" q+ w& U. g, `<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' p9 u3 o4 h( g$ ~6 f<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
3 i! b4 [2 l2 Y6 @: j' W<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
; J- ~6 V5 s9 T& V, M<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

5 B. k5 L3 t( @( k( q1 ~% G1 B! z7 `这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  E  a$ a4 J' f<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>