【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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5 X8 ?: }! G% U; {: U' A2 ^我另将歌词附在此。
. Q) E% c/ H! \1 {( RThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
/ G( Q* \/ h/ z: z1 aThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
0 h7 Q9 _: a" B3 JI already loved you with all my heart
  \8 _. L& B9 q1 P  Y6 V1 mWe meet and talk everyday,
) W$ m, X7 P4 Y+ r. @2 MBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
$ q: g# X0 j2 qIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
  v  b" Z/ i! o" \' x! T+ c1 AI would probably know how you feel
/ J% Q% }1 X/ LLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
1 u, _) Y/ a8 @- F5 f9 c; R4 [9 yI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; `7 o8 d6 ?0 z3 p8 |If today isn’t too late,
, l$ j1 Z8 G: n9 a! U; TI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ ?$ G* C% V& R+ j$ iI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 w, |) z5 b1 M" P5 t( a* WCan I entrust it to you?
! n" X& {$ |) Q# TEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- N# M' v9 d$ a& E. Z! z3 W- @If today isn’t too late,
  ^4 b% }1 z- k$ c' Q, TI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% k! O) P4 f' I* _# ?; O) jI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% K4 Z' b& {$ J) h" u/ VCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
+ X$ l6 G0 T" qCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
: j$ T+ i) K, v<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
, f! T3 ]! ^! ?6 z& Z% X<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
3 J- e8 X1 F0 l9 |. E/ U( ~<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
9 ~. H+ S- D7 H* V<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
& l( J( O6 r  s8 B' m& d<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
4 b, e0 q: @* t' h! O& {$ A9 q5 n<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
( p: \+ T% U/ H* h  |: J5 x7 x<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
8 ]/ k* ?1 Q) ^2 [# z" Z<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
) {/ {1 l1 e/ d4 {6 H. E' ?<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
8 z" Q2 W4 G9 A0 d& k. H<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
4 L( [3 Q1 I7 L; g- B' G2 G<P>但我不会</P>
' K: C/ x1 R8 h( C8 V& A) q<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
0 |/ s! X- \* ?' T6 \<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ m3 e: P2 y$ D( M! O8 S<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
6 x  s0 M1 R# G4 V<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
  p8 {. Z. h1 @/ W& `" S<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" D! N( k% X/ ]! Z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' u, c  b; u. `) a; @2 ^+ b<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 B3 u0 b* I/ |/ ]1 M7 X% _<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 d0 R* h' u) k' }) N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( b9 E! M, K& B! e( `<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
; @6 A+ ]. W' m0 R3 G/ w<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
: K% S/ ]9 B. w' b8 A. }! i: p<P>But I never did </P>
( S) q! k3 R2 g! P0 R& [$ O<P>但我不会 </P>
( l2 [. v5 [( V" q* q+ w3 P<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ Q" l( M- ?; o( d<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
( ?8 H4 l: r4 [* m<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 m1 f2 g' \7 D% T<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 g3 ^- a+ j& Z3 ?) F4 G3 r<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& ?6 s3 j+ H4 U4 s<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% }+ C" p) k* N5 n# S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 Z9 |0 X) ~6 f" t<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 v+ c* ^4 B9 M0 ?% n<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( ~. S) q6 m# E' |<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 \3 e+ ^4 K! o<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

3 j4 v7 [4 N& Q: T' v这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

5 C! U& s1 R' p. F2 [+ d这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>