【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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# e) ?# g& l+ W8 W  r我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
4 O! K+ `4 G3 A$ MFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
+ T. H. K. z2 ]  ]; P! r2 bI would probably know how you feel
2 H5 p; c* a/ I3 ?* KLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
4 W9 L' Z6 a, |1 P( I; cI want to confess that I love you,
3 {* b1 m+ s0 G2 u* `1 v7 c2 lBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
( L$ l; b" r; S- i/ ?$ |" JI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, f$ u. d% R3 i% A% II don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ b% }9 `8 M2 j, @  Q9 Q! [5 PCan I entrust it to you?
/ l( e. N( a. f$ ]Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
: F% r0 `# t% A+ j% w. B5 R# pWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
% e& D: e9 c3 `  ?6 q, g( f& a9 c+ {Entrust my love within your heart
9 E* Q: e/ P$ \! Y1 LCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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  l8 W0 m+ T$ R% Q# c/ w7 P[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
" t2 N, Z4 D) c<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
! J5 \& F! L2 x+ X, e<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
7 n- e+ Y6 x& T! J+ I6 c( d<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
* _( S& h! I# R4 `* r. L<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
) D0 I7 m, A+ p3 L<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
- j8 u( r. \, h# f8 \<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
1 B2 c# b# w1 H<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
2 g) k, S- l2 M/ n<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
. K) K+ B) R* E5 ~0 I' Y<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
! n  N, Q1 H& L3 \5 Q' b4 I<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
. _1 t8 m" ^0 ~& m5 \( n<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
  _0 I$ i' |1 b, A<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
' g0 Q  }- Q. M" M4 A<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
7 K1 O6 H% U: h; j# p: o% K<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
0 q! p) }' U- A% T: [<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. e( f' D# i3 }/ u* u<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! y  [, k% r! w4 {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: M- P% J4 e) K5 x. l% f% t# _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 F" i' {" v, G9 e- H$ f6 E. q<P>Love… just the word love </P>
3 w; A$ S4 ]) C<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% D; y/ b( x2 l: h6 k% ~<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
3 M5 }: p" R, S& }9 _1 b<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 a$ ]  [2 z% E' H- [<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
8 H& C0 i! \" p! ^<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 I+ Q# O& m5 o4 A# d4 E<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! ?8 v4 V$ m. y+ u<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ k8 s) {3 J& g/ ^1 @" B% y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" m% g. ^6 R" i9 \) D3 I: a<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
  D; l5 n! b. V1 h. H<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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! l: `- m$ K- N' ^1 Q/ s: l这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 k6 f* \+ E) L5 g& X. ^8 R这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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- n; p% [: D/ W* ~6 z% t5 v4 V<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>