【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
6 ^2 \& o( j& o; u1 W- |& k7 wFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
" s6 [6 a& ?2 P- v0 X3 _2 UWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
+ p' q9 T6 [4 J7 II would probably know how you feel
6 p) p$ w' ^  h- LLove… just the word love
; i3 C; G9 M6 q8 w- m$ \) P9 s# pWhy is it so difficult to express?
- V. f3 T9 f8 e- I. B. AI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 @8 u0 {, ^. f1 LCan I entrust it to you?
1 g$ Y- p8 M( r  jEntrust my love within your heart
5 \! h# G  g; ^- P1 C& r8 ZLove… just the word love
. l% I( H7 W6 K# d/ `1 q9 Q8 EWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
0 L$ r" S# Z# D! E9 y& B) ^) |One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, Z8 `* ?, H& b; q: dIf today isn’t too late,
$ Q+ Q0 Q+ D/ d4 `1 c) V8 Q  U! ^I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- h, R' t1 O: `6 ^! h. ~$ \Can I entrust it to you?
' D( i: W8 V7 PEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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3 w. r4 Q: M# _5 h  D[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

# H$ G6 G  O$ n- C; z/ P<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
, G' E+ @# b) r& o0 @1 b4 x) n" O<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
$ Z3 T" _3 w7 {& ~& E. K9 ?; y0 E<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
) K% d* B1 I. ^9 C7 `7 _! g$ H<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
1 k& I) m& z* D; M4 {9 Z<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
, J5 @1 j" E" b. D8 i<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
$ D# i! J0 t9 y$ }  E& W; Y5 ^<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
6 Z8 G" U6 R2 ]( a4 j- l; {<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 i" j2 d' a8 _" e<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
5 G- G1 x, V" ^$ o; @# X" [<P>但我不会</P>
" F% K& ?  C( e3 I4 o<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
* Q) M* }. f- L1 z- i<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 F9 G1 l! R# c% ~<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
6 K5 b5 ~5 ]  }2 Y  P  _<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 l  y0 C+ ~, K7 }, [<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  V8 R% t5 I# _5 |; [( W2 [<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% e# z+ m( j3 C' x! A' f3 T<P>Love… just the word love </P>
# e* t  L8 K* A2 P2 ]9 ~+ [, Y<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
/ {" l/ O2 b6 G5 i$ }<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
3 `7 z  t+ A" L! O3 B2 c3 E<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' l0 Q' e6 e6 W$ H# j+ {<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
) e5 G1 v: c" d1 e" n3 K& a' F<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, N* Y! X4 b1 B: P<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- v' o  c  E! m8 k- D% s<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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6 _' n4 _5 G% @. U' S& e5 s这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 }4 r! D, k2 Y% p6 n1 \<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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( W; p1 y4 n+ {4 K<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>