【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
' e2 l2 B& a3 m# F# F- o1 l$ @From the first moment we met,
& {$ g5 ]3 N) wI already loved you with all my heart
7 x5 E$ R. n2 k8 S  Z1 KWe meet and talk everyday,
: h$ S; K# ]3 Q7 a7 U, _But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
+ N0 T) y: r- z+ h  h' lIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
* N7 o8 R( B- h+ uLove… just the word love
- l2 x* V6 o' m2 J$ O& q3 z: qWhy is it so difficult to express?
7 O5 t2 d! X6 X, S' ^2 ^* i" Z3 vI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
; R5 {8 @! @1 H3 p4 B9 OI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
# u/ D$ y2 H. m5 K$ Z% ?8 r" f' YWhy is it so difficult to express?
' ^* `: o5 u! _0 yI want to confess that I love you,
; V! v4 B3 F; Z- r" J# _  B6 t8 fBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. ?2 L6 y7 z8 d- M1 \2 BIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 M* j: X) D4 v! Y& G, mI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 ]7 J; N% Y0 kCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
4 Z: x! s- X( RCan I entrust it to you?
5 y5 n; N8 {7 D* C1 R+ j% aEntrust my love within your heart

9 N% X" Y3 E$ y0 m6 g- o[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
! f# F! D7 f+ F, j<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
) Y8 m( l% o: {6 b<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
' o( z. _9 L# z! F<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
% Z, v6 G8 \# P5 M* q' p: h8 k9 S<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
; B: N" [% z- f) s5 w8 [% m<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
: o$ ^2 @4 U9 e3 S<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 p9 o7 D" c& O8 r% y7 I* k<P>我想说我爱你</P>
5 L  n9 F5 S  K- D<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
8 n, \$ B$ u7 }2 F5 }- W! I" [; _<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
- E, B8 k3 I% e) |8 Q5 b% u! n/ l0 Y<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. ]; V6 n$ e( g! q! R+ J5 ]<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 Z: I0 \. W3 Y- J; b1 o% i- _) V<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 z% ?; x6 w& f8 l- D6 b3 c<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. L! P: N# m& {& U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ Q$ O. ?6 {% H5 \: v. S/ T+ T<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
# k; e, {6 |* F, ?<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  B; F9 q3 ?* Z$ A. d0 R<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ Q+ n+ P7 ]  P# W* H3 K; t<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
5 V6 V& X1 K$ U% u<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( R" K- _. a% L<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  @/ b" Q4 b8 c+ I) P% J+ |<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 ^2 r  |' `) z  X: ]% u' m3 I$ E% O$ ^<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! `7 C7 g! y8 }( w" n/ O<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
5 f! X8 ^- c  E, k! V<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" k4 O% x; G3 a8 O8 s<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>