【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
( D* f% v4 e- Z% F, s  W: F1 dThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
! a; e5 h) w; G  G' B) ]7 Y% r4 s) vThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
4 Q& a/ |  C: v8 o9 j) h0 P' i% @If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
( ^9 V6 Y9 Z3 D/ h( J& nLove… just the word love
$ _* A0 W/ [! q! iWhy is it so difficult to express?
% e- [7 b7 ?$ d$ n# D% D# i, u8 WI want to confess that I love you,
# S& _! C5 `$ N' w, }  x7 \8 aBut I never did
* Q4 s! j3 X, Y7 M' |1 w2 @One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 e& ]2 f! c5 S& |  WIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. b7 [+ m, O9 f# uCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
5 ]7 G5 |& Y0 U( |3 c5 {But I never did
% H/ U' P) P/ y* E9 _& s% iOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 k* c6 e* M( I% fIf today isn’t too late,
3 z5 s6 \6 r' T4 VI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
$ p2 ~% a! o* i! M% BEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
2 J, y( l2 _! `* @& K+ w' J7 ^Entrust my love within your heart

  R9 r( S5 B- k/ [6 U# N[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
6 {" k$ _# P9 A9 t0 y3 U$ }<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
0 w4 G, e! H3 C) p" J9 o<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
6 m1 r( W# |2 b! d( `<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
- q7 f- W. V) h& C' d<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
) u) v6 k: x4 ^8 l<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
3 ]  b: r) M/ y8 t8 D; V  E. v! [<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
9 N3 H6 P, o# v  F( W<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
4 D) A- f. X! o$ g- b  j* ^<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
  d4 D, L  i3 I( ^. _3 G' q9 S3 o<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
" t, g3 a: v  k' c4 h: [<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
; Z; w9 l# C+ x" L- ~: b$ B8 p<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( M, O  J  L5 c% w3 y& W<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' A& O$ n7 V0 t<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  U0 G. E: [/ G  f; p! _; g) I0 v! A8 [<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. F. A3 i6 e, C, k" L<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
8 A; ^7 t9 ]% X  S<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
% S! V* g- Y& Z0 v0 k  T  L<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
4 j* O0 g: x$ u5 Q' P3 X2 k2 x<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! M) ^  H, L; R, E<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
: Y" Q  ^0 X1 n$ y<P>But I never did </P>
3 Y7 E" H+ U! N4 ^<P>但我不会 </P>
3 c* {* f. n1 ^# z4 n7 l8 r<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; e4 f; G$ N5 W9 V<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
" u& M; h4 M  I; a# _# `<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 \; x4 ?8 t$ Y8 \<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" c! o6 D8 w* X, a<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
* @8 T$ k" r2 N- f3 S<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 T1 m; {5 G9 a<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% L9 V: |" v" f9 N2 R6 a' l<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
8 N5 U/ M$ y- }1 t) T<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
3 A. V# U8 i' M, g5 W5 H+ @. M+ I+ n<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

7 }" g% d8 z8 W0 s6 X# b 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

. [* O1 `% L# x* N. [  m; v$ J0 o这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% |# z1 a+ b4 j- J- V<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>