【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
( [# }! v# i6 ^$ _6 b- b4 K% w: zThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
! F" V7 \  ~: B0 X1 N( k9 W' g$ oLove… just the word love
) R% s3 j( C2 O1 c& dWhy is it so difficult to express?
5 m3 s( m2 j. p/ t: x" c7 |I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
- w4 O# G3 _4 x# Y& _One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
2 }! X( O( a, X' X1 nI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' t; L9 l) @4 E. y! H# C; K( ACan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
2 P, @' R6 _5 _Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
" {! G% X8 X) _! T: cOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 ]* p2 i! P3 Q* _' g: Q& `If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& i8 t  q6 ~# A$ p& q* X) o' w9 uI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 K0 S$ v* ?1 `/ R1 \6 p5 tCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
0 z3 O9 o. @& |" `<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
% G- r; b) j- S% P& \<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
; c* h  p# j2 y% A6 K2 W<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
* e, F; U! K' C<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
3 @) k, v; b7 i5 X% h. a<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
" G% _& [( q. g# G" w<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
: I% f5 s( J- y+ N9 [# P<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
% N. Y% s" m; ~* W, [, x: ~8 ^5 x<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
% ~& I" e% S! @. c3 W/ y<P>但我不会</P>
# m6 T+ C5 S# O; x; W  u7 W<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
. A) o* v7 U7 _# ^) N( z3 {# t5 T<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( `% Z' e, I8 x<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 l; \2 ?& I+ h% q6 l<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 G5 p7 t4 \4 s' h1 m. ~<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 Q' S$ ?( p" @. D<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, g* ~9 M) \) M" t8 v" p/ x<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 K/ i# F* m5 c9 l% m<P>Love… just the word love </P>
/ i' A; N/ b1 r2 g5 T4 j<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
& X) T0 u+ v, ^/ J, ]<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
! ]  G9 h' W3 X+ {- U<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 h* g9 D1 b+ M8 Q; N+ v( g8 M: m$ {<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
- ~3 e9 S6 D4 j) u. p<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
, ~- h. U/ o4 K# K<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
& X! A) H# R- K1 }, h, H<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 @" x3 @$ n/ ?3 v5 s<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! \1 C! K0 p0 }* T+ K2 P* b( s<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, _/ E+ ^. K% b" \0 Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 Q) Z- q+ ~" B$ h<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ T. G! B2 G  t7 ~' C<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" a) u3 w5 T& D8 d' i2 t<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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0 a9 _" l. b5 e( M这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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1 U1 p8 M0 @1 C/ _% Y% b# A<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
' N9 I- `- I$ n0 U8 q1 o  Q7 z<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>