【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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4 }' K8 \3 _7 S; }3 K我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
; ?4 Q% G* D4 C2 w+ ~I already loved you with all my heart
+ `" x+ N: ?. i, XWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
! k8 P+ ^- L, _! t7 t* O; y/ vI would probably know how you feel
1 |  M8 }3 |" i+ v( b# kLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 ^  v7 l& q" xCan I entrust it to you?
; a) S2 n. G2 R$ a7 j& pEntrust my love within your heart
/ _& F* Y3 F( i6 ~+ u- D/ l5 cLove… just the word love
. w6 {8 G' H8 Z' x  ~2 b% m3 QWhy is it so difficult to express?
$ X1 ~* _: |  p7 J( n$ ]I want to confess that I love you,
. V- U" Y- k) G- L8 z' J6 LBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" Q1 X# a4 k; k8 fIf today isn’t too late,
/ K( r# K* q0 FI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, F# d; }' ^) S0 k- Y) X& P) OI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 ^: Q: [. m0 }- e4 QCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
+ m: H3 b; s9 ^$ ^, gCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
: p* n) g* W0 Z+ Y4 ?
[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

1 X" w' f, V7 Y6 I<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
( ?% x8 u8 F0 X% Y2 E* g, X& `<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
9 Z; {/ i9 K! p$ H: e<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
7 a5 @! F0 w! b' y5 R8 G4 u, A<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
4 ^3 x3 X2 \( |. J<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
  ~) N, ^0 @7 w8 W<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
) F, w% v0 z5 s$ g) X) @7 V<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
/ p1 O9 X& g$ T<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
) ~; |& k) r- k# m  s3 z5 f! a<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
; s9 a* W) U7 k% n<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
+ x/ T3 C5 Z. D! P5 C<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
2 F! ]2 x. a! ]  ]; C7 c! g: w4 u  F' k<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
) j! U$ b3 @) g+ K; n<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
3 V, q6 K8 g+ C+ ~<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
& V$ M/ K) g2 W, a<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 P0 z* X! C& I/ i' M<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: b0 x+ u1 f4 T4 v<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; L0 A. U5 z+ r+ ~  }<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 z" X& q* L! t- r5 v  a! Q<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: W: p! f& m+ V0 _( _; C. {0 j: O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 F& l8 T" R- G& I5 l& H" m) g0 o<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' O) S  |! I7 h<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  e6 s% ?1 \4 F8 Y+ d7 z<P>Love… just the word love </P>
. n1 s5 I$ \& }( ^9 d<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
9 l) v4 j( {5 K, H* N<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
7 v0 c% r' Z9 q- R8 D<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 I$ ?( k" n; t) y& ^! {6 A<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
+ L6 g2 L0 Z& P2 s1 P8 j4 |) \<P>但我不会 </P>
  q: d6 [- l( y6 K<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
' ?& w6 X9 I4 u4 |, W! j9 E<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' u2 d% m# w# H! ?4 S/ C! Q5 o0 Q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
, C! e) P6 U5 @! y- w7 ]9 X0 k<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ Q5 x1 ~4 r, p  I<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 J9 ?3 x* B( m1 a/ x$ ]<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ F/ Y* F! V/ b) K- A; V<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  T" z3 f3 `" Q# E' y' d<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 X" V: k4 Y' K1 L* f$ p9 }<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
) A; S3 \; ]/ b1 U<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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7 C. Y! [5 S( |) R( H7 g<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) W+ J* i3 t& g: Z: W7 L) h) [5 U<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>