【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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- x& p" c# I7 s我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
% j. j3 T4 X3 f$ l% S' AWe meet and talk everyday,
9 C) ^  m- W' d) x' O) v4 @6 YBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
: j3 X1 L% n7 f5 O$ @% o  m9 ]. nLove… just the word love
7 z& L% {2 p! R9 c) wWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
' G- b. _! ]+ {( K" J. NBut I never did
) _  e( u$ c. O$ l, @5 qOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! R. ^. ^7 k; s% ]( {) pI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
1 o: S" T! Z7 m8 q% xWhy is it so difficult to express?
  ]7 l: L5 m+ nI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
( o/ ~! P( @; ~$ KOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 H0 w' }- y& q. fI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; R: p  c' @1 n- Z2 @Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
# X- N! U3 C$ K( s4 p2 [1 hCan I entrust it to you?
7 G5 y' u; Z3 j+ ?; HEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

( A2 @- Q$ a. e+ ^5 a<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
( \; F5 x# U& s& P9 @  L<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
/ U9 ~1 \- E+ o' x<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
2 o, S9 ]5 d/ u: Q9 v<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
# K: t/ j, R% D# B<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
' ?8 u7 }. u4 L) ]<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
! ?* ]8 \. T! g5 L3 b- s<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
1 ]; d0 Z3 J+ P. w# g* U<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
, J- j9 @4 d4 q3 B  `6 r$ Y7 v5 a<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
7 D' K$ U# j; c" d- e8 F& P# l) x<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
$ R* c$ S7 L) T6 h  h2 G# C2 i<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" M$ x- R  [, q1 m# G<P>我想说我爱你</P>
3 P6 ?( }1 I7 Q5 O% K<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
6 M2 Z5 q' a) k" E<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
" P) Y2 A- v+ C; R<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 q) @8 Y! M+ r/ S<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
1 w: i) i+ J2 C, H. g' }<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
' D; r1 z8 V" }8 Y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( E) R' m9 ^7 V& o<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ B5 n5 E7 j. t% I# \<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% N! W9 Q$ [% y3 r- f3 z& F" S, k" h4 `<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" P7 A* z% N7 ]! @<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 K/ [1 c5 r% ^9 ~: j<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- x: P3 L$ F" X( ^. V. o1 r<P>Love… just the word love </P>
) }9 n6 B1 O+ D' C2 y% E) b4 X<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
2 @# G( R7 X3 ~) u6 a<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
* K& m1 W( b6 f( w! y<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
4 Z5 B8 e# j" E1 x<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
5 ?9 R! A% q- z. {, E, F' G<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
! W* \* W2 z4 o4 y- T' u<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ L/ x: v6 g5 R% `3 G) @# d: E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ F. l9 t4 o2 b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( }/ {8 M/ C# \8 J/ N1 O' k* v<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
! Q& S  ?- X' n+ ^+ P: U2 g; T7 M<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
) a% [* I9 r9 J. V4 R<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 U& ]% R0 B  V$ p6 _0 y. { 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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# u" J7 _: u6 {这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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- M( E0 U4 H8 J' Z这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>