【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
' B& }6 y( h( p' R3 lThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
) J: O' u) p7 V  m4 lFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
% |8 W& e/ _; P! G/ d& {; f) IWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
' y1 v! h# l6 m! u; d& [: s4 HIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
& Y% i( T  z; xBut I never did
2 U. k; U" D0 N1 h# P* iOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
# |/ E7 T- E" J$ G  ^I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
: g3 z2 Y+ R- {+ m- JOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% H; @9 z. h1 v/ T. q. w+ @If today isn’t too late,
! Q0 s$ L& k1 g/ WI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
- g) x0 J- E& P: g1 N5 U  Z  QCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
  i$ Q& T9 {9 ?. K, Z<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
! y3 U6 g' W  W0 q! q. E" s; [<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
' j1 M" V9 R4 ^<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
+ ^4 J6 |+ S% ]* x  A<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
' L: F( [7 h6 G7 z% l) Q8 M<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
( Q4 i& ?( D$ J- S+ p; `% Z- v<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
  O4 H  e# ^; }9 e: \" G6 j- o# f$ k9 x<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
. |- b" _' k% B0 x# G5 S2 {! B# K<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
. v( \, O* b+ F8 s, _6 L. |8 N1 Q! @<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
# c. |0 K" S9 G, c  {<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ O, g1 f& h$ }) J<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
. Y' V+ C$ a& Q8 Z. `<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 w7 B! @# ~9 J) B5 s/ ^2 h<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 _2 z  t& o/ ^- y. c2 L# U<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' K; \2 [3 z/ C- P<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ a: q' T0 ?+ |9 h9 j4 p<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
2 @+ j3 U+ D8 V9 M& _. G<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
4 M* n" i+ [+ U6 Y<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 X! n4 I4 u% e, q6 r<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: Q3 v5 i$ ?) S<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
- W) D5 B; P( t<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 @5 j0 }* P6 U( w( S% s  \" _* j<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 m8 p' \  D; E: J$ ^<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
# _9 n8 I) y+ S$ b" Z& ]<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 B8 r1 o' C6 }7 P; i<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 J3 l8 D5 J& N8 ~' |<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>