【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
# y' I# z2 P# P. M+ X3 m8 o0 {  X7 @That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
, Y4 J0 M' D0 m! @From the first moment we met,
6 A3 z1 V0 a2 Q! C% o8 j& _: h5 W3 VI already loved you with all my heart
$ a& u( x, _; \, P6 U: y5 NWe meet and talk everyday,
) c+ s& c; l+ I3 l: OBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
! d4 x( R' M9 P, Z4 D$ m$ qI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
) [" c% X5 \1 d7 |% m8 j3 rWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
2 C5 `# L7 f6 B5 E: s: vI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ ?' {9 h+ H  F) z& S' B+ ^  zCan I entrust it to you?
; L& L. e' O2 ?Entrust my love within your heart
! l* o( {8 a* y, B. pLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
- P+ b' N/ |/ b: dBut I never did
. m; q  S! G2 o( L0 z( W: L# oOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
; O+ Z4 V1 |4 P3 ?% f1 T% uI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 r( s  `) Q" N/ ^# WI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
9 ^- ^8 X, v/ v4 J1 P$ r7 |. FEntrust my love within your heart
1 N) e0 w. e4 r6 E3 C6 U! ECan I entrust it to you?
  y# t% N) o7 y9 Q# m7 B' {5 HEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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8 }) S+ g1 h# b' k<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
  e4 _8 w$ C( j) [& l* k; d<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
2 c. H: z8 N& e<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
+ ]- d0 p  k0 i" k4 R* s( ?! z. `  ^, n<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
( ^9 n0 X3 z/ U+ O$ ^! h<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
& }# N; R# s6 [4 l  [. J<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
% b/ T3 n: Z. l# {. f8 {* s" [<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
0 E" C# \1 u( d4 y' `/ o3 b<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
8 c% a; ]1 S# a) C- |- k<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
: z- l! e6 A6 Z4 k4 s; ~; f* _' k<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
) Z; S6 A' D6 J<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
- K* Y, b1 @7 Q, V; ~<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
( n5 R" u+ K" b' m<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
3 }$ f8 E8 Z) T! X" z7 N. @<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: \; N; c2 T( G' J<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
0 L$ o2 u+ N6 u+ w% }<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
& @, b6 P: M4 {$ \# |) p' z3 j<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
; R) a7 E+ l9 b' T<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 t! H+ ]4 g5 [+ b  I, j/ A<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( U" ]. Y/ v2 q' f<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 `4 |) y* S# D5 v/ b  X<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 |* F6 _% [- @<P>Love… just the word love </P>
$ Y6 k& S6 ]1 b" Z+ f- x; ~<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
) Z, g: D- `9 m8 y<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
# I5 [. G& R& u4 T2 d1 v$ W, `, s4 u<P>But I never did </P>
. F  R- e  {0 A<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
6 J) `' [% J" {<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
  ?- T  U* @% \9 @* \<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" e3 Z2 U& R" J/ {<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- ^0 Z5 s. b* e) X- A<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( E. B6 D6 _" t( p  N8 U9 u3 u<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 F# [7 l$ Y- t; _. \<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
& o" D9 g$ e0 ]5 a+ [<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>