【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
! i/ P7 E. n- H% |: @$ g7 jThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
7 F+ _! K3 Q7 r% b0 c& F, qWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
# B0 g" |" ~4 `, F- l& g) sLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
3 y+ {) l6 d1 b. {9 T* U3 k9 T$ NI want to confess that I love you,
+ q0 [9 Y2 C$ L5 v+ l* l, p* VBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
9 a8 R/ S  x% ]) o0 j+ Q+ A6 JI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 [1 f- S' v+ S- Z2 G7 H! H9 jCan I entrust it to you?
9 [# n0 n% T3 X! v$ {- @Entrust my love within your heart
# S1 j7 A9 z( U1 d0 FLove… just the word love
. T8 G4 i1 v! c& p  }Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) w5 E  A+ j& E4 G) EI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
, A( P6 w9 ^* i. QEntrust my love within your heart
2 \0 f  L7 G2 z" J* _; Y( A' tCan I entrust it to you?
0 Q/ x7 X* d; Z( N# aEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

. ~$ O5 [# x, n8 n, U<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
1 a: A9 A' r; W# m0 b<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
9 r/ F0 q8 c) _5 R4 m1 {<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
- l5 F& s* D" h2 `  i& A<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
' ^9 x0 L0 w  S) M' z<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
. [, A! c  Q- e2 t$ k<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
/ _; c0 ~9 z7 d9 T5 K( x<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
  U' r2 `- Z4 J6 a% ~7 c<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
- W" @( A% l; ~4 Q: j, Z<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
( E  H( k$ ?. T<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
' {+ i7 a% D; i6 L) C<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
+ G0 F; W) v1 U9 e& O<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 g& a* W+ v. m<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
' [2 |3 C# \6 w! W' w/ H<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  s, g3 A. ?% v, X: j- k<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
) j7 M. ?* U" C<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 _3 b# G9 k/ R<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 v7 K6 ?/ _" E3 ?8 N; V9 Y/ ~<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) C5 x' v& ]+ v% z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 H8 y( A! W$ f<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% |& l6 j4 X- r( T/ [  J2 t<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ Q6 G: x. `3 P' q6 L: P3 X& I<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
4 z' l  F# f8 m/ @3 U<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
, N/ W1 J  Y: n) y<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ K6 P4 J* S6 N; t. I<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
( Y; U; p4 C  c) T1 x) |<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( H- o- `: t$ B9 u<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 i: p$ g, _' X$ @0 @# i, V<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  v4 B/ U' V! k& P2 A' b. G  J) n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; H  S6 b7 R; V7 @7 l  D) Q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 t1 h/ R/ m  ~% ^6 k; d<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
. L2 M" O$ J4 t2 |( `  u( i<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

3 F2 A7 A7 P0 S9 N( X这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) h; D/ v) X8 i8 r5 Q* H, i<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>