【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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8 X/ Z, A( s* z3 l( |! _0 d2 C$ D. K我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
) b6 L0 J, m$ P+ A* nThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
2 `, i; [  ~/ x# SI already loved you with all my heart
+ |# Y( n( |& P2 qWe meet and talk everyday,
; @5 I) [: }& Y. F2 d* m% wBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
7 M4 _2 ^' Y" _) b7 EIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
7 w2 l. D- ^" o/ h6 nOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
. O) ~; }( x. b( k) J. \9 fI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
1 P# |4 S4 W- d, L8 l+ b9 |Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
5 B5 W* P3 d1 f. kWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
& O. f+ T5 I$ K5 oI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 P# S  x/ S6 _; V% i' n( {. v# zCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
6 D7 B: k  [: j- w- c0 rEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
& Y8 o8 O( _' [0 N& {<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
4 B$ X- B/ E. ?9 F7 Z% `; i<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
# a7 s, [' j3 i6 {' ^<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
8 H' T2 ~8 h  H" C0 x( y<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
* y# G, N$ _; n) j9 E<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
% ]( [3 E1 S- n. b# x<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
3 J: O' }1 A6 T; i+ E' u) Q, S<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
6 G, x8 R0 H6 p$ ?! o3 s) u7 q<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
; F& b3 u+ ]2 x  K! E<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
1 {0 |- C$ S4 a" L% ?<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 d( h7 g3 O; s# n<P>我想说我爱你</P>
" M4 e* v/ p- H7 [<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
+ t& k1 w: `6 x# r3 M<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  z, {; s" O4 z; ~<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ V; g  ]9 I, Q1 f$ j<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& v! C. F3 p% @6 Z, d+ n  n<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 Q( z/ Y" l% n; [; |<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 l1 B# O1 D& z. c<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
( L7 B  m8 A8 @8 ~% w; @2 }2 o<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
: _3 U& e8 H+ Y<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
% _, Y: q- Y  H# H# M<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
. v" ^3 [  {- z/ L- p<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 w; f, P+ i7 H' v<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
1 r: K! X: h3 n: Z7 Q% n1 g<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ L$ A/ I$ h. _<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# i) _' i7 T5 |<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 e8 I0 u8 B% F1 Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. K) Y* O) ]! F: q$ J<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ C2 ~: I3 v: e! A9 r- e% i<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
) x! [7 \$ [5 ~: R- R5 t' F8 L2 m<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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( P  w& R4 b6 c  w+ y* m- Z 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

: b+ R/ O7 B! G: I这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

+ `" `; o, n0 y这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' z! I8 |; g/ r  a8 u0 v% i1 [<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>