【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
5 q8 U" n# M8 B( M! y0 u" r" {From the first moment we met,
! K/ \5 u& V" {  ?" x0 n) V# N4 w4 zI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
% o* o* W+ b5 |8 h2 i+ zIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
8 Y' J  X) D# u/ ?# gI would probably know how you feel
7 B6 w8 E/ E4 ILove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
2 X& C: ]2 F0 H0 |' ?4 M* tBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* x& c  G# F: {' K# vIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 I% s3 N5 T( R8 U0 {$ rCan I entrust it to you?
' g, M, U, C: u2 p) B' fEntrust my love within your heart
& m& L$ p5 k2 V; |3 {) wLove… just the word love
3 {, U6 B" @7 c$ wWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
3 M2 y4 s: E" e5 [. y; cI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. P% ~- ]  U8 f! a; l" S- CCan I entrust it to you?
* A5 y, k8 I) M- Q. x9 L7 `" EEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

2 v# F3 C# W, a[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

8 g6 C  w( k' p2 x<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
% d9 E. E3 @, r# h/ O<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
& d- e+ p! c: E/ t$ ~0 Z<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
& ?0 I: `! ~, q8 H9 H* c<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
' t' _' ?. d. I+ U% J/ Z) f<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
! n8 J; s$ u& T<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
1 j7 @8 H! B3 b4 W1 Y5 x5 ?% Z<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
" g1 z  D# K( E$ b; G<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
6 a5 l7 Z, j/ I6 O" S<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
) B2 s6 l% H+ [) U4 Z<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
5 Y* E, V9 X5 b! k: B<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
6 V% u+ u# C( q4 V7 Q) J<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( l4 t3 [  |& r9 T<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
. ]0 X9 J; ]" U<P>但我不会</P>
/ O# q. v' E' {* Z- x' P5 _% i<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
& w5 f- C( @1 f; R<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
+ z& O2 R) v0 O2 o0 l. \<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
' O2 J. l, b* G  w% P; R<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# A) K. n# ^- K+ a<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 b, P  R) ]: `<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  o9 ]* r! E! ]7 k& z<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' D' F* c! W3 M; Q8 u7 s<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
4 Q- t0 ^9 s3 w- j4 y<P>But I never did </P>
6 V9 A$ W1 S5 I  v, }<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
8 b/ s0 v# n( c8 z<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: _% I$ J! G# A) _<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  i" F; o$ W2 n: ~! Z& ~0 ^# k3 p<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 k) N3 ~+ H& b0 m1 x: D5 e<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' E' o( u0 O- P( k, x<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ L# X0 b  G( W+ s- v<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& B4 D+ W6 E3 [4 {8 ?6 B) j<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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3 {0 T" A8 d0 r1 d6 y  @, r& o<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>