【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
8 u4 a* ~( s2 \2 Y) Z4 ^The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
5 k0 S! K1 i* M* E' [/ a& s" `From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
" ~5 s6 a' _9 M& ^( \+ r4 @We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
+ U- J" h' B1 A. yI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 B2 f( d$ D, ?. P  s: e9 yIf today isn’t too late,
$ y1 E" C" L5 ?7 CI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: y# Y, g1 [7 p# g' `6 ZI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
1 L" Y* f* K) C( d6 s9 t  BEntrust my love within your heart
7 a* D  p$ r1 ?, RLove… just the word love
2 K( u1 |4 a* ^  j( Y( u2 H  S. CWhy is it so difficult to express?
/ o$ u; m: u0 f1 b' H6 T- J- O5 qI want to confess that I love you,
4 O0 n# [8 p1 s' yBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 B. {  _- F  `/ Y9 T  @. |! J" T, qIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 ]4 v: z# s# YCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
' |, H* j8 g# g! D# m: |Can I entrust it to you?
/ V% E. W" U; G% X! ^; kEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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: f4 e( j- J& `' D* M<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
3 Q) V8 F4 q5 u5 O<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
) v( M9 z+ n6 ?) @, s1 M<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
+ |& T+ V* ]6 i4 i$ m<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
; i+ M; o- z( Y& h+ W' |, V<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
5 ~0 s1 _: f/ p8 Q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
/ R% t* e* t: m8 e1 H4 ~2 r<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
% }, _% |! |# o+ K% n/ M<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
" ?8 d  P3 r' h- q. S+ x<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
! p0 Q, x# W. H0 z, e" U<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
) Z- P- E5 q/ N( ?( j: U<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
5 @# \: J% L: v  p! `' l<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
7 C  G* ?' ]$ c" l7 L3 f<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 m$ c3 z0 d: ]9 U0 c1 [6 x<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
$ n- ~. j2 h+ o! F& k9 U! d<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
; @; B5 {/ {  K9 p<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 r8 }. S  Y% m3 H4 Y- W( |  E<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- [0 t3 |& ^2 Z8 G. j5 E7 M5 V" L6 G<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% u+ \( z8 G; W  l<P>Love… just the word love </P>
) t# q9 P" y6 v- j  y5 R& E* B<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
, \; q9 R# U9 ~5 ]% ]& C<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
" X5 v, J+ ]1 c. S4 b5 H! q' r<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
7 V7 L5 o  Q- D" N# d9 H<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
0 C: \1 P2 _: l* B. n4 D<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
2 H1 B  d" F5 H! i<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
  g4 R" x% u; c& L" S<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
# ^3 I; `% F0 O! a# R<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, c, x4 p0 T6 U- G) C: |$ f* i4 V; F<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 q# w# z1 b5 n5 H% `0 X! o<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 b% P/ i$ A3 M! Z9 A; e' C<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
8 P! j% R- T  }/ n/ @% ]<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
" t; V4 x5 M& z$ X<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

( Q3 o, Z7 y5 P: ]$ W" q! e 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

3 _0 a2 R. M3 `6 z这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* i5 ~1 T" A7 S0 o. s, s<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>