【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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( i+ q' j, Z! v( J7 _$ ~! H我另将歌词附在此。
+ q- E. E( u0 O7 C. EThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
' b! v3 V+ e- ZThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
' w+ @" _) v% r# Z7 X6 F' MFrom the first moment we met,
6 y" K6 [2 W; @  W$ \7 eI already loved you with all my heart
3 {; X* k# g" u4 p3 QWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
7 d+ l9 T  A: M" Z0 bIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
$ f: ^" H. T+ ~+ f8 y& _I would probably know how you feel
+ r: }1 T% G4 n8 d0 o9 ?, A! cLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ l8 d2 S8 p( U1 rIf today isn’t too late,
1 e; M3 ?4 B: n" F! yI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 {& Z8 ]% M/ w! s* w2 g- }$ X! PCan I entrust it to you?
2 Q' H3 o  f* G3 z- Q9 nEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
/ N' q8 ?; X" vWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
( r' J# [/ s% S3 X# H- {9 EBut I never did
) H( b' C! ^- dOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- V: @1 M, b8 w- K. {7 B; M  ~2 dIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 k. \0 S% x: q8 |# `I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
3 t) y: X. R( d8 K7 M& g. hCan I entrust it to you?
4 o3 N$ z, y+ |Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
9 m- ?7 X) y6 M. h- D3 t. V<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
5 s! ?1 k* w0 J5 p  C<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
" w& z/ o5 f+ @$ H<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
3 }4 Y# X# E# U; \2 A- x<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
" ?8 ~7 S: {- \( u9 F, s5 t<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
" z6 E# f" M* d, H# _6 B. C8 c<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
' @- w1 }7 a4 s  ?" @7 i<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
* ~" H% X9 U/ E' w. x' f<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
  J: \/ C- L6 c! T: }<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& b; ^4 J+ F; h<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
! @- o, Q5 _0 P! F<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! Z, \/ [! d. a& I3 G<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
, D! k, }* I' |" T; d$ T3 c<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) z6 n' m% u& p2 _<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% [( `( i1 t- g6 d<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 Z% ?' U# P( F! e<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
% Y+ K4 w) z" S0 z3 _! R<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  j- Y# h9 d, E8 U& ]) c<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
9 g+ \& x8 ?5 `/ b# g) d- H<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
5 b9 Q4 @7 J/ m* c) |0 m<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
5 z+ d% ~4 H5 C/ H& \<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
' q! Y8 _+ }$ G9 p$ ]: a<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 Z' b, T. f7 ^0 ?<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% l2 C2 }$ v1 o6 V9 ^. b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ h  F6 |5 v/ E8 F9 z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
9 e! a! g3 B0 Q+ k' d9 z! L+ C<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 S1 s4 E# w3 i- P" O( l, V 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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& m4 K6 W; N, ]这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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6 l) R0 a' C1 q) X<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>