【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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! D% o3 J: I" y/ y, v, O  r# ^我另将歌词附在此。
' A9 r+ E% S( pThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
3 p! _% P+ Z6 j! B8 j3 oThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
* f* K1 m7 _9 N) T4 @; I/ A* E1 GI already loved you with all my heart
1 b4 O. w8 D+ W1 H" ^( BWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
1 Z0 b# z0 T: A3 {* P% n/ OIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
" e! I5 M, K' @4 r9 n* Q8 E$ PLove… just the word love
. [2 L; @) T8 XWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
5 F- K3 {0 Q) P3 lBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
2 e( c( U* W. C3 ~* b$ jI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 Z- G2 b2 a$ kI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
  l, N8 ~* Y! l; O  l, j2 d1 mLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
* f- N1 h, J' r' L3 Q9 J5 b# _I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" f8 v7 c0 D7 r) E2 I' d& GI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% E3 d6 q, k; V: d. BCan I entrust it to you?
6 e2 y/ ?+ d; m+ Z3 Z7 S1 ~# eEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
% P# q: q# E) b- @0 u- @Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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* t0 Z9 r3 p4 j<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
) p8 e- [# ^& h" Q3 y) j& p( q<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
+ g. c1 z4 u  g  d( R1 w# z<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
$ ?# |7 A1 t& Q# k9 b; q/ I$ j; p  B<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
$ t1 {; ^- n% _( `<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
" Y4 k2 X* G3 D' o+ C5 Y' ~! M<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
7 L/ S( f1 g4 {6 H  M; o4 Y. \2 x<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
5 m9 `6 K$ c- J0 R- X: R7 p<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
6 V3 T; H) W; y<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
8 M$ R+ R* v7 o9 l% }7 O6 A1 {<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 H& D: o" z% C; `8 \" T; |% O, p<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
! v. \4 |, y- W! W$ k0 D5 }% c& }7 V6 ^$ j<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
. V5 h; t/ z( n* c<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
+ X& p6 @4 T- @( Q! y0 n<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. H1 p" g, b6 V/ Z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ s+ g! Q1 |5 A/ e<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 \3 X3 ]0 I& `4 `, v# V+ r* p- s<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 @2 t2 c' q9 u5 T: v<P>Love… just the word love </P>
4 F+ p) ^- g" E! Y3 y  V0 e<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
3 P4 ?1 o' S4 B$ ]<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
; P: t  m7 r" v<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
5 X' {8 O. G1 w; U7 E. R<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
# `1 y8 g) ~: v% x; t: [<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ ^1 m2 |1 X- }9 N) D<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ ^% A3 ?  a( x<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* d1 @3 W5 I2 K, ~% V<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
! ?& m0 c# \/ K; C4 O<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- y7 Q6 y& }+ i4 z  r) N<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>