【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
( T3 k9 e& G8 |% kThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
: I+ W5 Y1 m8 M, MBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
' L" s* S& C  C: i" \1 LI would probably know how you feel
8 q' o7 t1 \# y* \1 QLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
8 M0 w  U) G( G2 v" K$ JI want to confess that I love you,
% ^0 A5 L% n( b4 L) A( p! Q2 ^But I never did
+ f% F3 i' u; u+ n3 d8 nOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, c: s' W. U! I: T8 q0 F4 v1 lCan I entrust it to you?
% m5 _* j# G0 K- s2 x' ZEntrust my love within your heart
. M4 Z2 o) l: x9 Z/ E7 p0 ELove… just the word love
6 s3 w" \4 p1 jWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. A7 v! {; t5 w9 a9 R1 wIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' L) J; y8 a# |Can I entrust it to you?
) v: v) P' H7 {8 W( K) XEntrust my love within your heart
1 O: k5 y9 t. o7 R# \! `Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

  ^) l: g- a* a( l1 s8 _[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

8 R, @9 S5 H+ w; H0 C
* b7 o6 y4 B% k: k  x<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
& i8 s6 X2 d/ S% ]+ @4 l6 y$ E<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
3 g; D# j& ?$ Z& D7 L<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
# H! D7 Y/ t- [0 J; _+ @4 ^$ u<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
7 y% U  H/ I5 @, `6 }1 x<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
) [) i9 G+ j- B* j<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 ?" l; f4 Q6 p% ?) x7 y, r9 v) _; T<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
% ^6 H, J8 S, h" @( t<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
: c9 E, j( l6 W4 b" d<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
( {$ n3 Z" |. \6 x8 e<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
! h( b7 T$ S2 c5 f' y0 u% o<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ q8 k* s6 e1 V) q; Z8 X<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
0 s( M$ l% q0 H: F. W<P>但我不会</P>
, ]  ]: l) x, h8 J. v- K<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
2 m9 J" ~. Z8 L4 |- r<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
" a! ~9 `- V( A- L& p<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 s9 g; `0 c5 a6 }$ O<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% K. d( |) z4 H' w$ k3 v8 ~<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 D4 t' E( C- @0 b7 o. \/ Y" g<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' c, \0 x, r- t. `6 h1 n) m<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 H- p4 H( x+ l. A" b* H<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 w: H  P( d9 G: D<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
; l9 I$ F- A( o/ ~6 I3 D<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
, S- s$ Z2 J7 i<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 z% j! j7 d0 ]<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
2 ^; B( p3 X, v5 p' z: Z- w; ^8 c<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  e; x! ?8 u7 C. Z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' o- U4 Y( ]% J<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& t  h. @& J8 C! L! O, J<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 ]+ r3 K7 L( t; y+ c7 A<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
  C" {& ^) D" ^- h6 i<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
. ]1 A/ F& R) ]* ~. m4 v4 r<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
' R6 K& F% H; C2 \# u- }: K
我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
' Q2 V$ _; ]. t" J
6 e& r8 a  G7 M! G这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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4 ~1 A  o, Y& g  W4 Q, c! V<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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* u1 j, l, _2 U<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>