【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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+ n- l# Z7 g. [0 Y我另将歌词附在此。
) F" P7 D- f9 }The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
4 ^; o. A1 o5 cI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
# C4 Y" E/ V3 J7 h# Y. u- bWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
8 A: u+ [9 V# w# C& Z! ^One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) y; l' T8 B" x4 PIf today isn’t too late,
$ a( @6 M- N% j* tI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ ~  \* }( o. p: vI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# w0 n4 G5 @$ E8 @9 R! @Can I entrust it to you?
3 V7 R1 a4 \) `/ rEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
! _$ H0 n6 c& `4 s5 Z) a$ GOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
" v8 x4 _4 y; J4 ]1 }& VEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

& Y3 i- u# n4 ]9 C# |( w$ X3 z<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
! x, n+ e7 [6 O  \) w, e<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
! h* `* f4 Q: d' c! _' O<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
9 u/ {$ ~/ Y* J<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
) w$ ~# {0 D1 n# F$ W, b( K<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
2 }5 @. S7 W, f- R  t! Y' s* {) x$ b1 w<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
. G: d" ^* w7 a) }; E! r<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
/ Z0 z0 d. p) b7 d<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
+ w. F% }3 c; _* }" z<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
! ~* F' I( x; _# p<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
% E7 b/ ]3 X* Y( ^3 B<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) u/ j# m. O, r- l5 `* g0 [<P>我想说我爱你</P>
" |. C* f$ |% Q8 B<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
& R0 K- G! e8 B4 {<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
3 [7 \9 w) z! z$ o0 C/ O, u<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 @; m+ y0 z# A5 S' w<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
" v8 ^! s, r, X+ e<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 w6 p) u  a; o- }* u<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* B. K9 \6 s6 F$ h' A, B7 R<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; O: @$ o2 d6 m<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
9 v; ~2 C- v0 m' N! N<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
2 V9 g7 r( T' t7 ?# E<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
1 S/ i" X; T: t/ ~$ y. B9 u<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 a: y- ]* O' X6 v# ?$ w. ~% x: I/ b6 \  u<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
& B, \9 T! Y& G7 Z4 E: I<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
& P+ N( d, Z  W  r# y% s<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) w! O( L' [* C1 x! D<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" Z/ X0 i& X2 d+ N3 M1 Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ e$ f* `) C3 p9 K. q, _0 }0 G<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: p$ V6 @9 U4 u1 {7 |  X5 V, U, w<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 ^, ?% U! ]* D  i<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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$ i- ~1 [$ f4 a7 ], B2 A, i9 a 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

, ~: c1 r+ T% s3 p4 k( J这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>