【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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2 w7 o- T) {# ]我另将歌词附在此。
+ |# j3 Z; \/ N: |. `The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
0 H7 L) l) l- \% S4 z- O1 tThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
. ^+ p9 a3 S+ r3 cWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
  S+ r. V% T1 P/ eIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
& B7 W: X, h% e$ O! E) JI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
  M3 `, E" E* h; \Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
# b3 F2 J% S3 C4 uBut I never did
: x" ^! [5 [/ f. V& n. O4 ?One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ E$ o2 y  P: R6 I3 I) o$ B8 e0 C( gI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
  K6 r4 ?/ V' U6 BEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
! e  K4 ~9 {& w9 x; p. zI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
- `3 ?* v& b) j. f0 O4 BEntrust my love within your heart
1 K) W5 ~% C* }' L6 A; ICan I entrust it to you?
! v/ f" }; z4 EEntrust my love within your heart

: L8 W; }4 z. m2 @7 ?[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

0 p9 D6 }9 u2 x  J  @, x, ^8 ^<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
" ^$ U# k) d  ]+ x% |5 A' N5 K# g6 t2 Z<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
- @1 m1 e! _8 [1 Q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
! v; W+ H9 x+ b+ o1 N- I<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
- f! o7 L: @' Q1 d5 ]<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
  _' B3 a* s# d9 L/ t' F( p0 q<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
" u) J. y6 s; L<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
! w1 c, P# P' d  q& X; }<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
/ L4 z# p3 m! x# U<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
( ~1 L' O2 u9 z2 L# t<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
7 y5 ?6 n/ f& t7 J- L1 K2 ]<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
$ w/ M2 _; U/ e2 F6 T<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
$ A" u/ w9 T. x$ B<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ Y: d5 C7 s; z8 I+ w% ?<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ G8 I3 K+ R2 x$ m/ E+ J$ ?) i/ ~4 ?4 T<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 G5 r  E, ?! Q. b: j) k<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; v2 X. q" {0 L# v) u1 M1 W<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 T( q# w' Q& I& c<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 i5 n# C$ @" A) _. N0 Z9 O<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& Q3 q/ e3 F, ~5 W! f5 @<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
; {1 `* g1 {5 s<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
5 a9 @/ x2 B+ v( }0 @( h<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
! N" }* a8 ]& I& u/ p<P>但我不会 </P>
2 G, ]9 O& X0 g0 q1 ^! q<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
& o5 F  C# I7 V<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: c# }0 c* I6 }3 ]9 o<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 R3 o& @5 g7 G  K* m  k9 |$ W<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# h' W% v( z$ L& J: Q2 _5 ]<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 I6 L& J. u0 @3 }; O' H2 G<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ C" F& g3 ~) |+ c/ _<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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5 l2 [' W  i9 e2 S$ B9 `% u 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& ^4 p0 R0 |% ?<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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9 H5 ^- s  x7 S: N  Q; E; @<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>