【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
+ T) P: F. M1 F. C8 E4 |1 Q- mThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
% h# A6 S0 c, E% U0 Y9 S* dFrom the first moment we met,
. E3 W) |- R- e" J! u6 ~4 lI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
9 L1 g5 q. J( J0 W( F: fIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
$ J- [6 n5 ~# {: ?- tLove… just the word love
- p3 h# D6 \% |7 h3 M2 T" u3 K- d& IWhy is it so difficult to express?
+ ^/ \( u1 f) B7 CI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! L8 V* O! H( N" y4 w! dIf today isn’t too late,
5 [8 c( p4 B9 P6 V. hI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 |% r, I5 x% _/ e/ e& S: gCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
* R  D9 i7 H8 }" R. {Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
, c7 g* w1 G9 l, pI want to confess that I love you,
( L5 S. ^* `" `& ^) yBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 p& b$ O9 d6 e/ f% u  {I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: _1 Y6 [8 l7 U. L1 VCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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3 y. X0 `* r2 J( i* @% H* P[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

8 T+ O; H  b" r' U' i+ o<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
: r: C, Z9 t2 i/ ]<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
+ T. v$ x7 c! \9 M2 a# b1 Z/ U<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
& m9 q1 S8 u$ ~' \<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
4 r0 }/ `/ }0 E# l+ w6 @<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
* @: L7 X& `: q  M: X<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
, F. w: V7 j5 M/ l<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
5 k# H8 L2 O2 }<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
: f* i4 p1 c0 D2 J) s<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
- j+ P! g& x' D5 m" U2 [<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
; U: U6 e$ i! N% f" h<P>但我不会</P>
6 @% S' O  u; ]! a<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ m2 V; V4 B( q# W- x8 r<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# y. t/ U- o  Z; f  f# M4 ?<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- [% L( n/ t& a$ w<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ h- R* Q$ A) L! t# A9 q4 D* c<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
$ w: I/ u! ]7 ^7 O- b<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ v; |- T) h# z6 q7 ]# {<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
  O/ {- A' ]0 T# s& O8 Z<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
5 N: L7 k4 N  Z& c<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
: A; g; q  ~# g3 U8 T( l4 P<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
. R5 R7 |5 ^% F4 @<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( g: J2 v5 g0 B1 b2 K- S' D, h<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 q( Y0 N& P. v) R<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- J1 q! d5 u' u1 z& m6 U5 f  h1 V$ i<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 Y! k+ p  A5 X2 v+ |4 M" a  T9 @<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
  k# G5 a: L. A( q6 M<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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0 I1 G8 Q( E1 }5 u+ k+ V<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>