【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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/ s5 `5 Q  W8 j8 `: T我另将歌词附在此。
! D' C) y4 ^* z; g% \7 A! \- f; T) AThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
8 z  V6 Y; j) _& |4 T; ZThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
  Q( A* j. I3 C5 h; }From the first moment we met,
$ b& m7 O6 C. Z. GI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
- z3 ?9 ]4 x% ]8 b9 I9 O, kBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
( d3 \5 w1 @& ZIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
. l( T+ g2 C1 j- k0 @I would probably know how you feel
) `5 U  Z. A: n( a( w" XLove… just the word love
/ f, r- n: E% w# JWhy is it so difficult to express?
  Y; ~; G0 o5 O0 \) sI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
- s3 [# Z* x9 ~: [' U$ I( B8 u2 YOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ R, S7 a, G$ l) `I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# ^' ]- |4 T6 Y3 G9 E+ g3 OCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
- C* `6 H. P+ s3 yLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
0 u4 }! I0 o! R7 nI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
: Y) f# N/ Q- _' z' d$ e) WOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. l/ ^' L. {* |If today isn’t too late,
" U! v( h. ]5 n7 Q  P& _I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, Y3 C; ?% x" ]Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
3 p* Q- n% s. f( d<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
. u% S" t" D4 @5 _; e<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
! i& y- V" \! P% {3 M<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
/ |+ X" \9 o9 o1 [" _! g, b<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
. j) S1 L) X1 }# \5 k" D+ d<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
# F* f/ g! @1 K$ Y) ~( }* {<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
( m# a. M  N! w4 I* Q/ T' C0 k  Y<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
  T5 P- _( y8 n<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
, c5 s" B. S# O, ]5 P<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
+ L7 g; E) `$ F; Y( ]<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
, |+ m$ F5 v3 x8 `0 @8 z  P<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
: ^; Y! Y  @7 A" c+ `( N# @<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ \+ ^- R5 |! U" ~; Z2 Y2 |& v<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: f3 d4 r# ]( q- C; b<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 [1 t: X7 I8 @5 y6 F6 G<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
8 k  c# [3 C8 W; r! d<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  N. [0 O" O) e" @<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
$ l8 F9 D+ A5 D<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
. h4 t  u- n% r& p* b& K: U<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ G/ S! R$ a( R! R, {% N6 {0 V<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' i% ?$ P: C* t  H<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ L# q: T! u7 S& h. m! S<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 [( {  L, q. d4 M7 ^. N  c<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
: M8 s9 ]7 R- K' \, w8 Q# k<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
9 k% m7 z* i" G5 L6 }! M<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 V1 y# t! a  {" r: [- w5 I<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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: r/ ^( H1 u3 W# F' [<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>