【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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& j' C, y9 Z. b7 d" a' w6 T我另将歌词附在此。
$ Z9 U1 D: L$ [  DThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
+ g& n( j9 [" K1 kWe meet and talk everyday,
* X: o7 v, o# Z$ T$ r! e  _But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
# n3 s! o8 ?5 R7 I! a# H& _+ ]If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
) E# h7 J3 Y, Y7 T  z- _Love… just the word love
9 ?8 e. ?* s0 N- a; ^Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
* }7 z) U- k4 P" g# `One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  g" p4 v" @- t' hIf today isn’t too late,
0 b5 R% Y; A$ l0 v' C' A( QI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- X, C1 [3 J# d' yI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& p5 U" i( B1 _/ rCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
$ |. K  D. |( E" jI want to confess that I love you,
% r1 e' H) t$ ^But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
6 D6 J- n# f% k" N" {: QI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' i2 |4 |% E$ j* [0 N* l  _I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 F* C0 N) r8 N/ \0 VCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
: v2 Y/ p9 n& G& b" S6 [Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
( K3 I+ k* h( L! q<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
0 r: A0 h$ o  i2 @! \5 R<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
' O4 B4 Z+ I# H1 U<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
. R) ?; Y6 N( j<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
* u  F3 F7 Q  }4 w2 y, R<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
, m9 X- i! V+ ]5 r5 j& @4 T3 u<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
5 I: `, P6 A. X: W$ S+ s# a<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
1 ]" Q5 |! a/ n! q9 {<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
( t/ n% `0 v; d<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
& q0 ^3 j% s8 n% O<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
6 g) h- p- w5 {4 n6 ]) S- `; Y<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
7 Z' |& h' u( c2 I* ?% z<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
" @: c9 e5 F+ T6 k/ ?& L<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
4 {+ A0 q; x; V( e<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
  _$ ^& y/ E  x0 g' W6 i7 T3 x3 L3 |1 J<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
- w' u0 C* z; U- `6 [. j$ `: H<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; Q+ D" F& [! ~& \) p1 R<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
; V# ~- L# f7 k3 {. P/ A<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
( r/ M$ @. j8 D<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( ]: A( {( ~7 F7 W<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
7 `  ?+ K, n  ^<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% g; _# l& O* N; M  p8 I" j<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 h3 s9 O  M' o  j' m. |0 Z4 T<P>Love… just the word love </P>
( }8 @- t$ v2 C% j9 L<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
# e! a% S, p4 k9 b1 p<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 \! @5 x) `: E) \: w<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 v- ?6 n1 Z. ]+ ^( ]1 ~* @<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& l, t+ A" i' O  E* S<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 z( w! s. }  d1 W6 u<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 ?9 u) \+ ]/ T5 S<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 t; F6 b) ~3 ]4 H% g! _<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, v& {! N9 C5 i4 F) B! @<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 o5 m4 X' }  u& W<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
# y: T5 u% [8 l8 E, T' U<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

4 b( B* n& i7 T, P; G5 u8 D这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, X& g1 ~4 {! b0 u% v<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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. p) ?3 z3 E$ F<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>