【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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; [% }4 R6 {7 h, P8 p; U我另将歌词附在此。
$ ~. S. Z9 P/ \9 R0 o! LThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
7 D# z$ V8 l& J! VThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
. P. L+ n7 G" k( l* j, A5 HFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
0 h, b! t  B% W5 YI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
& S- K$ l8 x0 i+ X# FI want to confess that I love you,
5 g4 e) l* h2 x2 IBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ X9 H" k2 E$ J" w" _If today isn’t too late,
( g9 y+ j$ E# H$ b" uI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 ^$ s4 l& r5 Y! K  P, rI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
$ t. g$ E; _5 [Love… just the word love
# p! m7 [6 W6 J) d+ }Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
" X& M  i  R9 K) f  IBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) O" N  B. }& W- i0 EIf today isn’t too late,
' Z$ w1 S0 y- v* j" Z; m& d4 w; ?I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 n" e  i9 E- X7 e& Z1 x( F; u! FI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' w7 I8 n, p2 t+ L# }Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
+ s3 b" ^2 k- [' T- Y/ F8 _Can I entrust it to you?
7 f7 d! k  b! o) {Entrust my love within your heart

# Q6 r/ l4 S  W[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
( [9 g1 B+ i3 W# v4 c  K<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
1 b7 c- A0 ~: M<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
3 y1 J. T" F# f* n1 {# o<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
* h! ~" R( K8 U8 v<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
* u3 g! U% |4 w- M<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
, g1 `8 z4 Z" B$ r: N<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
5 d; \* l( k: A  u' ~9 |9 e<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
2 X/ r# F) u1 s& }<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
: j# O7 F# d- d( b<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
; d/ G! S1 Q- X  {7 `" a<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
6 T* D8 o/ l7 |' g! O<P>但我不会</P>
% B/ r  y( u9 f, }. @# K! E<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 c3 P& t  U9 Q# M4 p; v2 O<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) |0 R6 e" c' i) g% i1 p4 p<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 P0 Y# E' X* P<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, H# l" D9 y) b$ u. L- t<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
5 N6 G/ R$ p5 }% e; }* i<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
* [0 @: ^0 L" o/ T) I, ~, ]<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
7 ]( g6 K7 D6 x- r% o6 l<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 p9 A/ V9 C  N/ \: f4 S5 G<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% d( n; W# x$ a2 a+ V<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
$ K) [2 P! J+ S6 ^<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
, m! \" N5 ?/ w' x% U4 A<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* G5 h! I7 p+ W9 j<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ Z. O4 u' A$ T$ k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 ]* s- F4 ?1 e. V7 v3 T' ~<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( B; F! L' s5 Z; z- K" O, S! X$ r<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
$ H1 |5 x8 K% ~- f$ w9 g; [) y<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
9 o! E. ]* G$ s; U! @6 q* s3 \<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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1 z# `) R3 c$ Z0 m; D2 C这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 [5 Q1 @3 m# Z& v<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>