【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
$ F" y& Y" X( g: B+ j# [: X  ~% cThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
+ X2 _0 `7 ~3 \% y4 p7 z& dFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
1 `, W" T% T) s4 Z& ]1 jWe meet and talk everyday,
! T+ n* a. T- z, aBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
' R) |' V0 ]- kIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
+ ^4 }3 K. v( e; e* R& _Love… just the word love
$ y, o6 Z5 {' T; `. s# gWhy is it so difficult to express?
( A: [$ w) P! s* r% w* \I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# b% u2 N4 K! ^  r4 n8 m# d4 |If today isn’t too late,
# f+ t% }$ D2 k7 Q# y5 bI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
* o3 [, x0 [9 Y: y6 g9 n5 GEntrust my love within your heart
/ s( G. x7 I! k+ f# {* u6 }Love… just the word love
# |6 v; P9 w% u9 a! D. U, X+ f% o9 d3 O' bWhy is it so difficult to express?
0 f( w+ H2 h+ ^2 t) wI want to confess that I love you,
- d' @) i3 b" ]$ aBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  Q/ f  p! T/ |4 b/ kCan I entrust it to you?
* O. {8 A- \1 Q6 y( i- J* OEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

- a  r2 b, [1 ]1 C[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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1 q3 V# G, R/ V8 A* M& T' e1 K<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
- X; S& F& l) o- V4 b<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
' i: @! E- }. s) X<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
( g2 L9 _2 |5 g( l8 O$ _3 h<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
/ g9 X. \7 o1 M5 w0 w<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
- U( U/ b/ z5 r% D, A5 r<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
( B7 T1 O! F& K! P<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
7 q+ [. i9 u7 m% v' X9 f9 _<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
3 W9 Y2 E% l0 e' _) m<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
& ]9 }/ H# Q% P, J- d<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
. J3 M  f$ T- _: n$ w8 Z% S) k) O<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
9 P% f4 O- m# S( D  ?( ?7 R<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
9 X) ^$ ], `  L" f: J: E9 h<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
( W. @) I: P- v' @8 V<P>但我不会</P>
8 ^/ T- B1 |& ?9 g' Z/ X& t<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) d  o& H  Z6 ?. f: q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
" T& y( C2 B) g0 @<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! R% `9 k7 {+ S) ~8 ~4 B: n9 A* ~<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# r- ?& e; F' w3 E; R6 M& o# U<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 R8 M- o% |% i) ]9 h  m<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ l8 E1 x2 @. L+ {<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
$ l1 G+ D6 q" v: H& {8 M6 \# b<P>但我不会 </P>
! S- a1 m& H/ ?" c6 S<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
; z  c  u: f7 X) F5 k/ ?<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
# j: ~6 J) {" G  o<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
% ~/ o& ~" S/ l% A<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ u2 V( u0 i) @& ]1 W! ~<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) U4 q* X4 t4 Z% k7 ?) l7 J5 ?<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 Z, {. [& Y! @# _" s$ \<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 E/ G/ ]' Q5 @<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 D0 @  F: i6 w8 T1 a/ |<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& ^0 y+ j  o! V+ O) w/ T<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
) B$ p) i8 F. g' ?* @, r' ?: G+ e<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
) R' Q+ S5 T  P' D7 x, ?* a<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* m2 x* ~; S. d" j6 {3 Z( ~5 c" k<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) {) l% }8 k# P<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>