【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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* [' Y( X$ t! E% t' K  v# L我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
+ T+ Z- @" }  kThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
0 ~# P8 y, J) F$ X3 cI already loved you with all my heart
6 e- q0 A% E, QWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
$ n+ D! v  {: S8 E0 t) xI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
, t6 b6 Q- k( o+ f, z; FWhy is it so difficult to express?
  i* f9 l1 F/ i7 Q1 {, s  L3 mI want to confess that I love you,
# A; D4 j; X) _; i% h- mBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 }! j- X# j4 q" RCan I entrust it to you?
* @2 M# f, M& a3 o6 Y4 l9 v7 K' y( U; GEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
7 \  U, ]  H: k$ UWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
# x  v4 V3 l* }But I never did
' L; D/ n5 X+ e( FOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" R. S7 n( R4 }" e; vIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; F5 y( _6 l3 }: a; s9 c% `  QI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
; c  Z! j. I8 k1 F( g) IEntrust my love within your heart

  n; R, u: y, D, k+ u; U[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

! @( D. P# Z" @& J. g! c7 J: c" F. g<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
# \/ S- t2 g" C4 x  y" J! t<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
% b1 w' \7 ]9 v+ K& o7 X<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
3 l" W$ [, `  Z+ u  {  `<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
5 S' ^/ l- H  W5 ^<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
9 y) W. B0 q' f<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
" E( y/ Q0 U& E' C6 [; q: ?<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
$ r8 K: Q5 l: x; u/ j<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
( k. M5 w: ?, Z% U<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
  o  P! O! E$ s<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
9 V6 o6 [8 B( u/ ~& d  T<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 C9 |7 w$ N, i! _* R2 ]<P>我想说我爱你</P>
5 C5 M6 l& N! M<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
/ @* T1 ~5 `; G  v" r<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
' I  U8 }2 R9 g) P<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 T  Z1 o, y7 B. P<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) J! c1 O8 [( F( I- R. o<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ B% y* s$ l' F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" L0 U% g* G6 w' X3 Y: x. ]& {/ ~<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
6 j+ }5 C8 c, X' N<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% o: W; k1 g; `* n$ {<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
) F8 G  K$ m# R  N8 ^<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
* I' a8 t+ V6 ?8 u7 E5 j- d<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; W6 [$ B8 i  ]8 q/ K7 M$ y; t<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ Q" B" N% d: C: H8 X<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 |* ^6 {8 |8 R) l8 G, y. N- @( X$ D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
+ j- Y/ }/ [4 e' ?' O: ]+ a  F<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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7 @, ]6 ^* z  a% X- u0 D0 f& u" w+ f<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>