【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
$ W$ y( V$ _" m  O; C- uThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
! M+ F/ u; ?% t# Z6 L( o  s8 CThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
/ [/ n3 e6 a3 L0 SFrom the first moment we met,
+ e" `; O: P/ n$ ~7 p# ]I already loved you with all my heart
! V3 x" h6 N) ?1 u/ a% M4 d' R6 hWe meet and talk everyday,
7 O% H: [# T1 c3 \8 _( \But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
# \2 K, V/ X8 lIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
6 p! g9 n3 \7 }0 ]4 U. E% B9 CLove… just the word love
$ t" F- C% p% u) z- C* W$ `; _Why is it so difficult to express?
3 N. j! Z7 ?* G2 C9 x7 qI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
2 U0 c, D; [2 S* Q% s8 h5 B& y, r3 K# iEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
! [2 A/ _( a6 dWhy is it so difficult to express?
+ s9 v2 C( G5 @& bI want to confess that I love you,
; l  G. S) D' F  \' }But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' {% {$ ?8 M0 GIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: ?) W/ {" z" RI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ G2 M( s  g9 h9 yCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
- g  E" Y. N5 u' d- NCan I entrust it to you?
5 V; K1 t: T4 v  A3 y4 u6 u6 A1 jEntrust my love within your heart
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. V& e8 m, J9 Z) I[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

6 y. E4 D- `" ~- t# A$ f<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
' A% f& E( F2 q<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
& h3 `6 Z: s2 u) n" G# [<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
7 V( w, O- a) z7 Q+ G* z6 k* f* [<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
/ b4 a: g8 A. F  n<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
) A3 L0 K# N' u7 u<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
$ r) Y4 v* C! C<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
9 ]1 u- J' t( d<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
  A+ _& T/ s* L( j<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
" k& w1 R$ U' ~5 o3 F( l<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
$ @9 H  i' o* V* K# D+ ^: W<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
  L& g9 }5 d1 A0 W8 S<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
7 v$ B3 K0 {9 c: y<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' [# C( R8 W3 {' i' u<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 a" R: _6 e3 Y8 |<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 f% {! ^! @1 J' b+ D  v7 {<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
1 t* g  d6 E4 \- y<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
" \- P9 i* q8 n7 a1 {<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
/ Q3 J6 O9 c2 }<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) X9 o' j: r& ~5 E1 O<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# H/ i) W  G+ E# H  S; h4 y<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. r' j! \* ~: @<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: g; _- p$ |# _/ U, [- ]& i+ [0 k& h<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 \0 ]) R1 h- I6 {" `9 R5 m6 h<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 ?$ A6 w; N4 K: y$ p( w<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* c9 K6 F; z% A( V) i+ |4 m<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
- N. R6 q7 K0 @, H0 m0 K<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

/ J4 X& D$ W# T/ C1 [这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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  g9 l& C( Q$ ~, J8 \: @' a6 |2 U% d2 X<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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: r9 [# D) ]+ h0 ~) v! P+ a<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>