【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
( `8 ?# s7 |: v. M' H2 h1 oThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
; C  ~+ K8 Y. W4 ]That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
. r; z4 X; ~" x4 V/ }But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
  B' ^6 `: j  J1 JIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
9 |! C8 v3 w8 J" }4 b) R) ^, b: iLove… just the word love
' ?2 Z: @1 T4 y0 A) dWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
2 b3 @& V, D; x9 ^* dOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) h% r2 Y0 `1 r; @& V" n8 XIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
3 L7 e/ @. S4 r. x" fI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
1 f3 o8 s( G' LOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
2 j5 |: Q4 q  f' eI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ B; o' {4 h# L+ x0 V" ^" z2 l$ q  fI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( ^0 C; r+ ?- }8 g1 bCan I entrust it to you?
% u- A1 b0 Y. D  JEntrust my love within your heart
& d6 L0 e. a) h4 MCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

  w: |, E. b5 m% y4 k<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
- P( D. N) ]& r, F<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
, D5 Q  t8 Y8 ~/ q8 y0 a<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
: w+ n7 ~6 D" ^/ y; J<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
+ ]9 q+ w1 \7 V, K3 {<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
3 S0 P9 b  D' [) {/ L3 @% [8 d<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
3 e& x6 E, b$ h, M" M4 U- _<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
2 ?; p+ P1 `0 Y, L0 V" X<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
9 `: M1 _( b' _<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
, c$ C: s+ W0 z7 e3 o  X4 a<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
! ^( L5 M7 C8 l<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
4 {) |, z- s4 {6 @" m6 B8 J<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 M$ }6 I7 r, o( r8 V( W0 v- }1 @; M) V: }<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) ], E+ l  D; W<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 Z  K) l* T( v$ A7 Y3 o% R<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% S: j2 p+ e- E* B  d1 b" a; N* k<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
$ [) S; \! ~# h3 N4 I<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
9 F  {( H2 ^, \) u  O0 ?1 h& W<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, u" }' @% w# r$ i<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
! [3 U& t7 ]1 B1 J<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
! G& Z1 b! [- E- k1 |2 f0 v<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 y; o- O1 `) u3 N/ J/ Y7 T8 J<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* R  E/ J! H3 J) \) b* M( {+ x<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' r; Y* Y9 r* z) s, C+ v! |; o<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 ]! J- m+ i, h/ `, z5 u) h/ W, s9 f2 ^<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
" [# s0 @7 k* x9 k" {& C. u<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
4 s" Q3 C( z. b<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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( f/ M) j# r: O3 m# |$ ~$ e* R这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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: A# \: p7 A" Z1 n  N! _* {/ c<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>