【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
5 s! |* J* v# c& t& jThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
. y3 M- N" c9 L9 |# f; lThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
2 k- |; Y5 ]0 ^/ m; P& e+ V; `. v: L4 mFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
5 s* [! m2 [% _  ]7 r; V/ w, QBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
' U: Z& @' E7 J# {: r2 LIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
1 S) y% ^' r# V% t  UBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 u  r7 O" `+ y2 u; p% U3 M: oEntrust my love within your heart
9 K1 t1 p$ J1 R8 K6 y/ J7 lLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
4 x" E5 e/ S- K: `* v' rI want to confess that I love you,
+ ^3 l. S# w3 u6 T1 nBut I never did
9 b$ ]4 x! o) p! X) |6 X6 H, b% J6 dOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
5 U/ V! l1 P8 ZI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 A6 X8 z) i* T& Z! x  dCan I entrust it to you?
+ r7 E  |3 k( i; A6 ?7 BEntrust my love within your heart
" u5 W4 J. o# k, t- qCan I entrust it to you?
7 M; r. I+ M$ h( ?Entrust my love within your heart

- o2 q& B- k1 G9 }[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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4 }3 l) Y0 F2 I! |+ r! i3 t: R; J<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
- J' u  y/ q* ^& T; Z+ n<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
; |+ M+ s# P' d. e2 C' Y4 c7 D6 @<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
7 k  y2 e/ C2 [; ?4 C<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
8 j5 Z4 h$ M2 r& ^" U( V<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
/ p% |( @1 h2 @0 O  {<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
" s# l' E: ?1 K" v<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
) A3 r0 v7 q) I. l/ i<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
0 N' X3 t' V3 v( ~: M5 g<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
/ \- T) l3 b( U<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
& D5 h$ H2 L+ F# X& F$ j<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
5 ~! O8 l5 Y% L. ]" P3 C<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ P) R& i' {  x' {% Y  q* U<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ v+ A1 ~: k; y" \" y) H& \<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 p3 H. ^" f, b" X( [<P>Love… just the word love </P>
, j5 Y- n# {; J<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
4 l7 F! j  k5 `+ N9 }/ U9 \7 Q<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 R! J8 V* _7 X: f% {% J<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
4 |. h3 S* i) H<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
" R. G3 Q" C* k! z) d( O<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* B% Z$ @$ u* V7 ]8 }<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
/ o7 k( x2 x8 _- g; U<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  q* a' A% W/ R; Y<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( h: Q; q% u* ~: c+ K' i' J<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" A( j/ E/ l" ^! n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' C9 v& s3 f/ x3 X! s3 ~6 ~<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* |# F$ O0 ~( N9 P9 G<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
' e1 A3 \. o- K3 s# E<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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  r  x: i! @- b. I这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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) k6 v( O! E5 t6 I. Z<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>