【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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  s) w9 o7 J  H9 |* R4 G我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
6 m6 r% m2 {$ aThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
' ^) m  p0 N/ l6 }; ]6 SFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
" ]0 ~' Z0 H2 I8 oIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
) |& X6 ~+ f, H# f# H* `7 `Love… just the word love
9 V0 E# T$ P- F4 X2 C  i" ]Why is it so difficult to express?
" D* @6 s1 b/ A! D" II want to confess that I love you,
6 `$ I: S& `; l1 d) `% \But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 E4 V: s2 q! @0 ~. w# mIf today isn’t too late,
* P8 l, R8 ~" ?7 eI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 C0 q6 e6 n+ t* q" kCan I entrust it to you?
8 c1 a. B3 D$ i+ y  y0 g$ \9 }1 vEntrust my love within your heart
. M2 |9 C( h5 \" Q$ Z3 @+ {4 fLove… just the word love
6 C4 v6 c; ]* ]0 G5 K: @  OWhy is it so difficult to express?
2 y! V3 m8 C0 k+ tI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% Q+ R# ^: n  ]& r( H& K+ y; V4 pIf today isn’t too late,
- R5 ^) W1 v; Z+ M( m9 s; DI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 p4 |2 _  s. R) ?I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
: k5 c2 d0 p2 p1 q& O$ NEntrust my love within your heart
7 x: Q5 T! \7 U$ T' q5 N$ N# ~Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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' n5 h  k% b- D# U3 B4 G% A* I[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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* r" h$ R+ E  d<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% @' b2 G: G3 M. L  {<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
; P6 S1 \/ A* t9 ~) U7 x# k4 K<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
( C7 q* ~; k0 m  `. W: w! d6 H<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
& J+ X; |7 C" w8 I<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
, O  t) {+ X4 W, _# p4 d<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
5 m, x; d& h' W$ N<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
) J& l. [6 l! @' z, n" m) G5 e<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
4 s; i+ }+ x& g<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
- o8 J! G! _9 l" z" C<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% E7 r% v$ r2 I  r6 R+ B+ B<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 v8 [- B2 }3 F$ J<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 d0 ^9 k! W7 C: H<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 |: l8 c  ^" n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 l: t- q& k% u+ {$ s<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- u% H' U. v; q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ k: c4 H5 W% q* o# i<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
8 Q3 D7 l7 i7 y<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  @9 R) x/ x* V7 v<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
# D1 f/ R% L* j# L; q: G' N<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
$ p2 Y/ ^- C* W1 g<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ U* U3 n2 x: r* t1 t! g  l2 h7 f<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- w& w; g& E0 J. o" ]7 d' _. e- c<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ ?& V7 i7 E1 f" e: B<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; b! t7 C0 f7 J" n# l+ q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
3 u* F3 N8 R, o& I<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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" n; `8 V1 c3 ^8 W( t5 b% W0 B 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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% F8 K) ^# a0 i4 e3 l这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 h- m" G$ B+ p" D/ l3 s- y<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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; H- _$ F5 i: w2 Z% y" n5 [<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>