【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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2 k9 L* H! c) {0 J) }% z我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
- {2 a* c' c! S8 }7 Y* SThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
9 a6 Q2 }' o  F+ `, ~( C: BWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
" s$ q3 h) y( l) |( n; ?% hBut I never did
! w4 G2 x9 ]5 a2 ~' S5 ?; LOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' Y6 O9 p& V" Z" t- }) gI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; X+ F' @- O2 O8 X9 r5 u. oEntrust my love within your heart
3 k( R1 T. ?$ |9 kLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
/ ^$ m- a: Q; S, h. A/ O. X4 wBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
1 _2 i+ N, W2 S7 v. J7 vI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
- ^) ~  c# w; X# QEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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2 S; i& p: T( c8 \<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
+ o4 x. _8 i7 ?- H- h5 c<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
4 E5 o3 O8 R3 h, P. H<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
0 l+ j. N" B( J" m; d<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
8 E5 w% b$ Z4 [2 }  |<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
3 q2 c0 C  L+ Q( G4 B" ?) G3 Q5 V<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
( c/ c: z/ ~6 D% x<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
* p1 @+ G* p- o<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
7 X* @/ \2 V5 Q0 ?& Z, |<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
4 S4 h& u7 Q( p1 }  l<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ G  w0 q' P5 x0 b, C' C<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 O* e" u9 W& y4 Y- y2 w6 q<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! k. f. K2 D  e$ P7 h<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 ?5 v1 o, h) ?- l, S7 q7 P8 i" G<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
7 o5 o, j7 }% \3 r; U* @+ r* l<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
+ [8 P% z2 U: j2 n0 d3 ?# ~: K, M<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  u( \8 Z  N1 t$ F<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
. J& d1 y, J: f0 E3 y- B5 K<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- S+ L' V1 {6 ]( M<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
. R8 Y* }: ]' Z. A# l<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% I8 s4 s. K0 {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
2 d( {  T7 g6 G# {<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
, F# y3 Z: V7 T( K; Y2 Q% I* D4 p<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

5 x( R# T, q5 B! e& a, ^2 z 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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: O/ h6 x; v$ W# Z这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>