【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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# N! d( D$ b* ?7 N0 S+ w0 c<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODYzNzI=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>
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; x: }6 V9 U- p3 p8 L* |. J, w6 O我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
7 I$ F* n2 R9 c+ I/ D1 X9 NThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
* J# e* T, T' v/ ?" sFrom the first moment we met,
+ P9 Z( f. m  _I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
& L7 f: Y: m. e# H0 i* QIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
& |3 o! x8 c4 A. }Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
) s0 _, H' l2 O7 d% cI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
3 ~" T2 s! n# _: t% h+ {: f' vOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ }5 m5 w2 w) W" I! WIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ M# p( f: T- Z/ [Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
& x; F+ E' G- n( u- T) X) {I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
% _( H6 Q: B. v6 k2 qI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
( j$ G$ q& z0 D9 x5 TCan I entrust it to you?
+ p  K& Y% c+ T4 K/ D' q% sEntrust my love within your heart

' P0 ]) P/ F* X' k[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
2 d% ^' A3 X8 e, |1 [  G<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
7 C  ?, \1 x  d  d/ D<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
: m5 f, _5 \( H  V<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
9 L6 ^# ], ~7 q1 G& `1 E<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
2 F. i( Q* J6 E, m1 g) S<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
  |5 {) u- ?9 K* m<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
6 L: Z1 [$ x% G. ~) O<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
* z# P# N" |. d; z1 y# f' o<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
; `, L9 D9 t- {$ I4 f% ~6 n, A<P>但我不会</P>
4 p6 l( f* n$ u; V( k* h4 K. y<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
, g# Q) d9 k( L0 @<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ p# B* g, H3 T" q9 g2 [- f# d<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 K  d; @* L  \" _7 e) E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
+ k1 D6 c1 k+ A; K" l2 X0 F<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
' ~. p- p1 Z9 |<P>But I never did </P>
, w' [$ T5 z7 M7 e<P>但我不会 </P>
" T* V: ]9 z8 R1 D1 d<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# A3 R8 E! f, n: R$ r7 M$ X<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
, f8 O) y3 `* N3 F! F8 ~<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 F/ \2 ?) d3 ~<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% O6 Z+ S' O+ T- v' l<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 Z+ E( [+ k& V7 L6 N, ]# x<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 L4 n6 s/ H& G$ m! ]<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& L4 f4 J( A% d( }4 ~0 \% _<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
' u+ Q9 `% r/ s+ f5 f<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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' P0 H6 U# D5 B0 q这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; s% J( L2 o! i; L* l. L<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>