【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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9 ]+ M: G) t$ j1 p4 w7 ?( b我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
: N) K5 Z5 e3 ], N! g  SFrom the first moment we met,
, t  g( t# F& C7 g& {. V) jI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
! ^" d) }6 Z% {7 U  X0 kBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
( I  k/ @, n1 |1 hWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* b! w! g8 Z! ^; i6 m7 wI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
3 j  b: \; C  i! uLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
) w, f( g: {- F1 BI want to confess that I love you,
1 _( `% Y. @( n1 ~$ `But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" t1 _9 s0 K1 H( @. O6 L6 }, RIf today isn’t too late,
% v7 t: W# I1 d5 l; A6 {" tI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 q8 j/ p( J* yI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
$ L( ]7 M% T! \3 x! {% {) T, h3 PEntrust my love within your heart
% P! z" {: R3 r3 x( v% Q# E+ yCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

4 T" [/ m  }3 n[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

8 d5 i6 w8 s# X1 z<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
5 C/ Y! j( m4 D<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
6 `% |3 `6 x4 C- }* v' b. ~" B<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
; h# }  S) n+ b' H% P- C<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
! Y4 }7 L( ^! s$ X<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
3 C' |2 _6 O9 `8 `: Z7 W<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
* \! m) v. l% c. l! A<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
# U) t) S. e/ D. v) w' {5 s<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
' R8 C( _: E# Y- C+ r<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
, U% r; \2 ]! `" {9 ^7 C<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
" I$ S6 ^# V9 _8 ]1 L0 \8 W<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
! t( F1 ?  Z5 Q0 e0 A<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 Z8 C3 w2 l6 Y1 u, ?- s0 G3 _2 X$ ^. M<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
& p# W( [! j& i7 n<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ O$ D$ j' U: U% ?$ P# o4 ^<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 U( c6 }* w5 o& ]) b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( ?6 x9 G7 y$ V; b7 F<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( Y5 S1 g- C9 W4 d0 ?! P" B<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
' ^$ K- ]2 w+ \& f$ ]<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, A# }/ V2 A. @) r( ~# v<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
" i3 h/ Y! u. ]) C+ ?<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
3 S! |0 w: G8 f5 k: S: r<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' C  C" H+ }$ G. f5 P<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ x: \$ C+ r/ O; a2 h<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: E1 x0 v; y1 K<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ l6 u. r" A: I! G' o4 D! r" s<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ A, Q3 S% S; }0 k$ q2 B. E  _<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 ]% }/ p" h2 i; [<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
& U5 m1 @/ O2 ?  c+ n4 O0 u<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
/ h+ N5 E& L: q- v. v: r
& w4 B* f" L: [% F这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
. S% h9 U2 V( b' }
8 ~7 P+ D8 p0 I& N这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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( K2 `4 w4 h* O<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% r& a7 {" q; n<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>