【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
, @# _9 R  J7 {2 T6 LThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
# r+ v  U2 k) e& i5 Y! v0 WFrom the first moment we met,
2 T' W" x, x0 u2 WI already loved you with all my heart
7 O  C# X+ s2 d0 P$ ~( gWe meet and talk everyday,
4 e5 A0 V( l* A+ o, j& d6 x0 \0 PBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
; K. O$ Z% f, [5 aI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
: O: Y& D& W6 m0 N1 ^% Z7 kOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 {' X8 M3 i: T8 C0 r) rIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
, P+ s6 R5 N# w  u9 bLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
3 G) r# ~: k0 h; dBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* s; J/ V7 L: m1 g. Y& gIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 |. i& Q+ `( x- G' e& F, [! O1 II don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! F$ N8 F8 n' BCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
- a- D. o) Q9 {8 ~; Q$ f) i0 s5 jEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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% s3 h  V3 v3 s# ]2 i+ ]5 B3 f6 Q<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
. V" J' n% ~4 b  c/ T, T<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
7 I" B1 x& A5 |+ ?" y+ V<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
* Y1 z; Q3 {1 k6 T5 O9 ?/ Q<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
% C* A, l* f+ \1 M( i6 S# V. G! V<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
) T  l8 O! I9 A( f9 ~& _" J2 W# q: o<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
& H1 A; _% l8 C. p<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
! Y" N5 h: T# r5 ?9 K  P<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
# Q3 G( @; U9 ?$ L<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
/ ]% c% W( s3 S0 v7 [$ |- {<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. W. B1 I, h& P) U) C<P>我想说我爱你</P>
+ M; V* @- @* }6 L) L- I* [<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
5 L* g" Q, g5 O* F3 z<P>但我不会</P>
! ?% F4 K& F& d* G# Z% X6 |<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
5 H  e' }" S2 X- v- V+ H<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' ]; f+ |+ a) r4 N/ ~<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 A0 S$ K- X8 {- _<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( |, b7 T) G% Z3 `<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
# v4 K& ]( a5 y<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
: _" u2 P) N1 j9 v$ R<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
$ a3 o7 D# `6 I9 G<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 H' o: |7 C4 a<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& k3 L* u+ Z" `+ A<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) J3 T: `: w/ C7 g8 m& e5 t<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- X6 z2 U  ]  u; l4 L! a<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% t1 z" o# U& C+ O: E( F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 a! ~5 G3 n1 Q. M- H<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
# r7 N* w6 N4 [, e  D% _* }<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

6 w( k0 @# ?+ P+ s4 d这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" Q# d6 a) f) G' g6 ]7 A# _<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 U6 t9 X9 N  S) S) a4 l<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>