【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 g2 |% B/ H' _+ [When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ q. I0 k, T+ S1 N; tThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ v8 H5 e2 f- I0 FMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 f. D% F$ Y' \Every other word you utter is love
. x+ o  {" f/ h0 D4 I( jI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( @  O; t8 L& gNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( ?2 G- R- f& x! R( rI regret not dying
9 n8 ]% @4 p& G* y6 |# PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ v1 e, a/ T' b: ~, C: jYour speech can’t even keep up with it
( \  g& G; ~3 }7 ]4 ]' n) eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, C$ \7 ^' X* }Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 Q1 j% {# N: D9 l6 {<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 O8 t, g0 ^% i9 ^<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 k. c+ V1 K( A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 w0 t5 R! N+ `4 \<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; W* v5 G, ?3 h5 _  r4 F, v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" G1 B- q9 ?2 J' ], P  Q) r<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! ]% J! }6 @$ m+ b" F<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; P& t) `2 I8 i, B<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ Q/ a# l% V# j! p2 o6 C3 @' T<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 q3 ~+ d! ^8 q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# Y5 Q0 b8 v/ K/ I<P>你无需担心</P>
$ z( ~3 Y; K0 c; N<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, W; l6 C0 ~/ {1 y! Q0 B<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- j8 Q( \1 x- [! d& e/ g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! }5 E( @! y5 x& r, Y' n<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 R8 W5 V; N! n7 d( o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: T- S6 K7 A/ M7 \5 y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 _/ X5 A" C/ U2 ~<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 P& F& q! ^5 M1 ^# ^<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 @/ V& V1 Q; X<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 f/ M1 i/ g; ~4 H& Y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( ?9 F$ W- O6 w+ O2 {<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' B4 F9 z) G" V8 F0 b<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 M9 D+ @/ y$ r4 a7 p1 Q# m& v/ l! S8 x<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! ^9 v" r9 I- |9 x3 U/ [' n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' \- U7 D4 S6 W# t# [; @- _<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 y3 ?! S% V7 D( }* ^0 l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 c# ]& m5 D" z' ^' R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: @$ H' J; @- `! b8 j<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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0 K9 N8 {  J) V1 ~" h$ L9 M6 I4 I我请你剖开它
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. A' o4 x7 O+ D% V 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 f: j. I+ Q* z: ]% N! F# e. h<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>