【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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  h3 c; W3 w- u; a( w! U歌词我附在后面。
" ~3 Z1 F1 f$ e# {2 u( F/ S1 BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
; y: {; t" s0 N! z& k, Y) \Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ @( F) |; I+ y' J$ ~4 x7 MThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ Z9 P9 F2 ?/ |3 t7 N  Q' x( eWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& W+ Y4 @. ~% p/ Q! RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
+ }, ~  q+ S; x& v7 _! N9 D" J& `. ZMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  [! r6 \: k) V; dEvery other word you utter is love
5 Y* v9 {* h8 S7 vI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- G7 e8 x0 e( u8 K/ k( f" M# u' gThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 m4 l3 o+ q, ]5 sI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; |% _! |$ W: p3 OWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! C2 i1 s3 k& W& r# B# P% CIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ w& {, P$ ]2 ZRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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  X' L, A" n+ X$ N/ r$ H<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 {( X! n3 t5 s<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! Y9 m6 Y0 C. Q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" [3 R0 E0 M6 C<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 `4 Z3 ?& ]$ p) U, t9 S<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( u4 H% l2 W) m& c0 `# h<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; j* H) l; N. {8 ^0 I! k<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 i# z. Y& i# Q2 C" K# Z0 o) n<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  V' X1 T% H2 A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- I( U% [: h; R) ^' |<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& R% ?( [. h% x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 \3 w6 b3 O; I4 J- Z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  x+ X* y# Y, t. }; g- }<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. S+ I6 n5 R) T; C' s- Q3 Y1 o0 B. y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ k( |# a; }: n, ^8 L<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# f/ P7 v. _0 M1 Q5 n: I<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% w, y7 k4 j& |4 ?; H  _<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ \1 `" M4 W/ k( N2 m$ Y9 a5 r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 e* \# K) x8 d8 z' F<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) |/ N6 N( f$ n' L<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ b6 t2 q  y, ?# J8 u1 ~) ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* h, L6 u+ D/ k: `# ^; W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 ?( d0 q* I: y0 D0 [- R<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ V' u" t1 p+ _; R* P) |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% p9 Y; g  E+ x' L: B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ }8 }# w" h  Y; F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( a- y. ~. h: \  f3 Y5 L<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 Z; r; K$ W. i/ Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( X/ T+ l& h7 o# p4 o6 w<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 G! ~" a0 t) ]$ U. `2 E$ ^0 `- d, D<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* f6 K. K. F4 C( x) S& A, g<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: v$ F6 c) ?- k<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! z4 b3 X  s& B( I$ B4 {. s<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ b: _6 Q) W1 |- w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( h2 ]/ t  {  X6 l<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* q; A9 l+ @, q+ i, i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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) i+ Q; o% u5 B3 n! a/ _  K8 I我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; J( M1 _# m+ |5 X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>