【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
* d1 d0 X+ G, M( ]The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 c5 w7 K; n% b7 s& LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# k7 ], ^) c" o" s+ jThe sky is happy down to its soul
  x; ?, J* v, r; }0 kWith the moon kissing it every night
  o+ `! w8 B5 d* A. h8 b- s7 aSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% d9 b$ s+ L8 u6 {5 ~I love you I love you with all my heart
5 S' e* H) g$ N5 n9 w) p# BNothing can compare to my love
5 l' T' K2 t0 x3 Z' H7 GCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 f" s. y. I0 F; n- |I’m still filled with fear
: i7 a: w: g! lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# s1 \+ A) @# {& N: u; P, ?I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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5 \5 ?4 D6 G5 j<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 f3 t- B7 F$ t) }<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ K5 s8 k- [. z. W9 e7 F+ `<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 W3 w" g: i( ~* d8 o4 x<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) O* B& i9 G6 x0 V6 m' u# t; b; {3 Z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 |* W8 k- v7 j5 K# ]& L9 o<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% u8 d8 d. c' _* [<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ y: y: f" Q1 B% |, C6 q' Q! ~<P>你无需担心</P>
; r6 M' z4 o5 d1 }' s$ y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( r" t4 m0 C! b  I2 }8 d5 m8 `<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 E4 ~8 B4 z% r2 }* d: H5 n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 M  [: `' Y/ {' F+ Q6 z9 m; ?" }<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 `' N# _4 ^$ m5 i) V<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! U$ M' d0 Z4 y% ^$ X1 l<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# P0 V8 |; _/ D0 [<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: U7 A) I* J  R3 n$ ]3 o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( `. |  H7 U* `$ c$ I0 B  y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 M$ \5 W6 J( p0 i; O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( J7 ]. Z) j! `9 }9 `0 p% ^<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" U3 O' C1 T* ~/ Q5 i8 m. w<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! e( K; K8 t  t% C1 }" C1 C<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ K% q- T* ?$ U" o- }# L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 ^/ ~; i/ }. ^9 U% Z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
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+ J9 G/ J4 n* o$ `( a$ }<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ s+ u( Y; E: S<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ C% w& d$ h4 n) k! X<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 _: O3 `) f5 T7 m: c7 V: ?<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, W% P* y' s# n2 @<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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! b. B/ M+ O8 k 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. N/ V0 {' Q8 M<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>