【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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. @$ v6 r9 s7 O* rThe moonlight is shining brightly,
; E# B7 j6 k+ `( h7 N* |! P5 _9 yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# M$ ?4 Q! w2 t9 u3 eThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( w& v- N+ \4 r& p, o7 m/ S$ EIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 u. a8 c+ e0 P  Y: m  dI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) u/ C/ g! B" P" c! n7 cThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, d9 ?* a# A* F% z7 YI’m still filled with fear
' y& h# ]3 V8 n) p) rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! y4 Y& \* [5 p* a2 D) A9 LI regret not dying
0 k" u* i) Y' v# x- ^, T* QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
8 A$ R/ K1 @, d% iIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 n& H1 m1 L- L4 `! F9 ^: f, Z3 ?0 z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 o% G; Z. X& Q% [% E5 @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 l0 h8 Q5 `/ |9 V& U) X0 A( g<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' _8 O8 L$ r) }<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. E0 ?2 R; L' C3 \' m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! {4 J1 |* W4 H7 n# @0 @% a<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 X! J8 L" r5 Y" @* {. H$ C<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 I# t" ?0 j4 F# P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 c6 c' U) K# @' C6 w( ~, r. A<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 f+ L" x. e9 V% {4 y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  A# c$ T8 ^7 _  N: B& I* d2 v$ M<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# r5 V  f. S9 Y$ y" u4 C<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 [: r! l4 z: L% |1 N: y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 }: \8 q# N( ]7 M1 b5 X4 L<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; ^% p5 s3 W" e" l<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! e2 e2 M2 l5 |! h* G$ R2 [# X<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 h  S7 ~( S; f( Y' s. i5 @% E<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 M2 k& z# ]2 _* J4 x. m4 I<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 j6 X0 _1 @$ W! ]/ T. W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' z- e* b% J0 H9 o<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 o! z5 M9 j7 l+ ]7 A4 w<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ G; |8 p, W2 G9 I% ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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" i) @3 u0 k! w& O2 i0 a5 X' V 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 q1 V1 u9 c, ~2 e$ b' S/ v<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>