【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
% q& J1 ?: o7 @; p  d# FMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ M( P  X9 K' m4 \% u. L- \) T4 GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 ~$ V' @7 L' b! r  @  tWith the moon kissing it every night
. n. M9 x& h' ?' x( RSeeing the sky content with its love
: n3 R4 g# y7 J% mIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
1 e. y% C/ f. H  h; @/ xMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 W  [& N- q* H" w& z& YEvery other word you utter is love
  s7 k4 ?, {: M6 w4 i1 cI really want to know just how much you love me
5 x1 ?; T3 l& j! f4 AI love you I love you with all my heart
3 Y, c7 j7 d3 [6 }) Y8 iNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& G, O4 |7 W& ?6 X. o. WThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, l) u* N4 C1 M3 V7 pI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 g1 F6 R1 J) Q( F+ g) k, MI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 y4 b% E$ g7 I8 ^( nYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ s6 t0 o2 [5 b/ n* j* h# ORambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 m, F6 n5 m, A4 K* a8 K- O<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 [- _6 H( V$ i9 i6 Z4 c<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 R/ K! D8 s1 p& t/ t<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 j7 a* S3 T# h+ r) c<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# _0 I; q# x0 O<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ x$ r; x# R) R  U<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* _* z, `) V. I0 z3 {<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 [1 ]- D; ~5 K4 L<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( H5 Z' G0 Z, a<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ F* n; y7 }; C& J2 I7 [) K7 j% I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 ^8 Z# {6 m3 G8 {1 k+ I% }<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ {5 z1 {1 z8 a  Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' Z* m7 G  a. ~( G! ^( K<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: B2 |; S$ x  j+ N8 N; j<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 X4 r3 B  i$ w& F<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( _- K9 v- I3 s, G7 y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 q% }$ N1 q9 x( O: ]  Z% f% S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! O3 u+ @1 Z& {+ a* Q8 g<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% ]" M0 H2 ^9 N5 B) \/ e<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' l4 h1 y/ _% w<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. e; q9 Q+ x3 T  y0 e<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 S, w2 Q3 H1 ]; R: h<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* s% l$ E7 c  }<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& o# u  a2 E6 f0 j% k5 f<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ \! E3 o4 _2 l# i: m<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* F7 O) b* l  E$ z& J: P) u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 p3 y9 ~+ \7 M/ H) W, ]<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, n$ D/ f( _- g+ X7 }<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 c3 \$ Z$ I5 w8 d: d! H2 [9 \% Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>