【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
; j, V2 r( d' Y5 U. {/ w3 |# ]From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
! a1 J* p9 ]4 ?( O" s/ KWe meet and talk everyday,
9 K3 {2 X; }1 Z! l5 |But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
- a" f" H6 `" Y# S+ @If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
; q' I( z1 v6 N# @: N1 Q& {& JWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
2 ~0 ]6 g% R+ BI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
# q0 c. F7 M) E6 p0 k/ r6 e  iLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
0 Y/ g) H9 n* \9 s5 GBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 |, O1 c3 V, a4 N# B; \- _% [/ cI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 s) p: v; B& g' mCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
; P4 @& @9 H7 S# F& |) nCan I entrust it to you?
) w6 M. o# u4 K- `) @# y$ zEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
- t3 a1 ~2 ~2 z7 A. C7 x<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
6 z) b+ a6 M* H' Y- \+ ^) m+ \<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
; v- y, P' p, C9 W  K/ @+ L. o<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
1 E. z0 N8 y3 k. V" y) _: K<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
7 U" l" q; `8 s, O  p9 C<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
1 u% W/ s3 b! b0 T. o<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
2 t; L/ V; ~+ {' X) [<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
5 D8 l, T2 A% U+ X<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
8 u8 E7 ^- N- k: v  ^9 W: f<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. q1 a4 y: M. m<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
" k$ R2 \  h9 g<P>但我不会</P>
# {- n$ z( l% v<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
- x; F, P, k7 U" y1 o: S<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
" J, p7 W- d' @: t! D<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
) O- b, Z3 G4 [. R* ^<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
4 i2 `- }3 Y8 k0 I8 [5 E<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 B  p0 |0 D1 c8 O& \+ ^7 N<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# F" {4 Q, n) M! a5 I& `<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, U& P! j& H4 L) y& i  D<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! `9 l1 q8 q9 u& c5 n6 |<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
# H$ \9 F% m( W) w# ~8 E<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
0 S8 f4 `& k4 Q: a! Z$ D<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
" x& n: M7 \& Z, _- Z1 _9 {<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' S  R$ }. X- X/ L1 z( k8 [# i<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
) A3 r3 b! c+ e7 U<P>But I never did </P>
0 O- A6 b3 T0 T7 f) o<P>但我不会 </P>
: M! F: ]& r* h3 M/ L<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
3 _( G# F: s% r: k2 C! A3 E<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. ?3 o+ S/ E3 L) D<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 Z* s1 {( g( }9 W' p) z! l" V<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& q* [4 O* i% X. ^/ i<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 D5 ?) D3 {8 T) Z# B! H% E<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 D* w8 {# v: d, W( {, D9 k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
  e' P5 A' B2 T5 X7 L<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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7 `# k& s! y. w1 f这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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$ f" k. J/ ~+ v7 C<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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& p. P) x. `" Q<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>