【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
& A! e9 ~- M1 J1 |1 g3 MThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
2 M& L& S( e, x$ ?6 h& YI already loved you with all my heart
0 ?* m; k2 V8 I  N8 i5 P+ J! ZWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
* s9 D) {' v& p# W% R% OI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
1 Z' B1 S2 {# B: _, d8 n+ uWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
/ ?8 K6 t7 X. [9 F3 yOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 n, d# D4 `$ o& cIf today isn’t too late,
' M1 m, N. X% r/ P* s7 a# g2 A: XI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 L2 C0 }8 ]- W% r6 |% P+ h. h: sI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
$ e7 x. \4 W) TI want to confess that I love you,
; k! S( s; |( A2 U% GBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 B- ~0 M' N0 y# N8 E+ zIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. F0 E4 S5 _" x' n% `* M7 JCan I entrust it to you?
2 d* [- N5 v: JEntrust my love within your heart
3 V" d6 m# Z6 v$ ^Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

# M' T4 d/ u/ S$ X% U<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
2 m. v5 S# O: s2 N/ x/ s6 g<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
; E6 `" @) c7 |6 A2 F; Q( B<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
: J7 G( t. \2 E# q<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
) C* p' }: u( r; ^<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
$ w+ J2 [% C9 l( w$ Y<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
8 P3 n9 d% I4 W( S<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
+ s1 I3 E$ `8 t" T: i# \; n<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
( q5 m4 t% V7 t; J<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
6 l+ Z$ ^1 m& d1 d<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
- \* @2 v. ?, Y4 s& x' M% z' X<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
5 K- F9 S# ^. f8 h; j% F<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
5 L( Q' g, P. Y5 V" ^- m( _: `<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
0 T% N; ?0 ]; k* e+ \# R0 X# f<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
  |1 Z3 S1 A; q<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
0 x3 I- e! O1 F, @<P>但我不会</P>
8 n1 d! d$ i& Q0 K& K<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 o6 e# [; E1 B: v- J/ @0 {<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
0 y* E( l* Q% J! @4 F/ c<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 l8 z, j  z  F2 {$ d) g<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( w/ Y( R8 {# [' r8 |<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! q/ F' J9 }) h$ o% M" K4 U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
* N" G7 V( w/ f% B6 a. V# U<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% f6 W3 m" d( N<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 Q9 w+ j+ X% d" c7 r& [<P>Love… just the word love </P>
) ?; g3 {! ]5 D4 @. P5 K/ m0 K<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
' `( z0 a; S2 b" z. F0 A<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
1 a3 j  k% |/ o' B7 M4 o! {<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
' M: V5 s- j- R5 a" ~<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
# Z2 _. b, J) M<P>但我不会 </P>
- ^$ g) x. P! B: n: W# s, [<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
- J6 t6 ?6 w+ u: x) t<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  ]: c$ a& r( T% u( i, {' ^' d. E% e<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ q' v3 q3 r! |. [% h, @% q9 v: F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 K# o; a& G9 |<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 g. M) w( h: D2 m- c<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

- S4 v: Q! [4 W2 G这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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" T3 k, U# M$ p) I, v<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>