【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
8 y7 X( s0 Z- EThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
4 P/ I' @6 i4 q4 f1 U. _8 @I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
" E" |# x! {" g; c4 CI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) n! y) p8 s6 B& H* i2 |' R! EI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
0 N0 }; I) X% r6 Y+ I4 T6 gEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
1 w9 b2 l9 ~! t& O. V" t) P7 mBut I never did
8 r) _" C, p! G1 N! c  |One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
7 V9 I0 b! v8 O* AI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 x; O7 Y8 h; B+ \. O0 NCan I entrust it to you?
" w. R2 w$ Y* u' k5 v" F4 y+ OEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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$ E7 b2 B) z+ Y[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
7 ?3 Z) c4 `' W4 _, l<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
( }' x2 X% @3 }% u<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
# T& l% U5 L4 ]) V( L! O<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
! }" W9 ~. `# t, n<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
. i6 R5 g( J0 W9 Q* ~! ~- [<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
+ J0 {2 g$ r/ O  O  C* k<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
5 E. k5 C5 }& f, I" l; z<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
5 w7 @/ p5 [" A! H<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
5 V% h: f# T4 v+ k5 ?, s<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
! D" L0 F0 ], u5 f<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 H& W- ]' i$ ?% V<P>我想说我爱你</P>
: }6 |+ n( m8 X# n: v<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
4 _) E, U1 T% m3 L* f9 e<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 d$ I6 N5 v; ~: N; p. s% c) |<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
- d( V7 V# Z! n: B9 e$ Y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, d# M7 Y- _" O% K2 c( K6 Y% C<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ _) w2 m: l3 @<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) Q  W* u9 {# r<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( k* q, i- V& F) _4 q' W7 ~<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. J/ b4 s6 _3 J4 J  i" n$ u( c4 a<P>Love… just the word love </P>
: @* B9 N, _7 r# L5 d<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
' G  ~) w3 \8 |3 @5 g8 C<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
6 v  e0 L6 A: p% S; o<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) K3 @2 U" U4 u8 A8 ]. D" Z0 j<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
% v& o, _* N! U: z- o* G0 Q: o; P<P>But I never did </P>
$ }  C# @7 e$ D, \, f3 M% U<P>但我不会 </P>
: j$ A4 O9 U9 S<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
  o6 j  b7 I# T<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 I4 v7 f* U+ x8 ?% F4 U<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- b4 L/ }$ X; |9 T6 m<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, Q# \. H- e, J<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* t$ N  p/ c% z0 f1 U+ U<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

  }% k2 ]* C+ ~3 J& e& x) }这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>