【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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! ~& `0 v) }2 S6 h, F. l3 ]我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
- R$ T. ?8 x& M4 e0 p$ P( LThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
* M0 d& o1 ?6 m# v9 G+ N% IFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
7 _+ ^4 p. ]1 |4 ?6 q+ [, AWe meet and talk everyday,
. G, k# q+ n  y* l; f% R8 pBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
: V) w: b0 k' F; f$ b% `If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
% a) X  q" n8 M9 b$ j1 \2 kOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  H" R* t0 `$ |- C8 [# _: IIf today isn’t too late,
# [7 q6 ~1 k- z# lI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
3 s6 S# x) @: s9 q* KEntrust my love within your heart
2 \/ S' x/ N+ M$ s4 J4 B4 \8 ^Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
( ?3 h$ n2 V/ d$ A, lOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 w7 X+ H/ n# O9 n5 C, iI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
" ^0 `1 P4 D* _Entrust my love within your heart
' l- V5 A( E  P3 DCan I entrust it to you?
. }+ U+ S- V2 n% Z, rEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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3 ?% _# f- J1 {6 J<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
& H2 }/ _6 X. K/ j6 v<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
/ v* W7 @5 v6 K<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
2 P9 f& u; a. D, m2 {/ F  B, f. O<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
4 I" Y1 n- z& O3 X<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
! M: ~/ P* F& p' h2 A& X# M' M<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
8 j1 I8 X. K# w7 O+ T<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
: B! T; j0 }9 p7 H3 }' p. g9 Y' y( n<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
& }1 t" W  c2 q8 {<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
1 ^: \9 z4 ^1 r' T" E! \. d<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
5 r0 X5 Q  i9 v5 H) {<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" g/ g3 o- l# K<P>我想说我爱你</P>
4 p) q6 W# W) X! C" d! Q2 g! ?) y<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
) U. F0 P6 J8 s' Q<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
- Y, o0 E/ \! T- w<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ R7 B2 P- }) h0 _( x<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ s6 c+ j4 e: u. K3 p<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- X! k0 y2 \# y6 L& ~. F( R, e<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
  w! m: `8 x4 _. s<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
5 J; Q' L, |8 c  h<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
1 W0 Z0 r$ H$ }1 ~7 {; k& U5 v<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
8 x' Q. E1 M& {7 V1 s, J; J<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
5 V( j% `. ^! r" Z$ L<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
+ d* [3 h+ j. k5 P+ ?<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 ~$ m% {# T' D" ^$ o' z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  y# o8 ]0 z# X5 x- u( F' T+ ^<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* b' B8 s5 w4 o: R& g) n<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 M! c! W1 }/ S3 Q/ t0 [, z  h% K<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* O' Y- n6 ]+ ^. T% ?; j5 v<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
. V# ]4 r+ I. e<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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. T, w( P9 D" U) c) Q" u( B. b这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>