【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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( z( y3 i, k: P4 p0 a  u我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
& K" Z$ q8 P# F7 d5 TThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
8 l; `( U. D$ p3 D/ d" JI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
+ h1 ]; I! B" @! q. W. ?But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
. G# c! y% g8 X' G7 ?0 YIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
0 p7 [; J+ o5 M6 g; e  gLove… just the word love
7 e  k) x+ w; u: EWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
4 v% m& \1 K* H7 R) \One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( A6 R' B; j: x* gCan I entrust it to you?
3 ]" f% U9 ?3 a5 t6 {" w8 AEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
  x# b$ z% G  n+ W( ?, G/ ZI want to confess that I love you,
6 H3 x/ U" s8 BBut I never did
: W4 H$ C3 c) D; H& F5 g' ~: SOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! n( w# R1 _2 f8 Q$ h5 pIf today isn’t too late,
4 i6 W+ j6 y+ h  e5 B* z+ ^' \I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ y) l4 N( J+ Q* q; z2 O7 R* X/ HI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, l- ?$ H* V* ?* G% M$ s6 sCan I entrust it to you?
5 P. e/ q# n2 Y( T/ o! u* V' }% @8 J+ b8 jEntrust my love within your heart
/ s5 p: [* T, k2 Y* P; h% dCan I entrust it to you?
; w7 z5 r$ [$ W) b' m8 Z' f" nEntrust my love within your heart

% Y/ Y& `" R% E$ Y7 ?; I( Y( m[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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9 ^1 [! g5 m; m- V2 s9 ^<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
: j: \3 n1 j6 @<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
) Y2 }6 R3 [, n  J" c<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
. Y3 c1 J# R" F<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
7 w- z) I/ D5 f/ W% S% F& y1 I* p<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
8 }3 G- J9 _) }7 X' H* l<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
, t* h6 l' P" x1 {) k<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
  n* G3 J$ G7 q" U% `. Q<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
" B5 E* m  d4 \; {9 W  q<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
3 ^, S8 _. q! T<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
1 E. O, X' T3 K$ Q& l: c<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
: D5 u  p9 V! }! m/ z' d# ]<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
; B: b; v+ ]8 v8 F, p% Y; C<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# h" g  _2 o+ P0 Q# G  A<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) {; b1 w1 K/ U- f4 o<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' {$ L* f6 J: f: K0 e<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 d5 D" O- r9 e& z8 U<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ g: S. @3 L, z# A1 s<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 o( Q! n5 F& e2 I0 Y. s: r) s<P>Love… just the word love </P>
- G3 p2 v3 H7 I  h* Y6 I4 ^<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
+ |& l: U2 E4 A1 m+ a7 v( s<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
  W) Y4 p$ i1 F( E<P>But I never did </P>
) g% K$ ?3 _) x) {  o6 e<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
: B) v7 Q8 J0 @5 _2 V- A<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 S' K& p% `' P' N4 S<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 a) U6 Q% _6 Y) d5 Y+ n7 f<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ h0 v7 E9 b# i# s/ v( H<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 k5 g% ], z+ a. [<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
# }% G) P$ B& e2 s<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
6 d+ h$ C) a9 a* f4 U: B- c<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 C/ G' n5 g* `6 P<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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# g) y- i" C5 E. G( o' a0 [; K<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>