【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
( L. \! l8 j& x* {4 t  b' yThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
8 \- t0 _1 g9 r, f& G3 `From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
* k0 n% K+ C5 L( Y; e1 [4 l. VBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
, `  a' T. t. t' {9 E; @. k4 PBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
6 h: w# W, b7 z( l9 T! S$ p6 ~$ R* FI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 c6 Z8 E6 J, i( f1 K1 }$ DI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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5 R8 c' ^+ b1 g8 k+ s# E<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
: [/ P. i4 v: k9 e) Y<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
7 R- V7 [5 ~, f; g<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
; v, [; m/ H# i<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
, \" x4 g2 V; Y  r8 _+ l2 ]<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
' |; b! d6 U8 \: [$ W1 d<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
8 X6 f$ A; Z" @8 Y<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
1 Y9 [! p' w+ Y<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
& `! d2 C+ v3 ?) K# T( Z<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( {0 m0 ^3 Z% [+ u; p8 u- b% f<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( g& Z+ z$ h$ w& M* _. g. e3 y; w4 T<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 B: Y5 c6 j; P; E- Y7 [<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% ?( T9 M3 ~5 N: b<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
1 y! f! F: c7 ?: F<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
5 O5 v0 W/ O' C$ _3 V<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
; ?+ Z8 @1 I; X0 r<P>But I never did </P>
( Z5 l: U, @6 [: o# G<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
  ~* r* l* b2 R  l2 Q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% t+ \# N: L; a! ^& w<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 S- r3 w2 s/ ]9 E<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% I+ X' a# Z1 b. W<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, J* k5 b) p& c2 U/ J( [5 Q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ Z! Y" K! F1 t* f; ~+ f<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: @. P8 V7 h/ B4 Q8 w<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
- T; f8 C, l4 ]% u<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
4 P! t# n3 z/ x5 T$ b6 a# @<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  j* L* s2 P- ~9 d  E$ M0 A<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>